Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:33 AM Title: Taken
Bella is going to get a taste of what the real vampire maybe but there is something about her that the vampires cant resist. Edward is going to freak out when he finds out what happened. Her parents are going to be devistated.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bella was quite sheltered by Phil and Elise. She hasn't seen the other side of vampires yet, what they are really capable of. And yes, there's something that Bella possesses that draws vampires to her.
Thank you for reading and commenting! I appreciate it! =)
~Jells
Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:30 PM Title: The set-up
I love the tweaking you've doen here! It gives the story a whole new feel and an air of "anything's possible". Caius is going to regret his actions, I'm sure...all of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like Yes, that's very true, anything is possible. =)
~Thank you for reading and commenting.
Jells
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:39 PM Title: The set-up
please write more!!!!!!!!! and maybe update your other story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
Author's Response:
Hiya!
I'm working on the next chapter for LAH. =) And LAV ch 11 will be posted today!
Thanks for reading/commenting!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 4:59 PM Title: The set-up
love it so fR CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
We'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 04 Jan 2011 3:30 PM Title: The set-up
Wow that was the shit. I can't wait to see what happens next. Jasper is gonna be fucking strong I just know it, both the boys are. Now my question is which on or the boys had such an affect on Bella? If could have been either, they were both in there so who's to say
Author's Response:
Thank you! =) Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Good point. It was Edward who had the affect on Bella because they are the true mates.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:58 AM Title: The set-up
@w@;; can't wait for the plot to get rolling! *fidgets* i was looking for Cambion! *sob* i kept forgetting the spelling! and i found it under "heir" on another fic site but it had only one chapter and i couldn't read it either. T__T
Author's Response:
lol i removed cambion to uh...... hmmmm. to uhhhh. renovate lmao. it'll be back on here in the morning. ~tygs~
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:47 AM Title: Hate
m'liking it! i totally prefer this version to the original. @w@;; it was too fluffy so i stopped. /hides
Author's Response:
Well you know to each it's own. I (TYGS) am an original dark-fic writer and reader, and i am OBSESSED with LAV. It had the right balance and detail for the targeted audience. There's dark, fluff, and a shit load of romance that created the perfect balance for a fic in my opinion. However, if you went to the other fic looking for blood and guts, yea that's not what the story is going to contain, but the future chapters of LAV and the past chapters are brillant in IMo. i'm sorry you didn't like it, you're really missing out lol she's a great writer.
But if blood and guts are what you're looking for, or a really dark story, this will be the stop for you for a while, but keep in mind, jell's reader's aren't as intrested in dark and gore as my readers of cambion are, so there will be a balance between our chapters. Just stick around, and try to give LAV a chance also. thank you for your reviews i'm very excited you like this story so far
~Tyggy~
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:52 PM Title: The set-up
Wow, was not expecting twins. I love how powerful Edward already is, even before birth, but not liking Caius too much. These first few chapters have been a great setup for the story, so is the plan to keep showing the gang growing up, or will it flash ahead, and when do the other Cullens get involved....as you can tell, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it.
I'm working on the next chapter, but it will be about 17 years later. The Cullens will come up soon. I can't say too much, because I'll give it away on how they are involved. But basically, you'll hear from the dark Cullen's when Edward decides to make a move...to Forks. lol
Thank you for reading and your comments.
~Jells
Date: 02 Jan 2011 10:37 PM Title: The set-up
Hell of a start in life for both of them...can't wait to see how it plays out.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. =) We'll post more soon.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 8:53 PM Title: The set-up
Oh well done, I really liked the twist at the end.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you liked it =)
Thanks for commenting.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:35 PM Title: The set-up
Ooooooh, what an evil bastard! I can't wait to see where this syncs up with the present and how Edward and Bella come back together again. It seems like such a bleak, stark outlook for those that have been forced into concentration camps, I can't imagine how a human and a vampire prince become acquainted with each other. I'm on pins and needles!
Update soon! OH! Update Living Amongst Vampires soon too, pretty please! :)
Author's Response:
Hey!
Yeah, Caius is one vicious mofo. He had this all planned out. Conniving bastard! I've got the outline for the next chapter. It's just waiting to be written. Hope you'll like.
And LAV ch 11 will be updated this week. I'm re-writing a scene, and that's all folks-I'm posting it as is. lol
Thanks for reading and your comments =)
~Jells
Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:40 PM Title: The set-up
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:31 PM Title: The set-up
Damn, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:21 AM Title: The set-up
So both parents are dead because of Caius?? The drug made it so Edward could not protect his mom???? Will Jasper be powerful to???
Author's Response:
yes both parents are dead because of caius, the drug is a inducer. Itsa fictional derivitive of the drug that is actually used in animal abortions and labor inducers. all the drug did was rush the labor, and the baby wanted to get out. What alot of people missed, was that, elizabeth, wasn't in danger per se, she was in the middle of giving birth. Elezar over shot the milliliters and it killed her during birth. Edward's only concentration at that point as any other baby, is getting the fuck out lmao. jasper will be strong in his own way, but definitely weaker than Edward. I wrote it this way for a reason and i can't wait til you guys get to see it
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:14 AM Title: The set-up
Great chapter once again. Wasnt expecting edward and jasper to be twins. Im guessing jasper will be jealous of edward? Also i was wondering how are the cullens going to be edwards family if ciaus want him as a heir?
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Oh yes, Jasper will be jealous...lots of rivalry going on.
Well the way we had it planned is that Caius won't be able to take care of Edward...like he won't be able to be there for him like he should. So he gives Edward to the Cullens.....but it's not set in stone yet. I'm going to start writing the next chapter of this story after I post ch 11 LAV this week. Chapter 4, Bella and Edward will be about 16 or 17 years old and I'll work out all the kinks then. lol
Thanks for reading and your comments.
~Jells
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:44 AM Title: The set-up
waiting for the next chapter, and for an update on CAMBION i love Cambion!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting! We'll post more soon. She's working on Cambion =)
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:39 AM Title: The set-up
oh please tell me Edward finds out what really happened and rips him to shreads slowly and painfully
Author's Response:
Lips are sealed. LOL
Thank you for reading and commenting. We'll post more soon.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:31 AM Title: The set-up
I am speechless, i was not expecting that! Thank you so much for having the imagination to come up with this story and sharing it with us. I only hope that you guys take this story all the way to the finish line because it is truly a refreshing and best ones i have yet to read!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you. =)
We most definitely will take this story all the way to the finish line.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:29 AM Title: The set-up
WOW Did not see that coming!!! Can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response:
Yeah, there was a little twist. lol
Thanks for commenting!
~Jells
Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:18 AM Title: Hate
i love this story but could you please update the other one?
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you are enjoying it.
And yes, ch 11 LAV will be posted this week...somewhere between the 5th and 8th.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
~Jells
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:12 AM Title: The set-up
LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
We'll post more soon.
Thank you for commenting.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:54 PM Title: The set-up
well that is an interesting turn of events. hhhmmm Edward is a twin. Hopefully Caius wont corrupt him completely
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Yes, there was a little twist to this. lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing
~Jells
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:54 PM Title: The set-up
This was well worth the wait! So many details and action........love Caius!
Please update sooner...
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
We'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:19 PM Title: The set-up
Good Grief.. A Double dose of Jasper... I think I just died and went to heaven. This is so great.. I love it.. Okay.. why didn't Edward use his powers against Cauis when he killed his parents... and took away his brother...He has to know that he is evil. I hope he kills him later.. that would be nice..
nice...hahahah.. I am demented.. and I blame you two..
Thanks
Author's Response:
Because there wasn't a physical attack on his mother. When elizabeth was given those inducers, it just broke her blood, and the baby was ready to come out. His defenses were down, and in that slight moment of confusion that infants have when that light hits them for the first time, Cauis staked his claim. even though edward will be able to mind read, caius will be very careful with his thoughts. Remember in twilight, how Ed said, you can make yourself believe a lie. Caius does just that. You'll see, if i'm not making any sense lol But,
Ed's brother was a runt. Competition for space and food. Had Elizabeth lived and have a *vampire* vaginal birth, jasper would've been killed in the dominance to be born. Twin males are territorial, and usually only the strong survive, but because of the c-section (of sorts) Jasper had a chance to live. Edward only concern was being born, and getting out. He has no bond to his brother, had Jasper been a girl, they would've been born safely. Male twins in my fiction, don't survive to full term, meaning the pregnacy might start with two males, and all the time end with one. Edward and Jasper are the first of their kind to survive a fraternal pregnancy, but there won't be a bond, however Edward's presence will be so strong that jasper sometimes that jazz won't be able to be in the same room as him. jazz is the runt of the litter so to speak a weakling, but he's just as mean as edward, he doesn't cower to anybody but his brother.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:09 PM Title: The set-up
So, glad you updated. Oh this story is starting out soooo good. I haven't had this much anticipation for updates to a story in a long time. Thanks much:)
Author's Response:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank you ~tygs~
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:33 PM Title: The set-up
This was brutal. Wouldnt Jasper have some of that power? What did they presume it was just Edverr and not his twin as well sharing in that power. I guess we know who will good versus evil. love and love
Author's Response:
Answers to that will be posted, but i'll spill them here too. As explained, Male twins normally don't survive the term, If i'm speaking from the fiction that i came up with, they never give the news of twin boys, because they never both survive. It's always one. The technology and the way of life on their planet, knows how territorial a male can be, and even a male baby vamp can be vicious in the womb towards his brother. If elizabeth would've given a vaginal birth, edward would've killed him. Since it was c-section (of sorts, Jasper had a chance to survial, although weakly.) SO the doctors new, but did want to get the woman's hopes up only to find out , the other baby she bonded with, was dead. So the doctors don't say anything unless it's a boy and a girl or two girls.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:24 PM Title: The set-up
Can't wait for more of the story. How did they not know there were 2 babies inside her?
Author's Response:
Answers to that will be posted, but i'll spill them here too. As explained, Male twins normally don't survive the term, If i'm speaking from the fiction that i came up with, Vamp docs, never give the news of twin boys, because they never both survive. It's always one. The technology and the way of life on their planet, knows how territorial a male can be, and even a male baby vamp can be vicious in the womb towards his brother. If elizabeth would've given a vaginal birth, edward would've killed him to surface in the world first, he was the strongest. Since it was c-section (of sorts, Jasper had a chance at survial, although weakly.) SO the doctors knew, but did want to get the woman's hopes up only to find out , the other baby she bonded with, was dead. So the doctors don't say anything unless it's a boy and a girl or two girls.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:18 PM Title: The set-up
Oh no Caius killed both of Edward's parent's and disposed of this twin brother. What a bad vampire.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Caius is a monster.
Thank you for commenting.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:26 AM Title: A New Beginning
Ahh, this is going to be a greatt one, but wish you woud update more often. I can already tell it's going to be awesome. Love bonding between Edward and Bella from the womb, so wonderful that it's both adorable and creepy.
Author's Response: Thank you =) Glad you like the story so far. We'll post more soon. Thanks for your review and giving this story a chance.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:07 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
I love this story so far! Keep up the great work!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying the story so far =)
Thanks for the comment and giving this story a chance!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:12 AM Title: A New Beginning
Such a fanastic beginning! I love how they are bonded before Edward is even out of the womb! I can't wait to see their reaction to each other when they are finally reunited. Will they ever know of their connection?
Also, I was sent here by Foot, TSO and Father Aro! Fantastic authors recommending fantastic stories! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
You'll see about Edward's and Bella's connection.
Oh wow, I'm honored that they sent you here to read our fic.
And thanks for giving this story a chance.
~Jells
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:45 AM Title: Hate
I'm enjoying it. I like the mixture of the sci-fi and old myth creature into one. When you describe the ships and a bunch of the "ejaculating" out of a larger ship it made me think of the Wraith from Stargate: Atlantis.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad that you're enjoying our story so far.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:06 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Im really liking this so far. Fascinating. What kind of update schedule are you hoping for with this story, Ive never read one of your stories before, just curious.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you like the story so far.
We try to update as soon as we can, it varies. It's a little difficult to say just b/c RL can be busy. But we do our best.
Thanks for commenting and giving this story a chance.
~Jellybean
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:59 PM Title: A New Beginning
Your story is really interesting and unique. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Update soon :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like our story so far!
Thanks for giving it a chance. We'll post more soon.
And thanks for reviewing!
Date: 22 Dec 2010 3:58 AM Title: A New Beginning
Wow I'm guessing the guy is Carlsile which he's kind of a jerk isn't he? And I'm guessing the female is Esme? She seems like she'll be sweet. Can't wait to read more. But I wonder are you not going to finish Living amongst Vampires?
Author's Response:
Heya!
The vamp guy who will become Bella's adoptive father is Phil, and her vamp mom is Elise. I couldn't use Charlie and Renee because they will be very dark in this version. And Edward's parents are Elizabeth Masen and Edward Sr. The Cullen's will come in later...but very soon. You'll see....this version is twisted. lol
Yes, I will finish LAV. =) I updated my profile, there's info on my stories there.
Thanks for giving this story a shot.
~Jells
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:23 PM Title: A New Beginning
aww at least she went somewhere sortof safe.
Author's Response:
Yes, she'll be safe....sorta. lol
Thanks for your review! =)
~Jells
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:41 AM Title: A New Beginning
im pretty much loving "living amongst hell" and "living amongst vampires"!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =D
Thanks for commenting!
We'll be posting more soon. And I'll be posting LAV ch 11 in a few days...hopefully. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:30 AM Title: A New Beginning
This is just fantastic, really really dark, I was just watching V the Return on tv.com and tv stuff, this is reminding me of that somewhat. IO love it that it was Elizabeth and Edward Sr. Lil Edward already want to fight to get out to his Bella. Give me more, more..
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying our story!
LOL! We'll give you more, more, more... soon!
Thanks for your awesome comments! =D
~Jells
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:10 AM Title: A New Beginning
aaawwww I love that little baby vampward already purs to bella. that is really cool. This is going to be one awesome story guys!!! I cant wait.. squeee:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =D I'm glad you like our story!
Giggles@ squee! Awesome!!!
Thanks for the awesome comment!
~Jells
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:37 AM Title: A New Beginning
OK I'm hooked...nice little story begining to develop here...looking forward to the journey
Author's Response:
Yay! Awesome, glad we hooked ya! =)
Thanks for reading and commenting. We'll post more soon.
~Jells
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:35 AM Title: Hate
Certainly different...
Author's Response:
Yes, it is.
Thanks for your comment =)
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:34 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
OK very alieny but interesting
Author's Response: LOL Thanks =D
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:30 AM Title: A New Beginning
Wow that was good! I love the babies reaction to each other
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you liked!
Btw-working on ch 11 LAV right now lol
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 9:53 PM Title: A New Beginning
i knew her baby was going to be edward. please update soon, can't wait
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment! =D
We'll post more soon!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:18 PM Title: A New Beginning
Are you dropping the other one? I was really enjoying that. This one sounds like Vampire Nazi's.
Author's Response:
No, I'm not dropping the other one.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:43 PM Title: A New Beginning
The conection with Edward and Bella is so strong that is why his mother was so protective over her??? Is Phil and his mate going to raise Bella as there own???? I cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, that is correct, although Elizabeth doesn't make the connection of Edward and Bella being true mates, since she's human and he's a vampire, but that is why she was so protective of Bella. It's very rare- the human /vamp mate bond. You'll see =) And yes, Phil and Elise will raise Bella as their own.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:42 PM Title: A New Beginning
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:35 PM Title: A New Beginning
I like the concept of Edward recognizing Bella as his mate from the womb. I also like how protective the female vampire is over Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Yes, Edward knows that they are meant to be.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:02 PM Title: A New Beginning
Looove it, i've read the original version, the Living amongst vampires, and i loved it too!!!!!, you guys r two of my favorites authors.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =D
Glad you like LAH and LAV!
Aww Thanks for your nice comments!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 5:50 PM Title: A New Beginning
Omg that was so cool!! that was brilliant that Edward recognised Bella as his mate in the womb, was not expecting that! LOVED IT! haha..............so Im guessing Phil and Elise are going to be Bella's sort of adopted Vampire parents? since they cant conceive their own? I like that, I was expecting Bella to grow up in a human compound hating vampires and then meeting Edward, hating him but yet feeling drawn to him at the same time but I love the way your going with it so far definitely prefer this better. I said in my last review that I was in two minds about this fic because I thought there might be no HEA and Im not one to read them types of stories......Im a sucker for a happy ending hahaha but my favourites are dardwards stories and I can happily say that this story has become one of my top favourites along with LAV even if its just 3 chapters in I still love it, with that being said I was wondering would you know of any good stories along the lines of a darkward fic? or one with the whole mating thing yano something similar to this with the whole true mate thing?
Another question I have is, how is the Cullens going to be in this I was expecting Esme to be Edwards mother not Elizabeth? I really cant wait to see where you go with this story so please update soon! dont leave me hanging hahahaha :P
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah lol, little Edward recongized Bella....he knows that they belong together. Glad you liked it! Thanks =)
Yes, you guessed right. Phil and Elise will be Bella's adoptive parents in this story, b/c Charlie and Renee will be.....dark. And b/c Phil and Elise can't concieve. And I needed a couple who would love Bella like their own. Once you'll meet Charlie and Renee in LAH, you'll be happy that Bella wasn't living with them *shivers*
Bella...will not like certain vampires very much b/c some will be cruel, however, she'll be drawn to Edward. Now Mimi is part of that reason since Mimi doesn't like to see Bella form a bond with her adoptive vamp parents. Bella does like Phil and Elise, but Mimi isn't too fond of the idea. But we're not sure how much she'll dislike vamps, I don't want it to be too extreme. I think it will depend on the actual vamp itself.
I understand, some ppl don't like to read stories that don't have a HEA. Despite being a darkward story, it still will have a HEA.
Thank you! I'm happy that you like LAV and LAH. That made my day =)
Okay....lemme think...*thinking of darkward/Edward fics with mating*....hmmm....okay, there's this one fic called My Mate on ff.net, it's complete. I believe it's by Different-kind-of-vamp. This story features a dominant Edward- not dark, but he's very dominating-keeping a close eye on his Bella at all times, and submissive Bella vamp. He let's her know who she belongs to. *wink* lol It's one of my faves. There's a few more darkward ones, kinda sorta the mate thing, but not really....but the authors havent updated for almost a year =( Jeez, I can't think of any more...look through my favorites here at TWCS and FF.net- (my faves are under the same penname - IBelongToAVampire at FF.net) I have lots of stories saved there....maybe you can find something kinda similar there to this.
Ah yes, good question. In LAV I wanted Carlisle and Esme to be Edward's biological parents, but here the Cullen's will become his adpotive parents. And they will be dark too.
LOL. Tyg is working on chapter 3, thank goodness, b/c I'm trying to get ch 11 LAV finished before Dec. 25th! Lemme tell ya, pain in the ass. lmao
Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it =)
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 5:09 PM Title: A New Beginning
Great Story, love little Edward growling from inside his moma.
Author's Response:
Hiya!
Thank you =) Glad you're enjoying it!
Yeah, little baby Edward is fiesty. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 5:01 PM Title: A New Beginning
I'm happy I got the background story but I really want you to fast forward too. This Mimi seems really jealous, I hope she doesn't take it out on Bella and be mean to her. Also that was cool how Edward could sense her inside his mother but there has to be something special about Bella cuz all vamps that came in contact with her seem to automatically love her. I hope this has something to do with a kick ass power later. I hate when people just use the should thing. There was such a big deal about her in the books and I think that if she was that wanted and all that then there should have been more to her that just a shield. Most vamps only had one power, she should of had many to set her above the rest. Thus making her the most important human out there
Author's Response:
Thanks! lol Yeah, the fast forwarding will be coming up next chapter, although there will be one more scene where Edward is still a baby. But this scene is very important, it will...I guess...explain why he'll be darkward...or kinda hint to it. You'll see about Mimi. But no, she won't be mean to Bella. You could say she'll be like a nanny or grandma to her. Thank you, glad you liked how Edward could sense Bella. Oh and yes, Bella is definitely special. The vamps can sense that =) And it does have something to do with...powers. =) Yes, I would have loved for Bella to have more than one power in BD, I agree.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:51 PM Title: A New Beginning
WOWWWW! it so it starts the love affair between Edward and Bella, I love it!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Glad you're enjoying the story!
Yeah, Edward knows already in the womb that Bella and him are meant to be. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:36 PM Title: A New Beginning
great story I can't wait to see where this goes thanks please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you're enjoying it so far.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:22 PM Title: A New Beginning
awww so sweet little Edward loves baby Bella. I hope you update sooner
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment!
Chapter 3 should be posted soon.
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:06 PM Title: A New Beginning
Update soon please!!!!! I'm liking where this story is going...but please please update soon.Readers dont like to wait a long time for new chapters to be posted. Makes them unhappy
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you like it!
We're working on it.
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:00 PM Title: A New Beginning
Whooo! Who knew? Great chapter! Happy Holidays to you both!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
And Happy Holidays to you too =)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:58 PM Title: A New Beginning
Awww a baby Edward. How sweet.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it =) Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:50 PM Title: A New Beginning
oh I love it... Even in the womb Edward is a little loverboy. Peanutward is my new favorite.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Awwww....Peanutward sounds cute!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:47 PM Title: Hate
Nasty deaths for the parens. Isabella, was a bit lucky though.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:39 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
What a start. Cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:36 PM Title: Hate
oh wow.. now.. that was good. cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you! Tyg's did another amazing job, like always!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:21 PM Title: A New Beginning
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 12:34 PM Title: A New Beginning
Omg, I loved how the baby (hopefully Edward) carried by the pregnant vampire responsed to Isabella. That was great. Chapter flowed nicely. Exccited to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Yes, it was little Edward *giggle* Glad you liked it! =)
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 12:24 AM Title: Hate
WOW, I do love this story so far. was she carrying Edward in her belly? They will come back for Bella I bet and then the story will really begin? Am I close?
Well, I loved it no matter what you do with it. keep on writing and please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying our story! =)
I like the way you think =) And yes, she's carrying Edward in her belly, but it's not Esme in this story who is Edward's biological mother. You are very close =) You'll see the Cullen's real soon.
Thanks for giving this story a chance! We'll post more soon, I'm working on ch. 2.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jellybean
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:34 PM Title: Hate
ok interesting so far
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Hopefully, we can keep it interesting. lol
Thanks for giving this story a shot!
~Jellybean
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:29 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
so outerspace vamps?
Author's Response:
Yeah, they're outspace vamps. But you'll find that out in Living Amongst Vamps soon too. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting! =)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:36 AM Title: Hate
The image on the attack on Bella's family was a scene out of the movies. I'm literally screaming at my computer DO NOT GET OUT, dont Do it. and oh my god he gets out. I know it was needed for a plot line but oh my god how gruesome, so im curious was this Esme? Only Esme in my mind would protect Isabella. The one good thing is that she was a baby and would have no memory hopefully of that fateful night, or will she remember? I do love so far very very dark but the fantastic writing draws you in and tells me to stay there and be a good girl and read, the kids have a microwave. lol
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah, I happen to scream at my computer from time to time when reading too. No, it wasn't Esme. You'll see the Cullen's soon, but it may be something you aren't expecting.
=D --> "The kids have a microwave" *giggle* Thanks for giving this fic a shot!
Thanks again,
~Jellybean
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:22 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
It's almost like Independance Day. only on a more immense horrible level. The nightmare is ammplified. How funny they come in ships. I laughed out loud at that. Let the games begin...;)~
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah, it does kinda remind me of Independence day since you mentioned it.
Hope you'll enjoy this story!
Thanks for reading and commenting! =)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:49 PM Title: Hate
Phew! Stunning chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you liked =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 6:42 PM Title: Hate
love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! We're glad you enjoyed it =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 5:42 PM Title: Hate
Thank you for explaining this is an alternate verison of Living Amongst Vampires...when I first read the summary, I kept thinking it sounded really similar to that story. I like my stories a bit darker, but still enjoy the B/E relationship dynamics and an eventual HEA. Sounds like this story will be right up my alley, so bring on the gore and darkness!
the Preface and Chapter one were good at setting the tone for this story and providing a slightly different backgroud from LAV...I am not really into sci-fi, so I am less interested in how they got here and took over, but rather I am looking forward to what they do once they are here and ruling. So great job so far, and I look forward to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving this story a chance =)
Oh good! Glad you'll welcome the gore and darkness! lol That's great!
Yeah, we decided to start off the story a little differently in LAH. In LAV, you'll get a backstory from Carlisle how they came here, since he was one of the original vamps, and I may include why hybrids are forbidden during that scene. But here, we'll start from the very beginning. By chapter 3 or maybe even 2 we'll have a Bella's POV and by ch 4 we'll have an Edward's pov. We decided to alternate it when needed.
Thank you for reading and commenting,
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:57 PM Title: Hate
LOVED IT!!!!! :D amazing can't wait to read more O_O x
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving this story a chance =) We're glad you enjoyed it!
And thanks for your comment!
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:34 PM Title: Hate
AHHHH - I can't wait for more...
Started out SO GOOD!!!! I want more :)
T2M x
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving this story a chance =)
We're glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks again,
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:56 AM Title: Hate
i love the idea and i definitly plan to follow the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving this a shot =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:54 AM Title: Hate
Love it!!!!!!!!! You guys shouldnt even ask by now your stories are great!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks =)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:45 AM Title: Hate
WOW this story seems like is going to be awesome!!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving this story a shot! =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:56 AM Title: Hate
Oooh, great twist. Poor Bella, and oh her poor parents! Can't believe her mother was drained from her skull....shudder!
I must admit I snickered like a 10 year old at the "ejaculated" line! Yeah, didn't long for the snickering to become cringes and gasps.
Loved it!!!!!! Great work guys!
Author's Response:
Thank you! =) We're glad you enjoyed it.
LOL@snickering like a 10 yr old. Hehe Ooooo goodie about the gasping and cringing. lol
Thanks again,
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:45 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Oh my god, where's The Doctor when you need him! *cough* sorry, bad Dr Who reference.
This story has got my hooked already, dark vamps with oozing venom and pointy fangs, and no doubt a Bella ripe for the...err..pricking!
Author's Response:
LOL.
Thanks for giving this story a shot! =)
and thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:27 AM Title: Hate
It's good so far but it's killing me not knowing who's who. Was it Carlisle and Esme that took her to Arizona or Em and Rose? Also please tell me they are not going to be leaking that green and red shit out all over the place? I just picture them needing bibs and always having nasty ass stains on their clothes. lol
Author's Response:
It's definitely not any of the Cullen's.
*gasp* Green and red shit??? And bibs and stains? Are we talking babies here? lol The vamps will still in this story secrete venom when fighting or when they feel threatened, that's just how it is. They will resemble the LAV vamps, yet they will be more vicious since this will be much darker.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:12 AM Title: Hate
I like it so far and I love Living Amongst The Vampires. please continue it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm working on ch 2 LAH and ch 11 LAV. lol
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:01 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
So is this man Jasper or Caius? I have to say I love Living Amongst The Vampires, it's one of my favorite stories. But like you'll I can appreciate a good dark story. Usually I like my dark main character to be Jasper because of his background but Edward works for me too. Can't wait to see where this goes
Author's Response:
Thank you!
You'll find out more soon. I'm working on chapter 2.
I haven't read to many darkspers. Hmmm maybe I need to check those out.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:38 AM Title: Hate
Love it please continue & update CAMBION soon PLEASE!!! Keep going it's getting good like to see where this goes thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! We're glad you enjoyed it! =)
She'll post more Cambion soon. She's working on it.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:37 AM Title: Hate
Like it I've never really been creeped out when reading somthing but this i actually was until the end when i the female monster had a heart and saved bella. Anywho loved the story keep up the good work, update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Wow that's great you were creeped out! LOL Thaiger Lillie is the mastermind behind everything creepy!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:11 AM Title: Hate
As bloody as it is I am loving it. waiting for more
Author's Response:
Awesome! Thank you =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:10 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Ooh, fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I hope you'll enjoy it!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:53 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Wow so different than anything else I have read.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:30 AM Title: Hate
wow just wow. this is going to be cool. What a great way to start this. I like that it is not so happy go lucky vamps.. is that bad? hehe. cant wait for the next chappie
Author's Response:
Thank you! =)
No, it isn't bad at all. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 6:23 AM Title: Hate
Loved the chapter.....it was a bit graphic but I still liked it, I'm in two minds about this story because I love "Living Amongst Vampires" so much, dont get me wrong I cant wait to see where you go with this story and how it pans out I just have a few questions. Will this fic be very dark like will Bella be treated badly all the way through? Will Edward be darkward(got to love a bit of darkward ha) in this? Will he be cruel to Bella throughout the story? honestly I love darkward fic but I like it when he really cares and loves her in it even if its deep down and she doesnt know about it, if you know what I mean, anyways moving on will Edward and Bella be mated in this like LAV? I dont mean to ask too many questions and annoy you I was just wondering because I can see I will really love this story but I hate reading fics that have a tradgic ending that you can see coming and no romance........sorry for the rant I just like me a bit of romance and a happy ending hahahahaha :P
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. And yes, this story will be graphic. We, Thaigher Lillie and I, are twisting this story to make it dark.
Okay for the questions. I don't know how dark, I guess to me this isn't extremely dark, but I'm desensitized when it comes to horror movies and stories. lol Not much I guess grosses me out or scares me anymore...although those Saw movies were kinda gruesome. lol Anyways, Edward will NOT hit, smack, rape Bella etc. He still desires Bella, although he won't say it right away. In LAV, he admitted to her that she was his true mate the next day at school. Now in LAH, it will take a little longer, but I'm not planning to drag it out. Because Bella will still feel something for Edward, and she'll be confused by it- and she won't understand why Edward acts the way he does. They are still very much true mates like in LAV, with a little twist. He tries to fight what he feels for her, because he knows that hybrids are forbidden, yet he has this urge to claim her, wanting to keep her around for eternity- love her, aroused by her etc. But since she's a human, this will prove difficult....and of course, there's the no-hybrid law which is strictly enforced by King Caius, a very cruel vampire- ruler of all vamps. And Edward still craves to mark Bella with his marking venom, although he is more hesitant, and careful, knowing there will be consequences for those actions. In LAV, he doesn't care, he wants his mate, and he claims her. lol here it's more tricky.
And the vamps in this version are quite vicious. You may think that some vamps in LAV were cruel, but here it's worse. Now, you'll find out in ch. 2 which I'm currently working on, that there are some vamps that will care for her, but you'll see who.
So I'm not going to say that he will be cruel to Bella throughout the entire story- there will be some sweet moments where he saves her-protects her- cares for her- I still want him to feed from her too, and of course they will get intimate ( but remember he's very fierce and his upbringing is different since his family is dark)...ummm...he won't be really sweet and very playful like in LAV. He still feels very much protective of her. He will be demanding, and somewhat "cold" but he won't force himself on her, or hit her. And since the Cullens are dark in here as well, he'll be very protective of her. So Jasper or any other Dark Cullen who wants to harm Bella, better watch out. Edward is more distant in this story, yet he craves her at the same time. And yes, his feelings will get hurt when Bella snaps back at him for being so distant. But eventually everything will fall into place. Hope that makes sense. lol This story LAH is still being developed since I decided to write LAV first. There are scenes I have in my mind, but I need to fill in. It's kinda like that with LAV too, you would be amazed how many things change, it's almost like the story writes itself...like the characters are taking over. lol But in LAV, it won't get too much darker than ch 10. LAV has a dark undercurrent, whereas LAH will be dark. And the Cullen's, Charlie and Renee will not be the same as in LAV. Waaaay different. lol This will contain a HEA.
No prob about the q's.
Thanks for reading and commenting! =)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 5:26 AM Title: Hate
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! =)
~Jellybean
Date: 13 Dec 2010 5:04 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Sounds like a prequel to LAV.
Author's Response:
Nope, different story sweets. Both L.A.V and L.A.H are two stand alone stories. Bella's backstory in L.A.H is different. In L.A.H Bella is a baby. You won't be able to predict where this is going it's a new story sweets, this isn't a prequel, or a sequel. Once again STAND ALONE STORY.
In L.A.V, Bella was a teen when her parents died and humans don't live in compounds. *smiles*
Thanks for reviewing.
~Tyggy~
Date: 05 Dec 2010 6:20 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
This is an intriguing start :) I like it and cant wait to see how you develop the characters and plot :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Hopefully we can keep you interested.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:38 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
okay.. seeing that I am now going to read EVERYTHING you write.. I am very excited about this.. I like Living Among Vampires... so this should be good.
Author's Response:
OMG! I'm totes honored that you reviewed!
Thank you! I have fun with LAV. And since Tyg is co-writing, she's going to unleash some darkness in LAH. lol
I have The Volturi Order in my fave's list. Hopefully, I will be able to start on it soon since vacay is coming up for me in December. I'm looking forward to it! =)
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:58 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
This is different.......war of the world twilight style. Keep the chapters coming ;0
Author's Response:
I hope you'll like it =) Chapter 1 will be posted soon.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:06 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
great cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you =D
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:24 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
excellant
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:06 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
I've been following and really enjoying Living Amongst Vampires. I'm interested in seeing where you plan to take this and how it will differ from LAV.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad you are enjoying LAV, I hope that you will like LAH too.
Everything will stay the same about the vamps...red marking venom,red eyes, fangs, etc. The Cullens will def. be dark. How dark? I'm not sure yet. Edward will be dark but he will NOT hit or rape Bella, because this will be a HEA.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:28 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
OMG- this sounds so cool. Are the Cullens going to physically or mentally abusie Bella? Please let me know- b/c I can't read the stories of abuse.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
So about the abuse. Edward won't hit her, but he won't be that nice to her in the beginning either. As for the rest of the Cullens, I'm not sure how dark they will be to Bella. This is definitely a dark story unlike Living Amongst Vampires where Bella is protected and cared for by the Cullens, Charlie and Renee.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:08 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Ohhh - this has me in already...
Great start!
Can't wait for more.
T2M x
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I hope you'll like it. More to come soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
~Jells
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:09 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
well this is interesting... do they have barbs to? hahahaha just kidding, I couldnt help myself
Author's Response:
Thanks. LMAO!!! Yes to the barb question. lol
They vampires will stay the same...red marking venom, red eyes, fangs...etc. Cullens will be dark and this story will be pretty darn dark. I hope that you will enjoy it. Its just a twisted version of LAV. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting!