Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:35 PM Title: Bring Me Life
cool o/s ;) are you going to make it into a multi chapter fic? thanks for sharing this on here for us ;D
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:42 AM Title: Bring Me Life
excellent!!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Bring Me Life
what in the Hell! You left us with aa clift hanger?
The story vwas good, I was all ready and you stop. YOU ARE KILLING ME.
Will ther be a part 2...
really enjoyed.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:14 PM Title: Bring Me Life
Oh I really liked this one. I think you should write more like this. MAybe one shots about their life together.Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 19 Feb 2010 8:56 PM Title: Bring Me Life
Wow...that was a great one-shot. Some are so crass and this one had some class...no really nasty euphanisms or crass words. I think you handled it well and still made it sexy as can be. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:07 PM Title: Bring Me Life
Well that was unexpected!
I was expecting to see more of Edward's regret as he changed her, but I guess a guy losing his virginity at his age doesn't have much for thought beyond that? *smile*
I kind of want to see how he is handling her burning, what the family says, how they clean up after... And so on. LOL
It's a great plot bunny, in other words, and I'm glad to have read it!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:39 PM Title: Bring Me Life
that was really good!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 8:33 AM Title: Bring Me Life
That was hot!