[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2012 7:55 PM Title: The Light
Interesting. Carlisle has exhibited that he does have a conscious. He overcame the thought of the little head and for once used his big head in the face of pussy. I am amazed. Great job Lex.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2012 12:50 PM Title: The Light
Wow! I'm impressed with & kinda proud of Carlisle. Honestly I am. Nice chapter & not filler in my opinion.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2012 3:00 AM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One
I love The Cullen's
Date: 30 Mar 2012 11:44 PM Title: The Light
I'm confused, guess I'm just really feeling his confusion. He doesn't seem to hear her & she doesn't seem to hear him. I don't know how they can ever be on the same page communicating the way they aren't, haha. I want them to be together though. I think what Carlisle said about Alex & M being the same scenario as Carlisle & Esme had been in.
I loved the chapter & I like the Carlisle & Alex story line, mixed in with E & B;-))
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 9:24 PM Title: The Light
I really enoy reading about Carlise and Alex! I do hope they get together!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 9:43 AM Title: The Light
please kill Carlisle...he kinda represents the worst kind of men. just shoot him
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 9:37 AM Title: Fight Club Part Two
love your story
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:02 AM Title: The Light
Edward talking with Alex about guys cheating was fun. I do love these light hearted times that Edward and Bella get to have together. Poor Carlisle he really tried to do the right thing with Alex. Wonder what will happen there. I think he's really truly looking for happiness and will make that change in himself to make it possible.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 11:06 PM Title: The Light
Carlisle is giving me fucking whiplash!
Edward makes me laugh so hard with the way he is with his kids!
OH! And Sonny is most definitely going to be dangerous when he is older!!
Like father like son! Enough said!
Great update!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 9:43 PM Title: The Light
Wow Carlilse found true love? I normally am not ever that interested in the lives of the characters other than Edward and Bella much. However, this little slice of Carlilse and Alex kept my undivided attention! Bravo!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 9:35 PM Title: Eclipse
Glad it worked out this way...
Date: 29 Mar 2012 9:17 PM Title: The Light
Thanks for the chapter. Though I have to say I'm one of those readers who are tired of the Alex/Carisle storyline. It just can't end well for her- guys like that don't change- ever. I wouldn't buy it and this Carlisle is an especially sleezy guy. It drives me mad to see him get away with his behaviour.
I don't mind if Edward and Bella have it easier right now, they always have so much going on. It will be very interesting once Bella meets her family. Can't wait for it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 9:17 PM Title: The Light
liled hearing from carlisle and alex.hope they can work shit out. lol giess carlisle can resist what bella calls the pussy spell when lex thrusted her wet fingers in his mouth..ool skip cant reist anything when bella does that...
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 9:05 PM Title: Two Weeks Later
Glad you didn't, it wouldn't have been as effective...stunning chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 11:35 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
I absolutely love love love this and cannot get enough! I have an assignment due in 1,5 hrs and am only half way through but this story is just so addictive I can't focus on my work! I love the plot, love your characters and cannot wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 26 Mar 2012 8:26 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
When I first started reading "Quiet Storm" a few days ago, I was honestly turned off by some of the hoochie slang, (Holla, Word, etc.), and wondered about your maturity as an author. However, I've never been so glad to have given a story a chance.
I've fallen in love with your characters and the lives they live, shit they go through. The way you weave them through the story and eachother's lives and circumstances, is truly a work of art. Both this and the former are phenominal stories, and I look forward to future updates!
I think I just may go back and read some of your other stuff. Many props!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 2:31 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Hope the father thing works out. Would LOVE it if Aro ends up with the sister!
Date: 25 Mar 2012 11:12 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
This story is fantastic! I can't clean my house or do laundry I read every chance I get. You are an amazing writer and you have created one of the hottest Edwards yet! THANK YOU!!!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2012 7:36 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
This was a great chapter and a nice surprise. I like how you have Edward being more aware of how he impacts his kids. And again you mixed the gangster with the sweetheart. Good Job
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2012 5:22 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
AHAHAH!! i loved that enconter! it was like he was meeting an underground celebrity :D i can't wait until more of this develops, it's such a great twist to have like another family in the picture, you're a genious! AMAZING CHAPTER!!
Date: 25 Mar 2012 1:57 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
What a great chapter, loved reading about Bella's Dad, and how sweet would that be for Aro & Lesa to become an item.
I thought what Carlisle did was hillarious & them getting all scrappy in the restaurant & again out in the parking lot. I was laughing out loud after he spilled the beans. His behavior is cute most the time but Edward was right how hypocritical is it of him when he planned to kill his wife if not actually did, so it's pretty twisted that I find it all great fun.? I blame your fabulous writing;-))
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:13 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Lexi 0
Amazing chapter. he new dad seems almost too god to be true. Should they do a paternity? And I can totally see Aro and Carlisle fighting over sister Lisa.
BTW - Carlisle - total punk move by him. Seriously how mabny chances at "love" should he get before the woman just don't buy his line anymore.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 9:12 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Awesome as always!!
Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:56 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Carlisle drives me mad. He's a little shit when it comes to women, yet he bitches out Mauro for doing it.
I wonder how Bella will feel when/if she meets her dad and his children? Her half brother idolizing Edward sounds like trouble.
Aro liking Bella's sister is a little wierd, but i think it would be good for him.
I'm looking foward to ch 42 :)
Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:43 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Carlisle needs to stop being nosy.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 12:13 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Gah! I am SO damn glad Bella's biological dad is not an asshole! Thank You for that. Great chapter. I hope B doesn't ever find out E went to him 1st.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 10:48 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Sorry for not posting a review... I think I was excited about getting another in a week that I was just waiting ;)
Loved this... And the chance for Bella to have a somewhat normal parent. Jeebus!!! Lol... Seriously, can't wait for next update!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 3:34 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Absolutely LOVED it! I'm happy that Bella's real dad is a good man! She needs
some good stuff about now!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2012 3:28 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
I think Edward has made some major changes. I am glad he did not let them kill Mario he should pay for hurting Alex. When Carlisle blabbed, I laughed. I said oh no you are stirring the pot.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 2:24 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
I love you I love you I love you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 2:18 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
great update I will write more on the other site !!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 1:23 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
I love this story, it's down to earth yet totaly crazy and funny as hell...keep writing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 12:41 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
I loved it! I like Edwards POV.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 11:36 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Another great chapter, cant wait to rread more. Aand thanks for the extra chapters this week
Date: 23 Mar 2012 11:33 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Well, sorry you didn't get the reviews you were hoping for on the last chapter. I did my part and reviewed. :0) I liked this chapter, looks like Carlisle may get his chance with Alex. maybe? I liked Edwards meeting with Bella's dad, that was sweet. Hope he's as good a guy as he seemed. Am I wrong or are there some adventures ahead for our guys? Love the story :0)
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2012 10:59 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Lexi daarrlin this was so damn good sweetness.... Lets start with Kylie!! makes you want to pinch the dolls cheeks she's so cute... then we go to the breakfast/sit down...Holy hell Carlilse you are so damn hiliarious when you outted Mauro, I was rolling...that shit was priceless! Now, I 'm glad that Daddy Ed seems to take up for Carlilse especially in this matter with Ronnie, cause even though I know lots of reviewers do not trust Carlilse, I think he honestly loves Alex, and given all that he's experienced I'm willing to give him credit here....I sometimes wonder how Ed justifies the greater compassion and support he always seems to show Carlilse versus Edward, not saying its wrong just that I sometimes see the injustice of his parenting skills....ya, ya.. I guess it pretty much happens in most households, right? so moving on.... So we get to Jersey and wow, glad that went as well as it did with Bella's father...of course, I'm happy our boy did that for her, again showing just how much he loves his wife... oh and glad she and Em resolved their little beef too, forgot to mention that last update...Now didn't we all see what was keeping Aro??? **giggles shyly** yep our guy is quick on that one... Way to go...but E's right this could be tricky...oh well... can't wait for next week... Long review and pimp-age here because you are sooo awesome, two huge chapters in one week.... Lord love our SLC....have a good weekend Kathy
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2012 10:56 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Oh how the plot thickens. I do hope Bella get a real parent out this situation. I am late to joinyoyr fan base. You are incredible writer. Double thnks for tow chapters this week. I really look forward to Wednesdays.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 10:23 PM Title: In Like Flynn
Awesome! Thanks for the immediate update. Love your stories. I'm very excited about what's to come.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 10:17 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
I am sorry I don't review every chapter, but my reviews would be nearly identical: thanks for another awesome chapter. Your dialogue is fantastic. I love your characters--perhaps too much as I'm always scared for them with endings like this. But it's the best kind of reaction: you make things feel real.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 10:03 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
I want Aro andBellas sister together:) that would be cute!!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 9:45 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
Thanks for the chapter! I really wish that Carilsle doesn`t get a shot with that poor girl. He is just gonna ruin her. Totally with Bella on not trusting him and putting ideas in Edwards heart. How typical was it for Edward to check Bellas real father out? Another interesting chapter- I can`t wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2012 9:14 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
loved it. hmm mauro will he caise trouble or let ir go bc skip said so....bellas family seemed nice hope she calls soon to meet them. cant wait for more!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 2:58 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
That shit with the baseball bat was hysterical! Loved it. Can't wait for part 2.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 2:41 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Them doing it is nothing new, but I love it all the same!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 2:31 PM Title: Members Only
So, Esme's out, but we lost Nanny. Sorry about the latter...not the former. Great chapter! Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2012 2:40 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Lexi - Great chapter. As always. I am really interstested in why Carlisle is acting so weird (this whole story really) compared to Part 1. Did he just ultimately have a psychotic break after the FBI agent or what? See you again soon!
vicki
Date: 21 Mar 2012 11:06 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Awesome as always
Can u tell us how many chaps are left please
NOT THAT IM IN A HURRY TO GET THE STORY OVER WITH
Just so I don't get my hopes up for a third sequel 😔
Date: 21 Mar 2012 10:24 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Amazing... as always! I grew up in Brooklyn and have lived away from home for 2 years now. Every Wednesday you make me homesick. Quiet Storm and Weather the Storm are by far the best Twilight fanfiction I've ever read. And an extra chapter this week?! HOLLA!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 7:19 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
I finally caught up with this story. I love this family so much. They might not be conventional. but Edward loves Bella and his kids so much. Carlisle needs to concentrate on being a parent and leave all females over the age of 18 alone. Carlisle needs to put his kids before his penis for the first time in his life. It is time for Carlisle to stop being selfish and leave that young girl alone. She does not need a ready made family with a preteen daughter. Edward needs to tell Mauro to man up drop the stripper and be with Alex or let Alex find a real man and happiness. Alex is a daughter of one of their own and deserves to be treated with respect just like his daughter. If I lived in this world, Carlisle would be dead for cheating on Esme years ago. I know Edward would not let some one cheat on his daughter. This crap has got to stop. Edward seems to be the only good man in the organization. He needs to expect more from his men, since he is the boss. He makes the rules. They would have less problems if they kept their pants zipped at work.
Date: 21 Mar 2012 5:33 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 4:34 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
awesome fucking chapter, loved it !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 2:46 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
i freaking love this sife of edward! the side he only shows bella!
i wonder whats gonna happen with the sit down?
has carlisle found his bella? i hope so even though hes a man whore he still deserves it hes been a good daddy!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 2:42 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
I hope to see more about Sonny and Katie.....
Date: 21 Mar 2012 2:31 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Woohoo, 2 chapters in one week. I was so happy to read that Edward was following thru on his intentions to stay home more with the family and enjoying doing it.
Great chapter. Surely shorty isn't still involved with Mauro, their relationship would have to be over what with giving her the clap then hitting her. Enough already, I hope. A Bella for Carlisle would be nice. It's hard not to want Carlisle to redeem himself. Sewing tutu's all night, he's totally adorable at times.
Thanks for your contribution to those charities!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 2:15 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Another great chapter, i always cant wait to read more. i ove ur writtin style just so u know.......
Date: 21 Mar 2012 1:02 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
Boy your Carlisle is definately one you either love or you hate. ha ha This chapter I'm loving him again. He seems to really have it bad for Alex. I'm kind of hoping he gets the girl. Edward just makes me melt. I love love love him. He and Bella are perfect together. Looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 12:44 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
damn skip and that dirty talk! lol so hott even if he startslaughing. ready for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 12:02 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
You know, SexyLexi, besides being an awesome writer, I can tell from your author notes that you are a very caring and thoughtful person yourself! That makes you an even better writer! I wish you much success!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2012 2:06 AM Title: Members Only
I loved them all at the beach relaxed, carefree and happy. Edward bettter keep his head out of his ass now that they're back.
The relationship between Emmett and Bella is a little bit sad. I hope Emmett starts to be more accepting and understanding so they can make up.
I can't believe nanny's dead, but finally Esme's gone. Yay! She was making me nervous.
Jessee
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2012 1:05 AM Title: Members Only
Lex - this was a great chapter with a lot of stuff happening. I am really glad that Esme is gone and that she supposedly committed suicide. I absolutely believe that Bella is doing good by watching Carlisle. I worry about Edward but it is his life. The Emmet confrontation is down but really when did he start really giving a s**t about Bella? He has always kind of been on the sidelines and for him to think he has a right to say what he did as far as the wives go is overstepping - I have relatives like that and I wouldn't have been as composed as Bella was. You are amazing!
Date: 16 Mar 2012 1:34 AM Title: Members Only
Thank you so much for the update great chapter. I'm thinking Esme did kill herself, or did it the way a person does when pointing a gun at a cop. I think if she threatened to go to the FBI that would have the same effect, I'm hoping to find out what really did happen.
What is with Emmett getting all judgemental/distrustful of Edward all the sudden. I don't think he has anything to worry about, I think Edward would die before he let something happen to Bella. I don't blame her for being angry at his attitude.
And last thank you for your charitable ways;-)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2012 10:49 PM Title: Members Only
I LOVE YOU!!! you never dissapoint hun! each chapter is great in its own! really amazing! i can't wait to read next chapter and hopefully many of the things we've seen now in that time jump will be explain more fully... or maybe not but an EPOV is in order!!
:D
have a great weekend!! and remember haters gonna hate *shrug them away* :p
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2012 11:07 PM Title: Members Only
Excellent chapter. My thoughts are all over the place. I hope this doesn't mean someone is goong to whack Bella. Looking forward to your next updatee. I hope you will have good things happen to you yours.
Date: 14 Mar 2012 9:50 PM Title: Members Only
Well gosh. Isn't Sonny the cutest little wise guy! Nanny was a great character. How many more chapters? No, nevermind, don't tell me.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2012 4:55 PM Title: Members Only
damn esme blew her brains out. then nanny dies. what a month. boy emmett is being a dick. he beter watch himself. great chapter!!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2012 3:54 PM Title: In Like Flynn
Good chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2012 2:18 PM Title: Members Only
great update !!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2012 1:26 PM Title: Members Only
Wow so Esme's dead and poor Nanny. Sad that things are so strained between Em and Bella. I hope they are able to fix that. They meant so much to each other once upon a time. He does need to let go of his bad thoughts of Edward though (after all this time).
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2012 9:11 AM Title: Love and Happiness
Amazing ad always. Esme was always causing problems. But it would kill both bella and Edward to have Bella do time for not talking. Great twist.
Date: 11 Mar 2012 1:56 AM Title: Love and Happiness
Aghhh, damn Esme, I really want her 6 ft under.
I'm exited for Carlisle & Alexi, I think they'd make a great couple and it would sure be nice for C to stop his whoring ways. I wonder if he can.
I can't wait to read more! Thanks for your awesome writing:-)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2012 8:27 PM Title: Love and Happiness
That shit at the boardwalk where they robbed the robber...I spit ice all over my fucking keyboard! Esme...clip that bitch please...
Date: 09 Mar 2012 7:35 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
I'm so behind on my reading, but I really enjoyed this chapter. Love me some Skip...I wouldn't bury him in sand...I'd bury him somewhere else : )
Date: 09 Mar 2012 4:14 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Bella is hilarious drunk... OMG!!!! She's all kinda mob wife just intensifies with a little help. Too funny... Can't wait for this dame bullshyt to be over with... Stupid ass Carlisle!!!
Question for you, do you let us know when the ff version is missing stuff and to come here for the unclean version?
Date: 09 Mar 2012 3:25 AM Title: Breaking Dawn
oh.my.fkn.gawd!!!!! sofaking HOT!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2012 11:21 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Oh Esme, what the fuck did you do this time?
Date: 08 Mar 2012 7:28 AM Title: Love and Happiness
Holy crap! Hope Bella's the one to ice Esme. This is just crazy! Crazy good story line.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 4:31 AM Title: Love and Happiness
Yikes, Esme could really cause some problems. Carlisle seems pretty genuine in his feelings for Alex. If things did work out with them then Bella would have a friend on the inside. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:43 AM Title: Love and Happiness
Another great chapter cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2012 12:40 AM Title: Love and Happiness
OMG! This chapter was FREAKING AWESOOOMMMEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
One of my favorites to date!
And I have finally made up my mind about Esme...She needs to go! Enuff said!
Drama, drama, drama! Love it!!
Loved the little alley stint! Fucking Bella kills me!
Great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2012 11:02 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Loved it!!! I am happy for Carlisle. He needs some happiness!
DEATH To Esme!! lol *evil cackle*
Date: 07 Mar 2012 8:33 PM Title: Love and Happiness
I lOVE Wednesdays and get excited when I see a new chapter alert! I just love, love, love what you are doing with these characters! I hate to think of this story coming to a close. I will really miss them when they are gone!
Drunk Bella makes me laugh! Poor Edward had his hands full with that one!
Date: 07 Mar 2012 8:22 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Esme just keeps on making problems. I guess with Marcus for a father and her husband a manwhore what can you expect.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2012 8:09 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Hey Lexie darling - This was a KILLER chapter; I know it winding down and you know how sad I am but HELL I still read and re-read QS all the time so I know that I will do the same with this one too!
I wanted to bang my head against my desk again, it finally snapped into place Alex and Mauro and who they are.... LMAO!!! good one.... I always garner such cool information from E's POV he always seems to point out little tid bits of information that I wasn't picking up before hand. Anyway... his talk with "C" was wonderful and I loved how "C" wanted Mauro to go with Aro rather than Anton - so Mauro would be taken out rather than Anton. I was like.. Yep definitely playing into the "C" love by offing Mauro in FF world... LMAO!!! I must be totally drunk or something in the middle of the day for seeing it that way, but then again, I'm way too much of a crazy reviewer and fan to see it any other way.....
Okay so then... Yep then E gets the righteous inspiration to Mark the Dress has on (borrowed from Alex I might add) so she can't wear it out of the house. Our Boy Sonny is growing up. Had wet dreams and Dad's helping him out by talking with him about it. Loved that. This trip to the shore was really good for them....
Then Alex cried over the dress... awwwhhhh.... poor girl is sooooo confused, honestly honey Big Boy C will buy you a Truck load of dresses when he makes you his, if we get that far... LOL! The trip down to the Lighthouse and the events at the lighthouse really made me Pleased and Happy with "C" 'cause it does appear he genuinely cares for Alex and wants only good for her. Kinda ticks me off at Mauro him and his Goomba! Sheez! Seriously bought her more than he did for Precious Alex... arrrgggghhh.. Now Esme Seriously she is wacked!
Holy Shit BeBella you are totally a Don's Wife and Better Half - When you put a beat down on blondie for smacking on Mr. FuckHot! I was cheering you on Sista! But then knowing the Oinker's would be coming and knowing what was in your Bag, well that just wasn't gonna turn out right, thank you E for taking care of the Princess Bride... LOL! Then Holy Hell getting held up in the Alley; I knew Bella was gonna put her 9 out... Shit that was hiliarious, making the guy strip... girlie your wonderful....
Now for Esme!!!! Sheez! You have to take care of this crazy biotch! Seriously can't have collateral damage within the Family... Take the biotch out... I knew she was trying to flip, but she's not as sly as our creative SLC, nope notta! I trust you to take care of this in your Wonderful way.... till next week, I hope you have the BEST week and LOVED the chapter, but I guess you couldn't tell... Right!? What? So I am a chatty Kathy... that is my name ya know.... Mauwh!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2012 7:42 PM Title: Love and Happiness
wow!! loved it. hmm i wonder if that is really boe edward feels that bella is a sloppy drunk and he gets'embarrased....and cant wait to find'out what happends'to esme.
Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:44 PM Title: Love and Happiness
They should just kill her already....
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:43 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Loved this chapter. Edward and Carlise are funny in this chapter. And Sonny's wet dream, loved it !!! Having a son, it hits home. Hope you had read my review for last chapter and maybe it helped with some ideas. Nice bathroom LEMON !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:21 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Oh this is just too much I love the whole Alley scene KILLED ME! I needed a good laugh thanks so much great chapter cant wait for the next!
Date: 07 Mar 2012 4:34 PM Title: Love and Happiness
Good Chapter....
Date: 07 Mar 2012 3:42 PM Title: Love and Happiness
I so love the robbery scene. :-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2012 10:50 AM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
Lovely chapter! Bella does need to mind her own business! lol so nosey :p
I miss EPOV and back to business but honestly? i'll whatever the hell you write! :D
and what do you mean by wraping things up? NOOOO!! this story needs to go on and on and on! :( please make it a super long story!
Much love!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2012 4:45 AM Title: Breaking Dawn
Dude! that was crazy! but in a good way :D i excpected much much worse but i'm not easly shoked and i do watch Dexter lol so i really enjoyed the wickedness of this chapter, and i love how everyone was worrying about Bella seeing the skip so crazy like that...so cute!
Amazing chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm right there with you! angst is unnecesary but drama is a must, besides this is not a romantic comedy, if people don't know that by now well...
Amazing chapter! i totally get edward at the club, i'd be pouting too :p
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 5:17 PM Title: Too Many Movies
HOLY SHIT! i did not see that coming!
girl! you sure know how to keep us at the edge of our seats! :D
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:44 AM Title: A Tight Fit
Your chapters are NEVER EVER boring!! i'm so addicted to this story i can't stop reading!! i'm not getting any sleep here! lol
Everything is so intense, i love every single character and i also love the drama about Aro been in love with Bella and Carlisle...jeez! haha! it keep things so interesting, i don't get how some people flounce this or talk shit to you, i honestly don't get it! this story is like watching an action movie, it's not THAT shocking, at least not enough to get rude or nasty, it's not like you're writing about slavebary or i don't know, somehitng really fucked up, which this isn't, at all.
I love how real and open and straight forward E and B are with each other, it's my dream to be with a man who is a "no bullshit" kind of guy if that makes sense...anyway...i need to read more! bye!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 9:52 PM Title: Two Weeks Later
OMG! that was the most intense chapter yet! wow! dude! this is amazing! i would love to talk to someone who has flounce this story because i have no idea how can anyone stop reading this!! i started with Quiet Storm last week and i haven't read any other fic since! and i usually read a lot! i don't know what i'm going to do after this is over! i swear i don't even want to think about it :(
You're amazing!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 12:39 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
I would take the EPOV :-) I like the shore... great work
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:56 AM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
I love your story. I almost failed in my class because instead of studying I read your fics QS and this sequel. Thanks for sharing it with us.