Date: 07 Feb 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
Okay, I'm sorry but I have to say, "way to unreal". I'm sorry, but really, if she was rapped the idea of any guy touching her in any sexual way would freak her out. I have read most of your stories but this one part is just way off. I'm sorry and don't mean to be rude but that would NEVER happen in a thousand years. She would be repulsed and to freaked out to do anything for months, if not years; sometimes counseling as well.
Date: 04 Jan 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 42
really cool little story thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think this story started out good, but really floored me.
I think that you should stated in the outline/summary that their is a rape scene in the story. This give the reader a choice to read or not. I myself do not, will not read a story that has rape in it because it is my choice not to read them. This story doesn't even state that their is hurt, angst or drama in the chapters, so to my surprise I was floored and pissed.
As a writer you are free to write as you see and feel. As a reader I depend on the summary to let me know if the story/book will be enjoyable for me. This story I will not finish althoughbn I would like to know what happens at the end.
Thank you for taking the time to write and posting your stories.
Author's Response:
I am very sorry that it wasn't put in the summary about the violence that happened in the story. When we started posting the story it was as a weekly work in progress and once it completed, we didn't think to update the summary. I'm very sorry thta you will not be completing the story. I hope that you will skim through the chapters and possibly read to the end. But if not thank you for reading and your review.
sher
Date: 01 Apr 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 42
I loved it so much. Thank you for the closure.
Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 42
Great ending to a great story thank you very much
Date: 23 Nov 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 41
How sweet! So sad it is almost over.
Date: 23 Nov 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 41
aww that was sweet now that all have the same last name...
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 40
Glad you are back. I think that baby is going to be here quicker than expected. Why did they wait so long to get married?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 40
Hey,
great that you wrote more! Finally they're married, I'm really happy but I don't think that the baby will wait so much longer :D
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 39
so happy he told her what was going on
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 39
i am glad edward came through and told bella the truth. like he said they will be married soon and they should not have any secrets
Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
Why do I get the feeling something is about to happen. By Edwards last few sentences, things seem to be going to good!! I hope Im wrong. Great update!!
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 38
Edward knew she would sell her child. It is so sad, but I am glad she is a crappy parent. Anthony is going to have a wonderful life now.
Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 38
well i was scared there for a minute that something was going wrong
I am glad things with Irina seem to go well. even though she is signing her rights for money i am thrilled that she is doing so.
ahhhhh anthony calling bella mom, ahhhh
Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 38
I'm really enjoying your story, overall - lots of drama keeping me interested, not too much angst, etc. but I'm finding it jarring that Bella calls Edward "McScruff" ALL the time, and rarely calls him Edward. Over the course of several updates, I've found myself jolted out of the story from it, though I think it's been the most jarring with the lovemaking scenes. (I think it jolts me because I have to remember who McScruff is, since she rarely calls him by name when speaking to him.) I try not to write nit-picky reviews, and I hope this doesn't seem like one, but I thought if I was a writer, I would want to know that it was happening.
Date: 20 Dec 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 38
okay... awesome loved the way she got 15 yrs and James got 20 not enough but very good....and rhen Anthony asking Bella is he could call her Mom was just perfect.... I really hope Irina takes the money!!!!
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Anthony has grown up too fast. Hopefully, the longer he stays with Bella and Edward the kid will come back out in Anthony. He does not need to be so stressed. I hope Tanya will sign her rights away so Bella can adopt him as well.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 37
What a loving family I hope they get to keep it with out having to deal with the bitch.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 37
ahhhh anthony is blessed to be placed in their family. he deserves to be happy and loved. he will be a great big brother
Date: 13 Dec 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 37
I really hope that it is smooth sailing from here on out! They deserve to be drama free.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 37
awhh what a heart warming chapter I'm really lving liitle Anthony!!! He's gonna make a wonderful Big Brother!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
What an ass hole Edward is
Date: 09 Dec 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 36
I am so happy for Edward, Bella and Anthony. They are a wonderful little family with a new one on the way. They have some legal paperwork to do, but it should all work out.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 36
I was so excited for both babys Anthonys life will be a much better life now.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 35
She has to be pregers????
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
About damn time! Now everything else needs to fall in place........... NO more Irina and def no more James!!
Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yeah, Bella for standing up to Irina. I hope they lock her up and throw away the key.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ok Why is Bella so calm she jujst got rape hellooooo
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 34
Good the wicked witch is going to jail that is a good place for her
Date: 28 Nov 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella is over sensitive in this story. If Edward says anything that she doesn't agree with she is ready to run away from the relationship. She must not love him very much. This is a very emotional time for both of them. They might not always agree, but running away is not the answer. In this case, that is exactly what Irina wants to happen. She wants to break them up. Bella needs to be sweeter to Edward.
Date: 22 Nov 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great story, I haven't decided if Im wanting Anthony to be Edwards or if I hope he is not and they adopt him. I think with what's happened if Anthony is Edward's Bella will feel even more insecure since she lost the baby. They have had so many obstacles, it's time for happiness.
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Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
man edward you just keep getting yourself in the dog house. noone to blame but your stupid mouth.
man i am shocked you don't think first
i am surprised by all the chances bella gives you
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Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 33
She needed to kick him in his junk.
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Date: 22 Nov 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 33
wow Holy Hell Edward control that mouth son, and Bella he did tell you about Irina... mercy at least they calmed down and stayed....... poor lttle Anthony has been through so much...He needs the stability that Bella can provide for him...still on the fence with Edward and his personality... Love the story though and am very much E x B pairing fan.... this girl has truly been through the ringer...
Author's Response:
Date: 16 Nov 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 32
They need to get the custody of Anthony settle ASAP. Irina needs to go to jail for hit and run. Edward and Bella need to get married as soon as she is healed and start working on another baby. They need to have some happiness. Irina needs out the their lives forever.
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Date: 15 Nov 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
It's soo sad!! I'm kinda mad Edward was about to go apeshit about the not knowing about the baby. I wonder if she actually knew if would go crazy while shes in the hospital.
Poor Anthony! Irina needs to die..quite soon por favor
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Date: 15 Nov 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 32
So sad lost the baby before they even knew about it Irinia must die.
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Date: 15 Nov 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 32
wow so they lost a baby, how sad. it will hit her and i hope they hold irina responsible. she is the one that could have taken three lives and doesn't care. they need to go to court and take away her rights as anthony's mother. she is no mother and doesn't deserve that privilege
bella deserves that privilege. their will be other babies for edward and bella. in the future when they are through the grieving process and settled with anthony
Author's Response:
Date: 15 Nov 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 32
well shit.... that is crazy
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Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
They need a restraining order against Irina and James. It will hopefully keep the 3 of them safe. I hope it is not too late.
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh shit
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Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
oh my irina what have you done now. man he doesn't want you. you are delusional and need help. get over it. anthony needs a better home and really you do not want a kid. give him up and go live your life somewhere else.
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Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
I wonder if Irina has done something to Bella and taken Anthony......sure hope not.
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
holy hell does Bella ever get a damn break here... poor little Anthony....
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Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
Poor kid he is in a good place now. So I have to ask is Bella pregers??????
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 29
They need to pick up that boy and give him a gentle hug. Then they need to put a rush on the dna test, so they can make the living conditions permenant if he is Edward's child.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 29
Poor kid but his life will get better I hope even if he is not Edward's I hope they keep him.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
that poor child I'm not sure this is Edward's child but Bella has a huge heart and would protect any child... So sad for Anthony!!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
man whether he was my kid or not i'd be taking him home and keeping him. nobody deserves to be hit. pay them off and keep the kid. man those two should not even be allowed to have a kid or even be able to have sex to produce a kid. man oh man
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
When are they getting the blood test. If the child is his, I hope he asks for full custody. The child does not need to be with some one who doesn't want him.
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Date: 17 Oct 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
man alive this poor girl can't catch a break even on her birthday... what a witch Ms Irina is James certainly has a mouth on him
Author's Response:
Date: 17 Oct 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
So Irina put James up to this????
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Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
Bella needs to realize that some people and Edward seems to be one of these people who need to be by themselves for awhile when they are upset. They have to think things through, calm down, and then they can talk. Bella needs to learn to respect this about him. She needs to stop getting upset about it. They just handle stress and anger differently. If she pushes it he might say things that he will regret because he is not in the right frame of mind. Does this child look anything like Edward? There should be signs.
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Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
Edward need to go through anger managment to learn how to coup. Irina doesnt deserve that child even if he is not Edwards.
Author's Response:
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
goodness... so many scary creatures... James the psycho pseudo-rapist and Irina the Witch from Hell!!! Poor Anthony, at this point I don.t care if the little dude is Edward's or not, I just want them to raise him in a fearfree environment!!! Bless his heart, he wanted to know what he did wromg...
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Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
i think bella forgives to easliy. edward is an ass and jumped to a conclusion. man she should have made him suffer. she has done nothing wrong and time and time again edward is the one screwing up or it is his problems that are causing a rift. he is the one bringing the problems in their relationship. edward get your shit together
Author's Response:
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
what a set up she is there with the pics before Bella even got home. Edward needs to open his eyes wider. The boys is James???
Author's Response:
Date: 03 Oct 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Irina must need money for something. Why would she wait so long? Maybe she doesn't want the child any longer and she knows Edward will take his child.
Author's Response:
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good to know that now one likes Irina she is slimmy I feel sorry for her kid.
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Sep 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hoped Bella locked the doors. Edward needs to do a background check on James. He will find out all he needs to know on James. Edward better get home soon. Bella knows that Edward is good. She needs to stop listening to creeps on the phone. What is wrong with her?
Author's Response:
Date: 19 Sep 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
Irina has mental issues. So is James married to Irina???
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Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad that they worked through their rough patch. I think Bella would have recognized Edward's traits in Anthony if he really was Edward's. Edward has very distintive traits and why would she wait almost 6 years to tell him. I hope he is not Edward's child, just so he won't have to put up with the mother for years to come. Edward and Bella would love the child. He would be innocent.
Author's Response:
Date: 13 Sep 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
Im so happy they reconected. What is the bitch from hell going to do to Bella??? Is the boy really Edwards I dont think so???
Author's Response:
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
well seems they are working things out
him irina or tanya it seems you are here to reck havoic. look out bella
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Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
looking foward to the next chapter
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Date: 06 Sep 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow edward seems different. he seems as if he has some deomns he needs to deal with or an anger issue. i hope bella knows what she is doing by staying with him
Author's Response:
Date: 06 Sep 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
Im thinking he still needs his ass kick I love him but that is not right.
Author's Response:
Date: 06 Sep 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
well i hope someone dose punch him
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Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
ohhh harmless flirting eyyy Edward????!!!! such a good story
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Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
love it when fate and destiny take over
Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:35 AM Title: Prologue
thisnstory looks pretty good
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward over reacted to the call and should not have hurt Bella, but Bella caused part of the anger by packing and trying to run away. She should have given him some space. He was wrong to be over agressive sexually. I hope they can work this out.
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter
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Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Shit is still going to hit the fan when Alice sees the brusis. I hope the baby is not his
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Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella should not have packed and tried to packed. She should have just given him space. Running is never the way to go. You hold on to love.
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Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
What the hell was that his ex on the phone???? I still think Bella should go spend the night somewhere else to let him think about what he is doing.
Author's Response:
Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
man they have alot of talking. he was cruel. i would almost go to say he raped her. but he didn't force himself on her he took what he wanted brutally and got off without a care to her. but yet she still said she loved him. man messed up. she needs to be a little more honest in the relationship or it is not going to work. i do not know what dream land she is in. what the fuck edward where did all your anger come from and why take it out on bella. man you have some explaining to do.
Author's Response:
Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope Bella will stop running now. I had a feeling that picture was of Rose and Emmett. Great job....thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow...there is not going to be anything slow about these two. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well it is a start. I am glad they are going to go slow and see what happens. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am glad Alice could help Bella understand Edward. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope they talk soon. I am sure this is a shock, but they have to talk. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
yah no std. who is calling trying to cause trouble.
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Of course she is right. Is she surprised her plan is working??? Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love them together. The saying fits them perfectly. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't believe he didn't catch up to her and she spent the whole curise hiding from him. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well I guess it was fliring, but I wouldn't call it harmless. Edward is going to have to do some fast talking. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Alice cracks me up. She is so excited. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
It is sad that Charlie is gone. These two are going to have a blast on this cruise. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:17 PM Title: Prologue
Alice is always behind things like this. I can't wait to get caught up. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is just so unsure of herself poor thing.
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
poor bella. he loves her but it is hard for her to believe he could want her. i hope she comes around. she just needs a little self esteem
Author's Response:
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope they send the creep away for along time. I am happy Bella decided to move in with Edward. They need each other especially right now.
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
cute chapter excited for them living together
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Date: 02 Aug 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
He is doing all he can do to prove that he loves her so much.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
i am blown away. iwas expecting some sort of retaliation but wow was not expecting what happen to edward and bella. i am sorry for bella for what happened to her and i am hoping she presses charges and her and edward move on. i feel so bad. now it seems there may be a little problem in their relationship as to what happens and i hope not. wow just when i thought they where heading off to a happy relationship a big wrench was thrown into it. good luck guys. looking forward to how things work out from here
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
well go bella go. that was hawt
i am glad these guys are still together and trying to move on and see where they go
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
it would only happen to the 2 of them ! excited for the next chatper
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