Date: 19 May 2011 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love the fact that this will be in EPOV. I can't wait to see how things for from here. Great job. ;)
Date: 19 May 2011 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
At least he's not completely heartless. Great chapter. ;)
Date: 19 May 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting, can't wait to see where you take this. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
He's an idiot, but I expected that. Jasper needs to stay close or poor Bella is going to be hurt.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is an ass but I see potential. I'm nervous to see what Carlisle is like. Ugh!!
This is a very intriguing story and I can't wait to see where you take it.
Good job!
Date: 18 May 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow! he's an ass!
Date: 18 May 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
well i hope that he dosent do anything that hes going to regret
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
well she is 16 (lots and lots of kids are sexually active by that age) so I am not going to cateorgerize E as a Pedi! BUT he is going to force her soooooooo I hold my opinion in reserve toward our MeanWard! StrictWard! Yeah thats going to be what I call him StrictWard!
Good story, interesting how he doesn't care if he ever falls in love, and how he doesn't want to listen to the word of Experience in his brother Jasper!
Good story!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow the history behind Alice and Jasper was un-expected. Hope Edward see's the light and soon
Date: 17 May 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward's pretty dry. Hopefully as their relationship progresses we'll see some of his personality come out. Thanks for the update.
Date: 17 May 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
thanks for the update you sure are fast. what a butthole he is... why can't he listen to jasper? poor bella... i wish she could escape!!
Date: 17 May 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Gah, that was amazing! I really loved it so much :) I cannot wait to see what the rules are ;) Also, I know Edward says love isn't part of the plan...famous last words ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
thanks good chapter
Date: 17 May 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
i cant wait to see the next chapter. i would love to hear more of alice's and jaspers relationship
Date: 17 May 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Date: 17 May 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
emmmm very interesting story plzzz up date soon
Date: 17 May 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
so far interesting, will it always be epov? not that there is anything wrong with that , i actually prefer Edwards pov on most things
Date: 17 May 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is a Freak of nature. Poor Bella.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
well poor Bella yes he is insistant great story
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm ready to read more. This story is really moving along.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, it's hard to feel sorry for Edward. That was a great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
Date: 16 May 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
it has been a while since i have gotten excited that a story has updated. keep up the good work
Date: 16 May 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor bella.....my heart breaks for her; I am glad she is away from Aro! Looking forward to more!
Date: 16 May 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love hearing EPOV!
Date: 16 May 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I hope Edward takes better care of Bella than Aro!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really enjoyed this chapter. At least Edward does feel a little sorry for her and realizes how young she is. So there is hope for him. Thanks for the quick updates. I'm loving your story.
Date: 16 May 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ed you are a...... okay i have nothing nice to say about you so i won't say anything at all...poor bella i would be crying too....
thanks for the update you are quick! :)
Date: 16 May 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh good. I like stories that stick to one point of view. Leave the rest to our imaginations! Interested to see how this story unfolds.
Date: 16 May 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, that was amazing :) I cannot wait to see how everything changes between them. Good to see how old he is ;) Loved it so much :)
Date: 16 May 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 16 May 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
i'm loving it so far, can't wait for more :)
Date: 16 May 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
I still see the possibilities with this story and look forward to the future chapters and longer chapters.
Date: 16 May 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
ed you are not a nice guy right now and a little stupid!! hummm i hope you get better..
Date: 16 May 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
not cool doesn't look good for bella
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is very good you have a tough yet tender side to this mobward cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
well i very much like your concept and this chapter is such a tease of what could be forthcoming
cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
I enjoy the chapters whatever the size.
Date: 16 May 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! Cannot wait to see the rules and things ;) YAY!
Date: 16 May 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Gah, this sounds amazing so far! I cannot wait to see what happens next! Will we find out how old Edward is, since Bella is 16?
Date: 15 May 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
im still liking this update soon!
Date: 15 May 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
so far its really good and i like it
Date: 15 May 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
i like it and can't wait for more
Date: 15 May 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
im intrested t osee where this goes
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for the update! :~)
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is getting good. I am ready for more.
Date: 15 May 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Intersted so far. Need a little more info on Edward
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the beginning! I think this is going to be very interesting. Can't wait for the next update. Good work!!
Date: 15 May 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
i think i am going to really like this stoy!
Date: 15 May 2011 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very intrigued. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Date: 15 May 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
well. I do like it... Can't wait for more...
Date: 15 May 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh shit. How old is Edward? Not that it matters. Is he Mob?
Date: 15 May 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start. looking forward to seeing where it goes...
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Seems good to me. I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Seems like a very interesting story. Good start.
Date: 15 May 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Has the makings to be a very interesting story and yes longer chapters would be nice.