Date: 20 Apr 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
To be honest, I don't know what the feminists were all up in arms. You have written Bella as someone who has been emotionally neglected all her life. Instinctually, she knew it wasn't right, but it just was. Her power was taken away from her. But, with Edward, she gave him that power of control. There is a difference between not being in control of one's life and letting go of that control willingly.
My question is, did Edward know that towards the end, she was getting more out of it that than he was? Her peace of mind, no matter the source, was worth the price.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Death threats, really??? (Then dont fucking read it people!!!) This story is EPIC!!!
I am sooo happy that you are continuing this fuckawesome story both here and on your new blog...which is awesome by the way!! Looking forward to your next update and to where you take these two!!
This is 'luvtwilightff' from ff.net
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
As I was reading these chapters, I knew that Edward was in deep pain. That he was about to have a mental break. The whole not touching and not looking at him was a sign that he had mental issues. I hope he gets some help. Bella has her own mental and emotional issues to deal with as well. I was hoping she would have been brave enough to go to him instead of running away. I also have questions about Bella's finances. She lives in a dorm so she has no rent or utilities. She should have been able to save money from Edward. You only pay tuition at the beginning of the semester. She may have a carpayment. But some weeks she was making $1000. Plus she had her hotel job. She could not have that many expenses when she is too busy to shop. She should not have gotten behind when she quit that fast. She should have created a slush fund. Her old bar job she did not make $1000 a week or even $500. She should have been ahead of the game.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOW....holy hell....can't wait for the newest update!! I am so dieing to know what happened!!!!
Great story!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
You go Bella!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOL...that was cruel!! I know it is only Jasper, but the way Alice did it was totally to catch Bella of guard!! Sneaky conniving pixie!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my goodness...quite the lil twist!! So, I am assuming the girl in the picture was/is Edward's daughter.....now I want to know what the hell happened and where is said daughter?!???!!???
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am so happy you found a new home for this story. I think you are just getting into the real meat of the story, especially in delving into the emotions involved, and the back story, which is what brought them to such a rocky existence to begin with. So I am thrilled that you are going to be able to continue without too much interruption. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jesus.. seriously, Roughie is one INTENSE son of a gun. I have never been so conflicted in fanfic as I am with him, I want to hate him, but he is so fascinating!! I just can't wait to see you peel back his layers! *sigh* I love you jada :-)
Date: 20 Apr 2011 7:04 AM Title: Prologue
He sound so curel why is she putting up with this.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:37 AM Title: Prologue
i fucking love this story please update regularly, like everyday if you could, im totally addicted.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
God, I am so enjoying re-reading FYW - there is shit I missed before! Like the waxer dressing like an extra from Dirty Dancing - LOL - mine does too... maybe it goes with the profession or something?
Bella is one strong woman, that is for sure! And as this is my second read of FYW, I know she only gets stronger.. takes quite a woman to put up with Roughie, but I am sure we would all like to have a go at that.. heehee.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
We are so glad you are here. The spoiltone and I know a thing or two about getting kicked off ff.com. But then again, if that hadn't happened, there would be no place like TWCS. (Silver lining.. yeah). I hope you find a happy home here, and if you need anything, or have a hard time with anyone here, please let us know.
As you said, while we respect others opinions, we will not tolerate death threats. That's just... wrong. I mean come on people. it's fiction. it's fun. it's not real.
Thanks for a wonderful story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
so scary.. I would fall over..what an intense moment.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh gosh.. so sad. what has happened to our Edward. sniffle
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Gosh you´ve got me over a barrel with this one! What´s the deal with Alice and who´s the mysterious man? Is it Angryward? Lol! Off to see! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
well.. yes.. I would say corner.. as in now she can offically stand on one.. hahahaha.. kidding.
Angela was right.. she needed it hard.
WOW.. what a chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Gah. I am loving this story so much. Words can't even express it, but I'll try since this is, after all, a review. Love the concept, love how ballsy it is, love your incredible talent for writing. I can definitely see how this may not be for everyone, but, for those it is, this is pure pervy gold. FYW is shaping up to be one of my favorite fics of all time. I stay away from WIPs because I'm an impatient little thing but I could NOT stay away from this. Blinkie+prologue and I never had a prayer.
As for some kind of useful commentary, now that I've sufficiently expressed my adoration of this story... After the events of the last chapter or two I am wondering what turn things are gonna take with E & B given the status of their agreement and the things that have come to light. I luffs Roughie and his hot, angsty, totally twisted lemontality. I'm anxiously hoping that's not over! Or at least continues in one form or another. And I secretly hope this fic lasts forever! ;) So keep up the ridiculous hotness, keep Roughie ruff, and fortheloveofgod please update as fast as your talented little fingers can!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Okay.. so is Alice really a bitch? I just can't tell. And yes, we do have a glimpse into our Bella.. Great chapter
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story has me completely sucked in....
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
I just read everything you have here, and I am completely hooked. I want to know what the hell is happened between the Cullens, please don't leave us hanging too long.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am so into your story....and I was totally pissed when I couldn't find it my fanfiction favorite stories list. So glad I was able to search and find it here as I can't wait to see where this story goes from here. Thanks for sharing your "fictional" story!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
I about shit when i first read this.. like really.. I just knew it was him... but you are so sneaky. love it
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap this is crazy!!! And AWESOME lol!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
hehe - he is a cocky son of a bitch..
I so feel for your Bella - talk about being between a rock and a hard place. Out of all the hundreds of versions of Bellas I have read, FYW Bella really needs for someone to cut her some slack. She deserves some pleasure in her life - but I suppose that is what Roughie is for! hehe
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
humm... very interesting.. still analyzing everything thing he says.. this chapters conclusion ---- he is a fucker of huge perportions.
I don't even have a degree in Phyc.. can you believe it.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can you imagine? She would be under some serious post traumatic sexing disorder..Okay.. here is the thing. I am reading this again..(so I can review each chapter.. he he he.) and I am noticing things this time around. Things that Edward is saying that make..more since? Maybe? I mean he is clearly fucked up, but things like.. "You want to take and take and take. But not from me you won't" That is a very interesting statement knowing what I know now. HUMMM..
Shit who am I kidding.. I am just along for the ride. and loving it.
Love it..
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
I LIKE A CLEAN WORK SPACE... HA HA HA HA.. He is a real fucker..that one. But funny. I may put that on my husband's facebook. he he he..
Love it..
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well holy shit... More soon please? I am curious as to what Esme knew about.. Poor Edward... Poor Esme..
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
This shit is deep! You´ve got me speechless, not something easy to do! Can´t wait to find out more back story. Will we ever get a EPOV. I´d love a minute or two inside his angry head! Great job, love the story!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi Jada - how are you babe? I hope Roughie is liking his new home!
I don't think I have ever felt so conflicted with an Edward before, part of me wants to tell Bella "RUN" and part says "DO IT" - guess which bit is bigger.. yeah the "DO IT" part .. lol Hell, I would have done it for free... but I am a hoor.
Since you have relocated to TWCS, I have decided to re-read Roughie as I go and I don't think I have told you before, but truly, FYW is so eloquently written - you have such a talent, girl! I am so looking forward to re-reading - onto the next chappy I go! AV oxo
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
SO looking forward to seeing what happens next. Please write faster. LOL.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story. I can't wait for more.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my god! Poor Edward. I wanna know what happened to his daughter soooo bad. And wonder what Esmehas to do with it. This is awesome! I'm checking for updates like everyday!!! LOL
Date: 19 Apr 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
WOW....what a dick!!! However, there is obviously something that has happened to him to make him this way!!
I am going to give him the benefit of the doubt and see if he redeems himself!! LOL
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yes....you're the best for posting these all in a row to get us caught up!!!!!!
I must say that Edward is quite the fucker in this story...although I sadly...I still want him!! LOL
Nearly pissed myself at his comment "I like my work space clean" while referring to her "hair"...LMAO!!!
Great chapter!!! Okay...on to the next chappie!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Okay I panicked when I saw this story wasn't on my FFN alert list. Thank God I found it here. Whew!! I wouldn't put too much stock in those negative reviews claiming you're ruining the women's movement or whatever. When I see reviews like that the thing that comes to mind is "Wow, somebody seriously needs to get laid". Speaking of which, isn't it almost time for my hubby to come home from work? :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving the story - dying to read the next chapter! C x
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
4/19/11 (12)
Man! You are one talented, mad, crazy writer, and I thank you for that. I mean this in a very good way. FYW's first chapter pulled me in and as I read the ones that followed, I became addicted.
The words you write are so much more than ink on paper. I can actually visualize the settings, taste the atmosphere and feel the emotions in each chapter. Your ability to tie the characters together is astounding.
I admit, you've spoiled me by publishing the first 12 chapters so quickly, that I'll die of thirst waiting for weekly updates now.
How old are Bella and Edward?
Date: 19 Apr 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my god this story is AMAZING!!! Im addicted!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
So...I'm so very conflicted about this fic of yours. On one hand, I'm disgusted but damnit I read every word. I ran through so many different emotions that I can't seem to settle on just one. On the other hand, I am ashamed to admit that the idea is intriguing. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapters!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
I really like your story. I can't wait for my chapters and I love the inner struggle with both Edward and Bella. It's great.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
So, I happen to really like this story and cannot wait to see where it goes!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:58 PM Title: Prologue
Wow!! This is great, absolutely amazing! I read tons of fics but few really capture my interest, but this one really does, well done! I remember reading the first two chapters, but then lost track of this story. Soooooo glad I found it again!! Cannot wait for your updates! Lots of love
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well that was sure a twist. I had the feeling that Roughie here might have been jaded by a woman but never would I have thought that there was a baby involved. Wow. Anywho, would it be incorrect of me to assume that there might be a little happy in store for us? Not that I don't like all the angst but happy is nice too... lol.
Looking forward to see Edward's reaction to 1) Bella's presence at the wedding and 2) his night in jail (he does have to spend the night right?).
CrimsonR
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:16 PM Title: Prologue
Phew!! I was frightened to death that your little epilog is preparing us to tell that the story is over.
I must say, Jada you are one hell of a writer, Your ability to make me sitted and gaped at the screen for hours is fabulous. And not only that . I dislodged my children from my working room (with computer) and told them that they are on their own to find someting for dinner, with one word - NOT NOW!
Somewhere in the middle of the story I realized that I`m not reading some fluffy FF fairy tale, but real drama - that`s probably the reason why those imbeciles on FF had pull out your story (I don`t go there for a year, because the best stories are censored or banned), or maybe it`s because your style ( God knows I had to have opened three dictionary to stay in a stride with you - you probably using some sort of synonimes that they had never heard).
Anyway, I admire you. You have one of the most intriging banner, which probably draw thousands of us in just one night. Of course it guide us to some juicy erotic story. And after that you masterly hook us up to full drama. Elusively. Last time I was so head deep in some story was when I red Wide awake.
So , phew ... thank God that there are only 12 chapters, now I can go back to normal functioning, and DAMN! ...there are only 12 chapters , I wont to read some more!
And, please keep youre Bella as such as she was up to this time. She is strong, silent fighter . I adore her as well.
Love....one of your fans.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOVE this! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
more, more, more... I cant wait to understand the background. it is just has to be something that makes edward like this with his family, again, not that it makes it ok but you can just feel his pain.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
I just started reading this story last night. I am hooked, I can't wait to find out what has gotten Edward to this point in his life. Bella has never had love in her life and with Edward its nothing new it just takes everthing that stresses her out away for a little while. Till she see's him as a man who has loved and then for some reason has lost everything including himself, is ther any hope for him or Bella? I can't wait till the next update.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow that was a fucking awesome chapter.
you got my attention now..................
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, that's all I can say, just simply amazing. I just cannot even think straight after reading this all. It's been a long, long time since a fanfiction story grabbed me, but this is simply incredible. Thank you, thank you, thank you, for sharing your amazing gift with all of us. I cannot really think straight at the moment to make any logical comments about the characters, but I will in the future.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Fuck has edwad's arrived...........?????
Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh, i really want to know what happen to make Edward such a ass.... i think i know but need to know for sure
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
love this chapter.....are we gonna get EPV.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella asshole for a father. downtrodden mother.
and slut to a pig.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
she needs to run and not look back........but she won't
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
The thing is she signed up for this. Her family fu..s her over. You have to give her something redeeming. She has got to smarten up. Stop caring about these people who do NOT care for her. She has got to survive. Take his money and don't give a shit about him. Just do it and leave. Her family have degraded her to this.
I can not stay long if you don't give her a plan and some outlet of happiness.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
ugh just to get through college. Well some strip etc. I know some girls do this all over campus for nothing. So I guess to be compensated , I would want some rules myself. No exposure down the line. I want that in writing and huge penalties if he exposed me.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think someone hurt Edward.
That why he he just fucks without emotion.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ssssooo, I have been a bit speechless. I always hate Assward, this one takes Ass to a whole new level. BUT I see some pain coming that he is trying to work through...not that that give him reason to treat Bella so wrong, but then again she agreed and is getting paid so I can't hate Edward too much right now. Looking forward to reading more... I know we have an EPOV coming???
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow unemotional motherfucker.
Bella's gonna get hurt.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:22 PM Title: Prologue
well I am not sure if I will be long.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:42 PM Title: Prologue
what a bastardl
Well that got me from the start
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh damn!! This is going to be an interesting story for me...love these kinds....
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
At times I hate to see Edward like this but its a great story and I am happy that you are writing it and that you found a newe "home" for it...I enjoy this story a lot!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Gosh, FF is getting ridiculous!! I'm glad you have your story here and can't wait for the next chapter!Don't worry about the death threats, they don't have nothing better to do, or they are jealous of your naughty imagination ;-). Keep writing and update soon pls!!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:04 PM Title: Prologue
Wow, I didn't know your story and I began to read it yesterday. I'm still in the beginning but I have to say that this Darkward seems very dark and I like it...
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
That was quite unique. Not in a bad way, I am intrigued by this story. I have never read one like it and it is kind of nice to have a change. And I may like the fact that Edward is not obsessing over Bella... :) lol However the crashing sounds make me think there is more to the story than I think. And I know I have asked once before, but, will there be any EPOV in the story? I am really eager to see things from Edward's perspective... (If you don't currently have plans to, then may I just add... Please, Please, Please?)
♥♥♥
Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jada...wow... you are one exciting writer!!! You keep us all on the edge of our seats, can't wait for your update!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing this fic with us!!!!!!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
I must say that it would sadden me to meet this Edward if he was directing this emotion towards me. But, at least he is straight forward and honest about what he wants and what he intends to do... :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow...fans self!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
So hapy you have moved your story here! Love the blinkie! SO HOT!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks awsome chapter as always
Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am so glad you posted the story here. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow. My friend Footroza rec'd this story to me and I"m so glad she did. I can't believe how much I love Roughward already. You've got me wondering if he will be able to keep this strictly business It would be awesome to see Bella slowly chip away at his cold exterior. If that doesn't happen this will still be one hell of a ride :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow ! Fantastic tory can't wait for more. nicely done.
THANKS :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
WOW!!!! This just made my night....I hope you plan on updating soon...or I may just implode!! I don't think I could love this story more!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
YAY, all caught up
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm so glad you found your way over. We're very chill here. I started posting my Darkella story here a few weeks ago. I think they'll treat you well.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow.. death threats? LOL OMFG that is a little extreme huh?
If you have any problem please email me I am one of the owners of this website so I can put a stop to anything like that happening here to you. OMG.. sorry a little shocked at that one..
And yes we all get booted off FF.net for being naughty *wink* and we didn't complain either rules are rules which is why we built this place. :)
Loving your story can't wait for the next installment.
TSO xxx
Author's Response:
Well, not LITERAL death threats. But I definitely got some pretty nasty words thrown at me. BUT, the majority of the readers were fantastic and are really great friends now. I'm really impressed by how relaxed and welcoming my reception has been on your sight. The enthusiastic perv in me feels quite at home. Thank you very much for writing! And I'll keep it in mind!!!
~jada~
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:12 AM Title: Prologue
That's one thing I don't like about #FF just one person can complain and your out. Here's the deal this story is rated M for mature why then do they read it and complain no one forced them to read it. I think that they are jealous really. Your story is that good.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Run... honestly I would hide.. LOL
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am so glad you posted FYW on here. I can't believe #FF?! They do this all the time it's not fair but I'm happy your back. Love this story. Between Bella and Edward I don't know who is worse emotionally?
Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMFG okay please update...
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh I am still wanting to know why the door slam and he chose her.. this is so good..
Thank you for putting this story on here.. :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:45 AM Title: Prologue
So glad you found a new home for your story! I was (am) really annoyed first with the shrew that reported it and then with FFn for pulling it. You are a great writer and this is a really interesting story with many twists and turns. Looking forward as you unfold them for us. Thanks for finding a new home so quickly when you could have just given up. Looking forward to your getting caught up with the story in it's new home and the the new chapters.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
awww..... I am so curious what is going to happen here.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is so good! I should be sleeping.. but you keep adding chapters and i cant resist!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMFG.... knew it had to happen but omg..
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh this is really interesting..
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow... again..
I so want to know what is really going on here... this is really interesting..
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have been following this story on Fan Fic, so glad you brought it here when they pulled it. Cant wait til you get it to the same point it was on there.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
4/18/11 (3)
My thoughts:
1. Edward's had his eye on or has known something about Bella for awhile now.
2. E had something to do with B loosing her weekend job.
3. E is somehow involved with the "review" of her slipping grades in her college program.
4. He's one cocky son-of-a-bitch, & made it almost impossible for B to turn him down.
What's his game? Why only her? Will we get EPOV?
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Trying to find your story!!!! Hate that FF pulled it. Hope you update all the chapters here so we can keep reading!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOL oh wow... ouch...
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
So... I'm just wondering.... Is this going to eventually be a love story?? Just curious!! :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:51 AM Title: Prologue
Glad to see your story here. Please catch up soon with where you were on ff.
Im dying to see what happens next.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOL that cocky son of a bitch..
poor Bella..
this is really good.. can't wait to read more :)