Date: 13 Oct 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
A real rollercoaster day! I was sort of shocked that Jake said what he did and acted like a dad for a change, never mind a man! Great that the rescue went well and better that they have now confessed their love for each other!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
What a sweet, romantic first date! Enough to make a girl swoon! I just love the way these two are falling for each other! They have a lot of heartache in common and similar experiences to draw them together! May I also say what a couple of selfish slobs Jake and Nessie are?
Date: 13 Oct 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry it's the middle of the night here, because I'm loving the way this is starting out and hate to wait for daylight to finish! I kept favoriting your stories , after finishing Behind the Images(loved that, too!) and ran out of time!
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME AWESOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. I have read a couple of your other stories. I noticed that you have not written in a while......WHY???? You do an awesome job and you have wonderful story lines. You need to start writing again. I am putting you on author alert in case you decide to write some more. I don't want to miss anything you write.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
LOVED this whole chapter. Loved the sleepover, the carriage ride with the kids and their date. I hate that they are leaving. But I know with how Bella and Edward feels they will be back together. Awesome chapter.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww such a sad story. It's so unfair that the courts blindly take a mothers' side. Seen too many times when mom isn't the best choice. I've always stuck up for the divorced fathers I know. Of course, Jake isn't one of them.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I know it's taking me a while to get through your most recent updates; real life has kept me from reading. I love your story, and absolutely love Edward. Scars can be a touchy subject and the way that he handled Bella's was so unbelievable, awesome.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
So loved this story! Rangerward and Authorella are wonderful...and such a great bunch of kids! (Kinda would have loved to see a showdown with Edward's wicked Bitch of an ex, but can't have everything...)
How about another epilogue (or two)...????
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
Was finally able to have the time to read this chapter. I loved it. I love how the kids just seem to gravitate to each other in a way that they want to be a big happy family. I hope everything works out. I also find it kind of satisfying that Jacob has finally realized what he has lost.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it!!!!!
I liked that this took place after some time so we could get a glimpse as to what their life has been like. How they all have adapted and formed an amazing family. The two younger kids are far in age from the first ones, that has to be complicated at times, but also has given them all their own time.
It has been a wonderful journey, thanks for writing it, sharing it and thanks too to the wonderful team that encouraged and helped you through it.
Have a wonderful happy new year!!!!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
gosh great name :D loved the end, what a great HEA kind of like that you didn't really mention what happened to jake and nessie and all that, just focusing on the happiness that is edward and bella (and all of their kids of course)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Such a beautiful story. The growth in their emotions is natural. I know that when love hits it really does, some of us are lucky enough to know from the very beginning. I have always enjoyed reading your stories. Enjoy the start to the New Year as well as the ending of an old. Keep coming up with great ideas for stories.