Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:02 PM Title: Long Day
another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:06 AM Title: Now and Then
The ladies sharing and all learning. Fabulous Chapter.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:07 PM Title: Well Enough
Bella needed to tell Renee and Lauren off for years. It just happended to all come together on the same day. Edward didn't know what to think of it, but it seemed he found it hot as hell. Bella and Edward should burn off some of that excess energy and stay hidden in their room for awhile. They never seem to get enough alone time. I think that is one of their major problems. They don't get to reduce their stress and show each other how much they need each other enough. Taking care of the kids is great, but couple time is more important. They need to make sure they make time for themselves. They will always make time for the kids. They are great parents.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:00 AM Title: Now and Then
Cool chapter. I enjoyed the introduction of new characters and them being friendly with Luke's GF Elena. Is there a reason for this?
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:35 PM Title: Now and Then
Oh how time has moved!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:29 PM Title: Now and Then
Another great chapter. I have to say, I am really gonna miss these guys when you are done. Can't wait till the next update.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:35 PM Title: Now and Then
Neva disappoint as always funny chapter I liked it
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:32 AM Title: Now and Then
Congratulations on your nomination, I'll keep my fingers crossed for you;-)
Great read. I wonder what's up with Rose?
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:04 AM Title: Now and Then
Nice chapter. I like Alex but I guess I have issues with her maturIty level. I hoPe Hannah gets on board soon.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:11 AM Title: Now and Then
Loved this chapter Lexi....Great job...I'm so going to miss this story. :( I look forward to every wednesday. I read this chapter on the way home from Florida Wed...Enjoyed it.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Now and Then
That was great and a day in their life much needed. Almost normal! lol
I love how you detail every emotion and thought because it does put you right in their moment. Very understandable. I think Edward is pretty unique and love him madly (do not tell Bella!). Though his words of 'just one more' scares me because per usual those are just that, 'last words'. Always wanting that one more hit, one more payoff and they usually get whacked. I know you won't do this to our beloved Edward but it still makes me shiver.
Bella is handling her position quite nicely. She's got respect and everyone listens to her (even Hanna). Alex will be okay and this plot to corner Carlisle is nul and moot at this point and I think Alex realises this. Dumb plan anyway. Like Bella said, immature. Karen is a piece of work. Old time ways for sure. Keep the woman barefoot and pregnant. Ugh I always hated that term. And yeah. The men marry out of their culture, it's allowed nowadays. Funny 'cause my Momma told me not to marry an Italian man cause they always compare you to their Momma's and they're spoiled. My Dad had a totally different opinion of that!!
Good job and your work is never boring, don't forget I said that. ;) Thanks so much for all your devotion to these two characters. I love them dearly.
Ciao!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:35 PM Title: Now and Then
Enjoyed it. Always love me some Bebella and Skip.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:53 PM Title: Now and Then
Great chapter.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:04 AM Title: Now and Then
Interesting girl talk. I forgot about Alex's scheme. Will Carlisle fess up about Theresa? I don't know why people have issues with Alex. I really enjoy her character. So what's up with Elena? Nervous about being around the Cullen's?
I know I always say this..........but when your story is done (which I will miss immensely) you should consider pulling and publishing. Could make it big:-). I saw 3 patients today that were reading Fifty Shades of Gray because everyone is talking about "christian Gray"
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:22 PM Title: Now and Then
Oh love the loving but i have a feeling the heist is a set up
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:06 PM Title: Now and Then
I enjoyed the chapter. It's nice that things are slow and normal for them right now. After everything, they all need slow and normal.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Now and Then
Great chapter!! It was time for someone to put little Hannah in her place.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 7:07 AM Title: Now and Then
Love how you gotta break Indian for some folks... For someone who loves this story regardless... Can't wait to see how you wrap this all up. Loved how you wrapped up INI so totally excited for this one.
Hope there isn't too much drama in between now and 60, plus the 10+ in time jump. Hope elena was just jumpy and didn't leave anything fishy with the envelop. Call my paranoid but just looking out for our mobward ;)
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:57 AM Title: Now and Then
Thank you for keeping this story going and keeping it full of every kiind of excitement!! Simply love it!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:31 AM Title: Now and Then
I couldn't review at fan fic so here i am ...You said slowing down mmm i dont think so I just love it i love your character the original and the new ones and Alex is awesome she just fit everything you make all perfect and if someone give you shit for it .. Fuck them
You are awesome and as I told you before you have a talent
Love
Mariana
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:32 AM Title: Now and Then
Loved it SLexiC!!!
xoxox
ba
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:21 AM Title: Now and Then
nice chapter. very nice lexi.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:20 AM Title: Now and Then
Gotta love 'old' mob wives...lol They are some crazy ass women.
Edward needs to just relax...i know...like that will happen!
Dont know if I want this to end....kinda sad that way.
Loves you hard <3
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Now and Then
Man I personally loved how suspious Edward was of Bella and her loving in him all the time. What did he call it.. her "Freak beneath the sheets" Well Mr Fuck Hot Pussy Lips just remeber all those days Ya didn't get whar Ya wanted from the Little Woman..... LOL! I so loved Hanna and Lizzie thinking they were gonna have the "Magic Mike, Hour" break'n some laws up in the Cullen Mansion!!! LOL, yep totally stole that bit from Matthew McConaughey in Magic Mike.........
Okay I'm not angry whatsoever over your original character of Alex.... I want Carlisle to be Happy! She's just young and has really been treated rotten, in the past....she needs confidence... I was also happy to hear Bella taking up for her Brother in law.... Kuddos Bella!
Laters Doll Face, you know you still Rock in my book..... please don't ever pull these two stories QS /WS I would cry you a river..... seriously love your writing... Have a nice 4th of July.... till next time Kathy
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:22 AM Title: Now and Then
I personally really liked this chapter. There was not a lot of drama. But that's ok. Quiet is nice sometimes. And Bellla keeping Edward happy. That was great. They needed to re-connect!! ;). As always, love the story and look forward to the next updates!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:34 AM Title: Now and Then
funny that the girls were hoping for a stripper. ha ha
Date: 27 Jun 2012 11:53 PM Title: Now and Then
Great update! The girls were funny, hoping for strippers! I am excited for the time jump and to read about everyone's lives!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 11:40 PM Title: Now and Then
I loved it! It's not boring at all, I felt like I was at the shower watching this all go down. Damit now I want cake! 😘
Date: 27 Jun 2012 11:28 PM Title: Now and Then
Slow it down and make it "boring" as much as you like; for the first time ever, I'm sad when I see an update because I know that's one fewer chapter I have to look forward to. Plus, I admit, I'm a little worried some character is gonna die... but please don't change your plan on that account. Even when I cringe (Bella punching Lauren), somehow, it winds up making me love the story more. You pull this and publish it, I'll buy it.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 11:27 PM Title: Now and Then
nice little slice of life/shower story. i love the way bella interacts with the younger women and teenage girls....like she is the mother hen/den mother of the group. love the way edward smirks internally at the thought of his wife fighting Lauren over the flirting non-issue....men are pigs sometimes...LOL. the overall casualness of this chapter is a nice way to wind down the story. too bad you couldn't hit your goal of 69 chapters. i would have loved that! i love the story anyway, you must know that by now.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:16 PM Title: Now and Then
Loved it it was awesome !
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:03 PM Title: Now and Then
aww loved this chapter!!! elena seems a little fishy though....(rpattz luvor)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:43 PM Title: Now and Then
Haha, love it! Especially all of the stripper stuff with the girls!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:35 PM Title: Now and Then
I so loved this update, bringing in the younger girls ALex and Elena and she can look back and catch glimpses of herself. i love it. Edward and the guys at the arcade, cute. I worry about Lukes soon to be wife, she was acting fishy as well as scared out of her mind. I think we all understand about the story line and timeline you have !!!!! Love ya Lexi
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:25 PM Title: Now and Then
This is probably one of my favorite mob fics out there. Seriously, I can't get enough. It's weird... even though things are peaceful, I'm reisitant to letting my guard down. Because I know when that happens someone gets shot, or an affair is uncovered, or there's some big misunderstanding that causes Bella and Edward to fight. Yeah, guess I'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Argh! I love this fic!
(But seriously, what's up with Rose's beef?)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:15 PM Title: Now and Then
I'm a little concerned about this whole one last score thing. :-( other than that Great Chapter!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:45 PM Title: Well Enough
Hi Lexi, great chapter :))
Finally, Lauren's got what she deserved. LOL
Not only italian girls don't play nice with somebody who put the make on their mans ;)
Alex??? I hope she'll run away from an altar. She's too good for C :))
E?? What can I say? Like always B drives him crazy in so many ways ;))
Renee??? Mother like she should burn in hell.
Thanx for everything :)
Hugs, M.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:32 PM Title: Well Enough
Never a dull moment!!! Loved it...and Lauren had it coming : )
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:38 AM Title: Well Enough
I LOVE when feisty B comes out to play!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:44 AM Title: Well Enough
Aww love it glad laren got that beat down
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:23 PM Title: Well Enough
well that was one hell of a sunday family dinner! lol too funny
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:56 AM Title: Day-to-Day
cant believe c fucked with her pills and basically planned this whole set up! and alex is just letting herself be steam-rolled into this marriage!?! wow!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:18 AM Title: Logic
well it looks like the storm has past with the bella-aro-ed thing. and kylie is the worst potty mouth ever! lol
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Days Like This
ed still seems fucked up.... i hope this is a stepping stone to ed and bella having a more healthy relationship....
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:19 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
aro tried to help... tried to save her from this but ed forced her hand and bella had to step up in an effort to show him they are still tight and she's sorry... kinda fucked up. they need to sit and talk, reconnect. and you just know the aro hugging and in the bedroom thing is gonna come back at them when ed finds out....
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:37 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
i feel for ed he's right she is acting like it's his fault and she s the only one freaked out and fucked up over the sonny thing. if anything ed probably feels worse and more fucked because it was a shot ment for him.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:51 PM Title: This Woman's Work
oh shit it isn't her brother is it?!?! that would be way too fucked up. maybe that's why daddy's been calling? shit is getting heavy. but at least sonny is gonna see boobs!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:12 PM Title: Craft of the Father
sonny shot!?!?! someone is gonna die. and it sounds like the momma bella bear is gonna take a pound of flesh for this one, can't say i blame her. i'd kill any mother fucker who was stupid enough to fuck with one of my kids....
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:58 PM Title: End of the Day
dame is a sneeky lil fucker! sonny gets in shit cause he's more out there with everything, dame though.... he's just as bad. lol
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:16 PM Title: Thanksgiving
so sweet how the chapter ended off. it's true you gotta be thankful for your family and all of the joys, tears, fights, screaming, laughing, crying, loving moments you have with them. nice to see ed realize a little about himself here.
and aro got a date with the sister! boyneeds to find his match, his love....
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:52 PM Title: That Thing You Do
sonny is such a little player! he is gonna be bad news once he grows into his own. a little carlisle... bella will be so happy
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:59 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
yay c finally got the girl! now all we gotta do is find someone for aro. i'm still thinking bella's sister....
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:31 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
what is up with aro? i thought he was hot for bella's new sister, he can have his own bella, heehee. but now with alex...? and carl...? who will get which girl?
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:58 AM Title: Well Enough
OMG that was funny! I had to lol at Bella attacking Lauren. I love this story so much I don't want it to end. Thanks for another great chapter :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:46 PM Title: Fork Me
c is a pig teaching ant that trick! the fuck?! and poor baby walks away... i'd die.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:21 PM Title: The Light
wow carl said no and walked away. i wonder how that will work out for these 2? it would be nice for c to find his someone...
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
not sure what to make of carl and alex... could it be true that he is growing up and changing his ways?!?! or will it all go back to normal when he catches her and gets his dick wet?
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:34 AM Title: Members Only
es is gone - yay but nanny is too - boo.
not sure i'd be able to forgive em so fast either....
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:22 PM Title: Long Drive
I love the way they know British history. The way they compared Esme to Anne.
I remember reading the Tudors at school in the 1970's.
I really love this story I hope Edward and Bella don't have anymore upseting times it breaks my heart. xx
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:18 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Stopped reading for awhile wasn't sure if I wanted to continue. Decided earlier today to catch up... Have the feeling by the end of the evening I will be up to date and waiting for the next chapter... So, glad I came back.. Thanks as always for the wonderful story... Had it been any other author I probably wouldn't have come back but your stories are some of my favorites...
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Well Enough
Damn...Bella's going nuts!!! I love it!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 11:59 PM Title: Well Enough
I ended up laughing my butt off but let's get to the beginning. Alex and her immature ramblings. I hope everyone else can see she really is an honest person with a good heart. She's been protected all her life and now she venturing out. It's confusing for her. Bella is a good friend to her. Calms her down when she gets flustered and gives her good sound advice when it comes to Carlisle. I think it will take a while before everyone believes Carlisle's heart belongs to only Alex. It's time for him.
Dinner was a blast!!!! Yes Renee is cookoo, kabotz and drunk but she sure made that dinner spark didn't she??? She's got a cold blue heart and I can't tell you how happy I was when Bella grabbed her hair and made her listen to her. That woman is missing out on life, her own family. She won't get it anywhere else. Fool. I felt really bad for Derek, Renee never told him. His son got offed cause he was stupid and Derek is trying to make up lost time to Bella. I'd give him a hug.
Now Lauren Hell Yeah! Punched that bitch hard, roll around cat fight. Awesome!!! I'd be all over that scene if I were there. Us Italian girls don't play nice with flirty bitches. na ah, no way. Respect, give it, earn it.
Great chapter. Want to pinch your cheeks!!!
Ciao!!!
I totally loved this chapter
Date: 21 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Outstanding as always. Boring??? Not in my head. This feeds my adrenaline.
Luke, he seems like a cry baby, grovels too much. Love the way Edward handles him-just says it like it is and takes care of it. No harm done (well not everyone) but...
Carlisle's getting married, I knew it would end up that way. Alex is young, she just has a flitty mind. She doesn't really know what she wants but she wants Carlisle and she really doesn't mind the kids-she's a natural around them. I think she'll be a good mom. We'll see.
Sonny's doing good, changing up and Damion is going to be the one to watch. He's got the ants in his pants. ha! I think Kylie will be a vixen ?
Should be an interesting dinner with Derek...
I'm so anal about reviewing and I totally blanked it until I saw the new update. Forgive me.
Ciao baby ;)
Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Well Enough
Loved this chapter to bits funny, sad , all the good stuff u need in a good chapter and more
As normal never disappoint :)
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:15 PM Title: Well Enough
Hello Lexi, Bella was great, glad she had it out with her mother. I guess Lauren will stop flirting with Edward (at least in front of Bella). Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:06 PM Title: Well Enough
Best Parts:
I snuck downstairs to see what the kids were doing. I heard them before I even walked into the room.
They were all laughing while the movie played. Sonny was sitting in a chair, holding Katie's hand as they whispered, these huge smirks on their faces.
I held my heart and stared, but Dame caught me.
"Dinner ready, Mommy?" He jumped in front of me.
I held his cheek. "Almost."
"We weren't doing anything," Sonny said.
I widened my eyes. "Never said you were . . . you sound guilty, though."
He tried and failed miserably at not smiling back at me.
"Just tell her, or better yet have Edward do it," Rosalie urged. "He has that—no nonsense way of speaking. She'll comply out of fear."
The coward I am did consider it.
"Eddie is so not scary anymore," Alice laughed.
"Wanna make a bet?" Rose fanned her face, the wine making her flushed. "He keeps all his guys in line. Renee'll shake in her boots."
"No. You did—you did it all! You cheated on your husband, and I had to suffer for it! Instead of owning what you did, instead of being a woman, you cowered—you had him punish me for your mistakes!" I ranted.
"You little—"
"Mom, come on." Emmett tried to usher her away.
"You had to stick your nose in where it didn't belong!" She kept going, getting closer, and I blocked her from my husband, pushing her hand and that finger away from him.
"Get your finger out of his face!" I shouted. "You don't get to talk to him like that, you hear me?"
"Bella." Edward stepped forward, placing me behind himself. It seemed we both wanted to defend each other. "Renee, I think you need to take that walk. We all need to relax. Derek—"
"Don't tell me what to do. You're not the boss of me!" And she pushed Edward, planted her hands on his chest and just pushed. My husband didn't move. He stood there like a wall, making sure I couldn't get to her.
"I just want to talk to her. Emmett will be there, Derek too."
Edward looked around us. "What can't you say in front of me?"
"Nothing—God." I was exasperated again. "Come if you want." I'd hated to admit that I only wanted to go out there so that I could maybe smack her mouth, hurt her in some way, and Edward would never let me.
"Carlisle forged some paperwork . . . DJ is the newest witness against Luke."
"What?" I was confused.
"C got it from one of his Fed buddies—some fuck on the take." Edward looked around us. "He's in WitSec."
"Witness protection." I had a short chuckle. "That's original. Why not just say he ran off with some chick?"
"Because . . . a man like Derek needs evidence. Carlisle fudged the 302 report, placing all of DJ's info on it. It worked. He sure as hell won't be bothering Luke anymore, nor would Derek bring it to his attention." Edward rushed out, his lips touching my ear.
"What about his brother?"
Edward leaned away. "I said I couldn't help him with that one, that I didn't know, but that he should leave it alone. Trust me; he understood. He's also grateful I won't give Luke the info about DJ."
"Is he . . . okay?" I shrugged, keeping an eye on Lauren.
He rolled his eyes. "Do you really care?"
I didn't reply to that.
"He'll rest easier believing his son isn't dead—that his son is doing the right thing. Regardless of anything, in Derek's eyes, DJ got himself out of trouble—out of debt and out of New Jersey. He didn't appreciate being practically strip-searched in my office, but . . . I had to make sure he wasn't wired for sound. Understand?"
I nodded. "I do . . . you did what you had to, what you knew would work." I grasped his hand to place a kiss on his knuckles, while I willed what was left of my frustration to leave.
"Get outta the car," Edward shouted, pulling away from me. "Lemme do it!"
"I got it!" Lauren hollered back, her tire hitting the curb.
"You get one more try, Mallory." My husband held up a finger, smirking.
Lauren giggled, making eyes, like they were flirting or some shit.
That bothered me, but…
My mind just kept wandering back to my mother, and I needed an outlet. I needed another glass of wine, some laughs, to go back in and spend time with my loved ones.
When that dumbass finally parked her car, I felt a bit easier.
"You look good—"
She was still talking to him, and she said the wrong thing at the wrong time. It was just too much.
In hindsight, what she said truly wasn't bad, but that bitch had it coming.
All those years I had to watch her flirt with my husband, compliment him . . .
All those years she'd sworn she'd kick my ass . . .
Fried calamari flew everywhere after I punched her in the jaw. She grabbed ahold of my hair, and I tackled her to the ground in our foyer.
"Bitch!" She slapped at my face.
"Skank!" I punched her once more, and then reached for her neck to squeeze. "Fucking whore—look at him again! I fucking dare you!"
"Holy fuck!" I heard Edward shout, and then I was lifted off of her.
"Schifosa!" I gave her an Italian salute, moving my hand below my chin.
"What has gotten into you?" Edward squeezed my arm so hard.
"Oww." I panted, and, needless to say, that really calmed me.
Once again, I had an audience for my atrocious behavior. Aro was helping Lauren off the floor, and it looked like everyone else didn't know what to make of it.
Lauren was crying…
"I thought you could beat my ass?" I widened my arms, welcoming her.
"Cut it out," Edward spat.
I folded my arms across my chest and shut my mouth.
"She all right?" he asked Aro.
Aro was trying not to laugh. "Yeah, she'll live."
"You're crazy!" Lauren shouted at me.
"So, what?" I just couldn't give a fuck anymore; however, I was very happy no children were around to see that.
"That was wicked." Jasper gave me a high-five and so did his wife.
"Bitch had it coming," Alice commented.
I nodded, agreeing with her.
"We're coming to Sunday dinners more often," Jasper laughed.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:52 PM Title: Well Enough
Well, that was one hell of a Sunday Dinner!!! Poor Bella, her emotions really took a hit. Her confrontation was a long time coming with Renee and even with Lauren tho perhaps that could have happened another time!! ;-)
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:07 PM Title: Well Enough
FANTASTIC!!! Thank god she finally clocked that bitch!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:04 PM Title: Requiem for a Dream
life as a married couple is tough, just gotta remember that you love the other person and work through the shit.
time to take care of esme....
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:04 AM Title: Well Enough
A little sexing can fix anything. Renee so deserved that and Lauren is a bitch that deserved a beat down.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:35 AM Title: Well Enough
Haha!!! Loved it!! Missed down ass Bella!! Always willing to throw down!!! :) I can totally imagine a sonny outtake to him viewing these fights lol!!!! *wishing* ;)
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:29 AM Title: Well Enough
Gah, Bella is such a bad ass & Edward got totally turned on abt that. Totally hawt! Lol!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:09 AM Title: Well Enough
This day started out so great and then my FN air goes out and it is hotter then hell up in here and now you tell me there is only maybe 10 chaps left of this story! I may need a drink after all this LOL! I love it when Bella gets a crazy and hits a bitch! Sad we didnt see it more! Great chapter!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Well Enough
Awwww yay so cute
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Well Enough
That last part was funny as HELL!!! I have been waiting on Bella to snap and finally slap Lauren. I would've beat the sh*t out of her the first time she flirted with my husband, but at least she finally let her have it lol.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:03 AM Title: Well Enough
if there is anything between ed and lau.... i say B castrates e and takes over the whole kit and kaboodle :
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:57 AM Title: Well Enough
Lmfao!!! Lauren deserved more than what she got!!!
Loved it!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:44 AM Title: Well Enough
my heart just melts every time he says "More than there are stars in the sky"
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:39 AM Title: Well Enough
About time Bella let Lauren have it. To many women disrespecting Bella in her own home. So what exactly is her moms problem with Bella? Does she resent her for being Derecks or the result of something she did?
Love the story! Will definitely miss it when it is gone. I look forward to the updates. I flip between here and FF.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: Well Enough
Great job. I can't wait to read about copward - sounds yummy already.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:21 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
I was hoping Alex would end up with Aro!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:17 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
And Bella's journey to the dark side is complete :(
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: Well Enough
I have been glued to these stories and am so sad they are about to end.
The characters are really interesting and the plot held my attention all the way through.
Carlisle doesn't have a good track record with women, unless he changes drastically.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Well Enough
LMAOOOOO Finally!!!! Lauren got her ass beat hahahahaha!! I really wish Renee would've gotten slapped but Bella did the right thing, Alex still annoys me lol I think it's mostly because I see it the same way Edward does, she's immature and ALWAYS around, I laughed when Rose dissed her lol that was funny!!! I'[m sad that it's ending soon but it's been a good ride!! All good things must come to an end I guess!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:42 AM Title: Well Enough
Fabulous story..love it!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:28 AM Title: Well Enough
"That was wicked." Jasper gave me a high-five and so did his wife.
"Bitch had it coming," Alice commented.
I nodded, agreeing with her.
"We're coming to Sunday dinners more often," Jasper laughed
LMFAO...your talent is enless I swear. I'm so happy we got a lil
Alice time because she cracks me up!!!
Thank Fucking God you finally had Bella beat Lauren down....that bitch did have it coming.
I can't wait to read the rest...and your WIP, I have them in my favorites at FFN.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:39 AM Title: Well Enough
Hate Renee. I love a fiesty Bella. Sad to know that things will be ending soon.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Well Enough
*fist pump for the dirty #*
That was an awesome rumble. I'm so glad Bella put the smack down on Lauren or should I say, 'the Skank, F'ing whore.' haha, hilarious.
Im so glad. She finally spoke up to Renee abo t all her feelings.
I don't want this to end:-(
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:22 AM Title: Well Enough
BAM...Bitch went dooooowwwn!! Bella...Super Bitch!!
Now there is the Bella we love so much! Glad that she got all that off her chest.
Loves you hard <3
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:06 AM Title: Well Enough
No, I couldnt handle Skip and Lau...
Yeah, Id go all wicked shit on her too. Go Bella!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:05 AM Title: Well Enough
Woo-fu+king-hoo!!!! Is it werid that I am so proud of Bella?? First her Mom the that skank hoe Lauren!! You go Bella!!! Damn Girl!! Even Edward liked it!!! Aro laughed!! Woot woot!! ( yeah I am still cheering!). So looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:00 AM Title: Well Enough
Fucking love it and the bitch totally deserve it! Can't wait for copward!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:31 AM Title: Well Enough
I am so glad she finally told her mother off and threw her ass out of the house!! I agree with Alice about Lau the bitch had it coming. Go Bella beat her ass :)
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:30 AM Title: Well Enough
whack-a-bitch, ***I'm so stealing that phrase fro Kim over at "Oh Captain, My Captain" *** Lauren, you should know better than to mess with Bella's man!!!! Oh, Jasper you are so very precious my darling man... Alice and Rose kinda got Bella reved up over Lauren before she ever got there though, in all fairness to Lauren....There is never a dull moment at Casa de Cullen is there?!?
oh, Renee you are one lucky Momma, that your girl didn't put a A$% pounding on you.... Gonna chalk up Alex's behavior to pregnancy hormones, she's just all over the place with what she thinks she wants.... awh, poor dear!!! Mercy Mr Percy what a day and they haven't even eaten yet.... hope everyone's hungry by now, we all know Bella worked up a appetite by now... **evil smirks** Laters Lexi babe!!! OMG what a awesome job you did in providing mob info for Grand Tale.... looking forward to Grand Vandetta too!!!!
Kathy
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:23 AM Title: Well Enough
Damn Bella was on a roll!! Great chapter!! Loved it!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:20 AM Title: Well Enough
what a Party. We all have nutty families but I am so glad I don't have a Renee. Lauren flirting with my husband I would deck her too.
You know you have a life... US I count you as one of the best writers in FFion. I think the number is under 20.
We all understand, we have our families. As in kids and husbands.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:02 AM Title: Well Enough
That chapter was AMAZING!
I love it, I just Love it! :D
Astrid