Date: 27 May 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 43
DAMN ... Ok, there needs to be possibly one more sequel...delving more into their
personal lives .... with another psycho for them to chase.
I have loved all three of your FBI stories even though this one got a little far-fetched with The Program.
I'm now going to go check out your other stories. You are a wonderful author, & I have thoroughly enjoyed each & every one I have read.
Thanks muches for sharing them with me....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 23 Sep 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 43
Will there be another part to this series a PART 4?????
I am absolutly loving reading this story because it is so uniquely different from so many other stories out there!!! This amazing story has left me captivated & intrigiued. Expectanly & impatiently awaiting next chapter update. This is a Briliantly amazing story, which has captured ur audiences attention!! I most definatly give this a 10 star rating!!!
U Truely are an amazingly gifted write with such an amazing talent!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
Bella needs to stop hiding and spend time with her family. She will probably feel less guilty and more normal if she interacts with the people who love her. She needs a life outside the office. She needs to spend time with the children and see the good in the world. She is already the leader of the team. She should take the job, but she needs balance. She would get that with family.
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 36
I've been reading your stories ever since I read and re-read the Awakenings series. This FBI series has had me neglecting my housework for the last week. I can't wait to read the last few chapters in this story!!
Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 3rd which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 29 not 30!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
It is about time that Edward told her to take her head out of arse and realize that the pity party has to stop. He loves her and he is sick of being her doormat. She needs to show him that he is special to her. She hasn't shown him true love in a long time. All he has seen is neediness.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
You may not love this story, but let me tell you it is so much more that many stories out there. I jumped on this as soon as it was out. Too much steamy sex with not story line. I mean a lemon is a lemon.
I love this story, very much so.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
This was a good chapter. The team arrived and they actually started analyzing data. Granted, they didn't get anywhere. Why are they just looking at files? Why arent they interviewing people? Plus, how big is this rat hole? It sounds absolutely suffocating yet, large.
Great chapter. I have been sick most of the summer too. So, take care.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
This chapter was a tough one. It shows how tied together Carlisle, Bella, Edward, and Esme are. They truly are a unit that only thrives with each other. When one is not healthy the unit doesn't function correctly, but the other parts are their to give the troubled one strength, even if they are not the best themselves. They truly need each other to survive.
Date: 16 May 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
This story has more twists and turns. It is hard to remember what happened in previous chapters. It has been so long. Bella does not need to take the whole world on her shoulders. She needs to trust her extended family. They seem to be the only ones she can count on to be there for her. Her team is her extended family plus their mates and children. The rest of the world she doesn't need to worry about. When this mess is finished. They all need to leave and find a new career that is less stressful.
Date: 12 Mar 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
There seems to be quite a few dirty agents or at least not totally honest with each other in Bella's and Edward's presence. These agents returning from the dead seem to have their own agenda. I hope the good guys can figure it out without Bella going crazy.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I feel so bad for Edward for having to put up with Bella running to Carlisle all the time. She says Edward is her world, but she seems to confide and put Carlisle first. Edward seems to be the bedmate. Edward seems to love Bella more than Bella loves Edward.
Date: 28 Jan 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yes i am still confused. This plot is very much a mystery stll but i am sure you will blow my mind once you reveal it.
I am very concerned about bella, shouldnt she be a little better now and realize she wasnt weak but strong to survive?