Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
This chapter was terrific, please keep writing. This story has great, great potential. So many questions to be answered on both sides. How will they find a way to talk to each other? I can't wait!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
"Or volunteer to slap the shit out of Bella until she snaps out of it :)" Yea, I vote for that one...lol No, seriously she has every right to be angry but knowing how her body responds to his should be enough for her to have at least asked for his contact info...How is she going to find him again if she wants to talk? And is Edward really not going to come back? Does he feel anything other than guilt for Bella? Thanks for the update! Hope the next one is sooner! :~)
Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
*gah* I think I held my breath the entire chapter. I want to be mad that he knew her situation...but I feel sooooo bad for him. Great update, Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh me me me - pick me to slap her!!! :) I love that Edward is trying so hard to apologize after the bullshit he put her through.....
Thank you so very much for the update!!! Another wonderful chapt. :)
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
She was neglected and emotionally abandoned by her mother. She was abused by her father. Then she was used and abused by Edward. All the while working herself to the bone to make it on her own all alone. She is so strong yet lonely, my heart aches for her. I want to see her unload all that crap. Then surround herself with warm loving friends as a surrogate family to replace the shitty one she came from.
Then I want Edward to observe her once again. This time he'll see she is the opposite of the poor, desperate girl he took advantage of. I want him to see her transformed and being treated like a princess by a really nice guy. Anything to make him feel even shittier about the way he once treated her. He'll see enough to inspire and ensure that he cannot stay away.
Sorry, I'm stepping down now. Your story stirs the emotions. Looking forward to what you have in store for these two. Thank you. Regards, PNW Luna
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
I had no idea this story got pulled. So bummed. I LOVE this story and Im glad i found you over here!!!!! Grrrr to whoever reported you. Dont let them get to you because a ton of us LOVE this story!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Please update soon?? Missing the "new " Edward and the "can't forget him" Bella.
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
come back to us sooon!!!
Date: 29 May 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very interesting change up. I'm loving this story & am bummed that I'm all caught up, I hope you update soon. I'm at a loss of where you will go from here. I really want them both to reconnect. I hate how Bella is in so much change & yeah it is like they've switched places & now Bella is the one in horrible pain.
Date: 29 May 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Eyes down, awe, poor Bella.
Date: 29 May 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, heavy stuff.
Date: 29 May 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm so glad the next chapter is already written. I'm dying to know if she'll help him out or hide from him.
Date: 29 May 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awe, but I feel her leaving will just be another horrible loss for Edward, but what else can she do?
Date: 28 May 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Win win, right?
Date: 28 May 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh, you and your cliffy
Date: 28 May 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is a great read, I have so much I should be doing, but this story is getting priority
Date: 28 May 2011 6:06 PM Title: Prologue
whoa. not your typical E
Date: 24 May 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, I'm not surprised to see Edward back but in some ways as much as i want to slap Bella for not taking what she wants I am so glad she stood up for herself :) I can't wait to see who makes the next move and who will make the first move of them touching each other again :)
Date: 24 May 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Ohhhh so wow, I was all "what did I miss???" did I miss a chapter???? and then shazzam in the span of a moment there Edward is again and it begins again! I can't wait to see where they go from here and Edward in jeans and a thermal??? damn that's HOT :)
Date: 21 May 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
have really enjoyed this! Stupid FFn people for pulling it... but i'm glad you decided to keep posting it here! :) The dynamic between them is fascinating, I think you've done a great job making them both seem like they needed to get something out of the arrangement they've had. It's easy to relate to Bella's "Is this is?" kind of questioning, I'm sure most of us think that at least once a day. Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow. That was powerful.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Whoa! I can not tell which one of them is more FUBAR. I feel bad for both of them and at the same time I want to smash their heads together.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit! That just gave me chills when her eyes went down. After five years and her totally making a life for herself and she still allows herself to be Topped by him? She is a mess!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
{Stunned silence} Excellent chapter!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
As much as I hated the SOB, I also felt bad thinking of him alone on Christmas without even his 'whore'.
And WTF is with him showing up at the wedding?!?
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG! He had a baby?!? Oh man, I need more of that part of the story! Please tell me the blanks will get filled in. Please?
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is a lot stronger than she seems. I'm glad that she took some pleasure from him for a change.
I wonder why he choose Bella? Why her of all people? Will we find out?
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
I guess there is a part of me that is glad that Charlie is dead. At least she only has one man in her life trating her like shit at a time.
And WTF is Alice up to? Did she pull that crap just to prove that Bella knew Edward? That family is starting to look as fucked up as Edward. Maybe that explains why he is the way he is...
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG! I really want to hurt this Edward and not in a good way. HE IS SUCH A BASTARD!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ho-ly SHIT! She has to work with his family?!? What is he going to say when he finds her in his family home? This can not be good. Not at all!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, to have a little insight into her relationshio with Charlie explains why she would allow Edward to treat her this way. It still does not make him any less of a bastard though.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
He is truly an insufferable son of a bitch. Boy, she hit the nail on that one.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Seriously want to hit him...hard. Poor Bella. How horrible to be put in that position.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is it possible to be turned on and want to punch the man all at the same time?
Date: 19 May 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMFG!!!! I just found this absolutley amazing story and I am dieing for more. I love this story. I love it!! Looking forward to more. I just wish she would finallybreak down alittle and show him how much he did hurt her and let him make it better.
Date: 18 May 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
What has eddie been up to for 5 years? Why is he really back? Why did he choose her in the first place? Holy shit so many questions!
Date: 18 May 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well holy shit! 5 years and he just shows up!? And she still remembers! She still needs it, needs him!
Date: 18 May 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well... That went...m well? What will happen to our 2 now? Will there be a hea?
Date: 18 May 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Walk her ass out there and distract his ass!
Date: 18 May 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
So eddie had a daughter, and maybe a wife? He lost them and turned into an asshole...?
Date: 18 May 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
that's right bella it is ok to admit you like it too.
Date: 18 May 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm so glad I was able to find this story! After it went missing from FF I was kind of heartbroken, but now I know where to go and I even have a few chapters to bury myself in order to catch up!!
Date: 18 May 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
so i am gonna guess that eddie is not in contact with his family. but what has kept him away?
Date: 18 May 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh is it eddie? or some other man in the family? and what is up with alice? what does she know or thinks she knows?
Date: 18 May 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Whoa what a great chapter. I thought I was hooked on this story already, but now I'm totally gone! Love where you're taking this. Can't wait to read more. :D
Date: 17 May 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh boy she is gonna be working his sister's wedding! this should be interesting!
Date: 17 May 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
i think that eddie has a lot of self hate goin on right now. so does bella....
Date: 17 May 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
weather she wants to admit it or not eddie plays her quite well.
Date: 17 May 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
poor bella. seems like she is on her own in life and that is gonna make what eddie does to her even harder...
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
I have to say that I was not sure about this story when I started reading it and by the end I was still a little confused, but I have to say that I am enjoying it all the same... I will have to see what is going to happen.
Date: 17 May 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow eddie sure is a little rough around the edges! but definately an offer she should think about....
Date: 17 May 2011 12:40 AM Title: Prologue
oh wow! um..... holy shit?!?!?
Date: 16 May 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a turn of events. Can't wait for another update.
Great story.
Date: 16 May 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful update!!!
Date: 16 May 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
love it! can't wait for more =)
Date: 16 May 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
jumps up and down and waves at jada!!
Welcome to the darkside!!
I totally understand the fanfiction boot....they warned me before I posted chapter 18 of my BDSM fanfic...they said you post it you lose it...so I posted part of it and had the rest posted on my blog...then one of the awesome ladies here read my story and invited me over and EEK has found a home here!
This site is awesome the peopole are awesome and you have no worries.
So welcome to the darkside!
Now for your story...
UNFREAKING real...love it hooked on it keep reading it slowly trying to hold off but can I move in with you so I don't have to wait for updates and just look over your shoulder as you type...lol...
Just kidding...
to your blinkie maker she fucking rawks seriously....I perve that damn thing too much...lol twisted i know but thats a hot blinkie...
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Okay, somehow he's managed to turn it all around onto her? That's not okay, but I have to admit, I'm impressed! He'd better come back and apologize again. I don't know if I could respect Bella if she were the next one to make an overture of kindness. He still hasn't redeemed himself. In fact, if I were she, I'd try to pay him back everything he ever paid before. With interest. Thanks for sharing. Just because I'm mad at your character doesn't mean I'm irritated with you! I always am excited about your updates.
Date: 15 May 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
As much as I wanted to hate this, I didn't. Hope we find out what happened.
Date: 15 May 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe explains a little about Edward.
Date: 15 May 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
He really has issues, doesn't he? Will we find out his problem?
Date: 15 May 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is not the Edward we know and love. Why am I continuing with this again. Oh yeah, I'm stupid.
Date: 15 May 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
"But seriously, Swan. You work too damn hard not to have a little fun too. A good hard fucking. That's the answer to all of life's problems, that's what I say."
i laughed my ass off at this...
and YOU GO BELLA
Because tonight...I took too.
GOD I MUST BE A DEVIANT BECAUSE THIS IS LIKE THE BEST RELATIONSHIP EVER....NO BULLSHIT IN BETWEEN!
HANGS HER HEAD FOR A SECOND ONLY CAUSE SHE HAS TO GET TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
Excellent chapter. I now have even more questions than answers. I can't wait to see where you take this intriguing story next.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don`t know if I`m a masochist, or you are sadist. I can`t remember when was the last time I was so addicted to fanfic story. Six months ago? More?
I`ve told you that you are sadist because chapters are allways too short for an addict, no matter how long they realy are; and the period between updates is allways tooooo long. I mean, when you check for update on one particular story five times a damn day, everything is too long, isn`t it?
I can`t even explained you how many times I wished forr to have a whole published story just in one place - in book. I should eat it in one night only, no matter how long it is. Hell I should take the day off from work to read it. This whole updating thing is killing me. and I hope that TWCS will offer you to publish this story. When it happened I book myself for the first copy.
I didn`t quite understand - how can I get an EPOV outtake?
Date: 15 May 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
NOOOO ha ha!! I dont want him to apologize!! I loved mean dominant assward!!! Come baaack !!! ;) Please say hes coming back, and not just in her dreams!!!
Date: 15 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok will give it a little more. But I think I hate him.
Date: 15 May 2011 2:14 AM Title: Prologue
Will give it a chance. Tried on blog spot. Was seeing spots because of the dark background. This is better on the eyes. Not sure if I can handle this Edward though.
Date: 15 May 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
I throw away my panties with the condom and pocket the cash.
God I love the shit out of her!!! lol....this is great!!
You GO BELLA!
Date: 15 May 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
well he has a point. want wait to see how this turns out.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am speechless after reading this chapter. Your writing talent totally astounds me. The past chapters have been amazing; but this one was so powerful that it blew my mind, especially the part about Bella's dream. I feel absolutely exhausted after reading this story. Edward has obviously had some kind of therapy; and I am hoping that not only does he need to make amends to Bella, but that he realizes she needs some kind of help too. So he is going to keep coming back until he gets through to her, right? Please, please. Thank you so much for giving us this amazing story.
Date: 14 May 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm a greedy h00r, I know... I want MORE! Poor B, she only knows how to deal with agressiveness.. she has no idea what to do with niceness... She is gonna be ALL OVER THE PLACE! ... TY Jada... can't wait to read more! *mwah* @MoniNP
Date: 14 May 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
damn it!!!!!!! COME BAAAACK :( please................i can`t believe 5 years has passed, but WOW, i really hope she gives him a chance to explain why he was the way he was.
anyway, sorry to hear that your story got pulled, but glad that its here :)
how come the chapters are not as updated on twilighted
Date: 14 May 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! That was an intense chapter! So Edward was trying to make amends and Bella didn't want to hear it. Good for her! I'm still dying to know what Edward's been doing with himself for the last 5 years. I thought he was going to loose it there for a minute in the kitchen and revert back to assward. Lol! I'm loving this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon!
Date: 14 May 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
Uhhh..Wowwww...
now the hearts of Eddie and Bells must begin to speak!!!! I really like your story in the moment very much. You got me..... please go on soon
Lol - Tiina
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 9:07 PM Title: Prologue
Holy shit and fuck me sideways! That was one hell of a beginning!!!
Date: 14 May 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
thanks for the update! wow is he in a 12 step program and has to apologize to everyone? why now? why does he want to see her now? what has changed with him? come on bella stop the crap and let him in so we can find out!!!!
Date: 14 May 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
glad you aren't being resentful of being kicked off of ff!! wow you let 5 years go by i wasn't expecting that!! i thought she would be down at the station bailing him out. i guess he has lawyers for that!
Date: 14 May 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
i found you again!!!! you disappeared couldn't find you!!! i am soo glad i did. you are on my favorites and i am on board again! yeah!! keep writing and i promise no death threats from me!!
Date: 14 May 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
so does this mean no more dirty sex....sigh that was my favorite part.
Date: 14 May 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well...that didn't go like I thought it would.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
WOW - amazing chapter! I really want to hear Edward out too :)
Thanks so much!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
She is so fucked up it is deep seated in her bones from that sickass father and useless mother, not that Edward helped escape that by the way he treated her like a piece of meat. But he, albeit unknowingly, gave her the escape from reality she needed. Im pretty impressed that he has obviously be in some kind of counseling and is trying to make amends. Sad too is that obviously his issues are pretty well intrenched and dug in as well. So what we have here is what I like to call a problem...although I LOVED the sick way he fucked her, and the way she got off on it., I am also very relieved there will be some focus on self, possible forgiveness, and eventually healing. Bravo update!
Date: 14 May 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
So, he did get help, and he obviously sees there's something not right with her and her reactions.. The questions is, will he stick around to bug her and goad her into introspection and getting the help she so desperately needs?
My heart goes out to Bella, she's in such turmoil.. I so hope there'll be light an the end of the long, dark tunnel she's in :(
Date: 14 May 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope Edward comes back soon!!! :)
Date: 14 May 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, I am hooked, it will be so interesting to find out what happened before he met and and since then. This is a great story. You are doing a wonderful job of keeping readers on the edge.
Date: 14 May 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Definitely, this chapter left me very intrigued ... and curiosity!! Edward, Edward's in that head??? mmhhhh ;) Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Thanks for update:)
x
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
yeah he clearly knows her too well now. he has obviously dealt with his demons and now wants to make amends for his past actions. I think he really has genuine feelings for her and wants a relationship with her. come on bella. its time now for you to deal with your demons as well. we all kjow that you really want him deep down inside. how he was although it was wrong did make you feel alive and that is how you dealt with your issues. its time to move forward and put the past to rest. it is obvious that the two of you were made for each other otherwise you would be able to move on with someone else. hope she will give him a chance to explain. i am dying to know all of the details as to why he was the way he was with her. so hop he has made peace with his family as well.
Date: 14 May 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
so much pain and angre there not sure how that will play out
Date: 14 May 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
can't wait for edward to explain himself... if bella allows...
Date: 14 May 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow it was intense!! poor Bella , I think she is broken more of Edward was 5 years ago, I loved the chapter hope you can livve soon and come back
xoxo
Date: 14 May 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter, cannot wait for the next one. I am really enjoying your story.
Date: 14 May 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great Chapter Jada. He has her all kinds of messed up. Is she terrified to remember the old him? The old him she saw in pictures and in video? That is the reason why she ended it. She was starting to have feelings for him. For the old him. That is what I got out of it. The guy at the party...I think the reason why she didn't have sex with him was more because it wasn't Edward. Not because it wasn't rough enough. Deep down inside I think that is what she is afraid of. Afraid of letting go.
I am curious....What has Edward been up to? Are things better between him and his family? Did Alice tell him about the Bella they know? What does he do now? Does he still hold the same position in life or does he deliver pizza's. Ha ha. At first I thought Bella was one of many...Why do I think now that is not the case? Or was she and he has already said his peace to them? What made her so special if she was the only one?
Anyway thanks for sharing your twisted tale with us. Take care and peace. T.
Date: 14 May 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
okay did i miss something did she come? lol....
hell he is one sexy selfish son of bitch...I would smile kiss the envelope go home and get the fuck off and skip on the way to the bank on monday...
shame? this girl has none!
I mean come fucking on ITS EDWARD CULLEN FOR CHRISTS SAKE! ADMIT IT!
we all would do it if we could!
See ya Next saturday...EDWARRRRRRRRRRD!
lmao....
Date: 14 May 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ya know, when he asked why it was easier for her to call herself his whore than to listen to his apology, I was waiting for him to piss her off enough for her to blurt out: Because I liked it!
Of course, she hasn't admitted that to herself...yet.
Date: 14 May 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
WOW! Well they just need to fuck and get it over with...hehehehehehe. Yeah the tension is certainly there. He really isn't pushing his apology enough or explaining himself like he should. He just needs to grab her and make her listen!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Whoooeee! Killer chapter! Who would have thought that he actually had a soul?
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful chapter!