Date: 22 Aug 2011 9:59 PM Title: Par for the Course
If this story wasn't finished, I'd be screaming bloody hell right now!!! So great!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 9:16 PM Title: This is it
Oh, man...that's messed up! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 22 Aug 2011 8:06 PM Title: SunSational Day
Wow...Chris is a good old fashioned ho-bag!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 7:04 PM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
Yay!!! They're having a baby!!! That shit with the FBI was priceless.
Date: 22 Aug 2011 5:46 PM Title: Prove It
Holy shit! Yeah, I'm still reading!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 11:07 PM Title: Get It
Outstanding chapter! I'm so glad that he didn't screw that girl. I do hate it for Esme that Carlisle did, though.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 8:56 PM Title: Olde E
Glad that Bitch Jane is gone, and I was going to have to come through my laptop if he actually had sex with Gail! Way to scare an old lady!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 7:50 PM Title: Poker Face
Oh, man...I hope he doesn't kill Aro...I liked him in this one!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 6:02 PM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
I've gotta tell you...that shit in frontierland had me laughing my ass off! So great!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:53 PM Title: Prove It
Oh no! Well, we knew this was coming. I hope they don't keep Edward. Bella will have to go to her doctor appt without him? Well, I guess that's the price you pay for that type of lifestyle. I hope E can get out of this. I love the part with Esme and Aro. Honestly, I don't think Esme could be with someone like Aro. He's really got his hands dirty. If Esme only knew. Love it.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:00 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Him and that damn gun! Carlisle, who I absolutely hated in the beginning, is now one of my favorites...behind Mobward!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:22 PM Title: Hot
Wow, car bombs at strip clubs...this shit gets better and better!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:26 AM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
I'm anxious to know if Edward had anything to do with this!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 1:05 AM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
So sad...still loving this
Date: 20 Aug 2011 10:34 PM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
you could never tarnish this edward for me...love this.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 9:16 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
Another fun filled chapter. What is up with Carlisle? Does he love Esme or not? When he cornered Bella at the club, he wanted to do more than just talk. As loaded as he was, I think he would have forced himself on Bella. He's always had a thing for her. If he wanted to screw around, he should have stayed single. Maybe he's addicted to sex. Whatever, he needs help. And I can't believe the temper Edward has. He could have killed him. I'm sure he really doesn't want to kill his brother, but one of these days he may just do that.
I wonder why Bella is so curious about Aro's junk? Hmmm?
Date: 20 Aug 2011 9:12 PM Title: Bad Taffy
Oh, God, I'm so addicted to this shit! My husband wants to go out for dinner tonight but I can't tear myself away from this, so I'm faking a stomachache!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:01 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
So cool...Lovin this so much!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 6:53 PM Title: Light my Fire
That was too sweet.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 6:31 PM Title: Epilogue
LOVE, LOVE, LOVED!! this story. I am so excited you decided to do a sequel - I can't wait.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:45 PM Title: TKO
So much for waiting to have babies!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:56 PM Title: Decision/Draw
Loved it!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:54 PM Title: Round Two
I think it was pretty funny that the dog ate a tampon! Great chapter.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 3:34 AM Title: Round One
Not quite a romantic fucker, but he's trying. This is extremely interesting. Great job. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 12:10 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
Fantastic lemon...very sexy. Love that's she's got him by the balls.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 10:38 PM Title: The Wedding Part One
Great cliffie, though if I was reading it when you were posting it, I'd have been way pissed!! Moving on to the next chapter : )
Date: 19 Aug 2011 8:34 PM Title: Edward
Really like this. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 7:53 PM Title: Bebella
Outstanding first chapter! Very unique!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:49 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow, can't believe Edward went to prison. Glad it wasn't for life or anything but still I can't imagine him away from Bella that long. Looks like they've got their hands full with little Sonny there. I'm so glad that there is a sequel to this story. I've grown to love your characters and so I'm glad that I can keep reading about them. Great job. I really love your Edward. He may not always do things I aprove of but there's no doubting his love for his Bebella and I love that.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:44 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
Love seeing them as a family
Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:42 AM Title: Under Pressure
Awww Sonny's here
Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:54 AM Title: Parts of life
Edward having Carlisle make those coupons cracked me up. ha ha I was sad that Jake died. Why'd he have to go and hook up with Caius' wife? Bella told him it would get him killed.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 5:14 AM Title: Helluva Day
Wow they actually made it through that. I have to say in some parts I was crying with them.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 3:09 AM Title: Oobotz
I think Edwards going a bit crazy. How could he possibly think Bella would do that.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:21 AM Title: Baby Blues
Love your Edward and Bella. They can be so stink'n cute sometimes.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:16 AM Title: Checks and Balances
...aaannnndddd Marcus is gone
Date: 17 Aug 2011 1:31 AM Title: Par for the Course
Way to go Bella!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 1:09 AM Title: This is it
Wow Marcus is a dead man. Surely he knows he can't threaten Bella and get away with it. I felt so bad for Carlisle even though he does some really dumb things I really want to like him. ha ha
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:44 AM Title: SunSational Day
:0) I didn't mention in the other chapter but I'm so glad they got pregnant since they both wanted it so bad. :0)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:38 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
Great chapter! Love how cool Edward was with the FBI guys. Wonder who killed Gale???
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:33 AM Title: Prove It
Great job! Love the story
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:29 AM Title: Something in the Water
Great job! I'm glad Bella cooled down and came back home. I couldn't believe she'd leave him anyway. :0)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:56 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
I have to admit I loved that Edward lost control when he found Carlisle and Bella. He was scary but that sex in the Ally was so hot! :0)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:43 PM Title: Get It
Carlisle's sure gotten himself into a mess.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:36 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
The girls showing up at the bar was a hoot. I was worried it would cause a fight between Edward and Bella. Poor Esme. Just when I start to like Carlisle....
Date: 16 Aug 2011 10:33 PM Title: Olde E
I'm so glad he didn't kill Aro. I really liked him in this fic
Date: 16 Aug 2011 10:27 PM Title: Boxed In
Jane and Alec are going down
Date: 16 Aug 2011 10:23 PM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
Phew I was worried she was really going to leave there for a moment. So glad they worked it out.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 10:11 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
:0)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 10:08 PM Title: Hot
Man they really know how to fight. So glad they know how to make up too
Date: 16 Aug 2011 9:51 PM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Go Bella! ha ha I love that she punched Jane. Sad that Charlie died even though he wasn't very likeable. I would have liked to know why he treated Bella the way he did. Guess maybe there wasn't really a reason he just wasn't a good guy.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 9:46 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
So sad they lost the baby but I do love seeing Edward taking care of his Bebella. He's so sweet in moments like that.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 9:00 PM Title: Antipasto
Love this story
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:57 PM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
Great story!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:55 PM Title: Bad Taffy
I love how intense Edward is with anything that has to do with Bella.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:33 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
This was exciting! Glad the gals are ok
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:19 PM Title: Round Three
This was fun
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:10 PM Title: Round One
Getting married for Nanny ha ha Nanny sure is a sly one
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Aruba
It's so neat to see a Carlisle like this. He was a jerk a lot in this story but ya know I still liked him. Great job!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:02 PM Title: The Game
I'm so glad he went with her. He doesn't know it but he loves her already :0)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:55 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two
"Oh shit, Your not Esme!" lol That made me laugh
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:50 PM Title: The Wedding Part One
ha ha I can just imagine the shock of Edward and Bella barging in on Carlisle.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:31 PM Title: Bella
They're going to see each other again :0)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 4:09 PM Title: Edward
Alice is certainly something else. ha ha I have to say I liked that she wasn't the 'typical' Alice in this story. Carlisle too
Date: 16 Aug 2011 3:42 PM Title: Bebella
The fact that he calls her Bebella makes me smile. This was great and I gotta tell ya it hooked me right in. I've already read the whole thing but I'm coming back to try and add my reviews.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:04 AM Title: Antipasto
Something just doesn't seem right with Bella. Maybe she's just trying to settle in to this new lifestyle she's taken on. And, am I the only one who thinks she's becoming a little too friendly with Aro? I think he's developing a crush on Bella. Which isn't a good idea if Edward ever gets wind of it. It seems like her and Carlisle are getting along pretty good these days. Maybe a little too good? Wouldn't it be a huge surprise if it turned out she really was pregnant? The weight gain and the bloating. Her boobs and butt are filling out a little more. If so, I hope she finds out soon before she starts doing more coke and drinking too much. Another great chapter.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 7:48 AM Title: Bad Taffy
Well, another great chapter. Poor Aro. Edward beat the crap out of him. How is Aro suppose to follow up on every guy that's checking Bella out. When he got the call from MC, he was there in minutes to clean up. I think Edward's being a little too hard on him. So it sounds like this is being traced back to the Russians Edward was messing with in S. Carolina. Marcus warned him about messing with them. He's going to be pissed. Good going!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue
This has been such a great read, I'm leaving here going directly to WtS, can't wait for mooore;-D))
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:48 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
I gotta say, this story is not only awesome but brilliant as well. I love stories about the Mafia. Maybe because I'm part Italian? I don't know. So, Bella killed the guy from Eclipse that was staring at her? Is this someone who's got a hard on for Edward or someone who wants Bella out of the picture? Maybe somebody who doesn't like the fact that her dad is in law enforcement? I didn't quite understand. Did this incident happen on the boardwalk or in their rooms? If so, what the hell were they doing on the boardwalk at night? And Edward crying? Wow! I wonder how many Capo's cry? He's not so tough, huh. I love that he's so crazy over Bella. I see a storyline where Edward's going to leave Bella for her own safety. Somewhat like New Moon. I hope not. Bella's a tough chick and can hold her own. But, weren't there two thugs? Did the second guy see Bella kill his partner, buddy, whatever? This is really exciting. And nerve wracking. Gotta read more. Great job!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:07 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh wow, I had such a blast reading this fic!! I loved that it had a little bit of everything. It had all the mafia action, yet it was still sweet and completely hilarious. I also absolutely adored your Edward! This was definitely one of my favorite Edwards I've ever read. Bella's silliness was great and super adorable, but I just loved how Edward was a bit of a weirdo and a little gross. lol. Every time he said or did something gross I just fell in love with him so much more! That stuff was hilarious and such a fun little character thing.
Seriously, every single second of reading this was just so much fun I never wanted it to end! I'm so happy you decided to do a sequel and I can't wait to read that and see what's in store for those two next.. :)
Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:29 PM Title: Icing on the Cake
Thank you for writing this adorable, fun, inteligent and action packed story, what a fun ride it was reading it.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:58 AM Title: Parts of life
oh no, this is coming to an end;-o(
I'm gonna miss it.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 1:52 AM Title: Helluva Day
He doesn't still have poor Jacob hanging out @ O'Reillys' waiting to get the crap beat out of him is he?
Great chapter, my lord they're intense. Perfect for each other if you ask me.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:58 AM Title: Par for the Course
Oh my lord, what a chapter, 1ST you knock Bella down off her perfect girl pedastal by having her fantasize about Aro and throw Carlisle in to boot, ha ha. Then you put her back on maybe an even higher pedastal by having her tell off Marcus and then knocking off Tony, ha. I'm going crazy here, and loving it.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:36 AM Title: This is it
Are you serious? I can't believe Carlisle is getting back in my good graces and even with the knowledge he's a baby killer. You are some kind of magic writer to make that happen, haha. I can't wait for Aro to kill Marcus. All Edward has to do is tell him Marcus is going to put a hit on Bella. I hope Marcus isn't aware how attached Aro & Bella are, if all the guys have talked about it then maybe Marcus is setting up Aro & E., as well as Bella & Carlisle. aghh
Can't wait to find out
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:45 PM Title: Epilogue
You are brilliant...what a fantastic story and I can't wait to read the sequel. Lexi the way you took us from the beginning to the end was just so mesmerizing and realistic. I hope you never quit writting stories because I love all of them and I truly loved QS because it was so real and the way you wrote allowed the reader to invision exactly what was going on. Kudos to you for a job well done! Cheryl...Atlanta P.S...I can't pimp you enough!!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:23 PM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
I liked the EPOV, and the topic of the chapter had me down right giddy with them over the pregers news.
I hope it wasn't Esme that did the murder, but I got a feeling it might of been her, I can't imagine Carlisle doing it, but like E is always thinking people are capable of a lot.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:24 AM Title: Epilogue
I am so glad you are writing the sequel already. I would miss these two so much. Loved this story and everything you have written. I am glad you didn't write about Edward being locked up. I don't think I could have handeled it either.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 9:07 PM Title: Something in the Water
Great read, so is Carlisle working for Marcus now? I'm not sure I followed that whoe business run down they did.
I still feel some loss for Edward & Carlisle's breakup.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:34 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
I love that you tell the story & then show how Edward keeps a lot to himself & only shares with those that need to know and that Bella does a good job of the same thing.
What to do with Carlisle. I feel like he was kind of on a suicide by cop [capofamiglia] that night.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:05 PM Title: Get It
Great chapter. Damn Carlisle, I'd like to punch his face once too. Can't Bella have a turn punching him one too? I know Aro's been dying to and I'll bet Bella would feel just as good from clocking him one. Nah, I somehow feel sorta sorry for C., I really was liking him after the double dates & H.Potter adventure, k still do.
So, that last part reminded me of something Kevin Bacon said in reference to marriage longevity, "Keep your fights clean and the sex dirty." great axiom.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 3:49 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
Ha ha, adorable kink thrown in there at naughty B's request. That was clever, I think, the way you had Bella begging for naughty in a way that somehow made it cute & not dirty or deranged, not that I think BDSM is deranged in any ways shape well maybe some forms {not that you mentioned} are a little deranged but who am I to judge.
Enjoyed the chapter, Daddy C is such a disappointment but glad he could ruin it for E.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:42 PM Title: Epilogue
Excellent
Thanx so much for sharing your time and talent w/ us all. I have totally enjoyed spending my time reading this story.
Yah, sequel.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:34 AM Title: Olde E
Okay, so E's human, I gotta say I wasn't liking it. I like him being this magical only eyes for Bella & immune to any other girls charms. Yes, he was a good boy.
So, I'm not feeling so much love for Heidi any more & am remembering Lexi's comments about smiling too big & Bella's observation that it applied to H.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:20 AM Title: Boxed In
I love Bella's spunk and when she turns green;D)
Date: 09 Aug 2011 11:20 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
I'm weak already, and she'd so kick my ass. I coughed, hoping that would soften her up. haha Love his inner banter.
Please don't kill Aro, I know it's too late the story is already written, I'm just expressing my angst and luv for the Aro character, the best Aro in ff, IMO
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:04 PM Title: Hot
Caius seemed completely like a J shores boy. Glad he's dead
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:05 PM Title: Stages
Oh jeez, their going to mistakenly use that fake bake tan stuff for the TF & E's going to have an orange dick & Bella's boobs are going to be too. ha
Date: 09 Aug 2011 7:54 PM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
I'm also glad Charlie is gone, can't kill anymore unborn babies, but I sure hope that he wasn't killed by Aro, so that Aro could make rank. I don't know if Bella could be okay with that if she ever found out & you know the cops would only love to tell her/acuse her family if they did have anything to do with it.
Great read
Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:49 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
I like your authenticity, I'd be looking that up if I hadn't already gotten curious when reading MOTU and already read all up on the shot. Love your writing, like the grit in this story;-D)
And yet still I learn something new every day, bookyak, hillarious. Watch his six, I figured that [ass]was the reference you were making but I'm going to have to Google how that ref originated.
Thanks for writing
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:38 PM Title: Antipasto
Great chapter. I hope Bella shares with Edward her fear's of becoming pregnant and a mother.
Your Bella character cracks me up straight & drunk. I hope she stays away from the soft, that would be really sad if she became addicted