Date: 11 Aug 2012 1:07 PM Title: Aruba
ohhh carlisle you are so freaking skweed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:35 PM Title: The Game
that was definitely an interesteesting chapter he took her there!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:38 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
well hell looks like things are going to be intense
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:42 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
shame on carlisle i like esme
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:30 PM Title: Bella
i think im in love with mobward...
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:10 PM Title: Helluva Day
WTF...Y do people want u off fanfiction(dot)net?? I've never understand that. If a story is rated M or NC-17, it should have smut!! :) If people are offended by it, they shouldn't read them!! Seriously!! I'm so done w/that site. I love TWCS!! Smut is allowed...along w/language, violence, etc!!
Thank u!! Keep writing! Ur good!! Dont b discouraged by a few!!
:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 2:11 AM Title: Hot
She didnt lie to him, she only got the idea in the car so basically she didnt lie to him
Date: 08 Aug 2012 7:58 AM Title: Something in the Water
daaang! that was a fuck-load of fuckry
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:53 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
Fan-fricking-tabulous!!! Uh--lemon was...too good! Hell, it was all good!!
Yes- Carlisle = asshole. :)
Wow-just awesome!!!
:{)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:07 AM Title: Bebella
Wow!! So not expecting E/B A/J & R/E 2 b this way! What a shock!! In a great way!! :)
I can c y this story has over 300,000 reads!
Date: 03 Aug 2012 8:43 AM Title: Bebella
Ok.. that was painfully awkward but I must say that I need a new pair of panties lol. I love this story already and I'm glad it's complete! Great Job Hun.
Date: 02 Aug 2012 5:11 AM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Wow, fantastic chapter hon! It must be so hard going through that
Date: 01 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Epilogue
thanks for this i think epic story:)
thanks to share
xxx
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:49 AM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Oh, Carlisle....
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:11 PM Title: TKO
I am reading this for the second time. It feels like i am reading it for the first time. You should really think about publishing this and the sequel. I think this would be a huge bestseller.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:08 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
This was so sad to read. Glad they got thru this. Thanks for outtakes.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:00 AM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
good o/t
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:27 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Poor bella, it hurst to see her and skip have to go through this. great job, and thanks for sharing this with us.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
good. really enjoyed seeing epov for this
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:58 AM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Wow! I can't imagine going through what she is. Glad you shared this out take with us. You know I love this story and was so excited when you updated two chapters. So what's next for us? Damion?
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
Will we be getting more Edward pov's? Loved hearing what was going on in his head:-)
Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
This was awesome !!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 10:55 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Even knowing their seperation is temporary, this is such a heartbreaking chapter. Your Edward & Bella are well real / completely fleshed out characters - it's so easy to identify with them & feel their pain.
Quiet Storm is one of my favorite stories -- among fan fic, and traditional hard copy novels alike. I've re-read it numerous times Thanks for creating & sharing it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 10:01 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Good outtakes. I will be sorry to see these characters end. I really enjoy your writing. Please don't stop!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
So good. Make me want to read the story from the beginning.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:39 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
love the finger in the pussy thing....it is hardest on the kids and they found out anyway, didn't they? their love is the basic thread running through this story. that is what kept me coming back to it and to WTS...
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
Love it! I never thought i would get a chance to read this from EPOV. I have always loved his POV's the best. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:38 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
aww loved this. poor bella. love that even in jail edward wanted a little taste! lol ( rpattz luvor)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
loved this so much!!!!! (rpattz luvor)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
LOVE getting into his head, and to see what was going on befor he met bebella. Great job doll. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:08 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two
great chap:)
thanks
xxx
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
great I love it
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:05 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
This was heartbreaking and so great to read more of mob ward & BeBella.
Thanks so much for another glimpse. It was like Carlilse said, you'd love to have a love like that.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:03 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
All I can think about is how I am going to miss them. Now I guess I will just reread the whole series.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
I remember when I first read this chapter, the other one from Bella's POV.....I was just gobsmacked! I thought it was the hottest, most erotic thing I had ever read. It sucked me in to the story immediately. Now reading Edward's POV, seeing what's going on in his head, the picture is complete! Just a mesmerizing story, an epic tale. You are the shit, my dear, and I mean that in the most positive way. Thanks for giving us this!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:10 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
so good, but left me a blubbering mess. You nailed her emotions quite well !!!!! A tissue warnign woudl have been nice. :)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:46 PM Title: The Wedding Part One
ohh !!! carliste ..;
xxx
Date: 27 Jul 2012 12:10 PM Title: Edward
thanks for this chap:)
xxx
Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:35 AM Title: Bebella
thanks to share:)
i laugh a lot.. bella's drunk is just funny..
xxx
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:08 AM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
That was so unfair, no conjugal visits allowed?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:12 PM Title: Bebella
Your such a NY'er--love it, hah! I love all your stories--although I haven't reviewed yet, I had to pop over to tell you that you popped into my head when I was stuck in traffic (wtf else is new) on the BQE last night. Nothin from the norm though! I needed that like I needed a hole in my head when my cell died, hub stole the charger and I had nothing to read on my way home stuck in that parkinglot you call the Belt/LIE. Love your work, plan to finish Quiet Storm, start on the second and then read Story of Us (did I get that right?). Looks good, lovin' the stories (and my McD's!) Morning is good!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:00 AM Title: Icing on the Cake
Have been enjoying another great story. Will finish then move on to the sequel. Liked your outtakes also. I think I like Aro the best.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:05 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Well, shit. How did you know what my family vacations were like as a kid? So funny. And I want to go to Hogsmeade, too!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:57 AM Title: Helluva Day
ALL I CAN SAY IS FUCKING WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read last chapter and this chapter with my knee bouncing up and down. I was so nervous that he was going to do something so bad. THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 18 Jul 2012 11:01 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
I got the shot for years. It's a different hormone than birth control pills. Shots make your body think its already pregnant hence the no periods and weight gain.
On another note, I wish I would have had a disclaimer at the beginning of this story concerning the length and how it would TAKE OVER MY LIFE FOR MANY DAYS! lol I'm honestly glad I got this reccommendation though. These two are really delicious and REAL. (couples do fight AND still love each other). It's also hard to do the right thing sometimes when our emotions are involved. I love all of the complexities of ALL the characters. I hope no one hates me for saying this, but cheating on your spouse does not make you the worst kind of person. It happens for various reasons. I'm glad you are showing that through Carlisle.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 3:47 PM Title: Round Two
Your writing style is amazing! I don't have the words to explain how awesome it is. I just love it. You crack me up one minute and have me nervously chewing my nails the next. THANK YOU! I'm glad they aren't doing Vegas and my little chihuahua ate a couple of tampons before I got a new closed trash can. lol
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:59 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
Wow! I really thought Edward was going to kill Carlisle this time! I was afraid that things between him and Bella were going to change in that he wasn't going to listen to her about what happened. You REALLY know how to write drama! I can't put this story down unless I have someThing that I absolutely have to do. Thanks! :)
Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:05 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
I have so been enjoying this story! I apologize for not reviewing before now but I can't usually think of what to say. I just love all the twists and turns you have thrown in this. Just when it sounds like its winding down you throw something else in there. Love it! Thanks so much for putting it out here for our enjoyment.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 8:12 PM Title: Olde E
I thought he was going to cheat. When he was thinking about that Gail in the car it seems like he was getting ready to go back to the club. I was screaming NO! So glad he realize it was not worth it.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 11:41 AM Title: Epilogue
I so loved this story!! You are a wonderful writer! Through your wods I could totally picture the scenes you wrote about! I loved the raw and intense times of the story, you didn't sugar coat and I like that, also there were some very funny scenes. I would be reading and then just out laughing. I can't wait for he sequel!!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 3:13 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
All I can say is WOW......I am glad that they were not pigheaded at the ed and got what they wanted. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:23 AM Title: Bella
I tried to review last chapter but something happened. I believe that Edward is crushing on Bella, even though he doesn't want to admit it. He gave Alice $1,500 to buy a dress and a coat and some left over money. This chapter was awesome and I am glad that she got a dress she likes. Alice should have told her that Edward gave her the money for the stuff. I think that he was jealous when he heard that she had company at the apartment. No matter how macho he was with Carlise and he does do "girlfriends" he is definitely smitten with Bella. I cannot wait for the wedding. It would be nice to hear from you. THANKS FOR THE AWESOMOE WRITING. Sher
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 9:04 PM Title: Skip's Day Off
Pregnancy insecurity I remember them well. They are horrible I feel for both Bella and Edward xx
Date: 11 Jul 2012 10:18 AM Title: Bebella
WOW.....that was so hot. An Edward with a Brooklyn accent. YUMMY!!!! Bella was so funny. I guess she is from the "neighborhood." I am a Philly girl and used to hang out on the corner with a bunch of my friends back in the day. Just hung out. This certainly looks like an interesting story and look forward to reading it. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 1:12 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
What a lovely ending to this chapter. I can't wait to see how mommy and daddy Cullen cope with their baby xx
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 8:59 PM Title: Something in the Water
I'm shocked at Edward I can't believe he would do that to Bella. I hope we don't ssee that again xx
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:40 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
Scary Edward I hope we don't see him like that again x
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:47 PM Title: Bebella
Most amazing fanfic ive ever read always go back and read it again and again love it :D 1000TH REVIEW
Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
How much does Edward really love Bella it seems that he only look's after his own needs. He seems to think more of lexi than Bella or he would make sure she was happy xx
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Hot
I feel so sorry for Bella meeting all Edward passed women. No wonder she feels insecure and second guesses herself xx
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:44 PM Title: Parts of life
Poor Jacob, he was played by Nicole, and doesn't deserve death for that.
When Bella will discover that, she won't be please, at all.
Thank you for the amazing fiction.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:35 PM Title: Round Three
Ok i have resisted reading this story for a long time. I have read Mobward stories before and i always enjoy them, so i thought this story would be just like the others. Boy was i wrong! I am totally addicted now. I have stayed up a fews times all night long just to finish this story, but i find myself reading whole paragraphs over again because just like a fine wine i want to savor every drop of it and not watse any. This is the best Mobward that i have read so far. Edward is not a fairytale hero on the white horse. He is a very very flawed person and he is a bad guy too but he truly loves Bella. Their relationship is very complicated and very passionate. When he busted the walls with his hands i thought i would faint. So hot. A very complex and intricate story. Amazing writing. I cant wait to read the sequel. I think this should be published. It is a stand alone story and the names would have to be changed but yeah i think you should published this. Now with that said let me hurry because i know once a publishing deal is made that the authors pull the stories. I must finish this and the sequel before that happens.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:58 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
So good, the more I read Quiet Storm, the more I love it. You are an amazing story teller. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful imagination with us.
Did Carlisle really cheat on Esme with Gail ?
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:31 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
GAH!!! That lemon was amazing ;) I really loved it SO much ! YAY!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:21 AM Title: The Wedding Part One
OH WOW!!!!! So amazing!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:36 AM Title: Edward
OH WOW...SO amazing! YAY! Cannot wait to see how their relationship progresses from here :)
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:24 AM Title: Bebella
GAH!!!!!!!! That was amazing! I really loved this! Great first chapter. So, as a visual learner, do you have any specifications on parts of Edward ;) Also, how old are they? Just curious :D
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Epilogue
This is such a great story. But I didn't like the thought of Edward been in prison and the hurt it cause Bella Can't wait to read Weather the storm xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:00 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome story. Can't wait to read sequel but I will be waiting a bit while I catch up for last week on other stories I read.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:57 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Wowza! Intense chapter! Since I read the sequel first, I knew SOMETHING happened in Atlantic City (due to Esme's ravings) but not what. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:45 PM Title: Checks and Balances
E can't get anything over on B ;-)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:37 PM Title: Par for the Course
holy shizz
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 9:21 AM Title: Olde E
I love this story but please don't let Edward do anything stupid x
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:03 AM Title: Epilogue
Ph man, you finished with a bang and left us hanging a bit. I really hope Bella gets her girls.
Such a great story, Lexi! I'm off ot read the seque;=l! Squeeeeeeeeee
~Mina
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:24 PM Title: TKO
Awww...he's being such a sweet husband. I hope he lasts. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 9:04 PM Title: This is it
This shizz is soooo good I don't wanna out it down - but I have to for today :(
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:17 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
Yay baby on board!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:42 AM Title: Something in the Water
Yeah they need to be pregnant. They have a lot going on, pregnancy will add to it but also help calm them in some areas.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:00 AM Title: Bebella
I read the story all the way through in one go, so now I am leaving reviews. Great chapter, lots of humor, enjoyed the introduction of characters!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 8:06 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
;-) I'm still plugging away at this... I started it right before my busiest week for the whole summer *facepalm*