Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
At least Bella found out now before she got even deeper in this. Is Edward ever going to grow up??? Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love Seth! I hope we see more of him. I think he is very good for Edward. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow...didn't give that much of a try did you Edward. I am glad that Bella says what she does to him. He deserves it. I hope it all starts to sink in a some point. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is going to learn a few things, but I am afraid Bella will get hurt in the process. Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well this is an interesting Edward. I can't wait to get caught up! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love the chapter
Date: 12 Aug 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
WOW! I am a bit speechless... I didnt plan on dinner going like that. I am glad Edward told her how she feels. I don't knnow if I am upset with Bella or not. I mean she is trying to protect herself and E does have a raunchy lil past that she has witnessed...but E really put himself out there, so i feel bad for him.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh edward... bella get ur head out of ur ass! js
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
WOW that was harsh of him, but at the same time I would be pissed if I was him. great stuff!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow I didnt think she would react like that she loves him to does she think he is just saying it and not mean it????
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
That hurt my heart
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
HOT!!!!
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank goodness he went back and ran into Alice she set him straight.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Alice sure got to Edward!! I am so glad she showed up!
Hopefully he does a lot thinking tonight.
Author's Response:
Alice can be helpful when she wants to be!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
yay! yay! yay! he so loves her!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
lol.. ok that last line was funny. But I am happy that Edward went back to make up with Bella and admitted things are changing. The next night should be a good one.
Author's Response:
He can be cool sometimes. I wish someone brought me Kung Pao chicken. Has anyone realized I write about food too often in this fic? I'm always hungry, apparently.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
loved this updat!
Author's Response:
thanks! :) next update should be this Friday!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love your story. The snarkiness works great.
Author's Response:
:) thank you for your kind words!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well she sure knows he's jealous now! Too bad he didn't take Seth's advice?
Anxious for the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay! Okay, so I've just joined in on this story, love it! can't wait to see where Edward goes with this now that he's finally realizing he loves her!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! Now, let's just hope he doesn't screw this one up, huh?
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella!!! Great chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
love the chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad he figured it out. I am amazed that Bella didnt kick the shit out of him.
Author's Response:
I am also with you on that :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
"You look really pretty tonight," I whispered. Not because I was playing a game or because anyone else was listening. I just said it because...I wanted to? Cause it was the truth.
Aw, so sweet.
Love love love the texting.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Is it a sad sign of inflation that 500k isn't really all that much these days? Maybe I've been reading too many fan fics where Edward is ridiculously rich.
25% is very generous of him. I'm wondering if Bella needs the $$ for something specific.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 11:46 AM Title: Bella POV 2
Looking forward to next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! :) Update will be soon.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Aw, that's kind of sad that she had been paying him so much attention and he never noticed.
Edward reminds me of my husband. Reformed man-whores make the best husbands!
Author's Response:
LOL at your reformed man-whore husband. Yeah, of course Bella noticed him...but also didn't care to get to know him because of what she knew about him.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:23 AM Title: Bella POV 2
Bella and Alice are to funny together but Alice is right about Edward I dont like the idea of a date with someone else.
Author's Response:
Edward isn't going to like it either ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:11 AM Title: Bella POV
So James is a cheater??? She cant let go
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:44 AM Title: Bella POV 2
time for the games to begin! i wonder how eddie is gonna react to bella on a date with someone else?
Author's Response:
Oh, you'll see soon enough ;) EPOV update should be tonight or tomorrow. Thank you for reading & for all of the reviews!!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
Why was Bella so upset that he found out about her gram??? Tanya had to raise her skanky head
Author's Response:
I guess it was not so much anger about knowing of her Gram but just him getting closer, knowing more about her personal life when she was going to try to pull back... you know?
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:28 AM Title: Bella POV
oh bella of little faith! eddie is a good guy, a little self absorbed and definately full of fucked up ideas but a good guy none the less. not everybody is out to cause pain and suffering. but the james tidbit definately sheds light on bella's responce to tanya showing up....
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
She did the fuck and duck??
Author's Response:
It's funny how so many ppl (at least over on FFN) thought Bella pulled a fuck & duck on him. It was tempting, let me tell you, but they were out of town & that'd be like...the ultimate fuck & duck haah I couldn't let B hurt his ego like that.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh eddie it shows real growth that even though you have no clue of what you did wrong at least you know that you did it. holy shit does that even make sence? ah well you know what i mean! lmfao
Author's Response:
HAHA no, it makes perfect sense. He doesn't really understand why but he knows he fucked up...somehow. haha
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh shit bella let him go way too far. i wonder what she is thinking and feeling right now?
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
i can't even imagine not having my mom around all the time. even now at 34 my mom gets mad at me if i don't call her when i'm sick. heehee she took 5 days off work and drove down 5 hours to come sit with me in the er everyday waiting for chest xrays when my lung colapsed. seriously sit wait xray wait doctor go home. 5 days just cause i was sick.
Author's Response:
That is so sweet :')
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
the texting was good, normally not a fan of it in fics but this was too funny!
Author's Response:
haha! Thanks...I'm glad you enojyed the texting. I'm not usually a fan of it either but I felt it was necessary... :)
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
heehee these two are awesome! i love how bella doesn't pull any shots.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
well i guess that was easy enough, but something tells me bella is gonna make him work for everything...
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
That is a good trip and I am so happy he told her about her parents
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow jump forward in time! eddie is screwed and is gonna have some explaining to do over this one.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
aww see eddie can be a good guy. and being a big brother probably earned him points with bella.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh eddie! a relationship is a little more than slipping out for a quick fuck. that's definately part of it but not all of it...
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
i vote for em being right on this one. she is not gonna make this easy on him at all!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
so cute how she has him drawn in already just by blowing him off. ironic
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think he will find Bella does alot of thing that are going to make him feel strange
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
well ed just sounds like a normal 20-something fuckup. not many people have hit that critria by that age. definately a good way to spin a story though! lol
Author's Response:
haha yeah, a typical 20-something guy, I know. He is forcing himself to fit that criteria though to get the money. That's all that matters to him right now!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am adding this to my favorites! I love your witty banter. Edward is fun as an asshole. I'm excited to keep reading.
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
i agree with her i think this will be fun
Date: 28 Jul 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Bella is going to get a bonus lol
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
The shit hit the fan.
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
I cant believe he has been able to stay away from her
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
He is not going to get off that easy. pun intented lol. What is the deal with James??
Author's Response:
Haha loved the pun. And yes, you are correct! You will find out more about James later!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful that he confided in her!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is fooling himself
Date: 28 Jul 2011 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I was right this sounds fun. She shot him down wow he is not use to that.
Author's Response:
Nope! He is definitely not used to that haha thanks for reading!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
sounds fun
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 28 Jul 2011 4:40 AM Title: Bella POV 2
haha funny love this story Thanks :)
Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:43 AM Title: Bella POV 2
I read all 14 chapters today and loved it! I love Emmett's kind heart and how the characters interact. I hope the date doesn't backfire and Edward doesn't seek revenge, but I have a bad feeling that may happen.
Author's Response:
I'll go ahead and say that Edward will not try to seek revenge, but that doesn't mean he's going to keep his mouth shut ;) Glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
He has feelings and his behaviour comes out of his defensivness
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hilarious, all the texting.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh! I love the interaction between these two.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Clever girl...God help him...
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Like the two sides to this chapter, acceptance and rejection, his thoughtlessness and her sweetness and cleverness, he is in so much trouble.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Not too sure how bad he is...Seth is sweet
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great relationship E an R have...
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Arrogant little pric...
Author's Response:
Haha yes, arrogant is correct. But as you've seen (I see you just read chapter 10?) he does have feelings but has learned to keep them hidden. Hopefully Bella can stick by him even when he screws up... thanks for reading & reviewing! Update will be EPOV & should be on Friday!