Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ok that clarified things.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Never knew the names of Emmett's girls. One wouldn't happen to be Bella by chance?
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Girl just needs to come clean.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Girl! Relegated to the homestead! I hope she explains why she was seen in the saloons ~ looking for that drunk! I love that Carmen is her Abuelita!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great Chapter....
Date: 14 Dec 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella doing something to keep her cousin out of trouble and she is now big trouble.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well that is terrible that he didn't get to talk to her in the morning. Hopefully he will get another chance to do that!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well that chart helps things out because I got confused there for a minuet but I think that I am ok now!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
It is kinna sad that he doesn't want to stay near his family. I hope that he changes his mind.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow a different Bella and Edward Huh.. I am excited to see what happens in this story! I loved the first one and can't wait to see what is in store for this one.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
HAHA I LOVE that you had to make a pedigree chart for people to figure out who you were talking about. I can't believe I just stumbled on this story without realizing it was the sequel to Lonesome Hearts (which I was rather invested in, I might add).
Anyway, I love it. And will obviously, keep reading!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Im already in love with the story!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't help but, smirk! She's going to give him a run for the money! I doubt he has ever encountered anyone like our girl! Good chapter!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
I read straight through Lonesome Hearts yesterday and today and have now started this wonderful story. Your writing skills are quite good and now I am hooked. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
wonder what he is goning to do
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
He was expecting he to be waiting to see him.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
I was unsure at first but the more I read of this story the more I like it. I like the fact that Bella is looking to be a fiesty soooo not damsel in distress - It will be interesting to see how Edward shows his manly side.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
So cool that Edward is dazzled by bella! Can't wait for more!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
awww Eddie's got it bad already. This Bella sounds like a total tomboy
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for the chart. I love stories with so many characters that you need to have a chart to keep up with who is who. So far I am loving Untamed Hearts. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
can't wait for more
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
just can't wait to see where you take this
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for the family tree! Good chapter! The tomboy grew up,lol! So much for the young Dr. leaving town!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter! I love how he thinks he's outgrown the town! The ladies are already loving him!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Okay now we know we do not have INCEST. :-)
keep it going!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
the family tree is kinda confusing. took me a few minutes to actually get it. i really liked the first story and it looks like i'm really gonna enjoy this one as well and i really like the frequent updates:)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Such a surprise for Edward to see that Bella grew into a real beauty! Love the family tree! Great visual!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm sure all the single ladies of Spoons are itching to get their claws in Edward! What a catch!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for clearning that up I was a little confused. So Rose and Emmett got married????
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Something has to happen to make him stay???
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great start! I loved the chart! It was so helpful. Thanks for including it.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yay! Another Edward and Bella! I love how you have made that work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love the chart it really does help!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ahhh so Em and Rose had a Bella. I see.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww Seth's in the story
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read more. Thank you for the quic udates!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
So not really a dequal but an off shoot?
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
I believe that this story will be as good as Lonesome Hearts! Wich, btw, I loved, and normally, by the 30th chapter I'm already sick os the story, but that one I read in two days!
Curious to 'know' this new Bella (:
-caroline
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
okay now. Bella will be the one to make him want to stay in Spoons Valley. BETCHA.
LOL
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
i really like your story so far and i hope we will see bella soon :-)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
When you say violence, what does that mean exactly?
Author's Response:
I meant more along the lines of violence like you see in Lonesome Hearts: shoot outs, fights, that kind of thing. There will be no wife beating or domestic violence type senerios going on in this story.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting start. I hope Edward isn't hostile with Bella. There are enough stories where a grown man acts like a five year old....
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
wish the chapters were longer, but I know how it is. :) Looking forward to more!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapters. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, I'm thrilled, ready for the next era in their lives! Great start!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
the concept is pretty strange after I read the AN at the bottom. But...we'll see. :)