[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am kind of enjoying this Edward... :D
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow what a proposition..
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:13 AM Title: Prologue
oh wow..... what an arse....
can't wait to keep reading..
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
We will find out why Edward is such an ass? Will things get better between them in the end? Thanks for the update! :~)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
actualiza pronto
mil gracias por tu historia
Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm totally loving Roughward..
E/k
Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
poor thing. Her mom and dad sound like real pieces of work.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. A sort of Pretty Woman thing going?
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:59 AM Title: Prologue
wow wonder where this is going.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love that I get to start from the beginning again and enjoy Assward/Roughward all over again. I still can't wait to find out what the hell his freaking problem is. I told you before my dream chapter would be him falling in love with Bella and groveling at her feet and Bella kicking him to the curb...until she takes him back. LOL!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:37 AM Title: Prologue
Great start! I love hardass Edward! Any story where he's a little more domineering and possesive than normal... I'm sold! I eagerly await your next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm. I am greatly interested in finding out where this goes! Very unique and brilliantly written. :)
Please tell me you will have EPOV!?
♥♥♥
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love Roughward... more than I love my dog. AND that is huge. I am just so anxious to hear his whole story. Something horrible made him this way.. Will he ever be normal again... so sad.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:27 AM Title: Prologue
OH MY GOODNESS.. i am soo glad to have you hear. I can't believe they pulled you.. This is such an amazing story.. I will review EVERY chapter, even though I have read and re read MANY times. hahahaha. Your writing is amazing, and the depths of your characters are so wonderful.
LOVE IT.
WELCOME to the coffee shop
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:41 PM Title: Prologue
WOW!! OMG, you're story is so fucking amazing! When I found it here by coinsidence and read in one review from another reader that there are more chapters to this story alredy posted over at ff.net, I logged in there immeadiately to read them...only to find that ffnet pulled the story! (that sucks, btw!) Thank God for that blog of yours!!! I would have dropped my two cents in over there, but due to unknown reasons, I wasn't able to post anything there today! :( Which brings me back to over here....quite the journey I did here =)
BUT.IT.WAS.SO.WORTH.IT!!!! You're story is seriously so fucking amazing! I just couldn't stop reading! I devoured every single word of every single chapter! I just feel so bad for the both of them! Don't get me wrong- the sexin' was more than steaming hot! But, it's obvious that they are both just so broken and damaged! Edward even more so than Bella (as for now- you never know!) It was obvious when he freaked out after their first 'playtime' and he emerged back from the bathroom and thought she was gone! I just feel so bad for him, even though he is the biggest ass around Bella - or well,probably everyone! From what is revealed in later chapters, he went through some really tough shit himself- I really can't wait for everythig to come out! The way he freaked out in chapter 11...it must have been several things coming together, too!!! OMG! That really was intense! And when he saw Bella standing outside! GAH- I so wished for an EPOV!!! I really, really, really, really wanna kno wwhat happened to him and his little girl! And how he came to pick out Bella and how he reacted to finding the note she left him! OH- and whatever it was that he found out and confronted Esme about! The last chapter was a bit confusing since I had absolutely no idea what was going on between them, but oh so good at the same time!
It was just so sad when Bella walked away from him after finding him seeing her! Jeeez, poor girl never had it easy either! She always got it left right and center and I just don't think it's going to change anytime soon!!! I really can't wait to see where this is all going! I wonder if Alice is going to leash out on Bella for Roughie ( I absolutely love that nickname btw! ^^) attending the wedding! Not that that was Bella's fault, but Alice made her opinion regarding him clear beforehand and well, she ist Bella's biggest fan either. Besides, it may appear too much of a coinsidence to her?!?! I will haveto wait and see about that one....just like everything else =( =( =( *pout* I also wonder how the whole Bella/Edward relationship is going to unfold...if at all at that point! ^^ I really, really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter- did I mention that already?! =)
OMG! I'm soooo glad you started posting over here! I would have missed out on such an awesome story if you didn't! The storyline is absolutely intriguing and captivating, the writing soo good also! The banner...I don't even have words for that one!Absofuckinglutelyfuckawesome, maybe! =) =) =) I think I'm going to have fanatstic dreams tonight! So, thank you for that also!
I can't seem to stop saying it, but I really can't wait for the next chapter!!! Edward's look out of the car window is kinda hunting me down...among other things! =) =) =) Fucking awesome! ^^
XO
-Sue
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it, just found my new favorite!! You just brought the spark back to twilight fanfiction...I was totally starting to get bored with it lately!!
Can't wait for more, more, and much more!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
well I swear that I love these two chapters
I just have to await the moment when Edward
have to pay for everything that was stupid
I hope you forgive Bella before you do suffer not a little
much
thanks for this story
bien te lo juro que estos dos capitulos me encantan solo voy ha estar esperando el momento en que Edward tenga que pagar por todo lo idiota que ha sido espero que Bella antes de perdonarlo lo haga sufrir no poco mucho gracias por esta historia
Date: 18 Apr 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it and am looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 10:19 PM Title: Prologue
HOLY HOT SHIT!!! Is it sick that I just got totally turned on by this beginning??? LOL
Can't wait to see where you are taking us!! Bring it on!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:38 PM Title: Prologue
4/18/11
Chapter 1
Well, you've surely gotten my attention!
Is Bella a hooker or sub?
Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:35 PM Title: Prologue
Love the story line and noticed it's no longer on FFN.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:08 PM Title: Prologue
Yikes!! Very interesting. I will be here waiting for updates... That was very intense.
E/k
Date: 18 Apr 2011 7:13 PM Title: Prologue
not to mention your banner(fan herself)
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:40 PM Title: Prologue
Still here, woman!
Post away!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:37 PM Title: Prologue
I'm here! :)
Your story was in my to read list on FFn and when I came across it this morning in the most recent list on TWCS, I went over to FFn to see if this was the story was thinking of and low and behold it isn't on FFn anymore... So sad. But it's here so it's all good. ;)
Can't wait to find out how B got herself in this freaking rough relationship. Till next time and hopefully you'll have more luck over here. FFn has been horrible with deleting things lately. Just found out they suspended savage7289's account and I was so waiting to read her newest chapter of Unexpected Circumstances...
Happy typing!
CrimsonR
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:12 PM Title: Prologue
I'm in big time lust with Roughie. He's one of the most desirable Edwards I've ever read. I agree with allyvera, sometimes I'm dead jealous of Bella, lol. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work, doll!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:05 PM Title: Prologue
i started to read because of the banner. have to say kinda brakes my heart but im excited to see what happens.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 4:57 PM Title: Prologue
Jada, it is just awesome that you have posted here at TWCS - when I saw your note on Twitter I got my ass over here pronto :-) I just absolutely love FYW, it is such an epic story, with possibly one of the most mysterious Edwards I have ever encountered. At times I feel very sorry for Bella, and yes, there are times when I am dead jealous.. just sayin'..
I am so looking forward to reviewing all your chapters here - it doesn't matter where you post, I will follow you and Roughie wherever you go! oxo AV