Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I say continue it after the contest, if you want.
Author's Response:
I was waiting to see if everyone liked it, but so far everyone has been very receptive to it, so for now it will continue. I have the next three chapter written and will be posting a new one soon. Thank you reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is interesting. i do not want to see bella and tayna together! not a big fan of the maxine either!
Author's Response:
No worries, there will be no Bella and Tanya. As for maxine? that verdict is still out. I don't want to giving too much away and ruin the story but there are so many twists and turns coming. I hope you continue to follow the journey. Thanks for reading and reviewing it! I love to hear what people think! Nails233
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ohhh, this is good!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think it 's good i would love to see what happens next i hope you will make it into a full story
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
well i hope for her sake that tanya dosent get pissed at her! cant wait to read on
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
another great chap
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
what a lurid family. i cannot deny way hot. I kinda feel bad for Tanya, she wants the love Bella has and it will never be hers. very good read.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
i love this storyy.. i am hoping it ends up being more than a short story and ends up being a full one cuz this is amazing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was just sitting here thinking about that! i was not sure if people would want me to make it a regular lenght story. I have some pretty exciting stuff starting in chapter 5, a whole lot of twist and turns! i really don't think i can jam it into another chapter or two. This is my first all human story so i was not sure how well people would like it. Thank you for reading it and reviewing! Nails233
Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
I didn't realize all the sex that goes on in those compounds! Loving the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Not sure about other compounds but in Forks everything is different. LOL Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
very interesting! really enjoying the story!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
cant wait for your next update
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I like it already. Is it a one shot--you described it as a short story--or will there be more? If more, it will be fun to watch it play out and see where it goes. b
Author's Response:
I just posted a new chapter so there will be more. I have already written to chapter 4 and have so much more i want to write. I guess I am going to keep updating until i run out of things to say. Hope you enjoy the new chapter and thank you for reading and reviewing! Nails233
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
très original, j'adore, j'espère une suite
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
To be honest this is a good start. I think it might be interesting to see what can develope from this. I would suggest keep it going.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Curious it to see what happens next :D
Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Creepy, but interesting idea.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
update soon! love it so far. :)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I liked everything about it but Tanya she is such a bitch even when she is to share. I dont think Edward was very happy with her and I think he will be seeing alot more of Bella
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it very much thanks for sharing and update when you can thanks....
Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!! LOVED it!!!! Tanya is a real Bitch!!! It's not as if it was Bella's fault that Edward ignore them!!! Like I said, LOVED it!!! Cant wait for more!!!!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
<waves> Hi again. Glad you are posting this here on TWCS with us. huggles.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh wow, speechless person here, just wow!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful!!!!!! So creepy with everyone standing around. I find it interesting how Edward treats his wives compared to how Emmett treats his. Loved it!!!!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first start can't wait to see the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow. very good story. What way to be welcomed in. Its like a family meeting in the most bizarre way. I admit to being a bit of a voyeur and this was like looking in on someones bedroom, like being hidden in the closet watching this happen. very curious were you are taking this. Of coarse Tanya is a bitch. I like your Maxine, she is maternal and can watch out teach Bella the ropes of her new family.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Way to get started with a bang!! LOL!! No pun intended! I cannot wait to read what happpens next!
Keye
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, love it!
Author's Response:
Did you like the banner? they named it best poly. LOL.