Date: 15 Jul 2016 11:06 AM Title: Finding Home
Really lied this story. This for writing it.
Date: 22 May 2016 3:20 PM Title: Finding Home
AWESOME!!! little lemon fest story thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 21 Nov 2015 8:04 PM Title: Finding Home
I loved it!! Like loved it, loved it!! your spelling and grammar were superb and I just loved the storyline. I especially liked the part about Jake!! I'm going to read Across the Hall now as you have me hooked!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for taking the time to read and to leave me your thoughts. xoxox
Date: 29 Jun 2015 7:02 AM Title: Finding Home
Sweet little story! Good job!
Date: 29 Jun 2015 5:43 AM Title: Coming Clean
Awe! Sweet!
Date: 29 Jun 2015 4:43 AM Title: Meeting the Family
Liking it so far
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:33 PM Title: Finding Home
sweet ending. Glad they all got their HEAs.
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:31 PM Title: They Found Us
Jake.... what a wanker. Glad the cops showed up at least.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:28 PM Title: The Cabin
wonder who told they were at the cabin. Nice lemony time before.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:14 PM Title: Time To Run
Poor kids. hope everyone will be ok.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:07 PM Title: Finally
Jake is getting annoying. Great day otherwise.
Yey for first full lemon!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:01 PM Title: The Water Park
grat fun day at the park.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:56 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..
yummy lemonyish time. LOL for getting the bathing suit he asked for. lol
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:53 PM Title: Baring Souls
hmmm hope Charlotte isnt trying to get info for the bad guys. Water park sounds cool
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:48 PM Title: Making the Rounds
oh Jake. Hope you behave yourself now. Billy seems nice though
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:39 PM Title: Taking the Ride
nice little lime in there.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:34 PM Title: Coming Clean
Glad she told him everything. Ah so Em did contact some police. Cool
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:29 PM Title: More Confessions
Bad jake scaring our girl.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:53 PM Title: Confessions
go Chef B. Glad E and B talked a little more.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:49 PM Title: Getting Closer
sweet chapter. Poor B and her nightmare.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:45 PM Title: Talking
Hope Tyler and Mrs cope will be ok. Wonder if they ought not call the cops or FBI or something
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:32 AM Title: The Field
sweet day. love riding. CYA for more reading in the AM
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:24 AM Title: The Tour
hee hee for towel girl
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:17 AM Title: Later
Glad they found a good place. Em and B are too cute.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:44 AM Title: The Bonfire
Em is too cute. Glad they found somewhere safe.....for now.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:58 AM Title: Edward's Past
Poor E. ALice doesnt pick very well huh?
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:47 AM Title: Meeting the Family
Family seems great. a nice rose? thats cool
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:39 AM Title: Settling In
cabins sound wonderful
Date: 29 Apr 2013 12:01 AM Title: Road Trip
Glad they've got money to run at least. They should have gotten money from a bank before they left though. Cant wait to see what happens next.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:57 PM Title: Prologue: New York City
great start.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 6:53 AM Title: Finding Home
Great story. I enjoyed reading it o much.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:40 AM Title: Finding Home
ILOVED THIS STORY I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU FEEL BUT I CAME TO YOUR STORY AFTER IT WAS FINISHED AND DIDN'T THINK IT WOULD MEAN MUCH TO YOU IT I REVIEWED OR NOT BUT I WANTED TO TELL YOU I REALLY HAVE ENJOYED IT. AND I SEE YOU HAVE OTHER STORYS THAT ARE ALSO FINISHED AND I PLAN TO READ THEM ALSO THIS IS THE SECOMD ONE YOU HAVE WRITTEN I READ I LIKE YOUR STYLE YOUR A GOOD AUTHOR I THINK SO THANK YOU FOR WRITING.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:31 AM Title: Finding Home
I can't believe this was ur 1st story!! It's better than some of the more seasoned writers! Keep up the good work!
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, that is quite a compliment! Thanks for checking it out ;) xoxox
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:35 PM Title: Finding Home
loved it~~~~
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read, and for all the reviews! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:32 PM Title: They Found Us
great
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:18 PM Title: Time To Run
They did not even report the murder not sure the mom would come after them but I am enjoying this anyways
Author's Response:
I was fairly confident that if the mob had a witness to a murder, they'd be hunted down. They don't usually like loose ends. That could be blamed on Hollywood, though. I don't actually have mob connections LOL
Date: 29 Nov 2011 12:40 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..
no need to hide stand tall and be proud
Author's Response:
Ya think? citrus is always hard to write. I always worry about how it will be received.
Date: 29 Nov 2011 12:32 PM Title: Baring Souls
very good
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so. I cut my teeth on this story and still cringe a little when I re read it... :)
Date: 29 Nov 2011 12:10 PM Title: Coming Clean
awww
Author's Response:
That was sweet, huh?
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:56 AM Title: Confessions
wow
Author's Response:
Is that a good 'wow'? :) Happy you're enjoying the story!
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:35 AM Title: Getting Closer
man does like to masturbate
Author's Response:
LMAO I think most do...
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:49 AM Title: The Tour
I would hyperventilate too
Author's Response: Me too ;)
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:32 AM Title: The Bonfire
really enjoying this
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 3:04 PM Title: Finding Home
what a pleasure to read..... thank you : )
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I am happy you liked it!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:49 AM Title: Finding Home
such a sweet way to finish it off. glad you decided to post.
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your reviews! I really appreciate it!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:44 AM Title: They Found Us
well duh bella. yay bad guys have been locked away and they are safe to live life again.
Author's Response:
All's well in Cullenland again...Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:49 AM Title: The Cabin
let's get ready to rummmmmbbbbbllllee! heehee sorry
Author's Response:
LMAO! love that! Thanks for reading-happy you are enjoying the story!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:23 PM Title: Time To Run
time for the big show down! i can't wait. but will the mobsters be happy and leave them alone after this?
Author's Response:
Good question...I wonder if they will? Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:54 PM Title: Finally
yay sex-sex! and a little posessiveness from both of them. and finally the i love yous are out there! awww pretty awesome night i'd say.
Author's Response:
Pretty awesome night, eh? Thanks so much!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:18 PM Title: The Water Park
the non-sex is getting better and better. i wonder what these two will do when they get to the sex-sex?
Author's Response:
the sex-sex might put them into a coma....lol thank you for leaving your thoughts!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:57 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..
that ssounded like even better than the best non-sex ever.
Author's Response:
hee hee....:) thank you!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:45 PM Title: Baring Souls
bella, honey you are a grown up if you want to stay you can...
Author's Response:
She's been under Em's wing for a while, I think she is feeling like her loyalties are divided. Thanks for reading!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:34 PM Title: Making the Rounds
wow eddie pee on her leg why don't you? heehee not that she seemed to mind at all.
Author's Response:
I know, right?? That was fun to write! Thanks so much.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:37 AM Title: Taking the Ride
best non-sex ever! heehee at least they both thought so.
Author's Response:
It was kind of nice, huh? lol Thanks!!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:56 AM Title: Coming Clean
well the trueth is out now and the cullens are willing to help keep bella and em safe.
Author's Response:
The Cullen's stepped up and rallied around them-Thank you for R & R!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:33 AM Title: More Confessions
wow eddie really took that well. now they just have to tell the rest of the cullen clan. i hope em is not too mad at bella for telling eddie, but the cullens really do have the right to know.
Author's Response:
He's a good guy to have around, dont you think? lol Thanks again-I appreciate the reviews!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:22 AM Title: Confessions
there you go eddie see what happens when you go for it?! you get to kiss the girl!
Author's Response:
Yay! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:10 AM Title: Getting Closer
oh eddie hopefully you will have some help with your 'problem' very soon. i wonder if the dream will get bella wanting to tell the cullens about why they are really there?
Author's Response:
lol yes, someone should help him with that problem. The dream would've scared me into telling! Thanks for R & R!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:44 AM Title: Talking
looks like eddie and bella are gonna see where this goes. any idea of where that will be? heehee
Author's Response:
maybe back out to the barn...? lol Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:39 PM Title: The Field
so close so many times! and rose and em seem to be hitting it off nicely too.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like it!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:21 PM Title: The Tour
eddie is so lost in lust with bella. and he got bonus spank material with the towel thing.
Author's Response:
I love that...bonus spank material...but you're right-he's lost already. Thank you for the review!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:06 PM Title: Later
sucks to find a place they fit in right in the middle of running away
Author's Response:
I know, figures...huh? Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 11:59 AM Title: The Bonfire
bella is letting out a lot of nfo.
Author's Response:
you're right, she is...too much? Sorry for the delayed response to your reviews-the site wouldn't let me in! Thank you!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:26 AM Title: Edward's Past
heaven forbid he is not all about the money!
Author's Response:
Hmm that gives me an idea for another story....a money-minded Edward, obsessed with his career. Enter Bella, who shows him another way to live. Maybe, it has possibilities.
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:16 AM Title: Meeting the Family
hahaha eddie sometimes you have to take a few swings before you hit the homerun, at least alice was trying to help
Author's Response:
Alice is always trying to help...but she set him up with a few crazies!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:00 AM Title: Settling In
ok where is this place? momma needs a vaycay!!!
Author's Response:
LOL I wish I could give you directions! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:54 AM Title: Road Trip
wanna go on a bender? heehee is that line what gave you the idea for the town name?
Author's Response:
Actually, it was the other way around...I have no idea where the name came from, it was just something that popped into my head!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: Prologue: New York City
that would be awful!
Author's Response:
I know, right?? Thank you for reading!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 6:37 AM Title: Finding Home
Fantastic story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it!!
Date: 21 Jan 2011 8:02 PM Title: Finding Home
All in all this was a very good story. I know you said it was rough around the edges but the storyline was great! You set it up really good and I enjoyed it very much. I can also tell that you are by no means a fan of Jacob! Ha! I love all the characters and pairings so I overlook him being put into a bad light even though he was one character that didn't have a mean bone in his body!! I had a feeling that he would be involved in the standoff one way or the other. You keep saying that "ATH"(?) got in the way of this story being put on here sooner and I know that it is probably another one of your stories and once I figure out this site I will be sure to go read it as well.
Hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response:
Thank you! You gave me my 100th review for this story that I never planned on putting out!! Yes, it is true that I am not a Jacob fan, but only because I'm a huge Edward fan! LOL I am happy you liked CRR and know at this point that you also read ATH-thank you and I hope you'll enjoy my next one that I am working on. Have a great day!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:27 PM Title: Finding Home
I liked it a lot!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
Date: 23 Dec 2010 12:55 AM Title: Finding Home
Loved it wonderfull story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you liked it! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 9:25 PM Title: Finding Home
that was good i liked ot it was really good glad no one got hurt and all was well
Author's Response:
Thank you, happy you enjoyed the story!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:32 AM Title: Finding Home
loved it! i'm so glad she stayed! and Em too.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:01 AM Title: Finding Home
Thanks for the fantastic story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:09 AM Title: Finding Home
some times less is better and in the case of this story I feelthat even tho ts short it is definatly worth the read.. i loved it... a little drama, a lotta luvin just the right mix. love this story
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your words and your reviewing!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 8:02 PM Title: Finding Home
loved it. Very good story and I loved the pace. Lemons but hey it wasn't sex with multiple partners and skank attack.
Thank you. I will be looking you up again for another story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The Epi for ATH should be out next week and I hope to have a little teaser for my new story that I'm working on with it. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:29 PM Title: Time To Run
good story and nice change in pace.
GOOD JOb
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like it.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 9:53 AM Title: Baring Souls
still good pace.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 8:45 AM Title: More Confessions
confession is good for the soul. I am glad you didn't drag that out..
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't do heavy drama or angst very well, so you won't find it in any of my stories! Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:58 AM Title: Talking
I can not say alot yet. The story is building. Glad you are taking the romance part slower. This chapter had more in it so that was good.
Now what about those NY mobsters?
Bella seems suited to work with them at the rescue ranch. Then again it is a slower pace and may not require more people.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:02 AM Title: The Bonfire
Nice pace, not too fast on the hooking up part.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I appreciate the review!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:24 AM Title: Finding Home
I loved it wonderful story short but great. I love the way you ended it with another one on the way. I enjoy the way you write it flows very nice. Thanks for sharing looking forward to anything else you do.
Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks so much for the nice words! I really appreciate you following me and my stories! I am working on something else right now and may leave a bit of a teaser with the Epi for ATH next week. Thanks!!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:23 AM Title: They Found Us
Of course she wants to stay there is nothing in NY for her and Emmett will not leave Rose. I knew Jake was a puss and got everything he deserved.
Author's Response:
So right you are. Yeah, I think Jake was handled well. Thank you!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 1:26 AM Title: The Cabin
I wonder if Jake has something to do with them being caught
Author's Response:
Hmm. :) Thanks for R/R!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 12:41 AM Title: Time To Run
They had such a wonderful night and now all hell is breaking loose,
Author's Response:
I know! Thanks for R/R!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 11:05 PM Title: Finally
that was good
Author's Response:
LOL Thank you!!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:22 PM Title: Finding Home
Wonderful story!!!
Best Parts:
Bella fit into our lives perfectly. She had made and put into action suggestions that helped our facility grow. We were able to expand with all the donations pouring in. Her ideas about the pre-adoption forms turned out to be genius.
Jake moved away just before Bella and I were married. After the town found out about him bringing the mob guys right to Bella, he was essentially ostracized. Because of his arrogance, he tried to ignore all the whispers and looks. It got to him after a while and last I heard, he moved to New Mexico.
Bella gave birth to a beautiful baby boy a year and a half after we were married. Best birthday present ever. He was the perfect combination of us both. Charlie had brown hair and green eyes and his facial features were a mix of us both.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It really makes my day that so many have liked this story. Have a great day :)
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:17 PM Title: They Found Us
Best Parts:
“You are a sorry excuse for a man, Jacob. I ought to shoot you myself! Instead, I’ll just put you out of my fucking misery.” I pulled my arm back and hit him as hard as I could. He fell like a 12 year old girl. “Fucking asshole,” I muttered.
“What in the hell are you doing here?” Bella yelled. This ought to be good…
“He is the one that BROUGHT those fuckers here. Apparently they scared him into it!” I informed her.
Bella turned five shades of red and stormed over to Jake. She slapped him hard across the face and kicked him in the balls. He doubled over and fell, cupping his junk and groaning.
I scooped up Bella and kissed her long and hard. Watching her put that fucking douche in his place was really fucking hot.
“Hey. What about Jacob?” Alice asked. Everyone looked at each other and we all busted out laughing. We left his sorry ass at the cabin.
“Fuck him. He can find his own way home,” I said, thoroughly disgusted.
Author's Response:
So, you liked Jake getting his ass kicked?? Awesome. :) Thanks so much!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:04 PM Title: The Water Park
That was a fun day water parks are fun places.
Author's Response:
I thought so, glad you agree! Thanks for R/R!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:56 PM Title: Finally
Best Part:
Bella shook off his hand and took a step closer to him, looking pissed as hell.
“First of all, Edward has nothing to feel threatened about. He is MINE just like I am HIS. And second, I wouldn’t dance with you if you were the last man on earth!” Bella yelled at him.
Author's Response:
That line isn't even mine! My Buddah suggested it, almost verbatim! But thanks!!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:26 PM Title: Making the Rounds
Best Parts:
“A little early for a house call, isn’t it Doc?” Emmett looked pissed.
“Uh…well…Bella asked me…” was all I got out before he stopped me.
“Dude, I’m fucking with you,” he was laughing hysterically. “What my sister does isn’t any of my business. His face turned serious. “Unless you fuck up. Then it will be.”
“Jake, I’m pretty sure that Bella is perfectly content staying with us.” I looked at her for confirmation. She nodded emphatically. “Furthermore,” I winked at Bella, “I thought I told you that she is my girlfriend.”
I moved so that I was directly in front of Jacob, inches away from his face. “Back. The Fuck. Off. I don’t want to have this conversation with you again,” I warned quietly.
“Yeah, no problem. I got it, Cullen,” he sighed, looking past me at Bella.
“Great!” I said happily, clapping him on the shoulder. “See you around Jake.”
Author's Response:
This amuses me, you showing me what you consider the 'best parts'. Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:14 PM Title: Coming Clean
Best Part:
“I don’t know what to say. This is really above and beyond hospitality.” Emmett said.
“Well, that’s what families do.” Dad glanced at me as he said this.
“But we’re not family, you’ve only known us for a few days.” Emmett argued.
“Sometimes that’s all it takes, Emmett.” Dad said standing up.
Author's Response:
Aww, that's sweet. Thanks for R/R!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:04 PM Title: More Confessions
I am so glad that Bella finally told Edward the truth.
Author's Response:
I think she was at a point where she had to. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:03 PM Title: Finding Home
great ending !!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you! I appreciate your support!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:55 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..
Edward going to be alittle possessive??? So glad everyting is in the open.
Author's Response:
I'll admit, I love possessive Edward...Thanks!!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:45 PM Title: Time To Run
ok drama building. love your story !!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad people actually like this!!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:33 PM Title: Prologue: New York City
Interesting start!
Author's Response:
I needed a little drama to kick it off! lol Thanks!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:09 PM Title: Finally
great lemon, finally they were able to say/reveal their deepest feelings, and whiel making love is always sweetest
Author's Response:
Thanks! Those are tough to write. Well, write and let someone read, anyway. Yeah I wanted their 'first time' to be special, so I'm glad you feel that way. Thanks so much!