Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:44 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Bella should be part of the inner workings of the family with her spider senses always on high alert!!!!
Loved that Carlisle walked away from temptation :) Them sitting in Edwards office waiting to find out what happened was torture but then we he actually found out and couldn't actually do anything or talk to her!!! Holy shit it broke my heart and the emotion that he showed...he has come so far!!
I loved the coded talk during the phone call...it cracked me up!!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:38 PM Title: Light my Fire
They fight as hard as the f**k!! As much as she shouldn't know what is going on, she did need to know some of who and what he does. For her own safety and just relief from the not knowing. It will make for such a happier marriage :)
Esme cracks me the hell up!!! Best Husband of the week goes to Edward Cullen for the candle lit jaccuzi bath!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:32 PM Title: TKO
Best crazy assed wedding ever!!! I can't believe that Edward didn't take out Charlie...omg what a ass.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 5:35 AM Title: Par for the Course
Fantastic chapter. I love Bella when she's hardcore
Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:40 PM Title: Decision/Draw
Wow...he really is driving her crazy. Can't believe he had someone else sign her name to those deeds!!! As exciting as it is that he bought her a huge new house as a surprise I understand her wanting to be a part of it with him :)
Love love love that she slept fully clothed & with a gun!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I so would have done that same thing. Poor Edward sneaking into surprise her and comes face to face with a gun...:) Love that Carlisle is Esmes bitch at home...so freaking funny!!
Date: 27 Nov 2012 12:36 AM Title: Round Three
Ughhh Carlisle is such a douchbag!!! And he totally creeps me the f**k out. I don't trust him either...just saying.
The dinner with the family was funny. Loved Ed Sr.'s reaction...LMAO
Edward finally admits that he loves her! :) Finally, and now he has to move her and change everything that he has ever done LOL Stupid love ;)
Date: 26 Nov 2012 11:00 PM Title: Round Two
Holy shit, what a chapter!!!! Talk about hot and cold....they are both so afriad of getting hurt :( Glad they sort of talked it out in the end...kinda
The over-reaction with the dog walking was crazy...I had no idea what the hell was going on with him at first & then when he just went for breakfast I like Bella was like WTF!!! It would have sent me into overdrive as well...but then again I am also a hotheaded woman LOL
The tampon was awesome and so was his reaction to pulling it out LMAO The dog eating it was hysterical and sadly happens in my house often...at least them getting into the trash an pulling one out...then they freaking fight me for it like it's a damn T-Bone steak or something. Damn dogs!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:54 PM Title: Round One
Well, that was a crazy roller coaster ride!!! Carlisle is back to being a dick in my book again...he needs to get off Bella...jealous much?!?! If you don't want to get caught don't freaking do it!!!!!!
He really has no idea about anything to do with woman outside of sex does he??? It is half funny/intertaining & half sad/fustrating that he is so lost right now. He has a permanent case of foot in mouth disease...which keeps cracking me up and then making me want to hit him!! LOL
Can't believe he blurted that out on the street...he is crazy and confused and so damn cute...
And Nanny's line about him being in love with her 'yeah, keep telling yourself that' was so perfect and I love her feistness!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:46 PM Title: Aruba
Carlisle while still a creepy bastard, did warm me a bit by his actual love for Esme. However the whole not leting her blow him cracked me up!! But I do know that there are men out there that actually believe that same thing. Crazy talk :)
Edward calling and going on and on and Carlisles line about wiping his pussy, had me on the floor. Mainly cause I could just see Edwards face whenCarlisle said it LMAO
Date: 26 Nov 2012 5:31 PM Title: Prove It
Thank you for sharing your talent. I am enjoying your writing very much.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:47 PM Title: The Game
He changes gears faster than a hooker changes panties...he's messing with my head!!! (in a good way of course)
The event in the cabin was crazy. Loved that he called Nanny though :) That was him processing everything that has happened, right?!? Cause he isn't used to what is going on right now...he had to fight against it but can't contain it. Men always think they are in control of everything and then their emotions smack them in the face & they freak out.
So he gets everything he wants & he wants her...he's made up his mind, kinda in a roundabout way...this should be interesting....
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:36 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two
Let me elaborate more on my thoughts from last chapter...Carlisle is a f**king basterd, creepy as hell and an all around asshole!!! Not sure that covers it but I'm sure you get the drift :) I'm enjoying that you made him a totally ooc character though, I'm giggling at him inbetween hating him LOL
They are white hot when they actually get together...
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:31 PM Title: The Wedding Part One
So much happened!!! I love that Jasper is constantly asking about what he wants with Bella...being all protective since I'm sure Alice is shitting a brick right now! E's grandmother is awesome and of course she loves Bella. She want's grandbabies LOL
He might just drive us both crazy with what he wants her to do tomorrow :)
Finally, Carlisle...ewwww bastard!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:57 AM Title: Something in the Water
Awesome! I love reading your story.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:38 AM Title: Bella
Alice could have handled that a bit better but she is so focused on 'scary' Edward she caused more issues with Bella then if she just calmly talked to her about it. LOL However, she was very funny and Rose was cracking me up in the bridal store!!!!
So he texted her...obviously a big deal since Alice was shocked. So she couldn't go out with her friend to have a drink at the bar...I agree with Bella & Rose, she isn't dating Edward and he has no claim on her yet. Then he calls & he sounds odd on the phone...is he not used to talking to women on the phone? I'm sure he doesn't make repeat chatting phone calls often LOL
Enjoyed their conversation and I like that Bella isn't looking for a handout. It was quite obvious threw out the day and her conversation with Edward that she is uncomfortable with the money that has been thrown her way and what is required of her for accepting it. She isn't the normal type of girl that hangs out in that area I believe.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:50 PM Title: Olde E
Your writing is great. Your beta is top notch.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:13 PM Title: Edward
I'm really enjoying this fic. I love stories that are fully research and very accurate!!!! I'm pretty sure that the person that Edward is and the group they hang around are not the most clean speaking and upstanding people. This is how they really live and that is what I want to read about. I love the real slang and their real motives. They are who they are and they aren't apologizing for it.
Love this Edward so far and this Carlisle is cracking me up. :)
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:36 PM Title: Boxed In
Exciting chapter-lots going on.
I love the authenticity of your story, so using slang is necessary Love it.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 3:48 PM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
It is never great when they fight or argue (not the writing, just the characters). The make up sex is worth it!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:28 AM Title: Bebella
Can't believe it's taken me so long to read this!!! Such an awesome start & I cant wait for more :)
Date: 24 Nov 2012 12:22 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Always great reading. Great story.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 12:32 AM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
I love the attention to detail and the richness of your writing. The a/n's are also. Helpful
The word "bopped" didn't fit well for me. I would have preferred "clubbed" or something tougher for those few lines. Otherwise....fantastic!
Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:37 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Wow...great writing. Love/hate cliffes
Date: 19 Nov 2012 11:47 PM Title: TKO
Wow...a chapter with a lot of punch Amazing
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:50 PM Title: Decision/Draw
I love how you spoil us readers with long chapters. I enjoyed this one and getting to know more about Esmeralda and Carlisle.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 7:32 AM Title: Round Two
I loved, loved this chapter
Date: 19 Nov 2012 1:50 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
They just belong together. The electricity that you create is amazing.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 2:10 PM Title: Bella
I love your writing style. I read your outtake from the SU for K, it lured me in.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 6:02 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome story!! Looking forward to Weather the Storm...Thank you!!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:25 AM Title: Under Pressure
Excellent chapter. I'm a little worried about Bella finding out about Jacob. That's not going to be good.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:47 AM Title: Parts of life
I am sorry for poor Jacob...but that kid was not using his brain!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:03 PM Title: Helluva Day
Why on earth would anyone attack you & your wonderful entertaining story? They must be fucking crazy...
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:01 AM Title: Parts of life
Jacob was very stupid. I absolutely loved the banter in Edwards office at home. The fatherhood discussions. That was just hilarious.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 10:32 PM Title: Helluva Day
Great chapter. Hope the affair with Jacob is finally put to rest.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 11:47 PM Title: Skip's Day Off
Great chapter. Sorry...eating dinner.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 1:16 AM Title: Checks and Balances
Great chapter. Things are moving fast now.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:52 PM Title: Par for the Course
WOW! Bella is becomming quite the assassin. And head shots, too. Excellent chapter.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:41 PM Title: This is it
Oh yes, Marcus needs to go. He is way past his expiration date. great chapter.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:38 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
Very cute. Bout time she got pregnant. Great chapter...I sound like a broken record, but it's the truth.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 9:40 PM Title: Prove It
shit has hit the fan...again. Great chapter.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:57 PM Title: Something in the Water
Great chapter. Glad Edward didn't lose his mind and fuck anyone.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:09 AM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
As usual, great chapter. A bit more serious this time.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 8:49 PM Title: Get It
great chapter. Carlisle sure had it coming. I hope Gail's not pregnamt.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 11:03 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
loved it!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:56 AM Title: Quick Like A Cat
Great chapter. A lot of fun. But poor Esme. Will Carlisle ever get it together? As soon as he comes out of dick mode, he just goes right back in.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 1:21 PM Title: Boxed In
Great chapter. A lot of fun. Is Edward going to get Alec before he gets Marcus?
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:41 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
That is quite a cliff-hanger...jeeesh...nothing like being right on the edge!! I love fierce Bella...no one messes with the people she loves!! Thank you...your story is fantastic!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 1:23 AM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
Baseball? Figures. LOL Great chapter, but Bella is getting a little winy. She knew what she was getting into when she married him.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 11:54 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Great chapter.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:28 PM Title: Hot
Great chapter. I thought that the dancing was a cute idea for a Christmas present for Edward.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:09 AM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
A lot of pain. When my dad died, it took a while before I felt it. Then going to the funeral, I was actually asked if I knew him. Now that was a trip. Great chapter.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 4:10 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
bookyak...I love that!!!! Can I use it? Freely? LOL
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:15 PM Title: Antipasto
Loved the table talk. And what did have Bella all wound up? And so tired.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:14 AM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
I have to wonder what pulled Felix from his job. His boss' wife could have been killed, and he's off dealing with...what? Baby-momma having a bad day? Just didn't sound kosher...LOL
Date: 18 Oct 2012 5:20 PM Title: Bad Taffy
Bella's got her back up. Great chapter.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 3:08 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
And so it begins....Excellent chapter.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 1:00 PM Title: Light my Fire
As usual...great chapter.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 10:44 AM Title: TKO
Haven't we all, at one time or another? Fun chapter.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2012 3:23 AM Title: Bella
I love your version of Edward & Bella!! Too flipping cute!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 11:09 PM Title: Decision/Draw
Great chapter...I'm beginning to sound like a broken record, but it truly is a wonderful story.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 4:55 PM Title: Round Three
Great chapter...again.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:17 PM Title: Round Two
Great chapter. A fight and make-up sex...perfect.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 3:07 AM Title: Round One
Yeah, they say they'll divorce later, but will they ever really get to it? NO! Great chapter.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:55 PM Title: Aruba
No Blowjobs from the wife? He is so not right in the head! Fun chapter.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:38 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
I know I'm not the only one to say, but I am so freaking disappointed in Carlisle. I also really don't like that Gail chick. She seems to innocent and that makes me think she's shady.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:24 PM Title: The Game
Great chapter. Glad they finally got things straight.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:49 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
Another excellent chapter. Looks like Edward hasn't fallen, but has leaped wildly into the mouth of...love. Poor fool doesn't know it yet. Just waiting for Bella to knee someone in the balls.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:02 PM Title: The Wedding Part One
Excellent chapter. Wish TWCS wasn't so hard to submit reviews to. Takes forever for it to go through.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:48 PM Title: Bella
This is sweet...so far. So, when does the roof cave in?
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:08 AM Title: Bebella
Excellent first chapter.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 3:57 AM Title: TKO
Drunk Bella is HILARIOUS!!! I laughed so freaking hard. Love her and them so much.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 8:36 PM Title: Round Two
HA!!!
I forgot about the tampon!
LMFAO!
xoxox
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Date: 06 Oct 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
I have no idea how I missed (Bebella" From Edward's POV) b4 but I did?
I LOVED this!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:13 AM Title: Antipasto
Another wonderful chapter, but why is Bella such careless, spastic,self-centered biotch? It's real good when a writer can make a character a palpable nuisance. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:28 PM Title: Round One
Re-reading. It's funny to see the similarities between this and the kids. I mean.. Heidi; an older woman managing Edward's bar? And that older woman that Sonny has managing his bar? They're so alike. :P I like it.
Thanks for sharing. This is my second time through this and I still love it. I actually don't like rereading things. Once I've been through it, that's it. I have a good memory so I don't like reading things again, yet I'm rereading this... That's how amazing it is!! :) :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:26 AM Title: Edward
Re-reading. Still amazing.. :) :)
Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:51 PM Title: Olde E
Outtake of Eddie boy and Gail would be hot lol just saying....
Love this btw
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 10:44 PM Title: Par for the Course
I love your story. I have been reading this nonstop (not doing the things I need to do around the house) because I'm loving all the characters. You have done a great job. So glad you have continued this story so I have a lot more to read.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:57 AM Title: Bella
I love Mr. Sprinkles! Please change your Facebook settings Bella! Alice driving the Hummer was hilarious! I love how she can drop it and make it clap in thigh high boots one moment, and be totally inept in stilettos in the next. Thank you!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:24 AM Title: Edward
Awesome chapter! Are we going to see Edward be more ruthless?
Date: 11 Sep 2012 6:31 AM Title: Bebella
That was funky! I Love the head noddin feel of it and I'm sorry I just learned about this story. Off to read the rest!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:15 AM Title: Get It
All this stuff is gonna come back and bite Edward in the ass, I just know it. Something has to give.....
Great job Lexi, love it so much. :)
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:55 AM Title: Quick Like A Cat
You had me thinking Carlisle was becoming a good guy, but he just proved, once a douche always a douche. I wish Bella would have told her or she would have figured it out. He needs to be taken down a notch or two, and I hate to see Esme so miserable and getting played dirty like that. Asshole.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 11:29 PM Title: Stages
I have a bad feeling that this is gonna come back and bite him in the ass. She seemed too accepting of her suspicions. She knows he had something to do with it but is still in denial. About everything it seems.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 10:18 PM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Hmmm.....kind of a big coincidence...no???
With each chapter he story gets better and better. :)
Date: 09 Sep 2012 8:57 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
Oh man, I had a fee,ing that was going to happen. Poor Edward and Bella, and I can't wait to see what happens to Charlie and Renee. I had the same thought as Edward did about the reason for Bella's frist miscarriage. :(
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2012 9:20 AM Title: Bebella
Wow starting the story with a bang. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:53 AM Title: Light my Fire
I love a feisty Bella and hot angry sex is sooooo fuckijg good.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:35 PM Title: TKO
And that's how you consummate a marriage people!! lmao.
Love Nanny and her conniving ways!