[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yes i am still confused. This plot is very much a mystery stll but i am sure you will blow my mind once you reveal it.
I am very concerned about bella, shouldnt she be a little better now and realize she wasnt weak but strong to survive?
Date: 28 Jan 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good Chapter.....
Date: 28 Jan 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
I feel bad for what Bella went through, but she is choosing to loose everything because of it. She can be a victim or a survivor.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
BB - you did a great job explaining B's pain in this chapter. If they are dealing with such an organized group of bad guys, should they really be calling home and stuff?
thanks for the update. happy new year!
Date: 01 Jan 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good chapter.....
Date: 01 Jan 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward ot the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great job BB. I am excited about this road trip. I don't like how Em is right now. I hope those left back at the office are safe.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Are they going to tell Emmett and Jasper anything about this trip? She wants them to trust her, well she needs to trust them as well. Bella needs to get over this this crap and live or she might as well of died. She is not really living the way she is acting. I feel so sorry for Edward.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I really feel for Bella. She's struggling and doesn't know what the right thing to do is. The boys need to give her a break and just let her focus on the case.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Date: 27 Nov 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
loved the chapter looking forward to the next chatper
Date: 27 Nov 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
Good Chapter....
Date: 15 Nov 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
I waited to start reading this until you were further along. I always love your writing. These stories have so much important information. I hate to wait weeks for updates. I am old I forget stuff!!..lol
gj
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella needs to stop putting work before Edward. They can work on cases together, but their personnal life should be first. These strangers she keeps trying to help don't love or care about her. Edward does. She would have nothing without him.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am patient. Very confused over the trouble that Bella and Edward are having. And I can't beleive that she told Edward it was his fault. Please don't let them drift too far.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Have faith and trust. It will be okay:)
Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
ooh yeaaah!
Date: 05 Sep 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well, I didn't see that coming. Great cliffie. I hope E and B get on the same page. They work well together and to have this distance between them hurts not only them but thier work.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
well thats not good lookign foward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow great start on a story. I understand that B is broken, but she seems to be overly so in this segment. I thought she was doing a good job of moderating her feelings at the ned of the last story. Here she is off the deep end.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
ohhhh, good, I was afraid you weren't going to post. Good chapter, but, relax Bella a bit. She is making me tired with her emotions. whew
Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
Good Chapter.....
Date: 24 Aug 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
L ST JOHN. I GET IT DAMN IT!!! EEEEK!! I'D BE A DAMN GOOD DETECTIVE LMAO
Author's Response:
lol :)
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
well i hope they realize that she dose help them! looking foward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it, except fo the cliffhanger lol. Don't keep us in suspense too long.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
excited for the next chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Peter knows something. Bella does hide from her family. She can't just be with her family. She always has to be strong. If she is not strong she doesn't want them to see her. They love her anyway. She puts way too much pressure on herself. She would probably heal faster if she wasn't a perfectionest about herself.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Iduno what to think anymore. But Bella's head needs to be removed from her ass, its seriously annoying.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
oohh can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad Bella's focusing on helping Garrett, maybe it will help her get her 'mojo' back.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Good Chapter.....
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella would not put up with this whinniness from other people why she putting up with it from herself. She is too strong to be acting this way. She knows the bad guys are away and she is safe. She is a logical person. I think she has forgotten that part. I hope she figures it out soon because she is getting on everyones nerves. They don't expect her to be superwoman just Bella.
Date: 18 Jun 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good Chapter.....
Date: 17 Jun 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
well i hope she starts to let people in !
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
eeeekkkk!!! love it
cnt wait for more.... poor bella nd edward
plz update soon x x
Date: 22 May 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wish Bella would just let go, let go of the past, andmove on. She needs to let the people who love her back in. She blames them for what happened to her, I know she does. Thats why she is taking it so hard about what Kate said. Because she knows she shouldnt have left, not completely at least, just some time off.
I hope she gets over herself soon, and realizes that she needs to get her head out of her ass and get super focused on the task at hand, which is Garrett and Kate.
Date: 20 May 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good Chapter....
Date: 19 May 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
well i hope that she gets out of this funk and just trys to figure out what happend
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
omg poor bella
Cnt wait for more
loving this story x x
Date: 16 Apr 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
well in the end i hope everyeon realizes that blaming her is just wrong!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
God Betty! This story is getting really good. I think Bella is on to something. Keep it going!
Date: 15 Apr 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
i wonder what the heck he was working on, that he didnt get edward involved into it? I mean why wouldnt he trust his partner you know? Or maybe he didnt want Edward getting hurt. Hmm I dont know, I feel like getting out a microsope and putting on some gloves and searching for clues, gah!
update soon please!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
well they always put the blame on her cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm soo glad that you updated, i been looking everday making sure I dont miss the update!
I guess Bitch Bella is coming back and she's coming back with vengence - i know i prolly spelt that wrong - I cant wait til she comes back full force.
nail their balls to the walls - favorite quote of the chapter!
Date: 30 Mar 2011 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good Chapter....
Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
i hope she can give them some answers
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
eeeekkkk
love love love
Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
well in the end this is good for her! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG, Betty, I could feel Bella's fear, and everything else she was feeling. You are a great writer. Keep them coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good Chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
WOW! Once again you amaze me. Keep it coming. I'm loving this story just like all the others. You are an amazing writer.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
i think shes is making a mistake comming back! cant wait tosee what happens next
Author's Response:
Really? Why?
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok lady, you have me hooked yet again. I know that you have many flames in the fire, I just hope will update this story quickly but I will take what I can get. Looking forward to the next update.
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very good chapter!! Am glad you are back and things might be rolling again?? I really enjoy this......am excited to see where you go!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I am working on getting caught up:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
well i guess i need to go and read the first two. i am intrigued that is fer sure
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
JFC that was such a great start to this story I loved the other two so you know how much I will love this one as well .XOXO BB you own me !!!!!!!! LOVED IT LOL
Author's Response:
Where is the birdies kiss?!?!?!!?!?!!? LOL
Date: 22 Jan 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh VERY GOOD START!!! As always, I am sure great things are going to happen......although I hope Garret and Kate don't die!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Jan 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I knew you weren't finished with Bella being with them.
Author's Response:
Hehe, nope!