Date: 04 Jun 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! I don't mind waiting for updates, RL gets in the way ;) Cannot wait to see what will happen next :)
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
still being the a-hole edward. poor bells...
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
well he he is bringing her into her sexuality slowly now, that is better than forcing !!! And i woudl trade places to watch him jack off anyday !!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yeah he's gonna take a while to wrap his head around the fact that she isn't your girlfriend if she doesn't have the free will to deny nor will he ever have her love and trust
Author's Response:
He's definitely having a hard time wrapping his head around anything. Thanks for reading & reviewing. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 01 Jun 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
good chapter can;t wait for more
Date: 01 Jun 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, atleast he has not forced her to have sex yet. I am sure that issue will be coming sooner rather than later.
I really like this story, and I want to apologize for not reviewing every chpater. My iphone will not let me leave a review on this site, but it will allow me to review on fanfiction.net.
Until next chapter...
Author's Response:
I really appreciate you review & please don't apologize for not doing it before. I'm just glad that you are reading and enjoying the story. I know what you mean about the smart phone. I can't even get TWCS on mine only ff.net. I love to try to catch up on stories when I'm waiting someplace else. Thanks again for your review. :)
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
Personally I think it is more liek Edward has only taken one step forward and about five steps back. He is such an ASS! Hopefully one of these days he will get his comupins adn Bella will be the one to hand them to him. ;) Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You're right. It is more like one step forward and five back. He is an ass ... he's not use to the 'real world' only getting everything he wants and not taking others feelings into account. I'm glad you are liking my story, and thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my poor Bella!!! is getting very hard to get Edward to redeem!!! hope you can come back soon I loved how snippy Edward are!!!
xoxo
Date: 31 May 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward, Edward. He's a little slow on the uptake, no? His inner musings crack me up. He's really clueless to Bella's plight. Look forward to next update.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating. It is so encouraging reading reviews. Thanks again! :)
Date: 31 May 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
I like it. I am wish that Edward would give her more pleasure. I think if he gave her the pleasure and showed her how good it could be she would be more willing to give herself to him.
Author's Response:
She'll get more pleasure even though she's not sure she wants it. Her head just keeps telling her to fight it. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Date: 31 May 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
It's amazing how clueless guys can be at times. But if you asked them it would be perfectlyclear. For Edward Bella's situation is not bad, on the contrary he seems to think she should be thankful for it. Don't see that happening. He is trying to establish some type of relationship, sadly he isn't doing a very good job at it.
Author's Response:
I can't thank you enough for all your reviews. It is so helpful to get someone else's take on the story. Thanks so much. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward didn't want to talk with James but it turned out to be good for him. Okay, listening to people's converaations isn't right, but it does give the listener something to consider.
Bella is in a much better place than Victoria. Edward thinks that if she sees that, she will change, not so sure. But she does need to open up, Edward needs to help her, we'll have to see how that goes.
Date: 31 May 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward accoplished what he wanted, several things. He proved he will punish her if he said he would. The punishment won't be easy on her. She has to obey, even if she is scared and clueless thatbwon't change Edward's mind and plan.
Date: 31 May 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks For the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading & reviewing. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
yeah he needs someone to hit him over the head
Author's Response:
He definitely needs to be hit over the head. I appreciate you reading and reviewing .. it means a lot. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response:
Love to get smiles ... thanks! :)
Date: 31 May 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward and us got a bit of information abot her past. It has been a bad one for a while, even more recently. She is scared and realizes she has no choice or opinion aout her life now, that has to be overwhelming, onwonder she tried to hide in the bathroom. Unfortunately for her Edward got very upset about it. What ever sign of nice he might have showned before, is gone now.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love it, I think we are starting- ever so slowly - to see that Edward is seeing Bella in a different light! After all he did see the bruises he left on her and that did not make him feel good. So that's slow! But then he forced her to do something for him... we shall see ... love the story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I love reading what people think of the story ... whether it be good or bad. I'm so glad your liking the story. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
He was almost human there...ALMOST.
Author's Response:
Almost definitely. It'll probably be a while before he gets rid of his selfishness .. even then probably not completely. Thanks for reading & reviewing. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward's behavior is surely scaring Bella even 'ore, something that ,ight have seemed impossible. He is short temperd and can't stand not being in control. He proved it when he saw how easily Alice and her talked with each other. Also Jasper's words were not what he wanted to hear. He will have to figure most on his own, which won't be easy since Bella is scared of him, of course.
Date: 31 May 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, that was amazing! I know Edward is trying, but maybe he should try a little bit harder. I know he and Isabella will be AMAZING together, once they can work out their problems :)
Author's Response:
He needs to try harder. He amazingly thinks he is trying. One day he'll have his 'Aha' moment. Thanks for reading & reviewing. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
He isn't being a nice guy but he could be much worse, yes, that's not any comfort to her, but the alternative would be so much worse.
It won't be simple; it amazes me he would think it would be... I guess is a guy withpower thing. He has to admit she is't doing too bad, considering the situation.
There's so much ,ore besides clothes he hasn't considerd or think about, he is going to need lots of help. From what we know so far, Jasper and Alice will probably be willing to help, that's good news.
Date: 31 May 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
Another good one. I can't help but laugh at the way Edward's mind works. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your repeat reviews. I'm so happy that you are liking my story. It is always so encouraging to read a review. Thanks again for reading & reviewing. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
He made a good choice by simply going to sleep and not put any ,ore pressure on her. He realized it had to be overwheming for her, it shows he isn't rutheless.
He also realized things will go better if he has an idea on what to do. He will get all the information he possibly can. Meanwhile, his iggest concdr is her escaping. Would she? She has no one and no where o run to.
Date: 31 May 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Gave us the basic i formation we needed to be interested in keep reading. Enough about how they get the girls, the why and a bit on both main characters...
Date: 31 May 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
keep going i love this story. it is getting better and better with every chapter
Author's Response:
I can't express enough how much it means that you are reading & reviewing my story. The reviews keep me going. Thanks. :)
Date: 31 May 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
You are so right...Edward keeps going backwards just when we think he may be getting better. He is used to people doing what he wants and women thinking he is wonderful. I'm so glad Bella is telling him exactly how she feels about being with him. I can't help but laugh at how surprised he is that she isn't happy to be with him. What an idiot! I love your story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Edward has a very high opinion of himself. Hopefully he'll be able to regard others more highly soon. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing. It means so much! :)
Date: 31 May 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
again not happy with you ed... you tell him bella he is a butthead... i am glad you told him how it is she is a slave not matter how you want to cover it up. again just because your body responds doesn't mean you enjoy it you sure are an arogant a-hole! thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Edward is most certainly an arrogant ass. I'm glad you are liking the story and reviewing. Reviews always make me smile :) --see ...Thanks!
Date: 31 May 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
well i hope that he talks to someone! cant wait to see whats instore for bella next
Author's Response:
He'll be getting a talking to soon ... whether he likes it or not. Thanks for reading & reviewing my story. It means so much and always encourages me. :)
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yummy!! Wam Bam Indeed!! We hope Edward stays dominant with her and gives her more lessons!! We would love that!! WOW!! You are an awesome writer and Author!! Please we cant wait for the next update!! You are AMAZING!! YOUR ADORING AND FAITHFUL FANS, THE FANFIC GIRLS READING ROUP!! All 46 of us!! , Anna, Gina , Marie , Jackie , Frances , Rita , Irene , Larissa , Carey , Maureen , Denise , , Pauline , and the rest of us here!! and me!! Teewhy1977
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you for the ego-inflating review. I actually needed that. Please pass along my thanks to all 46 of you. I really appreciate your support and look forward to reading your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. Poor Bella, Edward just can't get it through to his head.
Author's Response:
He's a stubborn one. Thanks for reading & reviewing. :)
Date: 30 May 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really love your story I didn't think I would as I thought Bella would be weak but have to say loving it. I just can't see how Edward can't now understand were she is at when she has said she feels like a slave, but it should be fun as he starts to realize. Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response:
It takes awhile for him to see anyone's point of view. He thinks he understands but he really doesn't. He can be so clueless. Bella is getting braver ... basically because she feels she has nothing to lose. Thanks so much for reading & reviewing. :)
Date: 30 May 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
He's a bit thick headed, eh? She's equally stubborn. Perhaps there will be some meeting in the middle?
Author's Response:
They are both stubborn but Edward is by far worse. I think eventually they'll meet in the middle but Edward's thoughts are a little too deep seated right now. Thanks so much for reading & reviewing. I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 30 May 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
He thinks he is really smart but I dont think he is . What is he going to do about Aro and Mrs. Cope???? What is he going to do about her b-day oh ya she got to swallow his cum I dont think she liked her present.
Author's Response:
No, he's definitely not as smart as he thinks he is. I don't even know yet what or if he'll do anything about Aro or Ms. Cope. Yeah, she did not enjoy her 'present'. I'm so glad that your reading my story. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 30 May 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great Chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked the chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dear Edward is a bit dense isn't he? Great chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Edward is totally dense. He'll learn ... someday. Thanks so much for reading & reviewing (& rating). It really means a lot .. very encouraging. Thanks again! :)
Date: 29 May 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
well i hope he starts to change a little! cant wait til lthe next chapter
Date: 29 May 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great job, I don't like James and was surprised how nice Victoria was. Can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Date: 29 May 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmmmm little by little he starts to see isabella
Date: 29 May 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well Edward really seems to want to be with her and not just use her for sex. As for James well he seems to abuse Victoria, I guess that is one way that Edward could show Bella that he is not like that if he helps Victoria get away from James.
Date: 29 May 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like that she has been able to talk to someone who is going through what she is. I'd like to see how Edward can prove he's not bad as he plans on raping her. I would think that she will take a lot to trust him in the long run. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2011 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really liked this chapter. I feel horribly sorry for Vicroria. Looking forward to the next.
Date: 29 May 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
WE WANT TO SEE EDWARDS MORE DARK AND KINKY SIDE PLEASE!!! HAVE HER GIVE HIM HEAD< AND THEN TAKE HER VIRGINITY AND ANALLY AND A REALLY REALLY DIRTY TALKING EDWARD>> HOW BOUT A LITTLE CARLISLE/EDWARD/BELLA ACTION?? ITS YOUR FAULT FOR BEING SO GOOD AT LEMONS!!! YOUR FANS< THE FANFIC GIRLS READING GROUP
Date: 29 May 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was amazing! I really hope that she can get used to him soon! Also, I thought Edward would want to rid Bella of her barrier before actually entering her, so that he wouldn't have to worry too much about the pain it would cause her (because not only is he taking her virginity...he also is huge, well, at least in my mind ;) hehe). Just wondering ;)
Date: 29 May 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward just thinks he is just great when is he going to relize he isnt.
Date: 29 May 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
ed you are a douche bag!! again forced orgasms aren't right!!! dumb ass!!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
Another great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good job with the Chapter, I think that we are seeing a slight melting of Edward in the sense that he's not wanting to beat her, he sees her beauty and her innocence! He sees what real monsters are and doesn't want to be like them.....
Good story.... I do think that Bella is fighting her feelings for Edward, but then again who wouldn't want to be with Edward - she will warm up!
Date: 26 May 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
i like this story:)
Date: 23 May 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder what damage his punishment did???? he sould kick his own ass
Date: 23 May 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well I liked the chapter I mean he didn't push her too bad. I mean she told him she didn't know how and he showed her so that was good. At least he gave her release too. lol. Good job.
Date: 23 May 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well this chapter was longer and for that I am thankful. I actually like EPOV more sometimes so hopefully you will keep that. I agree it seems like its not as easy as he thought it would be. lol
Date: 23 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well again I think the chapter are extremely short. 3-5 pages is not really what I would call a chapter. But I am enjoying the story. Its just hard to comment to much when we dont get very much information.
Date: 23 May 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well so far so good. I will continue to read this story and I really hope you do make the chapters longer as I love to read. It really sounds interesting and I am anxious to get into the story.
Date: 23 May 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is an ass... and so far, I've found nothing about him to like. I'm hooked now though because I have to see if he does change or if she gets him... lol.
Date: 23 May 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
it was... "ok"
ha ha ha ha.. I bet I am not the first one to say that... Seriously, this was wonderful. I really like it... but then I love dark and disturbing. lol
Thanks so much.
Date: 22 May 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
At least he isn't selfish. I do hope he begins to connect with her emotionally, too.
Date: 22 May 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
I just found this story and read through to chapter 6. I am interested to see what Edward's mother is like because obviously he has had too much of Carlisle's influence. I hope this story does not parallel "The perfect Wife" too much.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
thanks good chapter
Date: 22 May 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can't decide if Edward is just a really callous person, or if he just hasn't had anyone to teach him about relationships and feelings. At least he didn't get mad when she didn't know how to please him. He doesn't seem like a really mean person, just a clueless one. I am really enjoying your story. It is very well written; and I can't wait to see what happens with these two. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ah, Edward -- just couldn't help yourself, could you? Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Isabella. Good chapter.
Date: 22 May 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the ending. Edward's ego getting a little smack. Great job. ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yea! this is going to take a little time for her to trust him and feel comfortable with him to pleasure him because she wants to rather than because she has to... he will figure it out. He should listen to Jazz! Good story
Date: 22 May 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
You are doing great! Love the story and can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: 22 May 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
I didn't know if i would like this story because of how Edward was going to be but so far i have enjoyed it and i'm pleased that she didn't think her orgasm was great as it was forced. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 22 May 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
GAH, that was AMAZING! I think Isabella is just ignoring pleasure right now because she is scared of it. Edward will hopefully help her through that ASAP :) Cannot wait for more! :)
Date: 22 May 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
well he thinks hes god but hes really not! im excited to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella has had her bottom belted, given a reluctant hand job and received her first O, all in all quite a night.
Date: 22 May 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
well that just sucks for her... he practically is raping her... i hope you don't make him too bad because he won't be able to come back in my eyes no matter how he chants he loves her or buys her stuff,...it's rape plan and simple and he wants her to be happy you can make anyone have an orgasm even when they dont' want one... you suck ed!!
Date: 22 May 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is such a twit! lol
Date: 22 May 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope he doesnt go compleatly stupid and hurt her now.
Date: 22 May 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is a perv when will he pull his head out of his ass???
Date: 22 May 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edwards dickness is showing he is not thinking clearly I think. How far did Aro go with her did he rape her or is Bella still untouched that way???
Date: 22 May 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
at least he is not a total dick
Date: 22 May 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
sound desturbing i cant wait to read more lol
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved this chapter! And your Edward just blows my mind! One minute he feels sorry for her because she wasn't fed well. Then later he thinks how "she would enjoy anything she does for me". How arrogant can he get? And now he is going to punish her!?! You really have me hooked on this story. Can't wait for your next update. Great writing!
Date: 21 May 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this story is so intense! I'm really excited to see what will happen. I just read all 5 chapters in one sitting. Hope you can update soon.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh no. What is he going to do to Bella?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my that poor girl. What a selfish ass.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
I like Edward's pov. You can more or less guess what Bella's thinking. Excellent chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved the chapter. Its good to see he is not totally heartless.
Date: 21 May 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Lord he's an asshole.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love your chapters but do wish they were a little longer. It seems just when they are getting good, they end. So each chapter makes very little progress in the story. They may be how you intend it to be. I am not saying this is good or bad, just that I prefer to have a little more progress. But I can always just wait and read 2-3 chapters at once. It is a very good story so far. Thanks for the update! :~)
Date: 21 May 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
well i hope now he dosent push her
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
well your right, it was short - but I forgive you, your prety good about fast updates thanks for that BTW; as for me i apreciate them... its a very good story and I know that Edward will come around and soften up sooner or later.. He isn't 200% evil :-) just 90%!!! for now anyway.. JK LOL!!! I do like the story though.. TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Date: 20 May 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
okay please don't let him hurt her too much i thought you had her on the floor trying to kill herself... oh boy!!
Date: 20 May 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
She should have known better than to disobey. It's understandable that she would want to delay the inevitable as long as possible, but now she will be on the receiving end of a punishment and still have to take care of him. She is going to need to get tougher if she is going to survive this.
Date: 20 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
i cant wait to see the punishment! edward is effed up but i still love him!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jasper obviously learned the hard way. Great chapter.
Date: 19 May 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another good one, can't wait to see what happens next. ;)