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Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

great chapter.



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<3 thanks

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

good chapter



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Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

look forward to more.



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Glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)



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Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: bluecast Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

love this story hope you update offten



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I update every thursday

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

So sad : (

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Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Edward & wolf!  Everybody is so heartbroken!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

Now that she found Edward, how can her life go back to the way it was before?  Not gonna happen!



Author's Response:

You are very right.

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: heimk Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

update soon really injoyed these chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh I wish he would have called out to her, but I bet that is not her last trip back into the woods!



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Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait to see if she will go back to the woods or if Edward will try to follow her!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: Jackie84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Noooooo! They were so close :( lol Thank You for the early chapter,it was a lovely surprise :) xx

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh no! Bella he was so close! D: good chapter it was emotional and I liked it. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, this sounds really interesting!  I have a hard time believing Bella is in love with Ben, but that's just because I am such an E&B girl!   Looking forward to reading more...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy what I have in store!

Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awwww poor Edward! I feel so bad for him and I wish Bella didn't have to leave him :(. Great chapter though I hope Bella goes back to find him again

Author's Response:

Well I couldn't have Bella stay cause that would bring out the search parties.

 

All your support is awesome. Thank you. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

Bella tugged her sweater up around her shoulders, hugging the fabric to her. She walked across the street to the small park that was not much more than a few trees and a patch of grass, but it called to her. She loved nature and it was just the escape she needed from the noisy bar.

Forgoing the bench, Bella decided to sit down on the grass. She tucked her knees up and hugged them to her chest. And like most of her alone moments lately, she found her thoughts drifting to Edward and his wolves.

Bella stared hard at the tree line, wondering, if she hoped hard enough, if he would walk through those three trees and smile at her. It was silly, but it was a daydream, and she could have her reality any way she liked it there.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)



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Thanks

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

Bella tugged her sweater up around her shoulders, hugging the fabric to her. She walked across the street to the small park that was not much more than a few trees and a patch of grass, but it called to her. She loved nature and it was just the escape she needed from the noisy bar.

Forgoing the bench, Bella decided to sit down on the grass. She tucked her knees up and hugged them to her chest. And like most of her alone moments lately, she found her thoughts drifting to Edward and his wolves.

Bella stared hard at the tree line, wondering, if she hoped hard enough, if he would walk through those three trees and smile at her. It was silly, but it was a daydream, and she could have her reality any way she liked it there.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love that she got a kiss goodbye! Cannot wait to read more!



Author's Response:

All your support is awesome. Thank you. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

Bella tugged her sweater up around her shoulders, hugging the fabric to her. She walked across the street to the small park that was not much more than a few trees and a patch of grass, but it called to her. She loved nature and it was just the escape she needed from the noisy bar.

Forgoing the bench, Bella decided to sit down on the grass. She tucked her knees up and hugged them to her chest. And like most of her alone moments lately, she found her thoughts drifting to Edward and his wolves.

Bella stared hard at the tree line, wondering, if she hoped hard enough, if he would walk through those three trees and smile at her. It was silly, but it was a daydream, and she could have her reality any way she liked it there.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

awww sad story thanks please keep updating :)



Author's Response:

All your support is awesome. Thank you. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

Bella tugged her sweater up around her shoulders, hugging the fabric to her. She walked across the street to the small park that was not much more than a few trees and a patch of grass, but it called to her. She loved nature and it was just the escape she needed from the noisy bar.

Forgoing the bench, Bella decided to sit down on the grass. She tucked her knees up and hugged them to her chest. And like most of her alone moments lately, she found her thoughts drifting to Edward and his wolves.

Bella stared hard at the tree line, wondering, if she hoped hard enough, if he would walk through those three trees and smile at her. It was silly, but it was a daydream, and she could have her reality any way she liked it there.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2011 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

So wonderful! Looking forward to seeing what will happen next since she is thinking of leaving Edward and the wolves!



Author's Response:

Well she has to go home at some point. She can't just disapear, there would be search parties and stuff.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

It is too soon for her to leave!  I would love to see a stronger connection first although I know that she wouldn't want her family worrying.  It will be interesting to see how he ended up there.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)



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Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: 22amazing Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Amazing chapter!  Too funny trying to mount her, LOL but what we you expect.  You have done a great job capturing Savageward's demeanor due to his upbringing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I just look at my dog, and go with it. LOL

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

oh noooo....she can't leave her beautiful caveman! looking forward to mre!



Author's Response:

LOL

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Awwww. Puppyward how cute. Can I have my own Edward puppy? Puppies are so sweet, I miss mine so much! My residence hall doesn't allow furry animals and petting my fish is out of the question...

All that aside, the chapter was great! So Bella's been missing for two days as the end of the chapter right? Because a confrontation between Ben and Edward would be VERY interesting. And I just have this sneaking suspicion that Edward's gonna get jealous at some of his pack because they'll be fighting over Bella's affection and attention... ;D

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

LOL, I know, I always think about girls who say...if only my dog were a man.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

nooo !!! she cant leave him :O:O:O .. this has to be my favourite story and the moment ... i cant wait for another update !!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much.

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: luvrofink Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am loving Savageward. Can we have more please!?

-luv



Author's Response:

And Savageward loves you!

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

NICE!!! WOOD MORNING ..... OOPS I MENT GOOD MORNING LOL.......



Author's Response:

Bwa ha ha ha. Thanks, best revier ever! LOL

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

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Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

LIKE THE STORY!!! HATE CLIFFIES!!!!



Author's Response:

Well chapter 2 is already up, so it's not so bad I hope. LOL

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) ohhh please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I will update every week, so look out next Thurs/Fri for an update.

! Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

I like this story so far. Hope Bella doesn't break wolf boys heart...



Author's Response:

Every review is like a rainbow in my heart, so thanks! Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

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Reviewer: 22amazing Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

all i wanna say is...... savageward can keep me warm anytime....



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LOL, I know right!

 

Every review is like a rainbow in my heart, so thanks! Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting idea with so many possibilities.  I bet something happened early on to leave him in the wild.  He does seem to have a gentle nature though.



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Thanks so much for the review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

The title caught me and I am so happy I read your first two chapters.  Very intriguing so far and the plot is very original to Twilight fan fic.  Can't wait for more info like Edwards background, the Wolves and look forward to seeing where this story goes.  : )



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm liking Savageward; he seems a lot nicer than Ben, that's for sure.



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Ha ha, yes Ben is not a fan favorite here.

 

Every review is like a rainbow in my heart, so thanks! Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOVE IT !!!! UPDATE SOON .. LOVE PRIMAL NATURE EDWARD :D

 



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Thanks so much for reading.

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting. Not exactly what I was expecting, Edward associated with wolves, that is. I was justing thinking of a wild man. Is there a supernatural element in the story at all or are the Edward's pack just human like because that is the way that Bella perceives them?

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

There is no supernatural here, the pack has personality because Bella see's it that way.

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward is friends with the wolves here ... how ironic! I love his gentle nature!  I hope Bella stays with him instead of Ben!



Author's Response:

I know, right? But they are just regular wolves, no were in them.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: wild_child Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh my god!!!! This story is amazing! I would have never thought that there would be a story like this its just awesome
and my thoughts on Savagward?
LOVE HIM! I really enjoyed this story and I cant wait until the next chapter is out, this story is going on my favorites!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

So good love it!



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Thanks

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: girl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

sounds intresting, can't wait to see what happens next (:



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Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ben does not have good intentions for Bella ... she may be safer with this feral human!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I think you might be right. *Winks*

Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn’t hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn’t the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn’t been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn’t felt like days.

She didn’t have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: Jackie84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I'm can't wait To see how this plays out :) I'm hooked already,can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

That makes me so happy!

Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn’t hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn’t the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn’t been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn’t felt like days.

She didn’t have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting so far can't wait to see how Edward plays into this.

 

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Edward will fit in soon. Promise.

Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am liking this story and looking forward to seeing the next chapter.



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Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful begining!



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Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)



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The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

ahhh goood opening ... you need to update soon ... i need to know whats going to happen next :D

 



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Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

intresting. i am glad she listen to her instincts. he is not good enough for her. it is all about him not them. looking forward to the next chapter



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Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

 

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