Date: 22 Oct 2011 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving
I would like to see Tanya being punished soo thoroughly that she would not be able to revenge herself and harm Bella or Masen.And I hope that Masen is strong enough to defend himself if someone or something were to harm or threaten him to do so.
Author's Response:
Ha! Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Oct 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving
I was hoping you didn't give up on us and not give us another update until Monday. Tanya has now idea how talented her cousin's baby son is, being able to stop Tanya mentally from wanting to hurt him. The same as he did with Victoria before he was born. Can't wait til the next chapter ;-)
Author's Response:
Maswn is quite talented, but his dad had told him not to do that - think he is in trouble?
Date: 22 Oct 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving
HA!! Im glad Renee went home, too! Now, Tanya on the other hand, Edward should have killed her cause I am pretty sure she is going to the Volturi. Than goodness or Rose, Tanya would have probably tried to kill Masen. Either way, I don't think things will end well for Tanya. Now I hope the next exciting new is of a baby, or two!!! LOVIN IT!!!
Author's Response:
Tabya . . . well, what can i say. We will have to see what happens with her!
Date: 22 Oct 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 129 Leaving
Glad I had read this on FanFiction. You got this thing really jumping right now. Don't break the computer!
Author's Response:
Ga! Let's hope not!
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 60 First Christmas
"That's right, Jake. It's no different than you eating steak or venison or lamb. Same thing. You kill to eat as well. How many hamburgers and hot dogs, Jake? How often do you have bacon? They were alive once, did you ever think about what you were eating?" Bella explained to him defiantly
I love that bella explained it like this. I always thought that the vampires should open up a butcher shop. They could drink the blood of the animals and then sell the meats. No need to waste any of it.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 54 Tips
That was better than i expected.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 53 Images
Cant wait for Charlie's reaction. I bet Sue will Shit a brick when she finds out!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
Still don't trust Tanya to not get her revenge, and Aro was mentioned in the chapter, maybe foreshadowing his future role in this story. Guess we will have to wait and see. Thanks
Date: 20 Oct 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
Edward is so romantic, and Tanya really needs to get a clue. He is married and had NO interest in her [not that he ever did]. I am nervous that she is being rejected by a vampire that chose a human over her when they are so close to the Volturi. I have a bad feeling about this...
Date: 20 Oct 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
Thanks for writing about the magic kingdom. My husband and I went there for our honeymoon 15 years ago. It brought back some good memories.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 47 Investments
Too funny. I want them to do that at charlies I can just see him running in with his gun ready.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
You would think for as much as they have sex she would have to walk around with a bucket stuck between her legs to catch everything. lol.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
Are they going to tell Renee?
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
quick... someone grab the matches and light the fire...I'll grab the slut and we'll all push her in and live happily ever after...the end. :)
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
Just wondering if Renee doesn't knock so she can get a glimpse of Edward.... Hummmmmm Especially since Bella spilled the beans on him.....
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2
UGH... Sorry you haven't heard from me yet but I found this story a few days ago on my cell and it wouldn't let me leave feed back.... I had hurt my back and have been on the couch on a heating pad for 3 days and your story is what I have been reading and I love it!!!! I want an Edward...Yummyward!!! mmmmmmm... Anywho... It would be awesome if Masen was cool enough to be able to help Rosie have her own little one :) Just a thought.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
E is so sweet and over the top. Already feeling anxious at the talk of Aro.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
A great chapter...you write a really slutty and obnoxious Tanya...love to hate her.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
Naked in a jacuzzi...yummmm
Date: 19 Oct 2011 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
mmmmmm Naked Edward.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
Yea a baby!. What did Alice see?
Date: 19 Oct 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 39 Decisions
Great chapter. Hope they catch victoria before she causes too much trouble. They should have jacob write down a new fake address for them so they can catch her.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 38 Rockingham
I like that Edward and Jacob are starting out as friends. And Im glad that he can admit that he is is love with Bella but accepts that Edward is it for her. I just hope that once he starts to phase and he believes the legends he doesnt start hating Edward. I just like them as friends. Cant wait to see what kind of business Jacob starts.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 37 Revelations
im wondering why Jacob has not started to phase with Vampires hanging around the track. His instincts should have kicked in by now.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
Aw sorry! I'm glad for the update on the Highlands. Maybe Tanya's sisters will put her in her place as well lol.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
I love these scenes where Edward takes bella hunting.
uh oh whats going to happen now?
Author's Response:
Some of my favorite chapters, coming up!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
I just knew that Tanya would start trouble. Now the question remins, will she be mad enough to tell Aro about Bella and Masen?? I think Bella handled herself beautifully with Tanya. Lovin it all!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
ding dong the bitch is dead. Is it victoria that caused that accident?
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 3 Billy
Here is where it says she has graduated already. Second to last paragraph in this chapter.
"I'd do it. I'd do it for you, Jacob. Lets stop by my house so I can get some clothes. I've already graduated from school, I am 18 and a legal adult and there is nothing keeping me here. I'll leave Charlie a note."
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 30 Past
Im waiting for Edward to run into jessica and her seeing his wedding ring and make some snide comment about her not waiting for bella to find out he is married.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
I reviewed the last one (unless something went wrong :0/ )
I liked the peppering of home story, and girly time, makes me start wondering what you have up your sleeve next. Hummm will have to wait and see.
Gold stars anyone. ********** oh there they are ten as normal.
Author's Response:
Short sleeves, I assure you! Thank f=you for reviewing, I always look forward to hearing from you!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
Wonderful story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Love your call name!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)
I noticed in an earlier chapter that Bella said she had graduated already and then a while later Charlie said she had not completed high school and gotten her diploma yet.
Its nice to see that Rose is getting along with Bella. I always hated bitchy rose.
Author's Response:
Would love to know where it says she had graduated! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
Just have to say I love this story. Love the girl talk to. Keep it going girl never want it to end
Author's Response:
Keep encouraging me! I love Edward's life, so I love writing it - just need to know that people want to read it and I'm not just writing to no one!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie
Charlie needs to hear them to realize they are truely husband and wife.
Author's Response:
I thought so! Glad you are continuing on with the story! Charlie is way stubborn, and it takes alot for him to change his mind!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
I really enjoyed Bella getting feisty on Tanya and I DO hope there will be another little one in their future. As always I still very much enjoy reading your story. I usually read all my fanfics on my HTC and for some reason the review function doesn't work on my phone but I will try and review more often.
Thank you :)
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO REVIEW~ I know what you mean about the phone, it is difficult to review from there! Glad you did it though, I need to know that people want to read this if I'm to keep going!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
Very funny. Love Mason. Where's the next baby?
Author's Response:
We got NO baby yet! THEY KEEP TRYING, THOUGH! LOL
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
loved the chapgter i dont think tis over with tanya
Author's Response:
No, Tanya isn't finished yet!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
This chapter was so sweet. I just love how Edward sang for bella! I just hope Tanya doesn't do anything drastic! I'm a little scared about that! I'm also a little worried about what Eleazar us saying about Mason....
Author's Response:
Eleazar is quite skeptical, isn't he!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
im glad that kate and irina agree that tanya was int he wrong treating edward and bella like she did but like i said last chapter im sure she will be back!
Author's Response:
The Tanya;s POV in the next chapter will be somewhat enlightening!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
the stuff with Tanya predictable and funny. I was proud of Bella. Wait until she is a vamp. Old Tanya may get her cumupins.
Author's Response:
It always is kind of predictable, though you can ty as you may not to be! Hopefully some of what she does will be a surprise!
Love the word cumupins - haven't heard that since I was a kid!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please keep writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
I like where this going so far. I hope Tanya becomes a pile of ash very soon. Please keep up the wondeful writing.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Pile of ash! But she's family! lol
Date: 17 Oct 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
Loved it, keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you SOOOOO much for leaving a review!
Date: 17 Oct 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
Loved IT!!!! The girl chat was nice, I enjoyed finding out what had been going on in Bella's head lately!! The chat back home makes me worry about what Aro might try to do..........eeek...I know it will be coming eventually..I just hope Bella and Edward get there twins first,..hmmm I also hope Aro doesn't try and kidnap Bella while she is pregnant again..... :((((
Thank you for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Aro will be coming in good time, lots to happen in the story!
Date: 16 Oct 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
Oh yeah....that was a good one! :) well, I'm off to bed....sleep well!
Author's Response:
Glad you're reading the story again - thought I just really sucked! lol
Date: 16 Oct 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone
ok...I liked this chapter, though I am getting to the point where I want to get to know Jasper a little better! When will that happen?
Author's Response:
Jasper doesn't really get close to many people, but more is revesled with him as we go along! thanks for reviewing!
Date: 14 Oct 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
OMG, that was a perfect song and loved it so much. Really liked the last part with Tanya translating and running out.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
Thank you for the update!! I really enjoyed this chapter!!! Edward did a great job not loosing his temper (much to my displeasure!!)) haha......
Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!!!
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad it made you happy! Edward can't ALWAYS be mad!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
Aww so sweet well the last bit and the loving that is. :0D
Ended up reading half of it at one in the morning, and the rest just now, mainly cause I was so tired that I wouldn't have got the full benefit of it if I had carried on last night.
As always gold stars, **********. I have to wonder if we have seen the last of Tanya though?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the gold stars! Glad you like the story!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
i have a feeling tanya is up to no good
Author's Response:
No good, Yes - but not the way you think!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
ahh PERFECTO..
I loved it. I am so proud of Bella in this chapter. It would be easy for her to get weak and think about how beautiful Tanya is. Not once did she even comment. YIPPIE. She knows he loves her "forever".
Author's Response:
She does seem pretty sure of Edward - guess the fight strengthened them!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
Aaaawwwww......poor Tanya.....She just can't seem to accept the fact that Eddie dear never did and never will want her 'skank a**' !! To bad....so sad ;-) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
She seems as stubborn as Charlie die!
Date: 13 Oct 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 127 Unexpected
loved it! and bella handeld tanya perfectly! but i have a feeling it isnt the last of her....
Author's Response:
No, Tanya is not that easily dissuaded!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
Well I guess that Bella is going to get to see one of the houses that they own now isn't she?
Author's Response:
Soon, very soon!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
Well I really hope that Edward learned his lesson about not asking questions before jumping off the deep end on something.....
Author's Response:
We can only hope!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
Ohhh. A meeting that bodes interesting.. Where will this be going next. Will they all skidadle or are the terrible two sum gonna try and tag along for a while.
Loved hearing about Venice it one place I would love to go. Hope your feeling better than you were. Ten gold stars as normal **********.
Pity there not real would make good currency :0)
Looking forward to the next instalment.
Lolly
Author's Response:
Well, I think the antics in the next chapter will amuse you!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
looking forward to seeing what happens next
Author's Response:
Hopefully it will be entertaining to you!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
Interesting......love it!!!! Maybe Edward can just off Tanya??? I mean he IS all about protecting HIS family...right????? that way no jelous girl goes running off and telling the Volturi?????
Can't wait for your next update!!!!
Thank you!!!!
Author's Response:
Tanya is about to get herself offed if she doesn't back off, isn't she! lol
Date: 11 Oct 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
This is going to be good...can't wait for the next update!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
uh oh!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
You won't have to wait long!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
Yep I can not wait for this. She start flirting with Edward and runs Bella down. Well I suspect Rose might just light her up.
Author's Response:
Good thought - and she might well just do that, if she gets the chance!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
oh wow! loved it and yea i agree with you its time for renee to go she is becomming to nosy! and tanya hmm hope she behaves but would be interesting for bella to tell her off! haha cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Tnya will be interesting - at least I think so!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 126 Venice
Oh Holy Hell!!! Here we go! This otta be interesting! I just wanna see her face when she sees Edward with Bella AND a baby!
I wish I could hear her thoughts! Please tell me that we get the next one FAST!!!!
Loves always <3
GIMME GIMME GIMME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response:
Yep - we finally get Tanya!
Date: 09 Oct 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone
Fun times with Alice and Jasper. I love seeing the vamps be able to let loose and be themselves with the human.
Author's Response:
Bella just takes everything in stride, like it's completely normal!
Author's Response:
Bella just takes everything in stride, like it's completely normal!
Date: 09 Oct 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
It was nice to see Sue giving in just a little to Team Edward :) So, Jessica was drained after Edward left her. Pretty bold move by the mystery vamp in my opinion.
I love the note you added to the gifts Edward left under Bella's floorboard. That is just one more thing to prove to Bella that he never stopped loving her.
I'm wondering if the sleeping vamp phenomemon is somehow linked to Bella being Edward's singer.
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying the chapters!
Date: 08 Oct 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
It looks like Victoria is still an issue...at least I assume Victoria had something to do with that. I bet she had something to do with the sabotaged bike Bella crashed. Yay for saving Angela. I'm glad Bella isn't too upset over Jessica. Jess always a bit nasty about Bella in the books.
Sam did not seem too happyt o find out that Sue would be spending some of the holidays with the Cullens. I just loved Edward throwing all the information out there about Sue and all the time she's spent around Edward.
Author's Response:
Ha! Yes, sue will becomme important, with time . . .
Date: 08 Oct 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
You go, Edward, earn those red wings ;) I'm dying to know if Alice got any glimpses of that and what she will have to say about it. Will it be, "ewwww," or will it be, "you lucky dog."
The date was cute. Yeah, they really needed that.
Author's Response:
I think all vampires would be a bit jealous - blood freely offered and no death involved! I worried about this chapter, the ewwwww and all, but it seemed appropriate - he is a vampire, after all . . .
Date: 08 Oct 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 30 Past
LOL, I just love how the Quillettes always freak out when they hear that a human and a vamp have sex. I think the fact that Bella is still alive and not a vamp or dead after having sex with her husband proves how much Edward loves her and how great his control is. It has always bugged me that in the original book that the tribe thinks they have a right to say what Bella should do with her life. Bella knows everything and what she is getting herself into so it should be her decision wether or not to be turned. I'm interested to see how they treat the situation in your story.
OMG, I was dying laughing at the conversation with Angela about Edward's diet. That was great.
LOL, yes Bella, blood would be an added turn on to a vamp.
Author's Response:
I really have fun writing how fearful the tribe is of the vamps - and Duuuh, Bella, he's a vampire - blood is a turn on, okay!
Date: 08 Oct 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
I never thought about them confronting that place in the woods but it was a brilliant idea. I knew when he was leading her out there that he wouldn't leave her again. That was a great way for them to talk about it and get over it once and for all. Yay for Charlie seeing it as Edward being mature :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it - I thought they needed to heal at the place where he broke them. Charlie seeing it was just a bonus!
Date: 08 Oct 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 28 Meadow
Damn! Nothing better than a possessive Vampward claiming what is HIS :)
Oh hell no! WTF are you thinking Edward. If I was Bella there would be no way in hell I would him just stop until I was changed. That's just cruel. I would be asking what I did to be getting that kind of cruel and unusual punishment.
Author's Response:
Don't worry - she is so not putting up with his BS!
Date: 08 Oct 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 27 Flight
Hmm, looks like Sue isn't comfortable with the cold one. I would love to hear what she tells the pack about Edward and Bella. I'm wondering if Jake has shifted yet.
I can't wait to see how the answer to Edward's question goes.
Author's Response:
Edward will eventually win her over . . .
Date: 08 Oct 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
Hallelujia! Charlie has finally seen the light :) I'm afraid to see what the wolves will have to say when Edward and Bella get back to Forks.
Author's Response:
It took long ehough. Honestly, could Charlie b e any more thick skulled?
Date: 08 Oct 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter
I just loved the girl talk wiht Renee and Bella. There is nothing better than having that kind of relationship with your mom. I think Charlie may finally be coming around a little.
Author's Response:
Well, Renee hs always wanted to be more of a friend than a mother to Bella.
Date: 08 Oct 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 24 Mom
I love Renee! That's all that really needs to be said about this chapter. Renee rocks!
Author's Response:
Let's hope Bella can manage to keep her in her life a little longer!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
Being sick is a pain but...it does give you time to write...more please.
Author's Response:
Working on the chapter called Venice!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
Awe, they are too sweet together. *sigh* if only human men could have that instant recovery thing. I was wondering who would mention the disappearance of the scars after she is changed. I like the way you had Edward do it. I think it was important that he reassured her that the scars didn't matter to him but that they would be gone after her change.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked that - Edward could care less about her scars, and he was pretty demanding when he wanted that night gown off!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday
The party was great. I loved the letter opener. I was kind of surprised that Edward's gift was wrapped on not in a gift bag. The gifts from everyone were perfect. It was great that none of the gifts outshone the earrings from Charlie. I think he needed for his gift to stand up with the rest of them.
ROFL. I can't tell you how perfect the ending of this chapter was. That was the slap in the face Charlie needed. That definitely was a blow to his resolve. Too bad it wasn't enough for him to totally back down.
Author's Response:
I guess I never even thought about putting the gift in a bag - I like wrapped!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)
LOL. Of course Rose and Alice want all the details. It's not like Edward is related by blood.
I wonder if the whole scar issue will come up between Edward and Bella the next time they are naked together. I could see that end up being a problem if it's not dealt with.
I LOVED the talk with Jasper. I think that has been the best "you are forgiven" talk I've read between them. You left no room for Jasper to feel guilty about the paper cut. I don't think I've read that before. The whole birthday thing and remember the outcome of last year's birthday was definitely a reason for Bella to be in tears. I'm glad it was nothing worse than that that had her running to Edward a blubbering mess.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the talk with Jasper - he needed to know that he wasn't the weak link!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
Sweet baby Jesus, someone needs to slap some sense into Charlie. My palm is just tingling with the need to do it myself. I just loved Carlisle getting angry with Charlie for even thinking of taking Bella away from Edward. I can't decide if something happened to Bella or if she just missed Edward that much to react that way.
Author's Response:
Sweet Baby Jesus os right! I understand how thidk headed some fathers can be, but Charlie has got it completely stopped up - no changes happening in that skull!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie
LOL, Bella definitely got her stubborness from Charlie. No matter how much it slaps him in the face that she is happy he won't relent on trying to get her home. Yay for Bella taking the initiative in the end and telling Edward they better be quiet. It would be too funny if B&E aren't as quiet as they could be and poor Charlie has to realize they have consumated their marriage.
Author's Response:
Not to worry! It will slap him in the face eventually!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
I love the honesty between Edward and Bella. This is how they should have always been. I also love that you have Bella being accepting of their wealth and not pitching a fit over gifts. I totally get that she's not used to money but I hate it when everyone has her get so pissed at Edward for buying her things after they are married.
I'm just wondering when the wolves are going to pop back up. I just know they aren't going to be happy about the marriage. I'm sure they will have an opinion about the possiblity of Edward wanting to change his wife.
I can't wait for Charlie's visit. That should be quite entertaining.
Author's Response:
I'm sooo glad you are really getting into the story!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
I found this story today. I just love A/U fics. I like your take on Edward and how he was without Bella. I also love that Bella and Jake were only ever friends and there was no blurring of those lines at all. I should've stopped and reviewed each chapter but I just wanted to keep reading. I just wanted to take a minute to let you know I am enjoying this and can't wait to see what you've got in store for B&E.
Author's Response:
I lolve it when new readers are captured by the story. Forgive me up fromt for my lack of ability to spell and punctuate - I really do try! I would love to hear your take on the chapters as you read them. i am not a review hog, i just love to hear each and every chapters reaction on the reader and don't care if you message me privately or publically. Hope you enhoy the ride!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
I am excited for this journey. Many people to see, much to do. I still love them.
Author's Response:
I;m flad - cause there is alot to still do and see before we get all angsty!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
Loved this chapter.......I like how Bella handled her mother when she walked into their car unannounced :-) OMG......too funny! I remember almost having to do the same thing with my mom when my husband and I first got married 20 plus years ago ;-) Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
You know, mu husband jsed to fuss all the time because i would not have drapries on the windows and i walked around naked all the time. Our neighbors were far enough away that I would have had to stand in the window and press against it for them to see, still . . . he fussed.
I totally agree with bella, she should not have had to move - her mom did the walking in!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
I loved the way Bella handled herself fussing with Edward. Very mature and she was right. Renee will learn to knock Im willing to bet!!! Glad they are back on track!!! :)
Author's Response:
I just do NOT think renee will ever learn!
Date: 05 Oct 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
I'm really sorry to hear your not well, hope you get better soon. Although if it will give us more updates would it be really cheeky if I say stay sick for a little longer ;0p.
I'm really glad E & B are in a better place with each other again, and you would expect B to be more desensitised to people knowing what's going on, they have been more or less constantly surrounded ( and by supersonic hearing vamps) since they have started having a sexual relationship.
Love masons teddy bear, I think that's so cute, and if you are excited for the next few chapters, I can't imagin where or what your going to be doing with them all. Can't wait to find out though.
As normal 10 stars maybe we should make them platinum this time as you have now got us on tenter hooks. **********
Again hope you feel better soon.
All the best lolly.
Author's Response:
You might just get an extra this week - I feel rotten!
Date: 05 Oct 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
loved the beautiful pics!! and hee hee renee is just so fun!! she is keeping edward and bella on their toes!
Author's Response:
Yes, but I think it's time for renee to leave . . .
Date: 05 Oct 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
Mmmmm I love that you can't wait to post!!!! I can't wait to read the new chapters, it is such a delight!!!! In some stories I get bord with the day by day with no action going on, but with yours, your Bella and Edward I could just sit and read about their day by days forever, you could write about thir lives foreveer and I don't think I would ever get tired of reading about it, You have a gift my dear and I hope you feel better soon!!!! I LOVE your Bella and Edward, but I am certain you could do well writing new characters all on your own and really making some money off them. Just Thank you for the updates, all of them!!!! Feel better soon!!!!!
Also****I do Hate you**** is it on hold for awhile since work got yah so busy?? It's okay I am just curious, HHH is my favorite right now, so if you are ging to focus on one, I prefer this :P
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Ten thousand Stars!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words! i do worry that with no REAL action happening, you will tire of just my descriptions of their feelings and their days.
I do . . . Hate you is on hold bedause I have a severe case of writers blodk! just do not know which direction I want to take the story - but I am leaning towards back at his condo in New york . . . eventually!
Date: 05 Oct 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 125 Scenery
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 05 Oct 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
love the chap even cryed a little xxx
Author's Response:
Yea! That means I did a good job of conveying their feelings! Thank you for telling me that!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
so glad they are working everyhting out! i knew they would! cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
More coming up! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
So very true, honesty can be hard to take and hard to give sometimes, but now they need to put it behind them and not dwell. Learn the lesson and move forward
Also make some moves towards new baby :0D
As normal ten gold stars **********.
Author's Response:
Well, there will still be some talking to do!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave me a note!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
Thank you for the quick update!!!!
Would love to see a pissed off overprotective Edward standing up for Bella when he has a very good reason to protect her!!!
Keep up the great writing!!!!!
Love it!!!
Author's Response:
You ALWAYS want to see pissed off Edward! lol
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
This is one of those times "his 17 years of age" shows.
Author's Response:
Well said.
Date: 04 Oct 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 124 Orient Express
Oh my......sounds like someone has gone through this a time or two ;-) I guess we all have at some point (lol) Hope Eddie dear has learned his lesson :-)
Author's Response:
Missunderstandings happen sooooo easily sometimes!
Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question
Okay he basically punished bella by using their son...I do hope you make Edaward pay for a LONG hard time. He should NOT get off easy as just a talk.. What he did by using their son uggg he needs to see what it feels like.... Bella should NOT be CANNON this go around..
Author's Response:
I don't think he was trying to punish her by taking masen with him, I think he honestly missed his son.
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question
uh oh - Edward is in trouble! Storming out 2 days in a row - and taking the baby with him .... all for ... no reason at all! I hope Bella makes him "pay" big time - Thanks for writing
Author's Response:
I wish I knew what "big time" meant! I find it hard for Bella to be away from him . . .
Author's Response:
I wish I knew what "big time" meant! I find it hard for Bella to be away from him . . .
Date: 01 Oct 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question
Edward wil meet her at the train station. He will need to really grovel at Bella's feet holding a big box of chocolates to make up for his childish behavior.
Author's Response:
Not sure she is even going to give him the chance!