[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:40 PM Title: Walk Away
So glad you posted this early. Really helped to clear the air. So to speak. I truly like how much Edward in general rocks Bella. She questions and concerns herself with his feelings. I think she is use to caring for herself and then has a fuck it attitude, but with him...she worries non stop. She tries to deny it, but he's already made a huge impact on her life. No turning back now!! Good chapter!
Author's Response:
NO! Absolutely no turning back. It's one of those things she realizes, but is too chicken to really admit out loud.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:02 PM Title: Why Can't You Stay
The way Bree was introduced as being a guy was super confusing, at least from a reader's POV. In my opinion, I get you wanting to maybe shock Edward with this knowledge, but I was utterly dumbfounded at first. Wondering if it was a typo error when you refered to Bree as a he! I was like, I don't ever remember anything being mentioned about that. Then I kept thinking, what is the deal with Jake? Did I miss that too? I kept thinking, do I have to go back to see if I missed something in the earlier chapters?
Hoping next chapter answers some of these question!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Walk Away
Amazing...and im glad she didnt jsut brush off what happened...and she'll remember that too!
~Tiffany
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:40 AM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
LOL, the safe sex on Gilligan's Island discussion was total win.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: First Date Insanity
Wow, they both went all out with the confessions. If that is the worst she as to confess then she shouldn't worry about telling Edward anything else.
WTF is up with Edward? That was some wierd stuff going on after happy times.
LOL at Bella getting caught coming out of the bathroom. Yeah, Eddie boy sure is going to be getting high fives for a while.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:11 AM Title: Reaction & Adaption
I liked how Edward handled Bella after Em pissed her off.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:00 PM Title: Gonna Make Fools
It's nice that Bella has finally decided to completely go for it with Edward.
It really seems like no one knows the real Edward. I can't wait to find out more about him.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: Morning Aftermath
I love Esme. Now you've got me wondering what exactly is up with Edward. Seems like he and Esme have a few secrets that even Ali doesn't know.
I'm loving your sarcastic Bella.
Author's Response:
You are the first to catch on to that. Just remember it for later! ;)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:32 PM Title: Halloween Hook-Up
That was a wild first chapter. I'm excited to see how their relationship progresses.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Walk Away
Great chapter! I had kind of thought they were both being so mature about their feelings, so it was kind of nice to see a misunderstanding. Don't get me wrong, I'll always want my happy ending, but a little drama is good!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:14 AM Title: Why Can't You Stay
What?...why is Bella so impulsive for?...and hyporcritical?...she just said Edward wouldn't let her explain and now she just assumes it's over and did't even let him talk either...I guess she really feels hurt...poor e and b!
Author's Response:
You hit it perfectly. She's really hurt. She's never felt hurt to this particular degree before and she doesn't know how to handle it. She's never had to handle it before. Her attempting to go after him is a good sign that she's at least willing to learn.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:42 AM Title: Why Can't You Stay
Totally fucking typical!!! Dick brain move! Grrr...lol Cant wait to see what alice says to him!
~Tiffany
Date: 21 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up
I think I love you!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thank you!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 12:53 AM Title: Why Can't You Stay
Okay, now we're all depressed! Happy fucking weekend!! lol
Author's Response:
LOL!! Very Bella-esque of you. But it is a happy weekend because you get another chapter tomorrow to find out exactly what the hell Edward was thinking!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: He's So Yummy
LOVIN THIS SH**!
ek
Author's Response:
LOL!! That's very good to know!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 7:24 AM Title: Morning Aftermath
I am so amped about this story! I love the way Bella talks. She is cool as hell. Can't wait to continue this one. But for now I'm off the bed.
ek
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:49 AM Title: First Date Insanity
Oh,Oh! interesting times a coming.
Author's Response:
Interesting is an "adequate" definition. LOL
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: He's So Yummy
Found this story here and I'm so glad I did because when I went back to re-read it on fanfiction all the good parts were gone! Loving this story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! You guys are great!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:54 PM Title: He's So Yummy
Love this story!!!!! cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:54 PM Title: He's So Yummy
Love this story!!!!! cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:55 PM Title: He's So Yummy
Loving this story, cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:49 AM Title: He's So Yummy
I really loved their conversation in this chapter. They truly are taking the time to get to know each other. I also loved the way Bella set up Angela and Ben on their date. Lots of fun.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: He's So Yummy
I love this this I stayed up latereading please updat soon
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: He's So Yummy
nope no orgasm, not that lucky ;0
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:01 AM Title: He's So Yummy
awww, bella needs to open up a littel more to him....
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: He's So Yummy
"But he's so yummy, yummy and he tickles my tummy." Okay, I think I wet my pants with that one. I love Bella in this story. I feel as though if Kristen Stewart would play Bella as herself, this is what we would get. I also have to thank you for "word vomit." I have gladly added that to my repertoire. It goes along nicely with my own personal favorite verbal diarrhea--when people just talk and talk without stopping. You know, it is a true parasitic virus! I wish they would make some meds for that one :)
Author's Response:
They have too much fun watching us stumble and fall all overselves to make meds to stop it! And I will have to find a way for Bells to use your version. In fact, I feel an Emmett / Bella conversation coming on right now. Mwuhahahaha!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:57 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up
THis is brillient, I just love it.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:06 AM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
I really enjoyed the update. Curious as to why she didn't follow through with letting Edward know about her infertility? Does she think it won't last so why tell? Or is it because she is afraid it could be a reason for him to leave? If she thinks it is a valid point for any man to maybe not want to date her, why not tell him and find out if he's worthy of your love? Waiting and telling him will make it harder for both parties involved in my opinion. I will be interested to see how it plays out from here.
Author's Response:
Bella didn't discuss it because she honestly believes the dating is not going to last. She doesn't open up her wounds for just anyone and if she's going to open that one, then she wants to know the person deserves that kind of trust being put into them. Knowing Edward, it won't be long at all before he convinces her.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:12 AM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
Okay, so you still didn't cover the whole is he sick or is he not thing and for that I am pissed. Because I am that kind of person who needs to know, none of this surprise shit! My heart can't take it, so I want to know, get to telling it, NOW!
Other than that I loved it, perfect.
bnjwl
Date: 09 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: First Date Insanity
“Ali, sometimes, I really want to wrap my hands around your tiny neck and squeeze the shit out of it.”
“Somewhere, a pig just took off in flight. Bella freakin’ Swan not being in control of every single detail.”
“Fuck your little leprechaun self and the miniature pony you rode in on, Alice Cullen,” I hissed out between my clenched teeth.
Those are the funniest lines in the world, and I almost pissed my pants laughing at them. I will say I gotta be a little angry at you for bringing me down a little with Bella's story, but the bonding was good for her and Edward. So, all in all I am okay with it. Scared as hell about Edward's tired thing, tho. Ain't gonna lie about that, I have to go and read the next chapter so, hopefully, I can see what's going on!
Good job as always 'my honorary' Peaches!
bnjwl
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: First Date Insanity
i love ur story
Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:25 PM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
“So you got me naked just for my shirt?”
“That and the hot crazy sex.”
“Hello!” Alice trilled into the phone. “I’m still here and you’re getting close to my TMI limit.” ~~LOL!!!
Friggen’ know-it-all man with his rubber tree beating out my bamboo condom.~~~~ ROFLOL that might have even been funnier that EM & B's discussion on how to make the condoms.LOL!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:17 PM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
I'm really loving this story and your sense of humor. Keep it coming!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:05 AM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
Loved the banter about Gilligan's Island between Emmett and Bella. It was extremely well written and flowed nicely. And leave it to Edward to think of a genius answer right? As always, looking forward to reading and finding out more about Edward and Bella's pasts. :-)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
Enjoyed it. I am wondering why Bella can't have children??? I hope that Edward and Bree get along. I also hope Bella let's herself go with Edward. Completely opens up to him and let's him in.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
very interesting convo...and i'd have totally smacked Edward for being a know it all...
~Tiffany
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
Loved it!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
I loved this chapter and I think the conversation with Emmett was hilarious. I love kick ass Bella, and to be honest i think Edward will except her regardless of who her friends are and how she is floored.
well done hun !!
Author's Response:
In all honesty, I think her worry over the meeting has more to do with her conviction things are way too good to last than anything Bree may or may not do. Although, knowing Bree, things are going to get really interesting on Wednesday! But before we get to the big meet, we're going to get Bella to fall a little more for Edward. Hee Hee
Date: 06 Mar 2010 10:37 PM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 10:03 PM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
LOVELOVELOVE the SafeSex convo,, also the way you included Bree. (:
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:29 PM Title: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
Love that Edward seems to know how to make Bella and his relationship work. Love also that Bella is trying so hard not to hurt Edward.
Still worried that there is more going on with Edward and his racing heart!!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: First Date Insanity
hmmmm.... wonder what is wrong with poor ol Edward. I've a feeling it might be something a little more serious though.
we shall see.
welcome over to the lovely site :) so glad you like it here. haha. but booo for fanfic ridiculousness.
Author's Response:
Thanks to everyone for the reviews and support! It means a lot that you're willing to deal with two sites just to read this story.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:28 PM Title: First Date Insanity
That was SO AWESOME!!!!!I can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:34 AM Title: First Date Insanity
I followed you right over here. New sites are a pain, but you gotta do what you gotta do. Stupid FanFiction.
Fascinating chapter. Learned so much about both of them. They are two pretty wonderful people, including their faults.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: First Date Insanity
Okay...I tried to submit a review earlier and it didn't let me. Anyway, the last line almost made me spit my water out all over my computer. Loved the chapter and I hope nothing is wrong with Edward...but it could make for some interesting moments for Bella. Alice and Rosalie were great and the "jaws of life" line was awesome. Well done as always. :-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 10:22 PM Title: First Date Insanity
that was fantastic hun good going this story is going to be wonderfull!!!
i hope Edward is ok and she should of called Carlisle!
loving the lemons !!!
ok so i put you on fav do we still get updates over here ?
Author's Response:
This site doesn't send updates, but I'll use FF to send the updates just like I did today. Chapter 6 will be only here, but 7 and 8 should be fine on the other site. At least they are right now. LOL
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:33 PM Title: First Date Insanity
Loved it.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:42 AM Title: First Date Insanity
Loved it!!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:01 AM Title: First Date Insanity
This story just keeps getting better. Thank you for taking the time to write it. Amanda
Author's Response:
Thanks, Amanda. We are working hard to give you guys something very different.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:01 AM Title: First Date Insanity
Nice! I was freaking out there for a minute, and who in the heck is Aaron? Did I miss something or was the first time he was brought up? Its midnight where I'm from and I'm a bit dazed, but I love this chapter and I love this story...I'd follow you anywhere to ready this bitch...thanks for the posting on FF to let readers know you updated...this site does not do that...and that blows!
Author's Response:
No prob. I'll do that for all chapters that come here only. Chapter 6 will be another that's only here. Aaron was mentioned in the very first chapter (the original one shot). He's the little boy who died from heart troubles.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:54 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up
followed this on FF til all that BS theyre pullin!! lovin the story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Appreciate you coming over here to read!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:48 PM Title: First Date Insanity
This is the best line: Fuck your little leprechaun self and the miniature pony you rode in on, Alice Cullen
Author's Response:
Yeah, I was not expecting that line and when it popped up, I just sat there laughing at the screen for a bit. Bella has some great short jokes/insults.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:33 PM Title: First Date Insanity
Oh no, is there something wrong with Edward? I was all le sigh indeed that was hot and now you have me worried.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:51 PM Title: First Date Insanity
Great chapter. Love how Bella is so in your face but vulnerable at the same time. What she did for Alice was amazing and she shouldn't beat herself up over it.
Worried about Edward - racing heart, extreme tiredness just doesn't sound right! Can't bear it if Edward is sick and dies - it will kill Bella!!!!! :[
Author's Response:
She probably shouldn't, but she's a masochist and they can't always help themselves. I have a feeling Edward being around is going to help her get past some of her demons, though.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:30 PM Title: First Date Insanity
Beautiful...
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:04 PM Title: First Date Insanity
what a date!! is she gonna talk to alice and rose about what happend to him after??
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
No. By the time she sees Alice and Rose again, she'll have put it out of her mind, not finding any reason not to trust what Edward tells her.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:32 AM Title: Gonna Make Fools
glad to see another chapter! starting to hate ff.net so its great to have somewhere else to follow you!
~Tiffany