[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awh! for a chapter that was a pain in the back side, deary you did a superb job! Really enjoyed it. Good job!
I was pretty chatty in my review last chapter so this chapter I will ease up and just say again, I am really enjoying the story!
Author's Response:
Be chatty all you want- thanks for the lovely reviews.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy Moses! Well Irina was just a little pawn to both Jacob and Chelsea wasn't she!!! you cant help but feel compassion for the girl! You know I wanted to call her a schrew but stopped short because you clearly show that she was being used by both J & C, not those two deserve each other....
When you think about it wasn't it precious and sweet that Edward went out of his way to ensure that Bella's college was paid for.. Kind of reminds me of the Fan Fic University of Edward Masen - by Sebastien Robichaund (which is no longer available) anyway in that FF to ensure that Bella was able to have extra money he saw that she was awarded a Brasier (I think that I spelled that right) Anyway! Way to go in having Edward look out for his Bella and in showing all of us loyal OCC lovers of E & B; showing that even Tanya saw a connection between them 8 years previously shows that he loved and still loves Bella and that it's a true love. You are doing a wonderful job, it's just hard getting through those first chapters and see our Edward with somone other than Bella... I know I have read sometimes where reviewers write rude and hateful comments about the stories if they don't like how the characters have been written....I am NOT that kind of a reviewer... I have a choice to read a story or not, You and all the other authors really pour your hearts into these stories and I am appreciative to have this avenue to read them... Your doing a wonderful job.. Be encouraged and proud of your abilities and skill!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your lovely review. I know a lot of people are wary of Bella or Edward with other characters, but it was just where they were in their lives. E&B have always had a connection, and it's now their time.
Thanks for reading and thank you again for the lovely review.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well of course IRINA is causing problems! At least he knew the second he saw his son that Riley was his.. Awh she gave him the middle name of Masen!
Author's Response:
Irina definitely has some issues. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG; poor Edward!!!!! Moving on to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Hope you are enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow!
Author's Response:
Hope that's a good woo. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
I discovered your story yesterday and let me say that after staying up until 2 in the morning because I just couldn´t let it go! I am officially in L-O-V-E with this story! Loved the attack on Chelsea and can´t wait until Jake gets his. I must say that I´m very rarely a fan of Tanya, but she was portrayed perfectly in the story. Can´t wait for more!
I will definitely be recing this little yummy morsel in my next update!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Was delighted to read your review. So glad you love it. Jake will be getting his soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
♥ Susan
Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it; I am so happy that Bella is going to move into Edward's house after the divorce is final. They need to be a family; they have already lost so much time together already.
Author's Response:
They do have a lot of lost time to make up for. Thank you for reading and for your review.
Date: 02 Apr 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
I just started reading this and I love it! I can't understand why you have such few reviews. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I've only had it posted here at TWCS for about a week. I had only been posting on ffn before, so that's part of the reason, I guess. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just found your little story and I am loving it.... you might want to go and fix an error that is really bad
"What if we find a cardigan for you to wear, just out of the house?" I went over to the sweaters and found a pewter cardigan that didn't make the dress look horrible, so it was added to our purchases as Kate changed and brought out her dress.
I think the word should be adorrible not horrible....
Hugs
Author's Response:
I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.
Perhaps it was worded incorrectly but no adorable was not suuposed to be there . Bella and Kate wanted a sweater that would not detract from the dress, did not want it to look horrible.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay still trying to see where this is going, still very interesting!!! Really like the progess that your giving it to us in! Thanks for a very good and entertaining read
Author's Response:
Hope you give it a chance, and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 4:33 PM Title: Prologue
Very interesting - cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
WOW I just found this story but I love it!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you love it. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome story so far cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying it. Next update will be this weekend. Thanks for the review.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Okay new to your story and totally love it!!!!!!!!!
I can not wait to read next chapter. I love the way Edward and Bella are and how the dealt with Chelsea and I can not wait to see what happens to Jake. I hope you update soon. Will be waiting.
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it so far, the next chapter should be up in a week. It's going to be fun dealing with Jake.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 12:12 PM Title: Prologue
Amei essa sua fic, achei bem realista com drama e romance até aqui, continuarei lendo. Parabéns
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
awesome story I am glad Edward did not cheat on Tanya but waited.....great story please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I dont like cheating Edward's so that never would have worked for me. I'lll have another chapter updated by next weekend.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am really liking this story; I just finished reading all of the chapters and I am so looking forward to seeing what comes up next.
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for reviewing. Next update will be about a week.