Date: 15 Jan 2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 34
Hmmm, take it from me, there is only one water when you give birth to twins. I even had boy/girl twins and the girl was born first! Emmet is in the absolute clear. Your water breaks, and you are in labor, the first twin arrives and you continue in labor until the second twin arrives. Now, my second twin arrived 8 minutes after the first. My mother's second twin arrived 12 minutes after the first. My grandmother's second twin arrived 23 minutes after the first. Honestly? I suspect the decreased time is down to the fact that the mother has gotten a bit bigger with each generation. My grandmother was 5', my mother is 5' 2", and I am 5' 4". My daughter is only 5', the same size as my grandmother, so it will be interesting to see how long it takes for her second twin to arrive. She is only 18 right now, no where near to getting pregnant. Odds are she will give birth to fraternal twins though. When I was 18, a doctor told me I was 40,000 times more likely to have twins than another person. Sure enough, I was in maternity clothes at 6 weeks but I had some complications, my twins were delivered at only 28 weeks. I hope my baby's babies stay put longer than 28 weeks! They were only 2 lbs 7oz and 2 lbs 14oz, so they were a bit on the tiny side. I hope she has a much calmer time than I did. Just FYI.
Date: 14 Jun 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 35
This is a fantastic story, thank you for creating it then sharing with the rest of us, I couldn't put it down!!! :)
Date: 28 May 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
I'm SO confused!!!!!
Date: 18 May 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
amazing story!!!!! i thought they were going to end up as vampires though? anyway thanks so much for sharing this on here with us ;D
Date: 08 Jul 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Some family/friends they are ... Personaly I wouldn't speak to anny of them for at least a few mounts! Leave along live with them. No one should have the right to make a girl's or a guy's first time a joke.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
This story is amazing!! Thank you sooo much for writing it!!!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
I loved the wedding chapter and I found out listening to a thousand years in the background made it slightly more emotional. I love reading the story.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
that was to funny when my friend tonya was yonger we played a prank on her she got drunk her mother had fire red hair she was afraid one day her hair would turn red so we took out her bedroom light bulbs and replaced then with red ones so when she woke up and looked in the mirror her hair would be red she laughs about it now but then we thought it was holarious her not so much
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
damn i always wondered what a drunk edward would be like i think i like him but the sexual tention is getting too much
Date: 23 Apr 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 35
I had read this story a few months ago and it was one of those that you just could not stop reading because it was just that good. I have a friend on Face Book that told me she thought there was a sequel to Secound Chances but I don't seem to be able to find it. If there is PLEASE let me know because I would love to read it. I have read several of your stories and enjoyed them all.
Alice
Date: 09 Feb 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
This was a wonderful story, even the teary parts, so thank you so much!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you so much for the happy ending! I see what Alice meant by two birthdays, the twins actually were born on two different days. Those are two lucky little children, with so much love and caring, and anything they will ever want!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 33
Could you choke our chickens just a little more?What a place to leave everybody! Boy, I hope Edward and Bella make it through this!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 32 So This is Christmas
One fabulous, fantastic Christmas, followed by the rather traumatic birth of little Miriam. That was so sweet, hearing Jacob talking to his new little daughter. The gifts all the Cullens gave each other were absolutely wonderful, by the way!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 31 Holidays are Approaching
Edward and Bella got a little carried away with their role playing. Angel and Buffy, indeed! How silly! Shopping with the Cullens was kind of a fun experience, too.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 30 Halloween
I can see why you laughed yourselves silly. That was probably one of the best Halloween parties ever known to mankind. I laughed so hard I choked. Great chapter!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon
So much for the theory that you have to go somewhere exotic for a honeymoon to be memorable. Bella and Edward's three weeks in Chicago were perfect, and just what a honeymoon should be!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was weird, to have a beautiful wedding and then have Mike Newton attack Bella! Even more weird was how everyone blew it off after Edwardbeat him up and Charlie arrested him, they all went back to the reception and danced. Oh well, at least no real damage was done to Bella or the babies.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 27
It's nearly time and preparations almost done. The hen party at Charlie's was touching, with all the heirlooms and gifts. The trip to Port Angeles for the suits, not so much. Poor Edward, he has to fight them off with a stick! He takes such good care of his Bella.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ah yes, the VCullens, my very favorite, loving pervert vampires! How lovely that Carlisle and Esme gifted the house to them, and Emmett and Rose were super, rehabbing Bella's old truck. The new Volvo was great, but Alice and Jasper gave wonderful gifts also. Lucky young couple, to have such a loving, generous family!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
As long as you're not planning one, or having to pay for one, don't you just love weddings?
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
How nice to have that whole boubdary thing settled. Nice too, that Jacob and Edward are becoming friends, as well as Bella and Crystal. Friendly relations won't hurt any of them, it's lots better to get along with your neighbors.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
Embarassing, but very funny, too. At least Esme, Alice and Rose didn't find Edward and Bella asleep on the piano! All this hustle and bustle is going to get worse before it gets better. Wedding plans, shopping trips, Bella will be a basket case here pretty soon.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
I see the hormones aren't through with Bella's moods quite yet. Mike and Jessica are just as bad as they were in high school. I guess some people never change. It's probably best that Bella knows about the Quileutes and their wolf gene. No sense keeping secrets with that bunch.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
That went really well and a whole lot better than it might have. Good for Charlie and Bella to make up. Probably some of Sue's influence on him. I love it when everybody gets along.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
That phone cal to Renee was pretty funny, but not half as much as Bella teasing Jasper. I'm sure glad Bella's moods have settled down. Now to see about calming Charlie. Maybe he'll be in a better frame of mind.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Nothing like a little good loving to make everything okay! Of course, a shopping spree/spa day doesn't hurt, either. Edward is the most romantic guy, no wonder Bella loves him to pieces.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
I remember mood swings from being pregnant, but Bella is a little over the top. She is the female equivalent of Jekyll and Hyde! All this can't be good for the twins, or for the relationship between her and Edward.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Charlie, must have shocked him pretty badly, for him to faint. Good thing Sue was there to care for him. This must have happened while Bella was away. Wonder if wolves will be involved?
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Some happy news and some worrisome. For instance, where is would-be rapist Tanya? I wonder the Cullens arent't still hunting her. Glad Bella and Edward are going to be fine, hope that holds true when Charlie finally processes the news.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Of all the rotten luck! I hope the Cullens catch up with Tanya and kill her! How could she be such a selfish bitch, and hurt Bella and Edward so much? Her family will be so ashamed of her actions. Thank God she didn't kill them both!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Just when you thought it was safe to get in the shower, Tanya shows up! She ought to be thrilled to see Edward again , even in his human form. Can't wait for Bella to get after that blonde vampire, on top of her man!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
They had to drive clear to Chicago, but at last, Bella and Edward are one!That was beautifully done and certainly worth the wait.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is evidently getting better at lying than she use to be, maybe from living with the Cullens all this time. Charlie seemed to accept all the story, anyway. Now I must admit to being real curious as to why blood is all over the house?
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Who knew, my favorite vampires are a bunch of piss-ants? That was kind of a dirty trick to pull on Bella and Edward, and not very considerate of any of them. The confrontation between Bella and Ally was pretty darn funny, though.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
This may not end well, as Alice is pushing an awful lot of tequila down Bella ans Edward's throats. Wonder if she knows about humans and alcohol poisoning?
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is going to have keep an eye out for Ally, if he wants to escape trouble with Bella's feelings. They all sound like their typical beautiful selves, as they go out clubbing and dancing.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Cracked me up when Esme yelled upstairs to tell Edward and Bella to quit fooling around and get to sleep. Just like that was perfectly normal. Wghat did she think was going to happenbetween two people young and in love? That part about Carlisle sedating them was hilarious! These new vampires ought to get things stirred up nicely.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Things were looking pretty good there for a minute, then Alice had to interrupt. Wonder who's coming to visit? Please don't let it be the Volturi!
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
This second chance at life for Edward seems to come with limits. He sort of remembers Bella , but hardly recognizes his family, let alone realizes what they are. This screaming and burning sensation is also weird!
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 But You're Human...
So now the Cullens have not one human child, but two, one of whom doesn't remember them. I'm curious as to how Bella will react to this. Was part of her love for Edward tied to the fact that he was a vampire? Guess we'll see!
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me
Guess Bella wasn't imagining things after all. I know this won't go smoothly, but at least they're all going to be together to hash it out. Hope nobody goes into shock.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
Edward must have been a very good guy, to get this chance to come back to Bella, and as a human, no less! It seems he doesn't remember that his family are vampires. That may come as quite a shock!
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Moving
I know this is a story and it's not real, but I keep thinking of Bella and all the Cullens without Edward, and it makes me tear up, I can't help it. It's just not right for him to be gone, even though he is. We all lose loved ones, but not Edward, damn it! How will Bella get through it?
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
Killing Edward in the first chapter wouldn't be my first thought, but I do see why you warned everyone to read a few chapters before killing you both. I sure hope the readers paid attention!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 35
oh that was so sweet loved it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
thanks god they all made it safe loved it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh no I hope they will make it and that the babies will be ok.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 32 So This is Christmas
that was so sweet and funny loved it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 31 Holidays are Approaching
lol loved it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 30 Halloween
LOL that was too good loved it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon
that was so sweet loved it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
I loved it I hope Mike gpes to jail for hurting her
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
lol that was great loved it
Author's Response:
May I just say that you are amazing for reviewing every chapter! Also, when you finish this, I've started on the sequel but it's a WIP. Thanks so much for enjoying!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
lol loved it
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
God he can not get a break at all poor Edward
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
Iam so happy that went so well for them
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
I hope things go better for her when they talk to charlie
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
He was so sweet Bella needs to be nice to him too lol loved it
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
poor Edward he can't win lol
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
AWWW twins love this so sweet
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so happy that they are ok and getting married an going to have a baby loved it
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh no Tanya needs to die for doing this to them
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
EWWWW Oh no Bella is going to kill her lol loved it
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was soooo good I loved both pov's that was so sweet and hot!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh crap I hope they are all ok
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
They are so evil I really felt bad for E&B .
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it .But Alice is kind of being a bitch to them they were apart for 4 years can't she leave them alone lol
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it But how does Bella know about Tanya?
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
I hope that girl Ally stay's away from Edward or Bella might kick her ass lol loved it
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am so happy that he remembers more I just hope who ever is comming will not hurt them.I love this story!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh crap i hope he is ok
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 But You're Human...
I feel bad that he can't rember them but he will and now he is back with his Bella
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me
Oh crap what a way to run into him lol .I can't wait to read the rest
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
Iam so glad he is alive .And Charlie is such a great guy to try and help him
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 Moving
That was so sad I feel so sad for them all .I can't belive that Charlie was so cool to just let Bella go with them like that
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
Oh no Edward can't die .this looks really good
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
well rene took the news well
charlie doesnt make sence to me i mean he let her leave with the cullen he sent edward there shes 22 years old whats his problem anyway
i loved to messing with jaspers power thing
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
ok so that was beautiful too bad bella didnt deserve it after being a bitch to edward and everyone else
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
holy batman did bella eat some bad grizzly shes lost it
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
you sure have alot of fainting in this story
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
so her heart rate just because she was waking up well
a baby hey i wonder if edward is healing fast because of vamp stuff maybe he still has vamp sperm and the baby will be a hybrid lol
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
tayna of course
these 2 just cant get a break now will edward change to be with her
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
somehow i dont think we have seen the last of ally
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
so 4 new vamps
they seem ok but you never know
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
ok ok so yours makes more sence he was in pain from the rush of memories can you imagine (well i guess you can) 100 years of memories hitting at one time
so i dont think thw company is tayna that wouldnt scare alice the wolves maybe if charlie told billy they would wonder whats going on and might want to check things out
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh is edward changing back maybe bella kisss released to many hormones for his frail human body to handle
the question will vamprie edward be able to remember or will he be a savage newborn all over again
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 But You're Human...
poor edward thats not going to confuse him at all "your human"
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me
i guess charlie told edward where to find them i think he was too shy to just walk up and knock on the door
now edward never asked to be turned so i dont think he will want that now but what about the volturi are they in your story will edward remember his family everything about them
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
well it sure take a long time to come back from heaven 4 years
so is edward still 17 or has he aged
did the cullens change bella so she could stay with them forever or maybe she was to heartbroken to want that anymore
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 Moving
no fixy no likey
so really surprised the charlie just let bella leave like that i guess he just couldnt deal with a greiving bella
Diane
Date: 30 Sep 2010 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
i reserve the right to come back and throw you in the fire if you dont fix this ;)
ok so dont ease us into any thing jump right in there why dont you
this is pretty early in their time together right like a couple of weeks
Diane
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon
Aw - LOVED the honeymoon Ch.!! Especially Bella opening the can of "whoop ass" on Newton!! The citrus was nice too - hmmmm, chocolate!! :-P
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 32 So This is Christmas
Pretty soon Bella will be having her babies. They will be prepared because Carlisle keeps checking on them. He will know if they are breech or not. I wish I would get gifts like they do.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
Mike is such a dipshit Glad he is taken care of loved it update when you can thanks.....
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
that was wonderful update when you can thanks for sharing....
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
Alice is so mean. They should have not have to be apart. I think that is the silliest ritual.