Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:41 PM Title: Dismal World
Oh my gosh - now Bella's gonna either have a complete melt down or she's gonna counsel him...
They're not the kinda stiffs I'd like to spend time with... lol
x x
Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:13 PM Title: Dismal World
Devilish & Crew!!!
Great chapter!!!!!
More when it's ready!!!! And like I said over at FF. Of course real life comes first!!!
Cory
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:18 PM Title: Dismal World
Holy hell! Excellent chapter. So, how will Edward take out Mike and not piss off Jacob? I think he should do his worst to Mike and pay Jacob the million out of his own money. Jacob gets his money, Edward gets Bella and they all fuck happily ever after.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:24 PM Title: Dismal World
I can't wait for the next bloodshed. =D You guys are awesome at writing! Absloluty LOVE this story. =D
nlj_bug
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:35 AM Title: Quicksand
Wow, great story, so wicked!! ?o))
update soon
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Quicksand
:) please update soon
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
:)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:29 AM Title: Prologue
:) beter to be safe than sorry. Love your story!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:27 PM Title: Quicksand
I loved it can't wait for the next chapter and for when Mike get what he deservers!! Keep up the great work!!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:36 AM Title: Quicksand
ahh!! damn i thought she had killed mike :( oh well at least they got rid of that , pardon my french, bitch :)
ahhh they finally admited they loved each other...:) i love it!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 2:30 PM Title: Quicksand
Another deliciously twisty chapter -- nothing like the combination of blood, love and passion is there?
Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:43 AM Title: Quicksand
Devilish
Fabulous chapter!!!!
I hope Edward, Emmett and Alice get Bella out of her little bit of trouble she got herself into!!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
Cory
Date: 26 Feb 2010 5:41 AM Title: Quicksand
Wow what a great chapter, the story is getting so interesting!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 4:20 PM Title: Shaken to the Core
Oh, thank God, I didn't miss an update. LOL
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:50 PM Title: Shaken to the Core
wow!! wow!! I can't wait for the next chap!!! keep up the great work!!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 12:14 AM Title: Shaken to the Core
Very great story can't wait to read more!!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:07 AM Title: Shaken to the Core
Wow....I love this story. So twisted. And quite a cliff hanger. Please update soon.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:15 AM Title: Shaken to the Core
oh wow...this story is awesome!!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:37 PM Title: Shaken to the Core
Duct tape on Rosalie would look good! It would look even better on Tanya! I see Bella has a little addiction problem with Eddie boy. I don't know, but I think she could probably would it out with him -- perhaps a part-time hobby or something.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:34 PM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
Do you think you could get Edward to off Jacob? Now that I'd pay for ringside seats to see. Jacob is such a low-life, kinda of like a pimp. I also like the way Edward is such a cleaner -- does he have OCD tendencies lurking?
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:32 PM Title: Soulful Brown Eyes
Yeah, what's up with the Bella at the Funeral? Bitchella wanting to draw a little blood, and for what? Mike is her husband, but he's been MIA for a while now -- so is it guilt or something twisty? Please say twisty!
Author's Response:
Always Twisty! :) Thanks for reviewing every chapter. We are so happy that our fans are willing to continue with us over here.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:27 PM Title: Passion and Fury
Oh, yeah......too bad it isn't possible for Bella to do a Mr and Mrs Smith thing with Edward. That would be hot!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:25 PM Title: Angel of Death
I like the twist on Edward's attraction to her and the urge to kill her via alternate universe methods. But I still think Mike makes a better corpse -- plus she'd be 2 mil richer and quite a catch for Eddie boy.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:22 PM Title: Death By . . .
They are all so off-the-charts morbid and loving every moment of it, but can't you just visualize it? I do -- probably have seen one too many slasher films. And Alice truly is scary -- I can't decide whether she needs medication or to be squashed like a bug.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:57 AM Title: Phantom Desire
I freaking love this!!
Author's Response:
We are so happy to hear! :)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:26 AM Title: Phantom Desire
Devilish
Glad to see that your story is safe here. I would hate to miss any of it!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thanks for following us over here! :)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:01 AM Title: Fallen Angel
Oh, what tangled webs we weave, when we first practice to deceive or the best laid plans of mice and men gone to hell in a hand basket.....I think I see a funeral coming.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:58 AM Title: Devil in Disguise
I think Bella might be able to get a deal from Edward on offing Mike. Also Jake seems like a real pimp.....
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:21 AM Title: Sinful Pleasure
Oh, he's a bad, bad man.....but so good, too!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:07 AM Title: Prologue
Oooohhhhh, this is gonna be so good. Loved you when you were over at fanfic and still devouring it the moment it is updated. A must read for those who love a Darkward who is entirely unapologetic and really, really has mad skillz with death-dealing.