Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven
Well at least she left before D saw her.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven
Great chapter, but what did Bella find in Alina's thoughts?
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 39. The Coven
Loved it so much but I would say its the whole freshie club thing and why she left him in the forest in the first place update when you can please so excited and can't wait....
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
It's about time that Edward comes back to the land of the living. Can't wait to see what the Cullen women have cooked up for the tramps. Post quickly!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
New to your story and I have to say I love it!! I read the whole thing in a day. Can't wait to find out if he finds Bella or the girls track him down and bring him back to the ranch. I can't wait for Bella to go mid-evil on their ass though. LOL
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
oh for pets sake you had to end it there.
plz update soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
please update soon can't wait to see what will happen next thanks for sharing.....
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
Great chapter, but these cliffies are killing me!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
please please He has to leave them
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
Great chapter
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
Horny old bats.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
hmmm glad eddie got away at least for a little bit
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
Wow, this story is really hotting up, can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
Oh come on, let them get back together soon. I hate seeing them suffer. pwetty pwease
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 38. Finding Edward
Great update. I kinda want to stab his little groupie vamps. Especially that Alina chick. He is so messed up he can't even recognize Bella's scent? Not good.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Bella may have had a momentary indiscretion (not saying I condone the behaviour), but Edward's harem just makes me want to spit. Isn't it just like a man, get pissed off at one woman and go find himself a coven of f**k buddies.
k buddies.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
The twist in this story is great, I hope that Bella kicks Edward's butt, here she is spending the last few years feeling guilty when there is Edward having the time of his life. Really looking forward to the next chapter, not looking forward to the end of this story.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Uh-oh, next chapter please?
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Good chapter, nice twist.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
I am so disappointed in Edward. What a man-whore. Just a new freshies club for him. I hope Bella gives some serious ass kicking to him and cuts him off from sex. I hope he suffers greatly. I don't like this Edward at all.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Edward never really gave up the freshes club, now instead of humans, he's got vampires.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
So excited..can't wait for Edwards POV. Sad to see hes back to being a vampwhore. lol
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Thanks for the update, can't wait for more. My gosh Edward & his female entourage, it never stops getting him in trouble.
Date: 31 May 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Love this story, can't wait to read Edward's POV....please post quickly!
Date: 31 May 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Shit, I never even imagined Edward would be in a situation like that. I can't wait for the ass kickng he'll receive.
Date: 31 May 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
oh wow. Bella has some cool powers.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 37. Succubae?
Lovely chapter. Naughty Edward. Bella has some awesome powers. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 27 May 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
This is such a page clicker{next}. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for writing!
I think it's awfully convenient of Edward to forget about that he wasn't communicating to Bella any sort of fidelity when he didn't say that he would end the Freshies Club.
Why has that dropped off of the discussion?
Thanks for writing this, I'm enjoying reading it way too much to the detriment of RL<3
Date: 27 May 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
If Bella was really Edwards mate, how was she able to be with Demetri?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback it's always appreciated. Without me sounding like a broken record if you look to chapter 36 reviews on May 25th another reader asked a similar question which answers yours as well. Please check it out.
Thanks again! :)
Date: 27 May 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
I really want Bella with Demitri, he's cooler, sexier and just a better fit for her...so right now, I'm LOVING the writer :) Edward is an arogant asshat, and got what he gave.
Date: 27 May 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10. Avoiding and Consequences
This breeding program just seems like a really shallow evil Nazi like experiment, hello Carlisle Mengele
Date: 27 May 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!
Temper is right! Kinda a mean & angry man.
Date: 27 May 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated
Well, that seemed easy..
Date: 27 May 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
Wow, this is different. I'm intrigued, can't wait to find out what this breeding & clinic are all about;)
Date: 26 May 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
Good to know that karma comes full circle for both E&B. Can't wait to read the next installment, post quickly!!!
Date: 26 May 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
Interesting twist.
Enjoying the story
Date: 26 May 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
I can't believe all those yrs have gone by and Edward and Bella aren't together, I was expecting Edward to forgive her after a while bu not that long. I wonder what does Carlisle need help with.
Date: 26 May 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)
If a person has the ability to dazzle, almost hypnotize someone else, and while being dazzled how can that not be rape. Bella did not even know how she got from the school to the house. How can anyone say they, in fact, had not been raped? In other words, if you aren't in your right mind how can anything be consensual.
Author's Response:
You're absolutely correct. The girls were compelled and then transported to Demetri's but as far as the sex goes at the time was consensual. The girls if you remember are very promiscous to begin with and are very pissed off at the Cullen boys for cheating on them. You know, eye for an eye. Bella was very recptive and encouraged Demetri with their sexual encounter. I suppose it's a matter of perspective. I never meant to incinuate rape by any means, and I'm sorry you're offended.
Date: 25 May 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
My question is if a blood bond is supposed to make it impossible to mess around with someone else how could Bella or did Demetri have another trick up his sleeve since he knew about Bella's mind reading?
Author's Response:
Good question. Hypothetically true, a blood bond has never been broken. But let's remember our Bella is not just anyone. She has more power than she or anyone suspects. Besides she's a newborn, very volatile on top of being very immature emotionally. So is Edward for that matter. Let's not forget that Bella still has serious trust issues with Edward. And when he hesitated at her request for him to dispel his Freshies Club well her insecurities jumped in. Demetri although deceptive in the past was her "first" and offered Bella comfort when she needed it. Unfortunetly at a great cost to her. Live and learn.
Date: 25 May 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap
Why would Carlisle be astonished at the information and relieved in regards to Garrett's ability to wipe their memory and implant new ones? Carlisle already knows this, he mentioned this to the 'boys' in an earlier chapter. So, why astonished and relieved as if he didn't already know this?
Author's Response:
It was earlier mentioned at the beginning of the story yes. But his nurse's ability is nothing compared to Garrett's. His ability is on a much larger scale. Which has been mentioned quite a few times in different chapters.
Thanks for the question.
Date: 25 May 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
Good chapter, but my only thought is two wrongs don't make a right.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
Oh shit please get them back together soon, please.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
OMG u r so mean leaving it like that. Cant wait till the next update
Date: 25 May 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
OMG u r so mean leaving it like that. Cant wait till the next update
Date: 25 May 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
OMG u r so mean leaving it like that. Cant wait till the next update
Date: 25 May 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
wow 5 years have passed.
Date: 25 May 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
All I can say is HE STARTED IT!! lol
Date: 25 May 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
Hmm Ok glad you made her suffer for that...I mean it was pretty messed up. I hope the Cullens are ok. I wonder if Rose did make it...wouldn't that be awesome? I guess you will be filling in all these answers soon. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 25 May 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
Wow...so much new drama. Love it. Your right...he kinda did deserve it. At the same time Bella now has no right to act superior or the more devoted party since she did disregard their bond so easily. Edward did everything before they mated...she did this now. Sorry about the disappearance of my reviews...I haven't been getting notified of your updates until today. Crazy stuff.
Date: 25 May 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 36. Lost Souls
I can't wait to get Edward's take on the last five years. As always, I still think Bella is an immature nitwit for cheating on him in the first place. Eye for an eye? Seriously? She never gives him the chance to explain. And she knew he was a bastard back then anyway! And "disbanded the group'? I'm pretty sure he didn't have time at first, cause when was the last time he was at school? I think with being kidnapped and Bella being changed, and the Volturi, he really didn't have time to screw Tanya et al. She has really driven me insane in this story.
Anyway, can't wait for next update... I hope it's soon! Even though it's not a cliffie, I am so interested in knowing Edward's thoughts and to see what he's been up to. Great chapter.
Date: 24 May 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
Sorry to do this in this manner but I want to make sure you are receiving review alerts. I saw your question on the Maintenance forum. I tested the reviews on one of my stories and I received an alert for the new review and the response to the review. If you get this review alert could you please respond to the review so I can ensure everything is working properly. I'll delete this review as soon as we've tested everything out.
Thanks!
Jenn
Author's Response:
Thanks Jenn I did the review alert in my e-mail. Whew! Hopefully when I update my newest chapter everyone else will be alerted as well. The last two chapters weren't so lucky. Keeping my fingers crossed.
Thanks again! :)
Date: 22 May 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
Wow! Not what I was expecting!! I didn't get an update email for this or last chapter. Don't know what's goin on.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! And so glad you checked for an update.
From what I understand there are some server issues. I don't think many are getting chapter update alerts by e-mail. I have gotten very little. At least when I updated my last two chapters no one got e-mail alerts.
Not sure if I want to update while all this stuff is going on. But I am pretty close to the end of my next chapter, so please just check in to see if I updated in case I do.
Thanks again! :)
Date: 21 May 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
No, what was in the past should stay in the past. They were not mates when he started his club. She needs to get off of her high horse and see that two wrongs don't make a right.
Date: 20 May 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
I was not expecting this turn of events...true Edward did need to know there are consequences to his actions, but WOW! Please post quickly
Date: 20 May 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
OMG...I know Bella deserved some recompense but as I read the chapter, I wondered just how justified she really was in sleeping with Demetri...WOW What a turn of events. I never would have anticipated this sort of betrayal, at least on Bella's part!
Due to the events at the end of the chapter, I couldn't help but hurt for Edward. He never acted out AFTER the blood mating, and Bella took it to an entirely different level by doing what she did knowing full well that she was mated.
However, I admit that part of me was happy that Bella finally gave Edward a taste of his own medicine. I know, I am a hypocritical bitch. LOL
*lifting my wine glass in salute*
Can't wait for Chapter 36!
Date: 20 May 2010 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated
he is down and dirty and getting his little club going
Date: 20 May 2010 9:01 AM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
sounds very interesting
Date: 20 May 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
Bella definitely deserved a turn to get her swerve on! Please don't let her go running back to Edward right away. He needs a taste of his own medicine for a while. Great chapter!
Date: 20 May 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
eddie deserves it. needs to know how b and all the other women feel.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
Ah hell... Next chapter please? *puppy dog eyes*
Date: 20 May 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal
Wow. I wasn't expecting that twist. Great job. Kat
Date: 19 May 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 34. What About Alice?
yea they got alice.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 34. What About Alice?
I look for the next chapter, great story so far.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins
I think the torture is just getting started...great idea to have demetri and the gang show up at school!! love it!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11. New Competiton
I say le tthe games begin...time to torture the guys!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
Wow that was an exciting chapter. Bella, Edward and Jasper are now on the run. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 08 May 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
It's either Emmett and Rose or Alice and Esme or Alice and Felix. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
Another great chapter, I look forwrad to the next.
Date: 08 May 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
I had a feeling she could absorb. I hope she gets to turn all their evil sadistic gifts back on them. Can,'t wait for more.
Date: 08 May 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
Emmett and Rose are at the house, they had to turn her in order to save her. This story is getting so good, I'm loving that Bella has these extra powers. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
Date: 08 May 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
Love Bella's powers. GREAT job. I think Emmett and Rose and Alice are at the house. I don't think Rose died during Childbirth. I think Carlisle told everyone that and then had Emmett take her away from there. I also think that Carlisle some how got Alice and he has been hiding her to keep her safe.
Date: 07 May 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
That was awesome, you can Bella a crazy sick power. I hope she learns everything that she is capable of. If so I don't think anyone would be able to stop her. She would be the most powerful Can't wait to fond out who's in the house
Date: 07 May 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
I hope it's Alice... and that she got away from Felix. I want to see where they've been all this time. I hope he hasn't just been off somewhere raping her over and over. I'm not sure I can handle reading about that!
Date: 07 May 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
I really hope its Rose and Emmett. Bellas power is very cool. Update soon.
Date: 07 May 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi
Could it be Alice? She seems to have been just left on her own with Jasper being the only one to even think of her.
Date: 07 May 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs
Oh I do like me some sexy Demetri, at this point Edward who?
Date: 03 May 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 32. Bella's New World
This is getting really exciting.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 32. Bella's New World
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 32. Bella's New World
I love this story! I am so glad that Bella came out of her transition ok. I hope that Rose is not dead, and I am curious about what happened to Alice. I look forward to reading about the meeting with Aro!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 32. Bella's New World
hmmm but is rose really dead...... I'm thinking no.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 32. Bella's New World
Aw I missed your fic. Great update! Hope to see more soon.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
Very interesting story. I've gotten into this and can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
Dang you with the cliffy, need next chapter.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
OH MY FUCKING GOSH!!!!!!
THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY VERY HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!! We need to call the fire department on Edward and Bella. That was AWESOME!!!!!
Can't wait for your update.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
Ok so they turned Rosalie, where the hell is Alice and why isn't Jasper more upset???
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
OK - won't hate the writer if the writer updates quickly :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
Thank you, for such a great chapter.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
WOW! Wasn't expecting that but glad that it happened. Please post your next update quickly.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
That was a very intense chapter. You did a great job describing their blood mating. That was my favorite part! :) I also like the fact that she was changed as a result of the blood mating.
I know that she's been changed and I hope that Bella still remembers how much she loves Edward! I am looking forward to reading more.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
Cliffy?! Thats just torture. Im so eager for the next chapter. I'm also freaking out about Rose and Alice. Whats happened to them? Write, Write Write!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 31. Escape
good now bella can kill dem, and felix, and the V brothers hopefully.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
OMG I CAN WAIT WHAT HAPPEN WITH ALICE????????
SO HE MADE HER A VAMPIRE NOW??????
Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
WOW!!! I am surprised that Jasper did not attack Carlisle for what ahppened to Alice. I hope she is all right. Poor thing. I am scared for Edward. I hope someone finds him soon. What is going on with Bella and with Rose?? Has Rose had the baby yet??? Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
Stupid cliffy, need next chapter.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
Good chapter, but what about Alice? Was Rose one of the ones that went into labor and you don't say anything about the mothers just the babies did the mothers survive?
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
Hmm ok so Demetri is behind the wolves. Glad it wasn't the Quileutes. So worried for Alice right now...I hope Aro does punish the boys even if Jasper, Em, and Ed don't get to them first. Things are obviously heating up. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
Please post more soon...loving it.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
poor eddie. ANd Alice too.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture
Can we have a Jasper POV please since Alice is missing?
Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
wow!!