Date: 19 Mar 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more
Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yeah for the update! What can all this mean and why should it bother Carlisle? Plus that can't be what had him upset, he didn't see it before he came home and he was already upset, I wonder why?
Author's Response:
Be sure to read the next chapter/outtake and you'll know.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
well i am thinking maybe bella is like half human and half vampire
she is able to do things to edward that she shouldn't be able to unless she was changed
love it
Author's Response:
True.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
There is a reason why I love your writing.
P.s.
Sorry...about your note. I couldn't even imagine.
Author's Response: Glad you like the story!
Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ok what is freaking out carlisle though? Did I forget something in the last chapter?
The mark is cool though. ediie is marked now too
Author's Response:
Don't forget to read the second outtake for CAM. That explains why Carlisle is freaking out. Full disclosure next chapter.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
hmmmm and the mystery continues. Now I am anxious for next chapter....really lol. All those growly males around too ... mmmm, thats gotta be good.
Author's Response:
Carlisle will have to make a full disclosure next chapter.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
Love this story and look forward to updates, so thank you - Cheri
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
But I'm not in Forks! Keep looking, Edward! Head southeast! ;)
Author's Response:
I keep waiting for him to show up in Texas! lol! Hope you enjoy!
Date: 12 Feb 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
A person over on ff.net wrote a review about how he/she had mixed feelings about Edward. I must say that I agree with that.
The issue that I'm struggling with in this story is i'm not sure that the relationship bewteen Edward and Bella is a consensual one. Bella's character is so docile she might as well not be there. The relationship is so one sided that Edward can be in the relationship for the both of them. I really wish that a decient talk would happen between Bella and Edward so they can really learn where the each other stands in the relationship.
I will keep reading. I constantly look for updates in this story, but it feels like some things really need to be clarified.
Author's Response:
Don't give up on Bella just yet. Yes, she's been swept up in the emotion and being claimed by Edward, but she's not a total pushover.Right now she is responding to Edward on an instinctual level. There's still so much she doesn't know yet. She needs to learn about the power she holds in a mating relationship.
Date: 11 Feb 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love reading this story and I can't wait for you to update!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm trying to get the next chapter out before the end of the month.
Date: 11 Feb 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 27
Welcome back. I thoughly enjoyed this chapter. Edward and Bella really are the perfect couple. :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Drama is coming.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
A new chapter! Great!!!! This made my day so much nicer - thank you!
I love the beast-part and I'm a huge fan of purring.
Can't wait for the next chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
Nice chapter.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter, it's so nice to read some more CAM;-D)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to write faster. :)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am worried about what is going to happen between Edward and Bella when Aro finds out who Bella is? Do you think that he will try to take her away from Edward, or will he force Edward to come to Voltera with Bella?
Author's Response:
We'll find out soon...
Date: 06 Feb 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter. I wonder when Edward will find out that Bella is already becoming a vampire?
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am so glad that Bella took what Edward told her so well. I can not wait to find out what the family thinks of what Edward has done.
Author's Response:
It will be interesting...We'll see next chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
yummy chapter. Loved the em/rose backstory. LOL for the clothes thing. I can't blame her wanting to wait a bit.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my god I so wish you could update and post your story early, I am so in AWWWWW of your story.
Thank You
Author's Response:
I wish I could post faster also. Unfortunately real life gets in the way. I'm trying to post at least once a month, more if I'm able.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love the way you describe his beast, it's excellent.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Next chapter will be Bella's pov.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for coming back to update, I Ike reading this story. So she's turning vampire without going through the three day transition?
Looking forward to the next update, thanks for writing:-)
Author's Response:
She's not turning into a vampire yet, but she is picking up characteristics... I'm working on the next chapter now.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Another great chapter, can't wait to read more.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
whoa, and the questions just keep on coming lol!
Author's Response:
Answers will start coming in the next chapter...
Date: 19 Jan 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
dun dun dun. I loved being in Edward's head. The referece to the feather made me smile.
I am always so happy when this updates. So looking forward to the next installment.
I hope 2012 is treating you and yours well so far. All the best.
Author's Response:
I'm working on the next chapter now. Hopefully in a couple of weeks it'll be ready.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh very ineresting. So even though he hasn't turned her perhaps the minute amounts of venom she has been ingesting have already started the process.
Author's Response:
She's beginning to pick up their characteristics. Expect drama in the next chapter
Date: 18 Jan 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my god. I absolutely love your story. It is one of my favorites.
Next chapter please.
Date: 18 Jan 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Now we have a purr and a growl to call each others mate. How cute ^___^
And in Edwards presence it is normal that Bella gets hot, so with her very own and personall cooler at hand, Edward shouldn't be surprised that Bella seeks hes cold skin out.
Nice chapter.
Author's Response:
You'll begin getting a few answers in the next chapter...
Date: 18 Jan 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter. thanks for the update. hope all is going well
Date: 18 Jan 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
wow the beast and edward are very interesting
bella is a lucky women to have him. they both truly love and respect her and are dying to have her fully
her mewing for her mate at the end seals it
fate love it
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
Date: 18 Jan 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
whatis gong on? how is it possible?
Author's Response:
Be sure to read Carlisle's pov in the outtake. Bella is developing some of the characteristics, but she is still human...
Date: 17 Jan 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
So when are yhu giong to update again? Because i thought yhu abandoned this story. Is it going to be several months before yhu update again. I want to know so i wont be getting my hopes up,
Author's Response:
When I updated this story the end of Nov I told everyone I wouldn't update in Dec. I've updated this, the outtakes and Legends (Renee's backstory) this month. I update CAM and LOMO once a month or more if real life allows.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMGosh!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!! I can't wait to find out more about what is going on with Bella. What will the family say when they see Bella's neck? What is Aro and the others going to do? Will they try to take Bella away from Edward? I wished Edward and his family would go ahead and talk to Bella and tell her all about mating so Edward could really mark her and mate with her so Aro could not take her away from Edward. Well, since he has marked her and his venom it in her system, can Aro take her away or not?? At the end of this chapter you state a conttent and mated female...vampire.....but Bella is not changed yet.....What is going on???????????????
Author's Response:
Glad you liked! Next chapter will have the family back together to see the results of their mating. Expect drama.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great pov. Hmm wonder how they'll react to carlisle's news.
Author's Response:
Edward is going to freak!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
Holy shit that was worth the wait!!!! And damn you for ending it like that! :-) I was thinking with him slowly giving her the venom I thought he might have been slowly changing her. Probably by mating with her it sealed the deal so to speak. Damn this is such a good story. *sigh
Author's Response:
Bella is picking up some of the characteristics, but she is still human.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love this story so much. Please update soon.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh and the plot thickens, can't wait until Edward realizes they weren't talking out loud earlier. That in combination to the purr, should be an interesting conversation. I wonder if she'll be able to hear anyone else or if it's something that will jsut be between the two of them. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
WOW!!!!!!!! That was amazing!!!!!!!! LOVED everything in this chapter. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!! Now I have to wait for an update. At least there was no cliff hanger. I still can not wait for you to update again. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response:
The next chapter is already half written. I hope to have it up by the end of next week. I'm glad you enjoyed the hunt!
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
Very interesting. Can't wait to read about the hunt.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:46 PM Title: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires
Is this Chapter 2 of the outtakes. I have not been to check it out. I have read chapter 1 but not chapter 2. If not will we get it now that it is after Jan. 1, 2012??? I am off to see the outtake.
Author's Response:
Yes, chapter two of the outtake is Carlisle's pov.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
What is the deal about Eskimos?
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Liked that explaination of the "growly thing"!!!! LOL!!!!
Author's Response:
The "growly thing" (or mating call) has been a huge hit. Just wait til you get to the hunt...
As for your previous question - Bella's gift is a shield. I tweaked it a bit so that when she is using it she and Edward are in a bubble. It hides her from other gifts. Since Edward is in her bubble (and there's something else going on that they aren't aware of yet) she can hear his thoughts.
More will be explained about her gift later and why it's manifesting itself while she's human. Edward's venom is doing something to her. They just don't know it yet. Carlisle's outtake reveals what's going on.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
Is Bella blocking Alice's visions? Can she block Edward from hearing others thoughts. Is that what her gift is????
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Finally, they are together. I am glad that charlie is not freaking out. Loved the end of this chapter.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
What is Edward going to do to Bella? Is he mad at her?
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
What is Bella doing???? Really!!!! Does she really think everyone is going to believe her?
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
WHAT in the world!!!! A wolf imprinted on Renee. If a wolf imprinted on Renee then why do the woves blame the vampries? WHO's imprint is she?????? Jacob's!!!!!!!! Really or does he just want her to be and is just saying that. Because I am thinking that if she was one of the wolves' imprint that they would have never let her sit with Edward, much less be kissed by Edward. I am soooooo off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Jacob did not imprint on Bella. Renee and Billy both believe that Bella will be an imprint since Renee was also. This part is explained a little more in Legends and Carlisle's outtake.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON?????? What do that vampires have to do with Renee?????? I am sooooooo off to read the next chapter. I am sooooo very glad that I do not have to wait on an update!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
A lot of action in this chapter. Ok, I am a little confused. In this chapter it was said that Bella could hear Charlie, her dad, and then her uncle. Who is her uncle????? Are you talking about Billy?????? I am assuming in your story that Charlie knows about wolves and vampires.
Author's Response:
Billy is Charlie's best friend. Uncle is an honorary title. Yes, Charlie knows. I hate how in the books he doesn't know anything.. he's the chief of police, not the village idiot. His best friend is Queleute - it makes sense that at some point over the years he would have figured out something.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMGosh!!!! Let me guess, when the wind blow Jacob smelled Bella's scent on Edward.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMGosh!!!!! Why are the wolves growling and approaching quickly?????? What is going on??? I love how Edward gets her to claim down. I forgot to say in my other review that I loved that Bella stood up to Emmett. That was funny.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOVED this chapter. I do not know why it has taken me so long to read this story. I am sooooo loving it. Bella came out of her shy little shell. lol. So, they are together....what is going to happen with Mike. I did get some of my Christmas decorations down just not much. lol. There is always tomorrow.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! It's a lot of fun to write especially now that I've FINALLY figured out where I'm going with this. lol!
Hubby took down our tree since I'm sick. I hate cedar fever!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
I had to laugh at Charlie. lol. I liked how all the Cullen kids kept Mike from asking Bella out.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I knew Edward was ready to kill Mike. lol. LOVED IT!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG!!!!! I bet Edward is going crazzy. He is the one in the forest, watching Bella. It had to be killing him to watch Mike kiss Bella. I hope he does not do anything stupid and hurt Mike.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved this chapter. I like how Edward sometimes screws up with Bella and pisses her off. He is not always perfect. lol.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love some Carlisle and Esme time, how sweet. LOVED what Edward did when Bella walked into the livingroom. When Bella was going to sleep, Edward was lefting her up but where was he going with her. Was he just putting her in his lap or was he taking her somewhere???
Ok, I can tell that I am NOT going to get my Christmas decorations down today. I am already to wrapped up in this story. I do not want to stop reading but I really NEED to get my decorations down. We will see. lol.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok, this answered some of my questions from my last review. But not all of them. I know Edward can hear everyone else's thoughts, but can they hear his or are they just talking so fast and so quite that Bella can not hear them because she does not have vampire hearing????
Author's Response:
Read the first outtake for CAM. It will explain their gifts. Edward's works both directions.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok, What was the deal with Alice and Rose in the car????? What was going on with Edward, Alice and Jasper at the food court? Edward is so funny being possessive about Bella. I laughed at his reaction to Josh in the bookstore. When they were leaving to go back to Forks, why was Edward frowning?
Author's Response:
Rose and Alice could smell Bella and knew her scent was very strong and potent. Rose is worried how Edward will handle it. She's not in favor of Edward choosing a human so looks for every potential problem to justify her feelings.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward definitely sounds like he is getting very possessive about Bella.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
I liked having Alice's POV. Can't wait to read more. I am off to read the next chapter. Thank you for getting back with me on my first review in asking is this was a Darkward story or not. I like a dark story but I also like a possessive Edward too. lol.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have read many of your stories and LOVED them all. I have decided to start reading this one. I am excited about it. I was wondering.....Will Edward be a DARK Edward in this story??????
I hope you update For the Love of My Obession soon. Off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving this a shot. I started the story intending it to be a fluffy story only to realize the reason I couldn't get into it and stick with writing it is that I CAN'T do fluffy. It bored the heck out of me. I need a little angst mixed in unless it's a very short story or o/s. So I used the title idea and twisted it around so it fit with what I do best...ANGST!
Edward (as will all the Cullen men) will be dominant, possessive, protective, and willing to fight for his mate. He won't be dark in the sense of evil or ever hurtful to Bella. He sees her as his salvation so will cherish her...in a very alpha-male way.
Don't forget to read the outtakes and Legends which is a companion story to CAM and tells more of the past. I'm working on the next chapter for CAM now and then hopefully will have an update for LOMO by the end of the month.
Thanks again for reading!
Mic
Date: 13 Dec 2011 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow, that was sexy stuff, great chapter;D)
Merry Christmas & Happy New Year to you too! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love it! I hope you update soon and that you have a wonderful chrismas anf new year!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 06 Dec 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
I just found this story and it is wonderful! Can't wait for th next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like the story. I will update in Jan and also post Carlisle's pov of what he suspects.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was totally worth the wait. Fantastic as always. Thank you.
I will wish you and yours a Merry Christmas and very happy and healthy New Year!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! New chapter and Carlisle's pov in Jan.
Date: 03 Dec 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
HOT! HOT! HOT!
Author's Response:
It got a little warm writing this chapter. Glad you liked it!
Date: 03 Dec 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ohhhh, that was so worth the wait!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked! Aftermath in Jan along with Carlisle's outtake.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Totally worth the wait!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
best christmas present EVER!!! dammit i loved it and want more but i know i know i shall have to wait till after the new year. i have been with you since the perfect wife....i can wait for a chapter update even if it takes a few months!
Merry Christmas and a Happy new year hun!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I promise an update in Jan, plus you'll get Carlisle's outtake if you didn't donate to TX Wildfires.
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
thank you I have donate to tex wildfire's . I just have not read any stories yet..
Maybe you can help me donated to another fanfic which you have to use a password.. But I changed internet servers and lost the pass code.. do no how I can get the code. I have the files. it so fustating.. I understand why they did it. so please and thank you.. this is the ( F4SAA Compilation )
Thank you again.
Ps. I am gland that I am right about the venom. lol
Author's Response:
I don't remember my password to that one either. I need to contact the admins to see if they'll give me a new password. I just assumed once I downloaded the file that I wouldn't need the password any longer. Damn!
Glad you like the ch!
Date: 28 Nov 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy Crow, That was hot!!! hahahaha!
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you also!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: 28 Nov 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow, what a hunt. That was really great, especially the maze. Somehow I imagined the maze from the 4th Harry Potter movie :)
Bella had let out her inner beast also, to claim Edwards, that is so great. For being a human she has extraordenairy strength, but with a vampire mate it should be expected. Now they can communicate with each other via thoughts (probably on special occasions, when one of them feels like it ?!)
I really like the growl, that is such a unique detail to the story. I guess I mentioned it earlier in one (or more) reviews.
I am excited, what will happen next.
Author's Response:
The ability to communicate will be explained soon. It's not normal, but Edward is too caught up in the hunt to care right now. He's enjoying the extra layer of intimacy it's giving them.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh dear it was great!!!! i loved this chapter!!! Edward was so hot here !!!!
I'm sad because you are saying Merry Christmas and Happy New Year so soon!!! but I think is normal I'll miss this story!!! hope you can come back soon and hope you and your family have a Merry Christmas and a great New Year!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'll be back in Jan with Carlisle's outtake and another chapter.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
I certainly hadn't expected the outcome of him chasing her through the maze and it ending the way it did but it was awesome. They are going to have to talk some more so she understands there is no one else for him and has never been and never will be I really think she needs that reassurance from him. I loved this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Talking comes next. Lots of talking! Things are about to be revealed neither of them knew.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was fantastic! A++++! It took a bit, but she figured what was happening.
I love the little gifts he would give her..
And the reward was BEAUTIFUL!
It was sad she miss understood Edward there for a few minutes.. Boy she has a jealous streak..
I still say the venom is doing somthing to her. Slow turning her.. Because she should not been able to bit him.. Am I right.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
<3 Leona:)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! This chapter was a lot of fun to write. It's been a while since I've written a sweet smexy scene. Actually, have I ever? lol I'm glad it worked well.
Edward's venom is doing something to her that neither are aware of yet. Carlisle knows... His outtake will post in Jan, unless you donated to the TX Wildfire Relief, then you already know.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
yes it was worth the wait. I loved it. It had to have been very frightening for Bella not being a vampire and not understanding his behavior. very passionate at the end. wonder if Edward is the only one out of his family that refers to himself as more than one person during a hunt like that.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well if it is your last update until the new year!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Yes, they all refer to the beast inside of them as a separate entity. You'll learn more about the "beast" in Carlisle's outtake in Jan.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
yummy Thanksgiving Weekend treat. Woo hoo for mating time. oooh She bit him huh. kewl
Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it.......very well worth the wait ;-)
Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
WOW, another great chapter, i cant wait to read more................
Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
oh wow I really want to change places with Bella Swan right now!!! Hope you have a wonderful Christmas and New year.
Author's Response:
I live out my fantasies vicariously through Bella. lol!
Date: 27 Nov 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was beyond words fantastic chapter............ I can not wait for the next chapter to see how she is being hunted..
I love that the beast will not hurt her he just wants to claim her has his..
You almost feel the pain that he is going thou to do ths..
awesome!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter is with beta now and should be up in a day or so.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yummy, animal Edward is out to play.
Author's Response:
Yes he is....grrr!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow, Edward is just so very smexy. Poor Bella confused and excited by turns I bet. Wonderful chapter as always.
Hope you and yours are well. Have a great thanks giving.
Author's Response:
I'm really getting into this Edward. I was grinning like a fool when I wrote it. I may be a little "feverish"
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
oohhh I can't wait to see how his hunt goes!!!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
This was such a great chapter!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 20 Nov 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
im really excited fo rthe next chapter and to see how this hun tturns out :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Next ch will be up soon.
Date: 19 Nov 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sounds like Edward is going to have some fun.
Author's Response:
Edward is going to have a lot of fun...
Date: 18 Nov 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 18 Nov 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh my! That was an AWESOME chapter! I want to see the hunt!! So cool!
I love this chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! The hunt will be from Bella's pov.
Date: 18 Nov 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
CarefGonna give the poor girl a heart attack. If u aren't careful. Lol<br />
Author's Response:
It's going to be interesting...
Date: 18 Nov 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh my!!How I would love to be the prey of the sexy beast Edward!!! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Get in line~ The next chapter will be the hunt from Bella's pov. Sexy times ahead! Consider it an early Christmas present.