Date: 09 Apr 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Day the Earth Moved
I enjoyed the chapter but I don't think it was too in depth;) BTW what is all the gibberish at the top of this and the top of the first chapter of the main story?
Date: 08 Apr 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Love of a Pixie
These o/t are AWESOME!
Date: 08 Apr 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Thoughts of a Suthern Gentleman
Ahh! I was really hoping that are didn't have his power but he has!!! I'm enjoying these o/t s and having the extra insider knowledge ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings
Thanks for the heads up from the main story about these o/t ;) and the "behind the scenes" look ;D
Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Day the Earth Moved
I have been saving this outtake for when I got desperate for an update and today I finally gave in and read it.
It was amazing; as always.
I loved reading Bella's thought on her first sight of Edward, although it was very sad to see just how much pain she is in and how much she is suffering.
Please, please pretty please updare DBTD soon.
I'm glad you liked Bella's thoughts. She is suffering.
I am 2500 words into chapter 36 so it should be posted on Tues. That is the goal and I don't see why I can't meet it!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Interview with Edward after Chapter 28
I loved this out take, It was a genius idea and very entertaining.
glad you liked it. I had a BLAST writing it.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett
I love getting a look into Emmett's mind. It was hilarious. .
The belching was especially good.
Did you read chapter 4? That was BPOV of the first 3 chapters. Jsut saying. If you did and didn't review it's cool. I'm just checking.
Emmett is such a goof. I love that guy. I don't know that I could be with him 24/7 but he woudl make life fun, that's for sure!
Can you picture poor Edward's look of horror watching his delicate, diminutive borken Bella belching!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Love of a Pixie
Do what? do what? Darn it Alice explain yourself!
Really great chapter, I liked the image of Jasper dealing with a drunken co-ed, It really amused me.
I imagine Carlisle really would be thrilled if he knew Bella's thoughts on Edward as an Angel throughout the Twilight saga.
I love leaving cliffhangers, I admit it. I'm mean that way.
Poor Jasper with a drunken co-ed. Seriously I can see him rolling his eyes.
Calisle would love the Angel bit, you're right.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Thoughts of a Suthern Gentleman
I really enjoyed this little foray into Jasper's mind.
I think Mike may have finally got the messge to leave Bella alone now.
When they were discussing Edward's wood situation I was laughing my ass off, I hope they block those thoughts well or he will be seriously pissed.
I like the 'Pioneer Aviation' mention, I haven't watched that episode in ages I may have to hunt it down when I have finished reading this story. I am a HUGE M*A*S*H fan (is it weird that I think Hawkeye is hot even though he's technically 50 years older than me?)
aaaggghhhh I think Jasper is the hardest to write! ggggrrrrrr I am sooooo NOT a southern gentleman, though I would like one. LOL
You would hope mike would now have a clue.
You think Hawkeye is hot? As in he is hot in MASH or you still think Aken alda is not now?
Date: 03 Aug 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings
I really enjoyed this little trip into Carlisle's thoughts.
I am really glad he pointed out Roslaie's hypocrisy, It drives me mad that she is always so against Bella being changed but she did the very same thing to Emmett.
I hope Edward deal with the mating a little better than they are expecting him to now although I doubt it he is the king of melodramatics.
King of Melodramatics. Yeah that's one way of wording it. LOL He is soooo funny when you step back and look at him.
Rose is a TOTAL hypocrit. Always was. Trust me, it will be pointed out a few times, but Rose is still Rose so she won't chang to much.
Carlise . . . sigh. I like him, a lot! Hot, pompassionate Dr. Yeah I could deal with that . . .
Date: 13 May 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Interview with Edward after Chapter 28
Lmao. I love the Jasper/Alice part, I've never really been a fan of mostly in character Edward, he's so uptight and controlling. Anyway, it's going to really suck for Bella when she and Edward "do the deed" (whether that occurs in the story or not) because he'll be lucky if he lasts 5 minutes since he's never, you know.
aawwww I think Edward's a hoot!!! so virginal and repressed. He's fun to toy with!! You're right he made need to do some kind of practicing if he wants to geet through eternity not being known as a 3 push chump!!!!
Date: 13 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett
Lol, Em kinda reminds me of my older brother.
Emmett reminds you of your older brother!! I don't know if I should be jealous or scared for you!!!!
Date: 05 May 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings
That would be nice thanks. I also loved your next teaser it sounds like it is going to be a rough few chapters.
it will be a rough few chapters, but coming out the other side will be good, I hope!!!!
Date: 04 May 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Interview with Edward after Chapter 28
oh brilliant you gave up loads of info in a great fun way, i loved some of those questions edward indignation at the more personal ones was funny underpants and sperm spring to mind, thanks to alice & jasper for dropping in once i read it i was curious about sparkly jizz as well lol, now can bella come home soon please everybody misses he, hope so
great stuff thanks tracy
I was soooo distracted when writing the interview I forgot a ton of questions. I am going to try, to get a follow-up interview done. I will ask your questions then. I am sooooo sorry please forgive me!
Date: 04 May 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Interview with Edward after Chapter 28
This was a lot of fun. I am disappointed that my questions didn't come up, but that's fine. You give Newmoon Edward for 2 weeks and she didn't have to share, now he doesn't answer my questions. I see who your fav reader is. I will go pout in the corner. ;)
Hope your mom is feeling better soon.
I think I'm going to TRY to do a follow-up interview with the TWCS questions. I feel like complete and total poop for forgetting it. I LOVE your Voltuir question and can't beleive you are the ONLY person to ask that ever really and it's a great question!!!
I don't know if I can, but I am going to try to get an interview together.
Date: 04 May 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings
Its offical, you have good taste; MASH, MofU and EP. Your golden in my book. Off to catch up on the rest of your story and its outtakes, I ve had a buisy few weeks and now I have some time to catch up on my FF reading before summer semester starts.
that's cool!!! Glad I'm in the club!!!!! Hope you get caught up on all your FF!!!! That is fun but can be daughnting!
Date: 04 May 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Thoughts of a Suthern Gentleman
MASH is the best. I grew up watching reruns in the 1980's with my parents, when I say grew up I mean from around age three until now and I own all the episodes on dvd and watch them on cable. Hahha Pioneer Aviation, hahahh. The character of Hawkie is the best prankster and yet very human and imperfect all at once. Your story is great, so are the outtakes. I look foward to reading more. Poor Bella, hopefully everything will turn out right in the end, hopefully she gets a happy ending and I have a feeling that the Cullens will do anything to make that happy ending happen. Love your story!
(stole that from Master of the Universe, if you have not read that, please do, its great, along with Emacipation Proclimation, how can you not resist Papa C in a very dangerous and powerful position. I am such a lazy person, too lazy to look up the correct spelling of Carlisle when there is a town named Carlisle here in Pennslyvania. Duh).
lol, I'm reading both MotU and EP. Who isn't!!!! lol
I love MASH too!! glad you liked the Pinoeer Aviation! I had fun with that! You're the 2nd perosn to comment on it!!!! people are missing a good sitcom!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett
i love me some emmy-bear!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Day the Earth Moved
so is she writting her book all those nights that edward watches her? it is nice to see the other side of thecoin here. especially since bella doesn't have her head up her butt, and isn't completely oblivious like acertain vamp we all know...
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Love of a Pixie
oh boy what is she gonna do now?
lol, Bella's full of surprises, that's for sure!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Thoughts of a Suthern Gentleman
nice to see that the troops have gathered and are ready to fight for bella. i would love an OT in rose's pov
you're the 2nd person i've had ask for RPOV. I don't know. I have none planned right now but maybe in the future. I'll have to see.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings
heehee now eddie and belly are in trouble they have the whole cullen crew working on them.
I'm so glad you're reading the ot, they add a nice dimension to the story, and yep! all the Cullens are working on them now!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett
I love Em, he makes me smile.
I'm glad , he makes me smile too :)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett
this chapter is great, bella just hanging out with emmett watching a footy match seeming to enjoy life a little just like she deserves to, loved the description of who emmett thought edward would mate with, 15 cats very amusing, emmett may be a big joker but he is very inciteful noting all the positive changes in edward that he seems oblivious to, thanks
ps thanks for the reasurances in your author reply for ch 25 i dont want them to leave i worried edward would go for a little while then despair and come back, is it a little crazy that i worry about fictional people lol tracy
yeah, seeing Bella have a just for fun day was a good thing. she needs those and I can't write them all in or the story would be HUGE!! lol Emmett is observant though he hides it well.
don't worry about worring over fictional characters, I do so ALL the time!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett
Great day. I love how Emmett is the comic relief in every story.
Emmett is good comic relief, he's fun to play with!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Day the Earth Moved
Wow, Bella is so sad, but she at least senses that Edward is going to be a pivotal person in her life. she just doesn't understand what that means to her.
no she has NO clue what Edward will mean to her at that point. *sigh*, young love. lol. Bella is sooooo dark and sad, it's hard to be in her head, but I know it will all get better so I don't mind to much. Thanks for the review!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Day the Earth Moved
i love bella initial reactions to seeing edward she wants too crawl on his lap hear his voice and thought he could make her life better, than sadly she is struck by the thought that he could be dangerous to her does she mean emotionaly? as in dangerous to do anything other than keep her distance from people, her life is so empty and sad she even believes she is a dissapointment to god, alice is one of a couple of friends bella has she deliberatly not made friends so she can kill herself after she has righted the wrongs at the trial, like i say so shockingly sad bella has no intention of healing and moving past her trauma even though she has people that care for her like seth, and then that disasterous meeting in class with edward which leaves her terrified, she is one brave girl to move past that to make friends with edward and the rest of the family, great stuff thanks
What I love about this out take is that you get to see the shift a lot clearer showing the mating between the two. With Edward he is soooooo consumed with her blood and lack of thoughts you miss the life alterning shift through it all, just like Edward does. Yes you are right, Bella is soooooo committed to being alone and having no one, but she has this inextricable pull to Edward and she fears emotionally what that could mean. She is happy, ok she is content to live in her shell and doesn't want out of it and somehow gets that Edward could be a catalyst for pulling her back to the world she has turned her back on.
Yes she does have people that love her. She knows that. She doesn't feel deserving of it and hates herself to much to truly believe in their love. Bella is entirly consumed with guilt. That is teh prevailing emotion that is with her daily. She truly feels that she should be dead and that her being alive is against what should be, That is why she will be fighting soooooo hard her connection with Edward. Remember that for next chapter and ESPECAILLY chapter 24. lol
thanks for the review!!!!!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Love of a Pixie
thats a bit sad really that edward no longer smiles or laughs well he smiles at bella and alice giving the rest of the family a running commentary but what did she see?
ps when i said you cram a lot in each chapter that wasn't meant to be a negative statement maybe i should have used different words i just meant they were well filled with lots to think about and everything is explained well,
I didn't take the cram a lot into one chapter as a bad thing. LOL just the opposite!!!
We are seeing here that while Bella needs Edward, Edward soooooo needs Bella too. More than he realises! it's a good thing. OMW I just quoted Marth Stewart!!!!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Thoughts of a Suthern Gentleman
those cullens are quite the inciteful bunch, and i like that rose is helping and saying some very sensible things, well they all are, so no vampie powers to help bella along just good old fashioned love, commitment and support and lets not forget the power of a good friendship
for vamps that have been around for a few decades or centuries they are a pretty bringt bunch ;) Did you like Jasper making Mike Pee. I had fun with that, not hte buttt whooping people were expecting but I think effective in and of itself!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings
thanks for the info i'm glad i came to read this before going back to the main story, i so need to go to bed but i'll probabaly be reading a while yet in my favour is that's half term this week so no work for me in the morning yipee, on to the important stuff the review, now i get why jasper and alice are keeping stumm for now to protect edward from himself, bella dosen't have much time left either way less than 1 yr according to alices visions but if vampires stay as they are when they are changed and bella is still depressed will she be depressed for ever more? thats not a nice thought! but if she has been this way for so long can the cullens bring her round in less than a year to be changed not depressed hope that makes sense
first, THANK you for reading the out take. LOL they are not essential to the story, in that the plot of the story can continue w/o the out take but they sooooo share the story and add flavor to it.
You bring up an interesting poitn my dear . . . lol yes when you are changed you become the version of yourself you are at that point, so . . . what will happen? That's a good question. I'll have to get my magic 8 ball out and ask ;)