Date: 24 May 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it and that last line 'Because ... I'm the better doctor awesome.
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Date: 24 May 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hell ya!!!! Let him speak!!!! Let him speak!!!!!!
**peeks from under the covers, yep I forgot about his job being temporary too**
TTFN Love this story
Date: 24 May 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
She is always in panic mode. Damn Bella calm down. You lost time before because you made an assumption. Just slow your roll girl. I do get her rambling though. Great chap.
E/k
Date: 24 May 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
excited to see what happens next
Date: 23 May 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved it and look foreward to Bella listening to him.
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Date: 23 May 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
WOW, one way conversation you think!
Date: 21 May 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, I assume that it is Lilly who popped in and that took the decision out of their hands on when to tell her! This could go either way. She could be extremely excited that Bella will complete their family or it could send her into a frenzy of fear that Bella will disappear if they break-up.
Date: 21 May 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
That little girl is always around when it comes to telling something. LOL
Date: 19 May 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
im excited to see what happens next chapter
Date: 18 May 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
nice little cliffy I need more you can't leave me like that.
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Date: 18 May 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
laughin my ass of at the end of chapter..cant wait for next one. I hoping for very very update.
Date: 18 May 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
well i hope they both can help eachother !
Date: 17 May 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it keep it coming.
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Date: 13 May 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
so sad for Lilly to have to hear her whorether say she wasn't wanted... but then so happy that Bella was there to give her the love - it was such a sweet ending to the chapter : )
Date: 12 May 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awwwwww poor lilly ! Skankya what a evil bitch! Bella will be a better mommy for her. Hope Docward kisses a lot of ass and makes Bella realize she is better with them.
Thanks :)
Date: 12 May 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
well im glad taht hes going to make what ever needs to happen to happen! but im feel sorry for bella that she may not be able to have kids of her own! maybe its will work out in the end!
Date: 12 May 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it....
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Date: 12 May 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome ending, but that Tanya I hate every time I read about her. LOL
Date: 05 May 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
WOW, that was heart breaking!
Date: 04 May 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh i love this story poor lily
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and letting me know how much you love the story! Means a lot that you took the time to review so many of the chapters and had such wonderful things to say about them!
Date: 04 May 2011 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
well hells bells cant wait for more
Date: 04 May 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
Dr PhilJazzy and Dr. PhilEm hehehehe! Love this story! Thank you for showing that parents can have time with friends and families and still be responsible Adults... Not drinking around the children, so they can be alert and take care of their kids well that is just refreshing.
Date: 04 May 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well the light dawns that's for sure. Interesting! Hum what insight might Ms. Pixie give to our wonderful DoctorWard!!!!
Date: 04 May 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Now If Jazz and Em know what's good for them they better act like their wives and be shocked about Lilly!!! hahahahaha
Date: 04 May 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter and yes she did over react just a weeeeeee bit! hehehe!
Date: 04 May 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
wasn't expecting the next door neighbor but I like, I like alot!!!!! So he didn't know what he did back in College (med school) that makes for an interesting story line, and with how much Bellla loves children!!!!
TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Date: 04 May 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well this certainly sounds good! Looking forward to the rest... You could feel Bella's angsty pain here remembering that one night and the snarky person that she is in the words from him over "re-match". Yea no kidding! Guys just don't know what they are saying sometime huh!
TTFN Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 02 May 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
I agree that Bella has major trust issues. But what Alice and Rose said to Bella was harsh. It didn't even sound like it was coming from friends. I have been best friends with the same two people since second grade and we would never talk like that to each other. There are better ways to do it. I mean come on. Really you want to be friends with benefits while he also puts out for every other girl and then you still have to hear about it. I dont think so. That would break a person to. Plus whose to say he would have realized it. It wasn't until she wasnt in his life that he realized he had feelings for her. But I still think Alice and Rose is getting away with alot of stuff that firends wouldn't really do and they need to be more understanding and supportive. I think Bella needs to nail into the at some time. There needs to be more ways for them to share there opinions without it being so blunt and forceful. Trust me and my 20 some year friendships blunt and forceful will cause nothing but more heartache.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review. While I understand what you're saying - I myself have friends that have been in my life since I was born, sometimes tough love is required. I admit that the girls were probably too harsh on Bella and their tact was horribly missing from the situation, but it has been since they set them up at the club.
Also - I never said that if they had become friends with benefits he would have continued his relationships with other girls on campus. :)
Date: 02 May 2011 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh-oh will Tanya get jealous and pull the "I'm married so I can provide for Lily better" card just to hurt Edward? Has Bella started therapy? so many questions!! - great chapter
Author's Response:
I'm not usually into telling what happens but I feel I have to let you know that Tanay will not do that. I'm sure most of your other questions will get answered in the next few chapters if not all in the next one. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 02 May 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
well im excited to see what happens next chapter
Date: 02 May 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
my heart is breaking for Lilly, please tell us Tanya "disappears" and Bella gets her act together, marries Edward, has more babies and Lilly has a mom. But if you did we wouldn't have a story anymore huh!!! LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response:
HAHA! Yeah I can't exactly tell you what happens, but I will give you this - Tanya does disappear, eventually. Not yet but she will go away. That's all you're getting though! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 02 May 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
I will do no such thing! Actually, I loved where you left it, because for me, it set everything up for Bella and Lilly to become closer and we don´t have to worry about Tanya. After what she heard, Lilly will probably want nothing to do with her! Good riddin´s to bad rubbish! Ha! Love the chapter bb! Update when you can!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you for the awesome reviews on 14 & 15!! Tanya's almost gone...but unfortunately not quite yet. The relationship with Bella and Lilly does grows and I try to show that in my future chapters - hopefully it works. :) We'll find out exactly why Bella is crying in the next chapter...it's a big one so I'm definitely going to try to get it posted ASAP.
Thanks again for reading and for reviewing!!!
Date: 02 May 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, I was pretty pissed about what happened. I totally agree with both of their reactions though. Bella was thrown for a loop and had no idea what to think and Lauren deserved to be thrown out. She was wrong for going to his door like that. She could have at least tried to say something to Bella. The fact that they both bailed on the practice to spend most of the week drunk is priceless! lol! Now I hope Bella comes up with a good plan to fix this, now that she´s pulled her head out of her stubborn arse! :) Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 02 May 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well Shit Edward just can't get a break huh? But, please tell me that Bella get "inseminated" by Edward... :)
Author's Response:
I can neither confirm nor deny that for you. :) I will tell you that from here on out - everything is pretty fluffy with only a few issues to contend with. The biggest of those getting out in the open in Chapter 16. Thanks for continuing to read and review!!!
Date: 01 May 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
Still loving this story - and the frequent updates! Thank You! C x
Date: 01 May 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
ok now I am putting my foot down Edward..... take away that poor excuse of a mother right away and let Lilly find some peace - tartya is a stupid,stupid, selfish cow - I wonder if she and renee are acquainted ?? maybe FB friends : )
Author's Response:
If they aren't friends we should definitely suggest it to them! :) Thanks for reviewing - as always!!
Date: 01 May 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
awwwwwwwww so sad ! Maybe Skankya will hit the road and give up parental rights. Bella would be a better Mom!
Thanks :)
Date: 01 May 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
O.M.G., SHE is a nut case!
Date: 01 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
she is such a drama queen and dosent wait to listen to him!
Date: 01 May 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hey, I can see why should would jump to the conclusion she did - I did - cause once trust/faith is broken its damn hard to get back..... And lets face it he did a terrific job 10 years ago of breaking not only her trust in love but also in herself and thats even harder to overcome...
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding why this chapter/event was added. The past (and not just with Edward) is something big in Bella's life - not something she can just forgive in a week. She needed more time. Thank you for continuing to read review!!! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well played. Poor Edward!! I am more than happy to comfort him if he needs... :) Oh, and good riddance to Lauren!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks for reviewing and making me chuckle!. :)
Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
you will come up with something.
awesome update.
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Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
rut roh now Bella has got some ass kissin to do.........lol
Thanks :)
Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
Maybe its a good thing that Bella is taking her time.....
Author's Response:
definitely a good thing...she's still not quite where she needs to be to make a decision and that's seen in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! You rock!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
oooh - big cliffie - with Jazz and Emmet ready to rip E to threads! This story is great
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Means a lot to me! It is a cliffie for sure and the next chapter is BIG.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
well this is intresting ! i cantwait to see what ahpepns next
Author's Response:
So happy you're enjoying the story!!!! It's gonna get a little bit more interesting in the chapters to follow - some drama for sure. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
WTF! Dumb Ass Lauren! She's delusional isn't she? She thinks she has a family with Edward? Well Fuck, I hope she goes away quick. lol
Author's Response:
I thought about having that story line but then I thought it would cause too much angst for an already troubled Bella. Gotta have a little drama though - if everything went smoothly it'd be a boring story, right? And no worries she's only around for 1 more chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Rut Roh Eddie is in trouble.......LOL ewww STD Lauren of all people
Thanks :)
Author's Response:
HAHA! Yes Eddie is in trouble. But that's all you're getting. :) No worries though Lauren is not sticking around. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh boy, i should've known that girl would come back! Please tll me she doesn't cause trouble for them!!!I think while Edward and Bella begin a relationship she should get inseminated, hes got Lily with Tanya and Bella loves her so he could love her baby. It may take them too long to feel ready for a baby together so make one seperate??? I don't know, just ready for them to be together together,ya know???
Author's Response:
Without giving anything away - the next chapter will have some drama. As for the wole insemination for Bella - you'll have to read and find out! ;-) Thank you for reading and definitely reviewing!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
What the heck are you doing do not bring in Lauren....
Hugs
Author's Response:
LOL! Seems to be the way a lot of people responded to this chapter. She won't be around for long - I promise. But she does cause some problems. Stick with me though.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
loved it.
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Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
i hope she gives in to him!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Go for it Bella.
E/k
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
I got so engrossed in your story I didn't review. Your comment brought me out of my reading fog. I decided that you were kind enough to write and entertain us the most we should do is review and give you credit. Wonderful story!
Author's Response:
I love that you've enjoyed the story so far!! Thank you so much for reading - and reviewing! Knowing what my readers think is wonderful. Reviews make me smile - always. :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
This seems like it going to be an interesting story!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome story so far
can't wait for more more more
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
well i hope they finally talk! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
The talk is definitely in the next chapter...which I will get posted before I leave on my mini-vacation this weekend. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome update.... I can't wait until the talk. Edward admitting he fucked up in College.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!! I hope the next chapter won't disappoint!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
its going to be an intresting night!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh! Are we going to get a glimpse of possessive jealous Edward!??? :)
Date: 09 Apr 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Interesting story, can't wait to see how the others get Edward and Bella together.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
awesome update.
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Date: 09 Apr 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella being a tease is fun! this update is awesome!
Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
well its going to get intresting
Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
awesome update.
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Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
so...Bella doesn't approve of her friends getting to plan for her. i'm so anxious for the next update to find what will happen. please do have an update at least once a week. since you said you have written this story till chap 26, maybe you can even have a twice a week update. format is just fine. updates please...
Date: 31 Mar 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
well i think she needs t otalk to him!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Don't keep us in suspense. To have 26 chapters in hand then only post one a week is just too cruel?
Please please pretty please with sugar on top, post them as they are ready!
:)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
I have to admire Jasper's and Em's restraint from hitting him hard.... now all he needs to do is hear Bella out about what she knows and suck it up and take it !!
So happy that Tartya *opps I mean Tanya* is going down, I guess though without a fight - she just seems the type..
And kudos on having Alice turn up and not only give him the stink eye but make him squirm with images of Bella in her lingerie : )
Date: 29 Mar 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great story!
How many chapters have you already written and how often are you updating?
Just want to get my reading schedule sorted!
Author's Response:
I have 26 written. I'm reviewing as I upload and making changes that need to be made. To get this one current I was aiming for 2 chapters a day but I don't know how long that is going to hold. I am going to be out of town this weekend so there definitely won't be any updates on Saturday...maybe late Sunday. I'm only doing 2 a day right now because I am so BORED at work. ha. I'm thinking about backing it off a little to get you guys used to a weekly posting...not sure though. I can still edit at work but I just won't post - plus I need to get busy on chapter 27 so when I do get to that point there is no lag. Long winded response huh? Thanks again for reading! You're awesome!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
well im glad that hes realizing that he was wrong in the first place ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 29 Mar 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
oops, Bella went from zero to bitch in under 5.7 seconds..... Now time to kiss and make-up!! :)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story. Thanks for the updates
Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome awesome.... I am glad Lilly is alright.
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Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to reading more!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
:) sorry, i am a sucky reviewer...i just like to read, and i like your story.
Author's Response:
while I love getting reviews - I don't insist on it so no pressure! As long as you're reading and enjoying that's all I care about! Thank you for letting me know that you do like it though. I will get it updated as quick as possible...the first 26 chapters are already written so I'm just reviewing before posting. :)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving it - interesting story line and regular updates - you're spoiling us! Don't stop! C x
Author's Response:
I love spoiling my readers! You'll get the chapters very quickly since I'm only transferring the story from another site (first 26 are written). Glad you're loving the story!!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
please, please let him have Lilly all to himself soon : )
Author's Response:
Hmmm....guess you'll just have to keep reading to find out whether that happens or not. ;-)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome update and I can't wait for more.... I will read them as fast as you write them.
Hugs
Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sorry for not reviewing sooner.
Really like!
;)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
well she took it well!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for replying to my last review. I'm hoping these two can get some things worked out. I have a feeling she's going to see Eddie's little girl when she goes to apologize. Also, I think you could definitely benefit from a beta (most of us utilize one to the max!) to help with punctuation and grammar along with plot and transition. I'd recc mine, but she's pretty overloaded, lol. Project Team Beta is fantastic. I hope you'll check them out! Great job on the chapter and I'm looking forward to chapter five.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice! I will definitely consider it...I've thought about it but wasn't sure how to find one or begin the process.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
well im glad that she realizing what she doing wrong ! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved the update hurry and update please.
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Date: 28 Mar 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
well i hope for her sake that she dosnt do it yet! keep the updates comming
Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
so cute.... I really do hope that Edward takes his ex back to court if she is going to try and pull crap with him about seeing Lilly..
I adore your Bella, she seems very spunky : )
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like this Bella! Spunky is more fun to write than shy quiet Bella. :) Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome update keep it coming.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thanks! Love that you like the story...and of course hugs. Everyone loves hugs!!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like the story so far, but I'm not sure if you've made Edward clueless about his womanzing ways on purpose or not. Does he even aknowledge that he used women in the past? What does he expect from Bella after sleeping with her and not wanting anything to do with her, like Bella describes?
Author's Response:
It's definitely been on purpose. He's clueless to how it affected the women but especially Bella. Give me a few more chapters and it will all become clear. We'll get a little more detail on what happened, how Bella was feeling (and what she didn't take into consideration), and how Edward was feeling. It clicks with him in the next few chapters. Please stick with me on this. Thanks for the review!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
awesome update keep it coming.