Date: 10 Jul 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, that was amazing ! So happy Rose is nice to Bella :) Even if Edward is stubborn, I know he will make it :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward Snr is a bit of a nightmare. What is his deal? Does he not want Bella in his home? Your Rosalie makes a nice change. Bella needs a friend, if Edward will let her have one.
As always I am anxious to know more.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
thanks good chapter
Date: 08 Jul 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, that was amazing :) Really loved it!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
He is showing restraint, that has to be a good thing. The dinner should be interesting. lol
Date: 05 Jul 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward needs to be firm but kind. He needs to talk and explain more to Bella. She needs to realize that she is better off with him than Aro or someone else. She does not realize how bad it could be if she was with some one else.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Rose is going to make Bella feel like shit, like she's beneath her. Bella's probably going to retreat to her shell like self causing Edward to be pissed and somehow Esme to find out. Interesting dinner indeed, I can't wait to see if I'm right. Plus if she jump every time your boyfriend moved people are going to start to think things
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait to find out what happen at dinner
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so sucked into this story. You have a great way of pacing the plot that keeps me enthralled. Thank you for sharing this.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
well at least he behaved himself somewhat in this chapter. i am glad to see he is actually thinking some. can't wait to see the family dinner...
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow, a family dinner....this should be interesting! I'm wondering if there is another reason Bella is afraid to meet Carlisle. I'm hoping Edward's conscience is really growing and he won't do anything to Bella while they are at dinner. I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks for the great update.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
im excited to see what happens with the parents
Date: 04 Jul 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like that his talk with Alice is making him think but he still doesn't get it. I'm sure if he had askd Bella to play the part she would be now she is scared and will possibly slip up. Look forward to your next update.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
He is being better but still is talking about punishing her
Date: 04 Jul 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
Your story has me intrigued, and I love an Edward who doesnt back down to a whiney Bella! ;)
Date: 04 Jul 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
Inside Edward's little bubble, everything goes as he wants and plans it. The world around doesn't. He had been trying to not go out into it. He ran out of luck. The way things turn out tonight isn't left to just him and Bella, everyone around may leave an impression. We'll have to wait and see how it goes.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh boy this should be good with Rose and all- thanks for another chapter
Date: 04 Jul 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh I hope that Rose outs Edward in front of mom. Poor Bella always being afraid of punishment. Should be an interesting evening!
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
That would be a "YAY" from me!!!! Keep the chapters/updates coming!!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad Edward listened to what Alice had to say. He even listened to Bella. I hope he can figure thing out and make things better for Bella and himself. Maybe there is hope for him yet. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ok, I get it, he is not going to let her go, but why doesn't he try to fiugre out a way that she will want to stay. I wonder how he will ever learn. Great job..thanks!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
And he says she is not a slave. Maybe he has a dictionary down in the library. I just can't believe he did that to her. I don't know that he will ever be able to dig out of the hole he has gotten himself into. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
He is going to have to change his attitude towards her if he wants to show her what a great guy he is. It is sad he has to eavesdrop to find out what she is thinking. If he was nicer, I am sure she will tell him things. Greqt job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
I would like to take a belt to Edward at this point. He is something else. Just takes and doesn't really take her into consideration. This would go a lot better for both of them if he could have approached things differently. Thanks!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
I wish Jasper could have talked some sense into Edward. This is not going to be pretty I am sure. I feel so bad for Bella....she has been through so much!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh edward needs a kick in his ass lol
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am all for yay I am glad he didnt blow up at Alice she is telling him the way it is and I think he did a good job at lisening but he can only hear so much. He needs to have a dream that puts him in Bella's shoes ;)
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward has a lot to learn. He could make this all a lot easier on himself. I guess he will learn the hard way. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
I have a feeling that Edward is going to regret the way he is treating Bella. He could be a little nicer, but I guess that is not the way his life is. Great job..thanks!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope Jasper can help Edward and Alice can help Bella through this. How old is Edward? Great job...thanks!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I feel bad for Isabella. I can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward didn't like the conversation he had with Alice, but it was extremely needed. He has to hear things from others, and then to think it all over, talk some more so he can figure out the how to get to Bella. He needs it so he, and her may be happy.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
im glad that he is finlall ygetting it thru his thick skull!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think there may be hope for our boy after all. His talk with Alice will surely make him think about changing his ways. I can understand how he feels about maintaining his persona in the business..he can't appear weak. But I think his feelings about his mother's treatment will influence his feelings about Bella. This was an excellent chapter. I'm really enjoying your story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
Excellent, it is going to take Edward a bit, but Alice has now planted the seed of doubting certain things.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
He has feelings for her and he doesn't know what to do about them. Not so much to understand really. he's just confused and he will come around.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
i cant wait to see what happenes next.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
I like th plot you have going so far. It looks like its going in a awesome direction where hopefully Bella and Edward can help each other out.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
still an ass not total ass but still an ass! i like alice i am so glad she has enough nerve to step up to edward! :) thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Alice is brave. She has got him thinking though. Good chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, that was amazing :) Really loved it! At least Edward listened to Alice and didn't shut her out :) Cannot wait to see what happens next
Date: 13 Jun 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
So makes me wonder why he has not claimed as yet. He keeps wanting but has not really made any move to go after it.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
ok, dickward is really stupid,how will she ever want to stay with him and he wants what Alice and Jasper have.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
I kinda wanted her to bite his ....
O well....
Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
she didnt listen. I wanna say good for her, but as he has no idea what he is doing is kinda of scary
Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
He is so over his head, he doesnt how to punish her, but he talks of it. guess he is a dickward, trying to be a darkward
Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
demanding with her, but i guess it is all he knows.. hope Alice or jasper sets him straight
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Not such a darkward... glad Emmett stepped away form the family biz
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
A darkward sort of.....
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella gave Edward plenty to think about. He had assumed she would obey and go along and think about him first. Easier said than done. She is in a place and situation she never imagined to find herself in. And one she can't get out of. To see all her hopes and dreams leave isn't easy, no matter how her body might feel, it's not her, just a part of. Edward is realizing there is so much to Bella he would like to figure, things he would like to share and give her, will he be able to do so?
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is used to people doing what he asks and what he wants. The later sometimes without him even saying it. Bella isn't doing either entirely, and that isn't going well with Edward. Not only that, but it seems others know things about her he doesn't yet. Control isn't always the way to go, as Edward will find out eventually.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
You are quite skilled in ensnaring the interest of your reader. I am certainly intrigued and look forward to seeing where you take this tale.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
At least he is showing that he has a heart in letting her express her feelings.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
well he may be kinda sorta getting close to getting it!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
wonder how long it will be before eddie pulls his head outta his ass? what will be the thing that makes him start to change?
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
eddie stop being an asshole thinking it is weak to be nice. you know she has been through a lot she is scared and now she has a bruised ass and doesn't like what you make her do and what you do to her. stop being an ass and be her friend. it is a good place to start
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
i really hope eddie starts thinking of bella and how hard all of this is for her.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
talk about being completely blind to every sign she is throwing off.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh eddie you can see that she is scared and has been through a lot and yet you are getting mad at her for being upset? dude totally ass-backwards and fucked up!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
no eddie you were suposed to listen to jasper!!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
i really hope that talking to jasper will help eddie realize that what he is doing will only hurt his chances with bella.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm edward thinking a little more
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great story maybe bella should be a little sexually curious OMG Edward is gorgeous and who wouldn't want him....LOL No prude Bella.
Thanks :)
Date: 12 Jun 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
i do not think that bella will like the shower arrangement.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's good that he finally allowed her to share her feelings, hope and dreams. This looks like it might be the beginning of a better understanding for themselves.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
poor bella! sounds like she has already had a rough go of it.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter, I have to hand it to Edward, he listened to her and is willing to try to help. ;)
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow hes just figuring it out! cant wiat till the next chapter
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ahhh Im so proud of both of them. Her for being brave and him for not allowing his inner douche to fuck everything up.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
This was such a good chapter! I loved that Bella told Edward exactly how she felt about sex with him, and about her dreams for her life. I still think he will end up wanting to please her more than wanting her to please him. He at least wanted to reciprocate this time. And I can't help it; he still makes me laugh sometimes. He is just so self-absorbed...since she was in the library and the door was locked, why not have sex with her. There just has to be hope for this idiot! Great chapter. Love your story.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
yay edward is getting it! loving this story
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter - loved it.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
duh ed you are such a douche bag!! i can't believe how stupid you are. thank you for voicing what i have been saying all along that you body can betray your mind she hates it stupid ass!! thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
I was at the beach when this chapter was posted. I was able to read it from iphone, but as always never able to post a review.
I am glad that Edward has not raped her physically yet. Mentally she is probably gone. I do appreciate the slow education, but it is going to get way worse rather than better with time.
Thanks for the update. ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wish that Jasper could beat the crap out of Edward. Edward might call to get Jasper's advice, but he will not follow it. He is too damn egotistical. How can he be so sensless? Bella will never learn to like him. He can think that way until the cows come home, but she will never like him if he stays this course.
He is so stupid. Damn, did he even go to college? I am sure that they had a mandatory science class he had to take to get his degree. Shit, I teach high school, and we have delved into the issue I am about to mention. Again I ask is Edward an idiot? Mentally ill?
Yes, Bella's body is going to react to what Edward is doing to her physically. That is the way our bodies are built. She is going to get wet, she is going to make sounds, and she will orgasm, but it is only her body reacting to the stimulation. Her mind tries to fight the feelings, but the body will always win. That is why some rape victims feel even worse about themselves after all is said and done because at first they were dry. but their bodies betray them and get wet with the continued stimulation. The reason they feel worse is because their mind was begging for it to be over and that it did not want this to happen, but they feel gulity toward themselves because they physically got excited. Also, some rapist talk trash while they are committing the act, "Yeah, I know you like it because you are so slick and wet." Some of the victims wind up thinking that maybe they secretly wanted it to happen/continue because of the biological response of the body.
I hate Edward everytime he does anything physical to her. He is basically raping her body, and what is even worse is that he is raping her mind even worse than her body. It is hard to recover from situations like that. I personally have been forced to committ physcial acts that I did not want to do, but my body betrayed me after awhile and I got off. It is the biggest mind fuck that I have ever been through. Eventhough, I am not in the exact same situation as Bella is, I can empathise with her.
I really do hope that Jasper can talk some sense into Edward.
I am also pissed that he is surprised that she let her hold her while she was crying. He may be a monster, but he is the only and I mean the only person Bella has. I am sure that she was pissed at herself that she let him comfort her, but she needed someone. Edward was/is the only available person period. Sometimes you take what you can get.
Thank you for the update. Maybe Edward will find some redeeming qualities between now and when you post again.
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wwow, that was amazing! I am glad Edward is slowly but surely getting closer to understanding Bella :) Cannot wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella but in truth as a slave owner Edward may be an ass but she could have had much worse. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Right now it seems like she's just going through the motions not really feeling anything he wants her too. She's taking her mind somewhere else. At this point he's never gonna get her love. I have to wonder about Aro, if he wanted her then why did he put her on the sailing block in the first place?
Date: 06 Jun 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, Edward is still acting like a caveman. At least he let her get some books to read. Wonder what Aro is up to? I'm suspicious.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Stupid, stupid guy should listen to Jasper. She's going to end up detaching herself from reality at this rate.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
That was another intense chapter.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my I ask me when Edward really will broke the spirit of Bella??? because I really want to see him beg for Bella lol I really like this Edward although he is funny!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well I think he needs to give her more pleasure and definietly give her kisses. That is the way he is going to win her over.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
what on earth is Aro asking about Bella for? hum Edward is still so clueless poor fella
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
he is a cocky sob lol hope bella gives him more sass
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
i love this story. i get sooooo excited when it updates! update soon
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
well i hope sooner or later he talks to jasper !
Date: 04 Jun 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
What a blow to his ego ....it was just "OK"?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved this chapter! Edward really isn't making much progress. He is just so clueless that he almost makes me laugh. But I think Bella will eventually get him to realize what he is doing to her. Instead of her wanting to please him, I think he is going to start wanting to please her. And what's up with the phone call from Aro? Sounds like there may be trouble ahead with him. I'm really enjoying your story. Looking forward to the next update. Great chapter!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
When is he going to go beg Jasper for help because he will??? He is a prick but doesnt know that he is???
Date: 04 Jun 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ut oh....does Edward spank?
Date: 04 Jun 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edwards a bit stern ... I wonder if he will ever loosen up?