Date: 13 Jan 2024 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Hi there..just wanted to write a quick note to see if there was any way to get you interested in completing this truly wonderful story? I've read it so very many times, and it just breaks my heart that it's still left unfinished after all this time. It has always been one of my very favorite twilight fanfiction! I hope your doing well, take care!
Date: 12 May 2020 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Well here I am again. I don't know how many times I have read your two stories. Whenever I feel the need for really good storytelling I eagerly come back to you. I hope you don't ever pull these stories out for it would distress me terribly not to have you to come back to.
Your true and sincere fan,
Susan
Date: 08 Oct 2019 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 30 Past
You are such a unique writer. I read your stories over and over and appreciate your skill at weaving your stories and drawing your readers in again and again. I love the dialogues you, create they make you feel as though you are there. I truly hope you and yours are doing well. Please know you are appreciated and you bring joy to your to your readers.
Wishing you all the best to you and your future endeavours.
Susan
Date: 01 Mar 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 149
please update
this story is really good i have followed it from the beginning
Date: 27 Oct 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 149
I absolutely love this story! I have laughed and cried while reading it. I know it's been well over 2 years since you last updated and I was just wondering if you planned on finishing it? I would love to read more of this, it's such an amazing story and very well written.
Date: 05 Mar 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 149
I miss you just reread the whole story still awesome
Date: 12 Jan 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 149
I'm thanking them also, its great to see this story continue.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 149
YAY a new chapter , and it's a great one
mi love this family Time and Masen is so cute i was really missing all of them
please update soon
love you Vickie
Date: 04 Jan 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 148
Looking forward to more
Date: 03 Jan 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 148
Can't wait to find out what the little tyke has been up to now.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 148
Oh what did Masen do now? He is a little stinker! But I love that kid!
Charlie is slowly opening his eyes to the life his daughter is going to have isn't he?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the response! Masen will be QUITE a handful, to be sure!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 147 Families
Looking forward to more
Date: 28 Dec 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 147 Families
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for responding!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 146 Gatherings
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review - and for continuing to read the story!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 146 Gatherings
Nice twist, should be fun.
Author's Response:
I really hope you enjoy it! Thanks for being there!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 145 Explainations
No matter the wait, excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
You are so awesome to have waited on me - thank you!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 145 Explainations
Thank you so much for your update. I love this story and I'm hoping to hearing more in the neat future. Happy New Year.
Author's Response:
Happy New Year to you as well, and thank you for continuing to read the story!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 146 Gatherings
loving this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 146 Gatherings
aro there with them. this should be way interesting
Author's Response:
I do hope it keeps your interest! Thank you for your patiendce in continuing to read the story!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 145 Explainations
don't you mean quality instead of quantity
I reaaly enjoy your story. thank you for updating.
I hope you and yours had a woderful Christmas and I wish y'all a Happy New Year.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your well wishes! All my best, Victoria
Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
I just found this story. I hope you plan to keep writing. I love stories that have twins or will have twins as I have twins. I love the interactions with the family members. Please keep writing!!
Date: 05 May 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
Hahahaha...
Baby Mason, the trouble maker!
Can't wait for the next adventure with the Cullens!
Date: 18 Apr 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 Billy
Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 18 Apr 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 Cobwebs
This has to be my all time favorite with all the other fan fic out there!!
Date: 11 Apr 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
I supposse Im a bit of an odd duck as I dont really review stories until I can read no further,so for that I apologize. I have immensely enjoyed your story from Ch1 which you jokingly sated wasn a very good overview of the story. Ha Loved it and most definately cannot wait for your next update. You are on a roll girlfriend!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 140 Disobey
So happy that you are back posting the best story out there in fan fic!!
No one really knows what happend that fateful day except Robert & Kristen...I have faith that true love will prevail!!
Date: 02 Feb 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
Love it, Have been waiting for you to update.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
And what a handful...shudder.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 143 Reassurance
"uhhh oooooh . . ." is right is he in rouble or what.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 142 Feeding
So sweet, in a very weird vampire way.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 142 Feeding
I havn't gotten a chance to start this story and then I read that you might stop after 142 chapters. Unfortunately I am one of those pathetic readers that waits for it to be finished in order to start and was wondering many things about this story, but please don't stop now... even if a I am a horrible reader and reviewer, I am still here. *waves*
Date: 29 Jan 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
I really love this story and i hope you continue it.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
:)
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 144 Consequences
More please, :)
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 143 Reassurance
Loved it. I want more. :)
Date: 19 Jan 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 141 Frantic
Arrrgh!!! a cliffie...you have to update soon, can't just leave us for ages again. Great chapter as usual...loved Charlie and protecting Bella from hurting herself.
Date: 15 Jan 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 141 Frantic
I'm confused. This chapter has been published some time ago. I remember reading chapter 147 (Families)... Are you rewriting chapters? I don't remember big differences between this chapter and the former one. Anyway... thanks for writing I love your story.
Author's Response:
Mary,
While this chapter was published some time ago on fanfiction, I am just catching up on this site so that this site has all 147 chapters as well! lol
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 140 Disobey
Completely hooked on your story....can't wait to read what comes next.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 61 Presents
I wish Edward would be my bitch. Lol.
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 36 Oysters & Hot Springs
Great chapter! Loved them eating stuff LOL!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
Loved the hinting scene, always wondered about that:-)
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
I'm curious about this Edward sleeping bit..
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
Victoria?
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
Is it weird I like the stuff about him going down on her while having her period? That's kinda hot and I always wondered about it! And I LOVE playful Edward and Bella, I was actually LOLing. Great read!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 30 Past
I love me some playful Edward!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
Another great chapter!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
I love it! I think Charlir needs to let them be! They love each thee. Charlie obviously knows nothing of that kind of love
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
Amazing!;-) just what this story needs!
Author's Response:
Really glad you didn't think it was "too much"!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
good trip. Like to read it from Emmett's pov
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
YOUR version of the whole damn story is much nicer. Better than SM in my opinion. Please Please continue to update. I'm doing a reread but I'll be caught up soon. Thanks MLD12
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 140 Disobey
Keep up the great work. I love this story!!! It is amazing and action packed.. We love you.... You are a wonderful author!!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 140 Disobey
Thank you so much for the update. I'm really nervous with what is going to happen with Masen. I only hope he dosen't run into bigger problems. Please, please, don't make us wait too long...
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 140 Disobey
Oh man.....that little Masen is going to be in so much trouble......Poor mom and dad. And they want 2 more?
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 140 Disobey
Keep up the good work. Try to seperate Edward and Bella from Rob and kristen. I know its hard. Plus with the whole rob and Kristen situation try and remember that the only people who know what's really going on r the two of them. I personally hope they work it out and stay together but if not we always have Edward and Bella. :)
Date: 05 Aug 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
Sick.
Disgusting.
I freaking loved it!
Feel free to continue making these two be freaky-deaky!
Author's Response:
Ah yes, you got to the . . . questionable chapter. Not for the squeamish!
Date: 05 Aug 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
I am ready to slap the shit out of the sheriff....
Author's Response:
Yea, at least it got a response from you! Love it!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 139 Complacent
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 139 Complacent
Good to see you back...keep 'em coming.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 139 Complacent
Great chapter. Wonder how Edward is going to react when he finds out Masen is missing.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 139 Complacent
i'm going crazy waiting for an update. i follow you on fanfiction too. i check back atleast once a day to see if you've updated. you're one of my favorite writers. please update soon! i need to know what happened to masen and i can't wait to meet the twins!!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 139 Complacent
First time I have seen this here in a while. I read it on FF. THey have come a long way. Twins on the way Masen and a big family. a long way!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 139 Complacent
Hi there and welcome back, I feel like it has been forever since we heard from you. I like getting to catch up and see what everyone is up to, but you are so evil for not addressing the cliffie from the last chapter! When is everyone going to know Masen is missing? Can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 139 Complacent
yay!!!! your back..... ty for the update.....
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
I started reading your story from fanfiction, just hopeing to waste some time before i had to go to work, and i have absolutly fell in love with it. (I ended up reading all 140 chapters in two days). I have always loved twilight but hated how they represented bella and edwards relationship durring her pregnacy. You are an amazing writer and i can't wait to read more about what has happend to masen after leaving the train. Please update soon im on pens and needles for whats coming next...........
P.s what ever happened to fanfiction, did they prevent you from updating more chapters do to the sexual content....prudes ;)
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Aw man where are the other two chspters I was really looking forward to them Chapter 139 and 140 Especally 140 Sorry that Fan Fiction is such a DICK. This is soooooooooo good. More more
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
Love this story. Please update soon
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
Great chapter.
I am going to start switching my favorites over to TWCS just in case my favorite stories get pulled from FF.
I have always loved your stories!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
Great story. Just couldn't stop reading. Hope you willbe able to update soon. Want to find out if they find Masen and kill Emmett for talking without thinking.
:) Kayla
Date: 21 May 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
NOOOOO; I started reading this story like five days ago and haven't been able to stop. Lunch breaks at work before I go to bed any time I could pull it up on phone I was reading now I come to this chapter the end of what you have written. I know I'll get alot more done at work but please dont take too long to post again.
Hope the unpacking goes better, you really do have a great story going here, please keep going.
Date: 21 May 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa
I'm sorry. I just cannot get enough and go right to next chapter. This story is awesome I love the way they r with each other. I just cannot get enough
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to respond! Glad you are enjoying the way they are with each other!
Date: 18 May 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
So thrilled that you are back!! This story just keeps getting better...Thanks!! I do have a question for you though...are they ever going to circumsise Masen?
Date: 17 May 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 100 Morning
You are still flipping awesome!! With how compassionate the Cullens are regarding Sam, Jake should give Edward & Bella a pass for changing Bella, since Sam broke the treaty...Not sure if Jake should let him live though, maybe for Emily's sake...
Date: 15 May 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing
Still love it!! I am glad that Charlie is finally getting a clue though!!
Date: 11 May 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
Still love it...This has to be the best story out there...I was so excited to see you back with an update that I had to start reading it from the beginning!! Thanks so much!!
Date: 11 May 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
Nice work. I hope you get all your unpacking done soon. Keep up the great work. Love this story.
Jukie
Date: 10 May 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
That kid is going to be grounded until he's 18 in human years once he's found lol. However, yay to you being able to somewhat write again!
Date: 10 May 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
Thank you for your update. Masen is going to be tough to control, now that he is stronger and more mobile... let's see how it will do. I hope Edward can find Masen fast and he doesn't run into trouble...
Date: 10 May 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
Just love it!! Keep it up, you can do it :) I hope Mason is okay......
Date: 10 May 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 137 Content times Two
I MISSED THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
MUCH!!!!!!!!! It is my favorite you know :) It has made my month for sure to find it back up and being updated!!! So glad you are back! Hope everything is okay for you! I look foreward to more updates!
Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!!!!
Date: 10 May 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 138 North on the Orient
Uhhh oohhhh........poor Masen......Oh man....Poor Bella.
Date: 09 May 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 137 Content times Two
Yay, I was worried about you... hope your job is still going well too!!! Great chapter...
Date: 06 May 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?
Well as far as I know, all my nephews were circumcised. But only cause my sister wanted it done. But if that was what someone in 1918 had to go through to join the Army then it is amazing that we had so many men fighting for our country then.
My vote is going to be for the circumcision.
Date: 30 Apr 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 30 Past
Is Edward going to earn his Red Wings?
Date: 30 Apr 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
The whole time reading this chapter, the only thing going through my mind was the song , Birthday Sex by Jeremiah. I even went to look it up on Youtube to listen as I read. lol
Date: 02 Apr 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 136 Content
I just love this fic and I can not wait to read more...even though I have been reading it non stop since I first found ^-^ Keep up the great work!
Date: 22 Mar 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
I've just finished re- reading your story while waiting for the update. Please don't give up. It is such a wonderful story... Cheers!
Date: 08 Mar 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content
Same here westsobear! I hope everything is well with you and your family.
Date: 21 Feb 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Hoping everything is ok in your RL. I keep checking back often waiting for an update. I love this story and please don't leave it unfinished.
Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
I've read this entire story in the last few weeks. You have really put so much work and love into your characters. I've enjoyed them so much.
Do you need a beta to correct your typos and word choice errors so you can get your chapters out more quickly? I would be happy to help. My family calls me the grammar police because I insist on proper word usage and punctuation.
You are creating such an interesting story, please keep up the good work. Your readers appreciate your effort.
Can't wait to hear about the twins as well as Charlie's proposal and Jake's relationship with Bree.
Date: 11 Jan 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 136 Content
I hope all is well. I miss you updates
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content
I FINALLY GOT TO READ IT!!! YEAH!!!
Missed you...hate when RL gets in the way of my reading, but you of all people know how that is.
YEAH!!! BABIES!!! They are meeting Aro soon? WOW!
Cant wait to see how that goes. Hope you have a great Christmas and New Year!
Loves Always <3
Date: 12 Dec 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content
Thank you and Merry Christmas.
Date: 12 Dec 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 136 Content
Enjoyed it very much, can't wait till they are all back together.
Date: 11 Dec 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 136 Content
loved it and yay bella pregnant with twins!! cant wait to see what happends next!!!