Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:07 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
good luck with your tests and classes, will be here when you get darn good and ready
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding =)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:17 AM Title: Pull
Hello????????????????? Not updating is a huge no no
Author's Response:
RL is being a bitch right now. I will update soon.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 6:48 AM Title: Pull
ok. i am still here so i guess that means i'm not a pansy... ROFL... i'm a real bitch!
FINALLY!!!! is he going to claim her??? JELLS!!!! Tell me!!!??? I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is a wild story and I'm definitely along for the ride.
Hugs and Kisses!!! Until the next update (soon hopefully)...
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! Nope, you're definitely not a pansy! hehe
Hahaha. Do you think he will claim her? In front of everyone? Hmmm...maybe, maybe not. LOL
Thank you so much =) Love all the reviews!
I'm working on this chapter. Oh boy! What hell it is! lol
Thanks again,
Hugs~n~smooches
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 5:45 AM Title: Taken
oh man! i wanted Edward to claim her... dammit, Jells... you're a cock blocker extrodinaire! ROFL...
now onto the next chapter, which i am assuming will be dark. you little friend has a thing for dark... Hahaha..
LOVE YA!!!!
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
LMAOOO@ cockblocker extrodinaire!!!! I enjoy cockblocking ;) It's quite fun. lol
Oh she LOVES dark. *giggles*
Thank you =)
*Mwah*
XxOo
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:56 AM Title: The set-up
Wow... considering poor Elizabeth's labor, mine was a breeze!!! Very interesting. Edward and Jasper are twins... Good vs. Evil? Strong vs. Weak? Totally off track? LOL ... lovin' the direction and the limitless possibilties I see developing! Awesome. Dark... I'm likin' it ;-)
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Yes, the possibilities are endless. Jasper is definitely much weaker, but I would say Evil vs Evil? lol
Thanks again,
XxxOoo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2011 7:38 AM Title: A New Beginning
You are such an imaginative young lady! What an interesting storyline. So Edward has fallen for Bella even in the womb. That's pretty cool. Much darker and much more graphic than LAV but I like it. Then again; I'm partial to you, Miss Jellybean.... but you already know that.
You seem to have a talented friend as well... but alas, my bed is calling so I'll have to read chapter 4 tomorrow...
Nite, nite my dears! I'm excited to see where you're going to take us on this wild journey into Hell... Mwuahahahaha...
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Yes, Thaigher Lillie rocks. She's amazing! I couldn't do this without her especiallly all the dark scenes. She brings so much to this story. Wrting dark is definitely different, and it's a whole entire different mindset. It's very fun, but sometimes I find it frustrating. Hopefully, next chapter I won't disappoint. LOL
Thanks again,
XxOo
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2011 7:21 AM Title: Hate
wow... u weren't kidding when you said 'dark' ... soooO... this is an interesting twist to LAV... onto the next chapter. Let's see where we end up, shall we?
xoxoxo to Jelly!!! ;-)
Author's Response:
LOL. Yup, it's definitely dark.
Thank you =)
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2011 7:09 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Fastens seatbelt... getting ready for another wild ride... ;-)
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks for giving this story a chance. It'll be a lot different.
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 2:31 PM Title: Pull
Like it!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks for reading and commenting
~Jells
Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:31 AM Title: Pull
I am really enjoying reading this story it is different to anything else i have read. Keep up the good work :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We're happy that you like.
I'll have up the next chapter soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 9:18 AM Title: Pull
please update soon im suffering from withdrawel symptoms
Author's Response:
Awww sorry. I'm still working on it. This report has got me busy for the next few days.
I'll post asap
Thanks
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:07 PM Title: Pull
Loved it!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! =) we're happy you enjoyed the chapter!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 12:47 AM Title: Pull
Love your dark vamps!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:35 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
I love it, love it, love it!!!
;-)
ML
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Glad you like
I'll have my chapter up soon.
Thanks again
~Jells
Date: 31 Jan 2011 12:47 AM Title: Pull
I love Living Amongst Vampires, AND I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH. This darker version is hawwwwt. YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND, I'm obsessed with these theories. Like, I literally read them over and over. I re-read this one about 10 times.. and Living Amongst Vampires around.. 20 times? Aahhahah soo fuuuckin good, pardon my french C: UPDATE SOON! xo
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much your comments make my day! Srsly! Thank you so much! I'm happy that you like this story as well.
I'll post more soon. =)
Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it!
xo
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:24 PM Title: Pull
please please update soon, i followed this story from fanfic and love it so much
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I should have the next chapter up soon.
Thanks for following the story here. We appreciate it.
~Jells
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:27 PM Title: Pull
Gotta love that sibling rivalry!! Your Edward is fascinating, but something tells me Jasper is on the rise!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
And thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.
~Jells
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:14 PM Title: Taken
Nice, very, very nice! You're heading into fascinating territory now and I, for one plan to be there for the trip!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We're happy that you like.
Thank you for giving this story a chance!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:40 PM Title: Pull
i had a feeling she wud b there although really wanna know her side of story up to this lol :) plzzzzzzzzzzz update as soon as u can also need to know what happens next with edward!!!! :DDD
Author's Response:
I'll post more soon =)
I'll definitely cover what happened with Bella, but I'll start off where Tygs left off with Edward.
Thank you for reading and commenting =)
~Jells
Date: 25 Jan 2011 11:19 PM Title: Pull
OMG!!! I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting! =)
We'll post more soon.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 7:11 AM Title: Pull
Well it took me that long to find this story but i love it:) I can't wait to see how he reacts when he finds out he's mated to a human!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found the story! =)
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it so far!
And thank you for reading and commenting
~Jells
Date: 24 Jan 2011 4:04 AM Title: Pull
Love this chapter update. This story is really heating up now. Poor Bella was probably freaked out at first. Anyway because of the pull they have towards one another it's more of a natural thing. Edward will probably flip out cause he has mated with a human. I wonder if he will be disappointed or not? Will he keep her a secret from everyone else? Can't wait to find out!
Author's Response:
Thank you=) Glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for reading and commenting. It makes us smile =)
~Jells
Date: 23 Jan 2011 11:58 PM Title: Pull
OMG scream likes a fan girl I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I want to see how far he will go at school and who is going to get him to stop if he is that out of control!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =)
I'm working on the next chapter.
Thanks for reading and commenting
~Jells
Date: 23 Jan 2011 11:08 PM Title: Pull
OH.MY.GOD!!!! loved it!!!!, I just can't wait to see whats gonna happen next, i hope it's not a regression in time or somethin from BPOV.
Author's Response:
Thank you! =) Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm starting the chapter at where Tygs left off. But you will hear about Bella, Peter and Charlotte in the chapter too, and how they treat her.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2011 11:32 AM Title: Pull
Great story and chapter, though I'm a bit confused as to what has happened to Bella between the time she was taken in Phoneix and where Edward seems to have found her again in Forks. First what has been the length of time and how did Bella end up in Forks?
Author's Response:
heyhoney bunny! don't be confused, i didn't write about her because jasper and ed were a tad bit more important for this chapter, And since it's in third person there was no way i could tell three separate stories of three separate characters and have it makes sense, so bella's history in Forks will most likely be next chapter. Use the time frame i give for edward to determine the amount of time bells is with perter and char, it's about a week give or take and just stick around to find out how she got to Forks, that's alllllll Jells and i don't wanna ruin it. I'm very happy you liked' the chapter!
thanks for reading and reviewing *
Tyggy
Date: 23 Jan 2011 7:33 AM Title: Pull
This chapter kicks ass, I love Jasper but Edward kicks ass. I'm so happy that Edward has all these gifts. It would suck to make him so special and powerful if all he could do was read minds. Please tell me he continues to be the strongest? I want Jasper to get stronger but I think no one should be above Edward ever. I hope they can get him under control because he's bouts to rip Bella's vajaja right up. I wouldn't want to be her right now. Please tell me that Carlisle isn't Mr. Pussy Nice Guy in this story too. He always seems so weak. Being that he runs shit in Forks and Caius is his brother he should have at least a lil evil running through his blood
Author's Response:
I love your thinking! Well Edward is the strongest, but technically he isn't the ultimate vampire yet, he has a little ways to go. Jasper will change and for the fucking worse. but i can't go into detail but know, he does a whole 360 when bells comes into the picture. lmao! Carlise is just a darl as caius with a little bit of compassion but not much not much at all. He like Edward was brought up a certain way, and one human *bella* will not change carlise, but you'll see...
Thank you for reading and reviewing
~*TYggy~*
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:31 AM Title: Pull
Update!!! J'adore it!! :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
We'll post more soon
Thank you for reading and commenting
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:25 AM Title: Pull
Loved it! Loved it! WOW he finally got Bella and wait until he figures out that she is a human! He is so mean to Jasper, but I am sure once Alice comes into the picture and he mates with her he will all this and that and a bag of chips! Can't wait for the next chapter! Kisses!1
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you liked =)
We'll post more soon.
thanks for reading and commenting
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:40 AM Title: Pull
awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you liked!
Thanks for reading and commenting !
Date: 23 Jan 2011 2:25 AM Title: Pull
Awesome story! Anxious for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you like!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 8:29 PM Title: Pull
Ho boy. Edward has found Bella again. This should make for an interesting school year, wouldn't you say? Thanks for the update. Cheers!
Author's Response:
Very interesting indeed- or at least we hope lol
Thank you for reading and commenting =)
Cheers!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:52 PM Title: Pull
Yikes! talk about lack of control...the fun begins now.
Author's Response:
Yup, the fun does begin ;)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:44 PM Title: Pull
Love it
Thank f..k....... for....... intelligent story .,
well thought out .... can't wait for the next chapter.
rating 10 10 10 10................
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =) We're happy you like!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:18 PM Title: Pull
i feel bad for jasper and for bella if edward keeps up that attitude..
Author's Response:
Edward is tough and cold hearted, he was raised by the meanest, most vile vampire ever. Caius is indeed a monster. But now Jasper has found Edward's weakness. Will he use it against him?
Thank you for reading and commenting! =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:58 PM Title: Pull
OMG LOVE THIS CHAPTER MORE EDWARD AND BELLA PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! =) We're happy you liked.
I'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting
~Jells
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:46 PM Title: Pull
love everything except the long hair. esme said she was going to cutt it thank god
Author's Response:
it won't be esme to cut it. She jsut said they needed hair cuts lol. But remember in future chapters why Edward's hair is long. It'll knock you're socks off when it does get cut. by the way. When are YOU going to update i've been waiting for ever!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 3:37 PM Title: Pull
HOLLLLYYYY SHIIIIIIITTTTTTTT!
its about time! they finally meet!!!!!
AIYEEEEE i am so excited! please update the next chapter soon for the simple sake of my heart....
Author's Response:
lol. Yep, they finally meet.
I'm working on the next chapter.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 22 Jan 2011 2:14 PM Title: Pull
OH MY GOD I LOVE IT can't wait for the next chapter :) :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you liked the chapter.
I'm working on the next.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 12:58 PM Title: Pull
Poor Jasper! Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Aww thank you for reviewing!!!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 12:31 PM Title: Pull
heheh. could tell you got a bit excited with this chappie..."had had" doesn't need a comma. some letters were missing. *chuckle* a bit excessive with the commas, you poor thing! couldn't type the words fast enough, eh? *petpet* really felt the fast pace on this one--could feel your excitement~ as a fellow writer i catch onto the small things. orzz wouldn't it be a mindfuck if it wasn't bella but someone with just her scent on him from browwed jacket or a hug OR *ogawdfunnyyy* Mike Newton holding her books. /gigglesnort oh that image. *cackles and ends up scaring the shit out of the cat at feet* oops. oh well that'll be revenge for sneezing on my face this morning. huu.
Author's Response:
Actually, in had had <---is an grammical error. It is better to either hyphenate or accentuate with a comma or separial punctuation. <--guess you wouldn't know that not being a beta right? lmao. Ladies at Twilighted would have my ass if i had "had had" in any paragraph, it's amatuer mistake to write it like that, a mistake most 15 year olds make on hand written essays. hehehe.
Excited...no not really. I actually took a great amount of time to write things babes, don't feel too dumb, if i saw someone write 6k words i would think they rushed too lmao. NOT!
The main reason I wasn't offended by the comment you made is this right here.
"orzz wouldn't it be a mindfuck if it wasn't bella but someone with just her scent on him from browwed jacket or a hug OR *ogawdfunnyyy* Mike Newton holding her books. /gigglesnort oh that image. *cackles and ends up scaring the shit out of the cat at feet* oops. oh well that'll be revenge for sneezing on my face this morning. huu.
Before you point out comma mistakes my beta may or may not have missed, get your shit straight first my girl lmao. How can i take you seriously if you can't even write a correct review? *sighs* it's always one. Tsk tsk tsk smdh.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 11:26 AM Title: Pull
Love it! Not too violent at all. Was good to see what the relationship between Jasper and Edward was like. Soooooo glad Edward found Bella again and actually got to her this time. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
glad you think so hunny bunny!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 10:39 AM Title: Pull
OMG. Can't wait for the next chapter. This is so hot. But I hope he won't kill her.
Author's Response:
he won't kill her babes
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 9:47 AM Title: Pull
I am glad you got this posted. I know it was mean feeling what Edward was doing to Jasper but that is what he knows his adopted father is not a nice vamp. OMG Bella must be scared out of her mind?? Jasper better get his calming action going cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 8:07 AM Title: Pull
omfj!!!1 why end it on the best part? and OOOHHH edward is gonna kick it up a knotch or 50, good luck bella
Author's Response:
lmao you took away my coffee cups!!! j/k
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 8:05 AM Title: Pull
I SIMPLY ADORED IT AND THE LAST PART SO PRIMAL AND HOT!!!!!!!!!
SIMPLY WOW
KEEP UPDATING SOON PLEASE,IM DYINH HERE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:56 AM Title: Pull
Tyggy,
"The chapter probably sucks anyway."
Say this crap again and I'm going to come find you and smack you upside the back of the head! You will always be your own worst critic but don't let that get the better of you. It was a great chapter! I really enjoyed seeing a bit of 'A day in the life' of the relationship between Edward and Jasper. It really helped to deepen the characters and give us a better grasp on who they are both in character and emotionally. My heart breaks for Jasper, but I understand what you are saying about learned behavior. I hope now that he is away from Caius and found Bella he'll start to learn a different way. Are the Cullens..um...humanist? Whatever you want to call it, prejudiced against humans? I hope not, but Esme's 'blood bag' comment doesn't make me hopeful!
Also, screw you and Jells for your cockblocking ways!!! Both of you in both stories seem to leave us right at the moment we are getting what we want and hook us in for more! I've been soo exciting for him to find Bella and you are gonna leave me hangin'? Hmm...maybe you need that smack upside the head after all. ;)
Author's Response:
Lmao, you know when I was writing it, i was into it at one point and then i lost intrest, i'm fickle like that. So i didn't think it would good, but i guess it was lmao. Edward, won't change over night, matter of fact he won't change like talking about. It's easier to go from good to evil than from evil to good. So Edward is pretty much going to stay in his ways with small but needed changes. If I changed him completely it'd be unrealistic and a story fail. They'll be visible changes but nothing big. He was brought up to think a certain way. He can't be re-preogramed. oh Esme.....no humanist in her. Dark Cullens baby. But i won't go over board like some people do. They won't be the center of the story. we have a plot lmao.
LMMFAO! i don't know you gotta ask jells. lmao!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:42 AM Title: Pull
Yea......*claps hands excitedly* they're finally together!
Great chapter, I can't wait to see how this plays out :)
The violence didn't bother me, what actually bothered me was Jasper's foolish hunger to be better than his brother. It makes me shake my head. I understand sibling rivalry, but enough to kill and be killed over. I don't get it.
Looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response:
Look at it in the human aspect of males. TO always be pent against your brother, to always be told he was better, to be told you fail at life. Jasper is determine to prove that wrong. To prove to his species he isn't as weak as they think. He wants to prove he can "hang" with Edward and it's just no phycially possible. NO the jealousy and anger trns to hatred and rage and he does dumb shit.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:40 AM Title: Pull
LOVED the chapter!!!! poor jasper!!! being picked at by everyone!! i think that jasper would pass the training to become part of th royal guard if they matched him with someone other than edward. caius probably always chooses edward as jaspers fight partner because he doent want jasper to pass the test!!! maybe he doesnt want to be proven wrong that jasper is weak!
and that ending!!!!!! GOD now i need a new chapter to find out what happens!?!?!?!? will edward stop and realize that she is a human? or will he allow his instincts to over run him and take bella, and then get in trouble with the law, and his father!?!?!?!?
as you can see im excited and cant wait for an update!!! :D
Author's Response:
Or maybe he just enjoys to watch Jasper fail......think about it lol
if i told you that, then it wouldn't be a surprise would it lmao
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:27 AM Title: Pull
Finally..................they meet. Awesome chapter. Keep the updates coming please
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:01 AM Title: Pull
YEAH!!! Edward finally has Bella. woo hoooooo. poor Jasper,, oh well my love for Edward will not waver,, hehe. cant wait to find out why Edwards hair is long,, but can I pull on it? ok enough haha great chapter
Author's Response:
lmao it's yours to pull on if you want i'm sure he'd love it! lmao.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 6:57 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
i absolutely love it. i hope u update real soon. i would love to read edwards pt of view on what he thinks about bella once he realizes what hes doing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! =)
I'll see if we can add an Edward's POV in there.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. We appreciate it.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 6:08 AM Title: Pull
I liked the chapter! I think its hard to imagine Edward with long hair though
Author's Response:
It won't be long for too long, he'll be a crop top soon don't worry, I just needed it to be long for a reason.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:34 AM Title: Pull
Loved it so very much and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! How are you did the surgery go well? are you home yet?
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:09 AM Title: Pull
Loved it!!!!! just my cup of tea! ha really though I cant wait for the next chapter, although at points I did feel bad for Jasper and all but I understand were you coming from with the whole Jane Eyre reference, Edward was brought up that way to feel towards Jasper he doesnt know any other way, and Im guessing I wont become to much of a fan of Jasper in later chapters because I have a feeling he is going to do everything in his power to hunt Bella to get to Edward as she his only weakness............also I was just wondering is Jasper going to mate with Alice? and if so will the first time they meet (because you mention in this chapter the Branndons were in Forks? so therefore they must not live with Esme then?) will he be able go into his primal form? Once Love this story defo one of the top favs and cant with for the next chapter.............any chance for a teaser hahahaha ;)
Author's Response:
It won't be hunting but you actually are on the right track. Jasper's weaknesses were pointed out to Edward, and now Edward has one. So we'll see how that goes in the future. But your spot on about Edward's up bringing. Um.....in my head no mating, you'll see why, but who said they couldn't have sex? Nope Alice is just one of the royals that stays in Forks, only kid in the house with Esme is Emmet and he will find his mate, just not so soon. I can't tell you if Jasper will be able to do it or not, because i don't know. Maybe maybe not depending on whose writing the chapter. Sure i'll ask jells to cut me a piece of her chapter and send a teaser through email *winks*
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:56 AM Title: Pull
WOW!!! he finally found her!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing and reading!
~Tyggy~
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:55 AM Title: Pull
Tygssssss!!! OMG! Imma comment on your chapter!!!!!!! It was my fave so far!! I reread it four timessss! Just fucking serious!
I couldn't do it without you!!
Thanks for writing with me!
Author's Response:
Bitch! lmao commenting on your own fucking story lmao!!!!!! of course you've read it 4 times. i send it to you multiple times before i even structured it lmao
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:43 AM Title: Pull
cant wait for jazz to change or whatever and kick Shitwards arse.
Author's Response:
Jells and I laughed so hard at this lmao!! "SHitward!" lmao *dies laughing* we'll see how long you are Team Jasper *winks*
Thank you for reviewing and reading!
~Tyggy~
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:16 AM Title: Pull
I am sooooo on board. I love it. Edward is a bit harsh. hahahaha.. But you are right about the external contioning. The problem I have is that he was this way at birth.. lol. Doesn't look like something he is going to out grow. BUT I can only hope that our Jasper will be opening up to NEW and better things. Come on Jasper, lets take our blonde ponytails and show these fuckers a thing or two.
Great chapter. I am not SCEERED at all. lol ..
Author's Response:
In the womb, yes male vamp twins are brutal, but Edwards entire opinion about Jasper being weak is external conditioning. Think about it this way, had Elezar brought the boys up, it would be a whole 360 from chapter 6. There would've been rivalry, but there would've been love as well. The entire species has it's views on strength and weakness, but Caius is by far the worst, he's a power hungry bastard! So Jasper has only been seen and treated a certain way in Edward's eyes. Not too mention Edward gets reward when he treats Jasper a certain way too. I know Caius is a bastard lmao. You won't be swinging those ponytails with Team Jasper for long. I have huge plans for him!
Thanks for reading and reviewing
~Tyggy~*
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 3:52 AM Title: Pull
OHG, love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for reeading and reviewing, hope you enjoyed it!
~Tyggy~
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 3:45 AM Title: Pull
He's found her, now what will he do with her? It should be interesting when Jasper meets Alice as well.
Author's Response:
It won't be what you think *giggles*
Thanks for reviewing!! hope you enjoyed the chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:19 PM Title: Taken
Gah...that chapter was soooooo good!
I...words cannot... I don't know what to say....
Except something I've promised myself never to say.... write faster!
Shit...now I feel like a bitch.... don't listen to me. Take your time to make the chapters just as awesome... and if those awesome chapter are updated in a speedy manner then it would be awesomer. Great, now I'm making up words. I hope you guys are happy :P
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =) Glad you liked.
*gasp* write faster? lmao I wish we could! For realz! But we'll do our best to get the next chapter out asap.
Thanks for your awesome comments and for giving our story a chance!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 7:51 PM Title: The set-up
Right, so I'm already familiar with both of your works, so I knew I had to check this story out. So it's pretty much a fanfic of LAV...LOL. Can an author write a fanfic based on their own work? LOL...
I don't know, but I do know I love what I've read so far!
I'm off to the next chapter ;)
Author's Response:
Hi Helluvabell!
Thanks for giving this a shot. This version is the dark version of LAV- although this is a stand alone story. LAH will be much darker, and there are some things that will differ significantly. LOL@Can an author write a fanfic based on their own work? Yeah, I think so. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:16 AM Title: Taken
*jitter* this is so exciting! i was worried for a bit, then again, bella's going to be alright with peter and charlotte right? D:
Author's Response:
Let's just say that Bella could've ended up with worse vampires. lol You'll see soon
Thanks for reading and commenting =)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 3:45 AM Title: Taken
OMG! OMG!!! OMG!!!!!!!!! I am on the edge of my seat!!! That was soooo close!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah, we were teasing Bella and Edward. We have a different meeting in mind.
Thanks for reading and commenting!!!
~Jells
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:00 PM Title: Taken
This is a great story! Iwas reading it on fanfiction.net and you it got taken down :( at least you still have it on here though ;P Update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Glad you decided to follow the story here. =)
We'll post more soon.
~Jells
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:00 AM Title: Taken
I'm loving this version of the story. I'm scared for Bella, What will happen to her when she wakes up? If Bella is 17 then how can Charlotte and Peter pass her off as thiers? That will seen impossible. Now that Demetri knows that Edwards mate is human what will he do? I have so many questions. See you soon.
E/k
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it so far =)
I'm scared for Bella too. She's been quite spoiled and Peter and Charlotte may not be the most vicious vampires, but they can be monstrous. Although, Bella is quite lucky she didn't end up with Charlie and Renee. <--- Those two are very vicious. *shivers* lol Bella's life will be turned upside down. You'll see soon what Peter and Char will do with Bella, and how the Cullen's will come into play. Demetri doesn't want Edward to know, but truth has a way of coming out eventually...that is if Edward doesn't find her first.
Thank you for giving this story a chance, and for commenting. =)
~Jelly
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:39 PM Title: Taken
update soon please!
Author's Response: We'll post more soon. Thanks for reading =)
Date: 16 Jan 2011 8:48 PM Title: Taken
i was wondering if you could make this story without any rape in it please i dont know if you were going to anyway but i really like this story and if you do put rape in it i cant read it anymore
Author's Response:
At first, when I talked to Thaigher about this story, there was a rape scene. However, we decided that we're not going to have any rape.
Thanks for giving this story a chance!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:31 PM Title: Taken
Well once he knows where she is he is going to go after her right I hope maybe her parents will change her is that possible loved thanks for sharing and update when you can.....
Author's Response:
Edward and Bella will meet soon. I guess you could say we were teasing them? lol We have a different meeting between the two in mind. I wish it were easy for humans to be turned. King Caius has forbidden vampires to change humans into hybrids- it's one of his many laws he set up. We'll post more soon.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.
Take Care
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:18 PM Title: The set-up
Loved it very much and Im behind because I am in the hospital so I don't get much computer time thanks for sharing this with us......
Author's Response:
Thank you! =) Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
We hope you get better soon!
Thank you for reading
Date: 16 Jan 2011 4:28 AM Title: Taken
So many twists and turns!
Author's Response:
Yeah, and lots more to come. lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing =)
~Jells
Date: 16 Jan 2011 3:39 AM Title: Taken
Too bad Edward didnt get to her first. boo hoo. What is going to happen to Bella now. hhmmm
Author's Response:
LOL. Yup, he didn't. But they'll meet reeaally soon. lol We had a different meeting of the two in mind. I guess you could say we were teasing them? lol
Thanks for reading and your review. We appreciate it. =)
~Jells
Date: 16 Jan 2011 3:28 AM Title: Taken
So they can't mate with a human? Well then Edward is in trouble. They were so close that's crazy. I've noticed that Vamps seem to have a pull to her. Like they can't bring themselves to hurt her even if that's what they set off to do. Is this part of a power she has? It's like they all want to love and or protect her. I can't wait to see how her life with Peter and Char goes. Bella is use to the finer things in life and is very spoiled, will she get that same treatment? Will Phil and Elise stop at nothing to get their daughter back?
Author's Response:
The laws are a little more strict here. Vamps can't take humans as mates. Now let's say a vampire buys a human servant- he or she could do with him or her as they please. Such as feed from their slave, have sex...and so on. <--- kinda twisted, lol Yup, Edward is in trouble. LOL Yes, that's exactly right. Vamps do have a pull to her =) It's a power she has, but she has no idea. If she were turned into a hybrid, she could turn the power off and on, and it would be so much more stronger too as a hybrid. Bella was definitely spoiled, and has never seen the true nature of vamps until now. Things will change for her, she won't be spoiled anymore. Phil and Elise will be devastated, they'll search for her. But it will be very difficult to track Char and Peter down since their scents are masked, and they are escaping using a SUV. The scent trail ends when they enter the car.
Thank you for reading and your comments/ questions. =)
~Jells
Date: 16 Jan 2011 2:57 AM Title: Taken
je lis avec google traduction... j'ai moins bien compris cette fois-ci, est-ce le même auteur? l'écriture est différente.
Author's Response:
Hi fleur!
You understood less? Hmmm...that's strange. I'm sorry about that. We, Tygs and I, alternate writing chapters. I wrote this chapter. Hopefully, next chapter you'll understand better.
Thank you for reading and commenting
~Jells aka IBelongToAVampire
Date: 16 Jan 2011 12:03 AM Title: Taken
Sorry for your pain.. but HELL FIRE.. that was a fun chapter. OH NO.. Edward just left the house of someone in love with a human..???? Now that is a twist...cause he killed them of course. Mimi it DEAD... so sad. Great chapter. Lets see what Tygs has up her sleave.
Thanks ladies this is a lot of fun.
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you! Glad you liked =)
Hmmmm.....I do wonder what Tygs has up her sleeve, we only tell each other so much. I know she'll throw in a twist. LOL
Thank you for reading and your review =)
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:59 PM Title: Taken
Author's Response:
=)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:45 PM Title: Taken
OMG Love this amazing story PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We're glad you likey!
We'll post more soon =)
Thanks again!!
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:33 PM Title: Taken
following from ff.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:56 PM Title: Taken
wow char and peter make an appearance huh.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I adore Peter and Char. I had to tie them into this. lol
Thanks for reading and your review. =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:38 PM Title: Taken
Loved it! Edward has grown into a hardened vamp. I wonder how he'll feel when he discovers his mate is human?
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you liked it!
Yeah, Edward has definitely hardened over the years. Caius is a monster =( You'll see soon what he thinks of Bella. =)
Thanks again for reading and commenting,
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:25 PM Title: Taken
fantastic chapter. phenomenal story,
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We're happy that you like! =)
Thanks for reading and your review!
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:18 PM Title: Taken
This story is very fascinating. I'm sorry your following on Fanfiction.net wasn't strong enough, it's a great story. I'll definitely be keeping up with it.
Please continue to update! : )
Author's Response:
Hiya!
Thank you for following the story here at twcs! We appreciate it! And thank you, glad you like the story. =)
We'll post more soon =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:16 PM Title: Taken
OH MY GOD!!!! That was a nailbiter. Edward was so close to her. Bella has such a open soul, so accepting of what is. Her innocence is endearing but also kinda sad. It guess its a good thing she doesnt remember her infanthood. Poor Mimi I feel so horrid for her, her distaste was born of terror and a life thwarted by bloodsucker's cruelty. I cant wait for Tygs chapter, where do Char and peter come into play with maybe Jasper or how will Edward find her now. I find it very cool and interesting that from outside the walls he could feel her but his memories of her were for the most part dormant. He was taught to hate humans from Caius but you cannot stop your hearts intent for his mate. If I may ask in what language is this actually in? I ask becuase if there is a vampire dictionary out there i want to read it.. I'm just sayin... lol so good as always, you never disappoint you always get better and better.
Author's Response:
Hi *waves*
It may have been a nailbiter, but omg it was a pain in the ass too. lmao
The vamp language is actually made up. I researched for weeks what language I could use. I even googled vampire language. LOL But came up with nothing. =( Oh and I watched 30 Days of Night since they speak vamp in there, but nothing hit me. My mom's side of the family speak German, Russian,Romanian, and Serbian...and a few sentences in English <---well, my grandparents and some relatives know a few English phrases. lol . But I thought maybe I could twist the letters around and create something different. I really wish there was an actual vamp language. That would be really interesting to read. =)
Thank you so much! =)
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:15 PM Title: Taken
LOVED it!!! :D cant wait to see what happens to Bella? are peter and charlotte going to be as good to her as phil and elise? where they are taking her? is she going to be closer to Edward? cant wait for more!!!!! :D
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it! =)
Peter and Char will....be different. lol I'll say that Bella is lucky to have not ended up with Charlie and Renee. <--- Those two are crazy. *shivers* lol
Peter and Char are heading to Forks. And then we'll have a twist coming up again....soon. Yeah, Bella will be closer to Edward...and they'll meet really soon. =)
Thank you for reading and your comments!! We appreciate them
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:10 PM Title: Taken
great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We are happy that you like it!
Thank you for reading and your review. We appreciate it!
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 4:47 PM Title: Taken
omg! Edward seems hot as hell and an arrogant prick. can't stop reading
Author's Response:
lol yup, you're right! That's Edward! Thanks!
Thank you for reading and commenting! =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 4:10 PM Title: Taken
grrr how dare you take this story off of fanfic???
lmao dosent really matter. I FOUND YOU and I lOVE the new chapter...
i love how edward was basically going to destroy everyone to get to isabella, but why wouldnt you let them meet?!?!? oh well...
uodate soon!
Author's Response:
LOL.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)
Yeah, Edward was acting purely on instinct. He was going crazy to get to her. We have a different meeting in mind between Edward and Bella. I guess you could say we were just teasing them? lol
Tygs is working on the next chapter. We'll post more soon.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 3:42 PM Title: Taken
This fucking great! Edward was like WOW!! I cannot wait until he meets up with Bella again and finds out she is human and his mate! Oh shit this is getting great!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you =) Glad you ejoyed it! Yeah, Edward was acting purely on instinct. He wanted his mate, and now! lol Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it! ~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:46 PM Title: A New Beginning
Ooooo I like it. Love the fact that they met as babies and that Edward already reacts the way he did. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you like it so far! Yeah, the true mate bond is very strong.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:46 PM Title: Taken
Whoa! So, things don't look like they will bode well for those 2 vamps! They have no clue!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review =) Things will get...messy. lol
And thank you for reading!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:06 PM Title: Taken
That was really unexpected, I really thought they were going to meet at the moment. This story just gets better and better. TY for updating!
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah we have a different meeting in mind between Bella and Edward. I guess you could say we were teasing them? lol
Thank you for reading and your comments! We appreciate them.
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 12:35 PM Title: Taken
This has really taken off! Cannot wait for chapter 6.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
And thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it =)
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 12:14 PM Title: Taken
Damm, this was good. Exciting and fast paced. Poor Bella, must suck to watch your grandmother get killed. I love the 3pov. Excited to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey fall up!
Wow, thank you. =) Glad you liked!
Yeah, even though Mimi wasn't the nicest person, she did have good intentions and loved Bella. And Bella did love her back. Now, will Bella realize that Mimi had been right about vamps all along?
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 11:59 AM Title: Taken
Wow what an exciting chapter. Bella seems to have an amazing effect on vampires. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We're glad you liked it.
Yes, lol. Bella has something special that she possesses, yet she doesn't know about it.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 11:22 AM Title: Taken
Wow! Well, I guess just walking through a door isn´t good enough for the prince.
Too much energy. He got a lot more attention this way…
But he could not take Bella home and have her changed….?
He is a prince after all.
Great chapter! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
LOL. Nah, Edward doesn't like doors. Walls are more his thing. lmao j/k At the moment when he felt that "pull" to Bella, he went crazy. Nothing made sense, all he knew was just that he had to get to her to claim her as his.
Unfortunately, even though he is a Prince, he is not allowed to have a human mate. Caius wouldn't hesistate to kill Bella if he ever found out. And changing Bella into a hybrid is also forbidden, even for Edward.
Thank you for reading and your review!
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 10:31 AM Title: Taken
Interesting twist at the end: can't make it too easy for Eward, hm?
One really hast to make sure not to forget that the vampires are real and brutal monsters in this story, including Edward!!
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Yeah, definitely didn't want to make it easy for Edward. LOL We have a different meeting in mind, and there's a few more things that need to be set for their meeting.
Thank you for reading and commenting! =)
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 10:15 AM Title: Taken
Whoa, a whole lot just happened. Going to need to process this a bit. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
lol yeah there was a bunch that just happened. Thank you for reading and your review =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 9:16 AM Title: Taken
awesome I love it !!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and your review! =)
~Jells
Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:41 AM Title: Taken
Loved it! I cant wait till Edward and Bella finally meet face to face, everytime I read a chapter I feel like an addict because all I want is more haha please update soon so I can have my fix haha or maybe just a small tiny teaser hmmm.....;)
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thank you =) We're glad you enjoyed the chapter!
We'll post more soon.
Tygs said that she will send you a teaser, since she's writing the next chapter.
Thanks again for reading and commenting. =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:41 AM Title: Taken
"With a possessive growl, he slammed his body against the stone wall. His fingers dug into the wall, tearing away chunks savagely."
Umm....I think there is probably a door if you look a little more dude. No need to go all incredible Hulk on the wall.
"Before Edward had a chance to lock his black eyes upon the being that made him go insane with the need to claim, his other guardsman named Demetri, jumped in front of him to block his view. Felix growled, and wrapped his massive arms around his body, restraining his master from entering the Phoenix Compound."
Holy cock block, Batman! How could you do this to us! :( How will they meet now? I hope it doesn't take to much longer. Like the next chapter would be good. Like the next chapter you are going to post in the next 24 hours *wink wink nudge nudge* =D
So I'm guessing the vampire pair are Peter and Charolette. Are they good vampires? It sounds like they want to keep her as a daughter. Well, I guess there are worse vampires to get kidnapped by.
Why did Felix and Demetri try to keep Edward away from the compound? I understand after Demetri realized his True Mate was a human, but why before? Was it just to save the wall? Seems silly as he's the prince and can do as he pleases. But, I guess you can't just leave a gaping hole in the fence of the 'cattle' will wander out.
"When she noticed his awfully long fangs scraping against the flesh of his lower lip, drawing green venom in the process, she wanted to go to him and lick his lips, tasting his life force on the tip of her tongue. She shook her head to dispel the crazy thought."
Should that be red venom there? Isn't he trying to mark her?
Sooooo, is Liveing Amonst Vampires going to be updated soon? PUULEEEAAAASE Jells? Pretty pretty please? O=)
Author's Response:
LOL! Yup, Edward went all Hulk on the wall. That would have been funny if he didn't see the entrance a few feet away and smashed the hell out of the wall anyway.
LMAO@ cockblocking again! Yeeeeaaah, sorry about that. But hey, I enjoy it *grins* LOLOL. Yeah, we could post a chapter in the next 24 hrs. Are you against reading a page? Cuz that's how much i'll have next. lol j/k I will work on LAV, while Tygs gets to do the honors and write the next chapter for LAH.
I won't say that Peter and Char are good, but they aren't that bad either. Let's just say that Bella was lucky not to end up with Renee and Charlie. <--- They're crazy vamps *shivers*
Good question. Demetri realized that King Caius wouldn't approve of Edward having a human as a mate. But before, Demetri and Felix wanted to keep Edward away because he was going crazy. They weren't sure if it was blood lust or a mate. Although Edward is Prince, and could do whatever he pleases, but they protect him from certain situations. Edward isn't allowed to take a human as a mate or feed openly on humans. Unless, they face a death sentence. He still has to abide by the strict vamp rules. And breaking any rule would show weakness.
Great question about the venom. I forgot to mention that vampires' blood is green venom which runs through their veins. It's their blood. And It's the same venom they secrete from their fangs when they feel threatened, or fight to incapaciate another. So Edward made himself "bleed" when his fangs sliced through his tough skin. But yup, marking venom is still red.
LMAO! Yes, I should have ch 12 posted soon. I'm still working on it. =/ lol But it's not a pain like last chapter. I still get over that. I had nightmares from the chapter of hell.
Thank you for reading and your awesome comments and q's!! They make me smile. =)
~Jells