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Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

I was thinking all along Bella was pregnant too.  Just because the chance was slim does not make it impossible just makes it more special.  Edward will be over the moon!  Bella will freak, as she will not be prepared for the possibility, but ultimately be thrilled.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

loved it very much update when you can

I just hope edward belives her if she is i thought the moment she got dizzy that she might be or will she write off her mother guess will just wait and see....

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

LOL I knew it!  and they thought it wasn't possible huh! but maybe we are jumping the gun but I sincerley hope they are for their sakes :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 21

Hey thanks for the update I love reading this story :-)  These 2 have some fun sexy times :-)

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

Ooooh cliffhanger! Please update soon! :P

Reviewer: kayphere Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Glad to find you over here on this website! 

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 20

I positively jumped out of my skin when I saw there was an update :D awesome!

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hmmm I wonder whats up with Bella? Could be all the stress of the Funeral and what not but then something else could appear huh? Edward's swimmers might be just enough after all its been 6 long years since hes been tested and miracles have been known to happen? LOL just far fetching hun :-) Thanks for the super update I so love reading this story ;-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

Awwww that was so sad Billy dying :-(

I love a dirty talking Edward thou :-) That lemon was awesome! and thanks for the update :-)

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awwww...sweet and fluffy!  I have really enjoyed reading this story.  I look forward to the rest.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

Okay, that's all kinds of perfect! :D

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 17

uh oh! she wont like the way he proposed! straight after making love :-( I wonder what will she say :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter and I am glad that Edward and Jacob have finally meet! :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hmmmm holed up in a hotel with Dreamward hmmmm! the possibilities :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

Awww I feel for them but it wont be long and they will be together again :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 13

Keep up the fantastic writing :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Ooooohhhh that was pretty awesome the way he proposed the 2nd time :-)Thanks for the updates and I can't wait to read more on this fantastic story :-)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

How sad for that mother adn child.  That was heartwrenching to read.  Poor Edward would have really beat himself up more if it was not for the support of Bella.

That was not the proposal I expected at all, but in Edward fashion it was romantic and he proposed in the place he first fell in love with her.  

 

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

Hmmm intresting chatper :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

No hun it was very awesome how you worded it! very sensual indeed :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

what an awesome chapter hun keep up the fantastic writing :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

ooohhhh Spark it up now! This is a great story hun thanks for sharing it :-)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

see Jacob was not a threat, but a buddy. 

 

Those 2 are definitely in deep, and head over feet! 

 

The tryst in the offic was hot too!

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

see Jacob was not a threat, but a buddy. 

 

Those 2 are definitely in deep, and head over feet! 

 

The tryst in the offic was hot too!

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh wow! that poor girl having a baby at 13 and not knowing until she was about to deliver :-(  and I am afraid it happens in real life as well ! Thanks for sharing the first 8 chapter and I am so looking forward to reading more and esp when they finally get together :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oooohhhh now things are spicing up between them :-) Hey I just want to thank you for adding more chapters on when I started reading this story last night their was only 2 chapters and walla! you added 6 more in one day :-) So thank very much for doing that! I am enjoying the story very much :-)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

I have just read through all the posted chapters and cannot wait for more.  I love the connenction those two have in this story. 

I also like the work dynamic you have created here.  It adds a dimension you don't usually see in FF.  It works well. 

 

 

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

well moving along nicely :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ooooh its starting and its the begining of hopefully something beautiful :-)

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

Another cool chapter and so looking forward to reading the next :-)

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow!!!!

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hey thanks for the great chapter I so love reading this story ;-)

Reviewer: gasuz09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

followed you from FF.... LOVE your story and didn't want to miss any of it!

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

*squeal* Okay, I definitely need an update soon! :D:D

And yeah... delivery is not something you'd forget easily ;) :P

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Okay, I'm officially in love with this story :D

Do you have any kids? I ask because you describe the pain of delivering so well ;)

Hugs,

Emma



Author's Response:

Yep, three of them and even though it was a long time ago, I remember it vividly :)

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 2


Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

So far, I'm loving it :D

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey this is a great start to the story :-) Its such a different one by the looks of it so I will be looking forward to reading more! Chillz

Reviewer: starfish422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice! I didn't see this story on FF; glad to see it here. I'm also in the process of moving my own stuff over here because of the FF m-rated scares.

Looking forward to future chapters!

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