Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
Fabulous Valentine weekend complete with amazing sex! Peyton's special valentine from Brody was adorable, but I understand how it made Bella and Edward feel, too! With him moving in, life is good, but I'm curious about him going out on the boat again. If that doesn't happen, what will he do?
Date: 03 Jan 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was rather gut-wtrenching for all concerned! Boy, am I glad that Bud shot Aleksei and he can't hurt anyone any more! Bless Charlie's heart, that scared hell out of him, for both Bella and Edward! I hope the relief outweighs the guilt for Edward, it wasn't his fault Aleksei was wrong in the head, thinking his miserable life was Edward's doing!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
This is going south in one big hurry! After all this time, for that piece of crap to reappear in Edward's life is the most horrifying thing! It's bad enough Aleksei murdered Wayne, now he's about to do something awful to Edward and Bella! I don't like this one little bit!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the Christmas gifts, especially Brady! I felt a cold chill, however, when I read about the cold, calculating eyes of Bella's visitor! No doubt in my mind that somehoe, Alexsei has found where Edward is and has come to cause trouble. That warning about what can happen wasn't spoken by accident!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh yes, Edward is going to have a most excited little girl on Christmas, Peyton will love a puppy, especially one from her best friend! Can't wait to see how that goes! Now we have to see how going back on the boat affects everyone!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank heaven they got him out of the icy water in time! God bless Jasper's roping skills, they most likely saved the day! Frankly, this chapter made me cry, several times! I was almost as glad as Bella when Edward opened his eyes and spoke!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
What the hell, if they were saints, they both would wear halos, right? There are bound to be bumps in the road and bad days, but love and family will get them through. As for Tricia being that hateful, some people just can't help the poison in their hearts from leaking out! Bella told her what was what, anyway!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward may be Peyton's best friend, but she can manipulate all the mwn in her life, not to mention most of the women! It was cuter than all get out when she got his phone and asked her mom if Edward could spend the night, and the comment about him being her dad if he married her mom was perfect Peyton!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
Things are going along swimmingly indeed! They both are smart to try and take it slow, not rush things along! You can kinf of tell they would like to hurry just a bit, and be together all the time. I can see it happening soon. Emmett is slowly being forgiven, even by himself, and Peyton, of course is wonderful!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Though it was a scary thing to confess to a seven year old, Edward should have just trusted what Bella told him! Peyton is a truly amazing child, like a gift from God, just meant to help Edward! Boy, do I love this story!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was nearly overpowering! They are so good together, just as I suspected they would be! That was a sad story about Evan and her, but look what it produced, Peyton! If this chapter had background music, it would have to be Etta James, singing, At Last!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Emmett, he just did what a lot of people do when they hear that word, prison. Too bad he didn't hear everything so he could judge fairly. Well, Rose will straighten him out, but good! I can just picture Bella running to the docks and Edward catching sight of him, and then them embracing each other tightly!Whooee!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Truly, life is what happens while you make plans. That sure wasn't the way he wanted to tell her about his past. Naturally he has put the worst possible spin on her words, but that's probably the low selfesteem talking. The guy sure doesn't cut himself any slack.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
This was tough for Bella and I'm thinking the next chapter is going to be worse! It's time to suck it up and bare all, I'm thinking! At least Xavier and Bella have made peace which should help. Her mom really laid it on the line about Edward being a fisherman. Sounds like a tough life and a dangerous one!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Xavier is going to cut his own throat if he keeps on at Bella like that! I think Edward did the right thing, telling him to take it up with him and not Bella! This was a great chapter, especially them making out in the parking lot like a pair of teenagers!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's so easy to see why Edward loves Peyton, and I guess she sees him clearly so returns the sentiment. They are quite the pair. He and Bella are doing a lot better, too, for her to invite him to Sunday dinner. Now he just has to survive telling Bella about his past!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
Evan must be Peyton's father, and from Bella's nightmare, he must be dead. I'm hoping you elaborate on that story later on. It sounds like Edward is fitting in and doing okay learning his new job and is at least friendly with Bella now. It was kind of obvious that they needed to at least be civil.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
Instant attraction, mixed with fight or flight! Must be hard on the nerves to feel that way! Bella and Edward are both hiding things from their past that will probably need talking over in the near future. Can't wait to hear Xavier's history with Peyton and Bella, why they are so close.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really curious as to why he spent seven years in prison for something he supposedly didn't do. There has to be a hell of a story there, I'll bet! His lawyer is guilty for not getting him a better deal and now thw parole officer hands him a hundred grand! From where comes that kind of money?
Date: 09 Mar 2012 5:37 AM Title: Epilogue
'Loved this story. It was soooo sweet. But also had lots of detail, great characters, enough suspense. I don't usually care for tatoos, but this Edward was no less appealing with his tatoos. It was a different twist for the story to start with a little girl befriending the lonely Edward. 'So many supportive characters, who made Edward feel loved.
Was there a particular meaning to Edward's tatoos, or were they just some way to appear tough? I thought I remembered him telling Bella that he would explain their meaning?
Thanks sooo much for this story. Keep writing!
Date: 05 Mar 2012 5:25 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Peyton's First Day Back to School
Love little Peyton. This was really good. I can not wait to hear more from Peyton. I would love to see her POV of different things from the story. Wonder what she thinks of her little brother??
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:56 PM Title: Epilogue
AWESOME!!!!!!!! I love seeing Edward as a daddy. I know he has had Peyton but just imagining him with his little son. I loved the picutre you posted. You have done an amazing job with this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I am sad to see it end.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 4:22 AM Title: Epilogue
wow i so love the story. i am glad you wrote it and glad i read it . i loved it
i was so happy on Sunday mornings for the chapters
i am so glad they family is whole and they have a new little one to complete. the girls are having more and jasper finally got his puppy
charlie wow retiring, but great he can relax with renee and enjoy the grandbabies
loved it all
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:33 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm sad that this story is over. But the ending was great. I loved that it was completely from Edward's pov. I'm looking forward to your new story. The little tease you gave has me interested. Your a great story teller and can't wait to read it.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMGosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I sooooooo loved this chapter. You did an EXCELLENT job with the whole chapter. I LOVED how he asked her to marry him. I love Peyton running to them and saying WE are going to get married. I am very sad that this story is coming to an end. I am really looking forward to the epilogue. I am putting you on author alert and I have already voted for you in the contest. Thank you sooooo much for sharing this wonderful story with us. I have been following this story here and also on FF. I have left some reviews here and some over at FF. Just know that I have read every chapter and have left a review for every chapter, it may have been here or there.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
oh yipee they are engaged.
i love how everything came together. they where sure on a life journey all of them
i am thrilled edward found a family and a home and love. it is great to be wanted and needed and loved.
peyton is the most adorable and bright little girl. i loved the relationship between edward and peyton.
it was a hell of a ride and i love every chapter. thank you for writing
Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
love the chapter
sounds like edward has a hell of a car he just bought
it is great that edward and bella finally are moved in together. i am glad edward got the seal of approval. just one more step to a great future
Date: 01 Feb 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
You had me totally on egde for the first part of the chapter, with every paragraph I was wondering when it was going to happen. I am so glad that Peyton wasn't home so she was spared all that horror. I'm looking forward to the fluff coming :-)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
I just have no words good enough to explain how great this story is. I have laughed, cried, gotten pissed, scared, and sat on the edge of my seat waiting for more. People, please tell your friends about this story. I find it hard to believe anybody anywhere would not love it!!! I wll be devastated when it ends. Please consider a sequel. There is so much to keep telling, do they get married, babies, Peytons teenage years, Em and Roses life, Alice and Jaz, does Edward take over the Isabella Marie, ok now im babbling. But......Im not above begging for more!!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow so bella's feelings to be spoke where correct
seems someone is hell bent on edward never being happy
aleski you are on the runand have been why didn't you just stay away. why be stupid now and get edward. he went to jail not like he didn't not serve time. he wasn't in all the way like you.
wow what a hell of a chapter. soo much going on. so much
Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, things are really beginning to get a little scary. I know the guys will protect Bella and Peyton, but at what cost?? I hope nothing happens to Edward, please let him be the one to kill Aleksei...Please!!! He needs to know the threat is gone, over. He doesnt need to feel the guilt, He will if Aleksi gets to kill anyone else. Edward will blame himself. Edward and Bella both deserve a HEA, please. I better quit begging, this story is so good I can't help but beg for them!!