Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
This story has me captivated. I really want to see what happened to Edward and how the wolves are involved. Please hurry and update!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
Is Demetri the "Master" that the werewolves are talking about????
Where is Alice??? Please let her be ok. I can't wait to find out more. Was Rose one of the 3 girls that gave birth???
What is going on with Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle? Man alot is going on with this story. Exciting!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 11. New Competiton
Competition is a VERY good thing! The boys were being sneaky and they deserve what they get!!! Bring it on!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
I liked this chapter a lot. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught
BUSTED!!!!!! This is getting good!!! I bet those Cullen boys will be blown away! I hope that there's hell to pay! LOL
Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
I want to know what's so special about these group of girls and how come Bella and Alice haven't met Aro and the others yet. If they are important to them why haven't they wanted to meet them?
Author's Response:
I was hoping that someone would wonder about these girls. You are absolutely correct they are special especially to Aro. But I'm not going to tell you why...yet. As far as meeting the girls, well he did informerly at the orientation. As far as meeting the girls personally, they just started the panel discussions.(which includes Aro etc.) The only girls that have participated so far are Linda, Lucinda and Emma. Bella and Alice were held back for a reason. Which I'm not going to tell you now either. Bella did notice however how complacent her roomies were after the panel. Can you guess why? More will be revealed in the upcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
That a tight packed chapter, I look forward to reading the next.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
Are we getting a EPOV soon?? I can't wait to see his view on all this.. Great fucking chapter.. thanks keep going please..
Author's Response:
Yes, EPOV will be coming soon. I promise. Next up with be in Emmett's. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
Well now Im dying to read the next one. Update soon. Loved this chapter.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 29. Kidnapped
well duh bella. they've all been glamoured or whatever.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
I am glad that Rose seems to be doing ok. What do you mean by Bella and ALice are going to find out what male vampires are really like????? That sounds exciting...can't wait.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
good chapter.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
ok the boys need to get daddy involved and breakout the girls. emma is an idiot who is going to get them into trouble.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
wow really intresting chapter make edward and jasper come back they should be with bella and alice
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
Great chapter, I enjoyed it profusely
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
Crazy things are definately going down...I hope the Cullen boys find out what happened to the girls and take steps to help them
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
What if Emma's "boyfriend" is Edward? It's getting really good. . . .
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!
What is Carlilse and the boys going to do?!?!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
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OK - first off the title does not begin to do this story justice - it makes it sound light and frivolous - this sucker has some meat on its bones! It seems to get better and better with each chapter as the plot continues to thicken! I still would rather castrate E than Demitri! Keep it coming!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 28. The Compound
Im starting to get confused. But I still love this story and am sticking with it. Update soon.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
Edward is soooooo screwed up in the head. He just keeps burying himself deep and deep. GREAT job with this chapter and this story. I am loving it.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
Please...Please...Please let Edward see Bella having sex with Demitri, this way, he could hate Bella as much as she should hate him:)
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
he's still an asshole.....hmmm what's Carlisle been up to.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
i cant believe he did that. cant wait for the next chapter :) thanks for updating :)
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
Good to read Edward's POV, but I'm soooo not liking him right now.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
What an asshole!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
YAH NO KIDDING HER NEEDS A WAKE UP CALL LIKE NOW.......
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
I think he's done it now..
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
Great chapter. I look forward to the next. I don't know how Edward's wake up call is going to happen just that shit is going to hit the fan really soon.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
Wow, I think that experience was worse from EPOV. E is an unbelievable idiot. I don't doubt you for a second, but I can't fathom how you are going to redeem him. It's going to be great to watch it unfold!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
ok.. you really need to give Edward a wake up call.. I am actually going to be team demetri for a while.. I hope Bella has sex with someone in front of Edward.. That is the only thing that would make me feel better at this point.. I know I am childish.. but nothing Edward can do to fix it will make me feel better.. He needs to feel pain in the form of another man.. ;)
Please continue soon..
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
Great chapter. You can't help but feel sorry for E, trying to protect B. But going about it the wrong way.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
I have been wondering, where the babies that were born the guys? So they have kids now?
Author's Response:
Yes, the babies were briefly mentioned in chapter 26. The first breeders that were brought into the clinic were from the Cullen boys. The only reference was to the sex of the babies, not who the fathers were. I felt it was too much too soon for Bella and Alice at the time. That info will come out in a future chapter.
Thanks for asking...:)
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished
I am so glad you're updating quickly - I'm hooked - anxious to know what happened with the girls from prior chapter....
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
I think Edward is planning on making Bella jealous with his sluts...hopefully Bella will see right through it.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
Great chapter.. He really is fucking thick though.. I really hope he aches for Bella before she lets him back on her radar..
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
If the Volturi is back does that mean and Demtri and Felix and Garrett are back??? If so, I think that is who crash through the door. Edward is still a jerk. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Edward is such an ass!!!!!!
I am glad that the girls have Emmett. What is going on with Rose?? Does she remember everything? Will the women who give birth live?
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
what a cliffie....agghhh
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
Noooooo....you can't end the chapter like that...I don't like cliffhangers. Please post more soon.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
ok where are the werewolves.....
Date: 01 Apr 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
Demitri is at the back door isn't he.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
thanks for updating
Date: 31 Mar 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
Yeah, yeah...keep the faith - if I saw what B saw with my own eyes I think I'd need Garrett to scramble my brain before I culd ever "excuse" or forgive what he did. One thing to hear what happenedd but for her to actually see it...I'd be all about castration!
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
Okay hate the cliffy, but otherwise, great chapter.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
argh come on u cant just leave it there plz update soon
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
:)
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt
Holy shit!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
WHAT A PIG I SO HOPE SHE CATCHES HIM I THOUGHT THIS WAS GOING TO BE A E/B ENDING... GUESS NOT
Author's Response:
The end isn't here yet is it? Ye of little faith...
Date: 30 Mar 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Love the story so far..hope Edward gets his head out of his ass and goes back to Bella..in time i guess...fantastic chapter
Date: 30 Mar 2010 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated
Greedy little sucker isn't he?
Date: 30 Mar 2010 9:54 AM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
Hmmm, interesting premise! Like the idea...
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Good chapter. Bella is into self destruction she is going to try and spy on Edward and the girls. Wouldn't doubt that the jerk was back to his old ways.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Interesting chapter, evil place to leave it, I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Poor Bella! I hope that Edward comes to his senses soon
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Edward pisses me off. Jasper seems to have a chance to redeem himself, but poor Emmett. He's the only decent one outta the trio right now and its his love interest thats locked up. Edward is an idiot to let the Demetri thing bug him that much.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
:)
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
Feel bad for Bella, it's actually really painful to read at this point. REally don't understand why he's such a dick, if shes really his mate. She needs to move on right now.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
I am hoping Edward is not back to his old ways but if he is I am afraid Bella will get to see it with not going in to the lunch room. I wonder if she is going to confront Edward or find someone to help her piss him off. I have a feeling Emmett is going to be able to tell Bella and Alice how to get into the clinic after watching all night. Awesome work and I cant wait to see how far Edward is willing to dig himself into a hole before he wises up and bonds will Bella completely since the bond is already there and started faint as it is.
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Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
makes me wonder if its really em setting up the meeting.
And I'd be warning every female posssible about eddie boy.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision
omg first great chapter and god poor bella even if edward is doing this for his own good i still feel bad for her my heart breaks cant wait for more
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
I hope Bella lands up with Demitri and Edward lands up alone. Ok, I know thats not whats going to happen, but its fun to imagine.
Author's Response:
I love the way you think! Who know you might just get your wish!! :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
oh boyedward really put his foot in it this time, what a jackass!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )
i think that at this point they all just need to be totally honest with eachother. the truth shall set you free...
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )
i think that the boys should all tell their own girl everything it would make things better for all. fireworks right out of the gate if you know what i mean
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 21. The Twilight Zone
em is so gonna cave in to the girls! whah ha ha! (evil laugh) eddie's got the journal. and i think that eddie just read alice's mind and is getting a better idea how how much trouble the boys are in! lovin it!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 20. It All Begins
i think that bella will start having more flashbacks once her and eddie get closer and start doing 'stuff' his vampy ways will start to bring back the memories.
eddie is gonna regret looking in the diary, there are some things that he does not want the gory details on, it is better to just know the jist of it all.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 19. Taking the First Step
the road to recovery
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 18. The Day of Reckoning
well looks like all 5 of them are woking towrds the truth. they are all just coming at it differently. i am still worried about rose
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 17. It's All About The Girls (Part 2)
looks like garrett's skill is not as great as he thought. and edward wow asshole much? this was not really bella's fault and he should know this as he has used this same power over girls to get what he wanted before.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)
emis gonna kick daddy c's assand e & j are gonna be standing in line right behind.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
Great chapter, I look forward to reading the next. Though I do hope that Bella and do make up.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap
the poor girls, b &a are gonna think they were attacked and left r behind and poor r she is gonna be used as an incubator and held against her will. the boys are gonna flip when they hear. i wonder if daddy c is gonna tell the boys what happened?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs
oh boy i never thought that edward and bella would let it go that far. she lost her v card to demitri!?!?!?!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 13. Feeling The Burn Twice
poor boys, it was not even their fault their daddy c is making them do it. wonder what the cullen boys are gonna do to the volturi boys to keep them away from the girls? what will the girls think?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
Go strong Bella
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
love Emmett right now.. just fucking love him..
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins
well now the boys got it didn't they? i loved alice's responce that sent a message! i think the boys need to have a talk with the new vamps in town.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
Great chapter. I love that even Emmett is more enlightened! I hope he gets his head out of you know where very soon! I am proud of your Bella for standing strong.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 11. New Competiton
i would so be ignoring them while flirting and flaunting what i got! make them suffer and realize what they gave up. sad that the boys are trying to do it for a good reason.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 10. Avoiding and Consequences
well i still want to know why they want to get girls preggers. if they want more vamps just bite someone. is it aro's way to build an army? it will still be fun to see the girls go off on the boys. sad for all of them but fun for me. hehe i am so mean!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught
i would have waited for them to really hang themselves. then i would have gone with alice's plan grabbed a guy and had a little pay back in full view of the bastard.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 8. The Breeding Begins
wow that was fast good thing it doesn't normally work that way in real lifr. still wondering the same types of questions as edward. here's to wishing eddie can get me the answers.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 7. The Waterfall
wow that was semi rape as well she told him to stop and he dazzled her into going along. at least he waited for the sex. i think he was wanting to create that blood bond to tie bella to him.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6. Almost Losing It
so can both edward and jasper read minds? is jasper's for everybody or just with vampires? can em do it too?
well i wonder how after school is gonna go? will eddie be able to handle it?
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!
yeah he was rough on her, he basically did what he wanted and left her there! some could argue it was borderline rape.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 4. The Breeding Meeting
wow so theyare planning on kidnapping girls for 3 months to make them have a baby. then what they erasethe memory of it all and drop her in the next town? i guess daddy c is not so much the good guy in this one, it all seems kinda creepy. what happens to the babies after they are born? why do they need to make babies?
you answer a few questions and leave me with 5 more.
great story so far thank you for writing!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3. Over Indulging
oh brothers they are so cute. watching eachothers backs, kicking eachothers asses...
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated
wow what a way to start your day
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chaper 1. A New Lesson
they are wnting to make babies? how does that work with the mommas? do they kill the girl at birth?
oh my the questions i have...
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
I cant believe he pushed Bella away like that. Once he does realize what she means to him he will have one hell of a fight on his hands to get her back now. I have a feeling the Bella is going to hook up with some and rub it in his face that she is moving on without him. Great job and I cant wait for the next update.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
This chapter was kind of sad. I feel sorry for Bella and Alice. I hope to goodness that Bella and Alice don't get into trouble looking for Rose. But something tells me that their are going to get into BIG trouble. Hope the boys are there to get them out of it. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Confrontation
Good, emotional chapter!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )
ok going to the boys house was stupid.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )
WHAT????? You left us hanging again. OH MY GOSH!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon. I think this is the last chapter for me to catch up on and now I have to wait. UUUGGGHHH....this is going to kill me.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )
Still trying to catch up reading this wonderful story. I hate when real life gets in the way of me reading my stories. I know that it is not that "maybe" I am reading to many. No....it could not be that!!!! HaHa!!!! BUT one good thing now is I can go on to the next chapter. I am off to read....Thanks for a GREAT story.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )
can't wait for the next chapter..
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )
love the update. can't wait for more.