Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Well Enough
No! Don't stop. Now, what am I gonna do with my life. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:47 PM Title: Well Enough
What a family! I love this story and will be sad to see it end. Love that Bella finally unloaded on Lauren. I mean, what does Edward always do when he thinks someone is flirting with Bella? Turnabout is fair plan and Lauren has had that coming for a while now. I also love how hot it makes Edward to see Bella get violent! Straight to the bathroom and hard as a rock! Oh mama....
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:29 PM Title: Well Enough
I fucking love these guys! Every last fucked up one of them! I don't want this to ever, ever, EVER end!!
I love that you are going to jump ahead and give us POV's of everyone to let us know how they are doing and think it is a fantastic way to end it!
This chapter was magnificent! Soo good!
Great job! Thanks for all of your hard work that you have put into this story & Quiet Storm and sharing it all with us! I have enjoyed it immensely!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:08 PM Title: Well Enough
Yeah!!!! Finally beat the bitch down!!! She totally had it coming. Too mad more couldn't be done with Renee but she can be a loose end that just kind frays at the end. Although I love e &b pov's, your ther characters always come to life anyway. So when you get to the other folks... Theyll defiantly be awesome. Truly love this fic!!! Can't believe it's almost over, bu glad there's still a shytload left.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:07 PM Title: Well Enough
Lol. Glad Bella finally kicked Lauren's ass!!!!! Loved it. Glad Bella finally gave her mom what she deserved. Don't really understand how your ending this but I trust you. So looking forward it :-)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 10:37 PM Title: Well Enough
go bella!! renee had it comming and damn i am glad she finally got lauren she really had it comming!! loved it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 10:35 PM Title: Well Enough
Oh boy, nothing like family dinners, huh? I bet Nanny would be proud... LOL
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:44 PM Title: Day-to-Day
hey awesome as always! Quick question I'm pretty sure you might have said it before, but I'd like to be sure will there be a third installment of the series or not? Please says yes! I love your stories they aré absolutely awesome and if there isn't a third, at least I'll continue to read anything you write
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:14 PM Title: Long Drive
b asked for a hit, wow! i totally get it, hubbie offered to call in some favors back when we found out his sister's dad was this kind of scum. glad to see alice will get her justice.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:21 AM Title: NuMb
i get why carl let es leave but is that really a wise choice? guess we will find out as the story goes on...
carl got a little freaky scarey there for a while interesting to see. but i guess even if he is the quiet level headed one he is still a badass mobster...
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Day-to-Day
It's been a while since they had sex like that. I missed it...SSDD for Edward what with Jersey and the Albanians....guess that shit never ends. Love the stuff with Sonny and Damion.....guess we're nearly finished here?
Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:17 AM Title: Breaking Dawn
wow ed really lost it there for a while. everyone was freaked out, but bella brought him back. i wonder what the morning after is gonna be like? will aro talk to mc? will ed pitch a fit? does carl really have to get es out of ny? so much shit!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:49 AM Title: Logic
I like this chapter much better. Was the Skip too lenient with Lou? Maybe, but if Lou keeps on being like that, he won't live long....Love the family stuff....sorry to see this story end, but then maybe you can move onto finishing other stories, huh?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:18 AM Title: Days Like This
Are they really OK? It seems with every fight, every arguement, they get a little further apart. Say it isn't so. Please tell me it's my imagination, my stuff. I love this story so much. It contains real emotions, real feelings. I feel it in my gut. You say to trust you. I'm trying....
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:48 AM Title: Intricate Dance
you do not mess with a woman's family! she will take you down
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:33 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I'm glad she didn't kill him. It may have changed her for the worse. Edward is sending her away, sending her and Sonny away. You keep saying to trust you.....this shit is bad! How will you get them out of this one?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:04 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
This is their worst fight ever. I do have faith in you, but this shit is bad.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:03 AM Title: Aro's Daycare
sonny and katie are too cute, ed and aro are gonna have their hands full with that.
aro's date was cute and awkward, but no where near as awkward as the morning after will be if he stays. or if anything comes about with aro and gina... LOL
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:59 AM Title: The Twilight Zone
naked wrestling?! lol too funny. glad that bella and ed finally seemed to talk about their issues.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
aro killed that creepy fucker for bella?!?!? but seriously talking like that to ed?! he knows better....
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Blondie
wow es is really off the deep end! can't believe she tried to get aro to turn. nice of the fbi to let eddie hear the tape... wonder why the 1 agent is so hung up...? maybe future drama....
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Too Many Movies
es?!? why am i not surprised? bitch is fucked up! but what is ed gonna do?
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
Seeing bella get scared when they start aguring shows she still hasnt dealt with what happened and shows what most women who have been hit react too...great story i like how its real
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:15 AM Title: Day-to-Day
I finally made it to the last update... woman, you blow me away!
I think Alex might pull a Maggie Carpenter on her wedding day... no?
Can't wait to read what happens next!
xoxoxox
~Mia
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:21 AM Title: Eclipse
I read quiet storm and know how intense these two can get...he did punch walls by her head....hes just never took it so far as to force himself onher nor hit her physically, though he did force her to pick up that book and aro gave him hell for that, like the last chapter, and bella gonna shoot him at eclipse was wrong too i love how they are intense and lose their minds sometimes and im not in any means want you to think im being hurtful, its just in my opinion edward did go to far last chapter.....loved this chapter and your story
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:10 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
Even if your married you can say no.....what edward did was wrong he raped her and abused her and bella needs to see that....it will only get worseif she lets it, he never gone this far
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:55 AM Title: A Tight Fit
still loving the story keep up the great work!
to all of the haters.... if you have so many issues with the story why in the hell are you still reading it? 19 chapters in, you should know ifyou want to keep reading... just sayin... find something more more to your style and stop hating on our poor ms sexy!
ms lexy - i have been away from my ffn for months and who did i stop in to read first .... YOU! love the story thank you for sharing it with me :)
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:08 AM Title: Eclipse
yay aro's back! can't even believe he made a play for mc after he remembered everything... well i can and i love aro and wanted him and bella to hook up back in the original, but alas a hot hookup on the side is not gonna happen... i know.
nice to see everyone getting their shit together. the ed, bella, and aro thing may take a little while to get back though and it will never be the same....
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:20 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
that was intense! bella sure does put up with a lot, but that was established a long time ago.
can't believe aro is falling for bella. that could be some heavy shit down the road....
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:10 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Is it DJ that Edward doesn't want to tell Bella about? that's some grusome image of that kid biting the stairs before his head got kicked in....I may need to stop here and read more tomorrow....
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:39 AM Title: Craft of the Father
black guys in the drive-by car, huh? are they thinking it was Laurent? Lloyd is a dead man walking, I think. Mauro? he needs to go, but isn't a made man protected? This chapter scared me. Thank God Sunny will be OK.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:52 AM Title: End of the Day
Is there a coup coming on? I don't think you'll kill off Edward, but Carlisle or Aro might not be safe.....I truly do love their family life. Sonny will be trouble. After I finish this, I am going to read QS again. I just rec'd it to a friend and she loves it! Is it available for download yet? I would love to own my very own copy....
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:55 PM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two
where has my hot sexy badass aro gone?!?! he has to come back to play. eddie can't take the next step... he just can't...
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One
badass bella popped one for her man! how sweet in a mob-y kinda way.
going down hill! es wants to baby nap poor ant. heehee bella showed the bitch she needs to step off! awesome!
aro is awake but not aro. the fuck!?!?! and ed is talking about 'retirement' ?! THE FUCK!?! again i say... aro better be ok....
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:39 PM Title: Bucked Up
holy shit ed pulled a gun on bella?! creepy ass cousins talking shit about the missus?! carl and candy shot?!? shit is going downhill fast!
hell of a roller coaster ms sexy, hellof a roller coaster!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chasing Regret
aro better be ok....
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:08 PM Title: Rolling in the Deep
aro better be ok... just sayin...
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:23 AM Title: Thanksgiving
I always remember you say no cheating and a HEA. That's one of the reasons that I like your stories so much. That and the epic literery qualities to each of them that I have read. So no, I never thought Edward was interested in Alex. I do believe he is jealous of the time she spends with Bella....and really hope Carlisle can be redeemed by true love. Bella meeting her birth father is a real deal too...I understand that she's not used to having parents who care but maybe that will change. and, lastly, if Aro can't have his MC, then maybe he can have her look-alike half sister....oh and Sonny's boner was just too cute!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Sonny and Katie are the cutest thing ever! She wants to touch his penis and he wants to see her little rosebuds.....I love all this family stuff. Sonny's POV was very entertaining. He's 12 goin on 17...knows how to play the adults already but still such a little boy. I am in love with your writing!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:37 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Alex and Carlisle...has the leopard changed his spots? They both seem besotted so maybe it will work. I like Alex. Bella puking on the bathroom floor and Aro slipping and landing in it.....2 of my favorite thing in this chapter! Mauro better watch himself or he will end up clipped....Lexi I love these Storm tales of yours. Did I say that I loved them more that EP? That's saying something cuz I loved EP. Is a pdf of QS available for download yet?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:20 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
Why was Bella mad at Alex? Just a day in the life of these colorful characters....I love it and this story....
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:31 AM Title: Fork Me
dads and kids night out! so cute! that little Ant is learning fast! pretending to be lost so he can bring a woman back to dad....yikes! A Sonny POV would be interesting....
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:29 PM Title: The Light
wow. who would have thought that Carlisle could do the right thing, the unselfish thing, the honorable thing? not me! I am blown away by his restraint! Maybe he does love her....
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:48 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
I love this chapter! It tugs at my heart strings. For Bella to gain a loving father at this time of her life is just a godsend! And Aro wanting to date her sister! That's going to be both strange and fun, I think. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:07 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
What happened at the sitdown with Ronnie? Is that in the next chapter? I wonder if Carlisle is really fallling this time. He never loved Esme or Anthony's mother really, so maybe there's a first time for him at almost 40....I never cease to love E and B's sex scenes! From the first chapter of QS they have always been so hot! Love this epic story! Will there be a part 3 after you finish this one? Any chance of you getting QS published or will you have to give up too much to do so? I was VERY disappointed with the published version of EP. I don't want that to happen to you, but you deserve money for your work, should you ever decide to go for that.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Members Only
Will we ever know if Esme killed herself? Does it matter? I'm sorry to see Nanny go. I liked her feisty self! Will Bella ever seek out her birth father? Geez I'm full of questions today. I hate to see her estranged from Emmett but don't blame her. That's a helluva secret to keep for 11 years!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:19 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Cs getting married. Aro needs a woman. Sonny isn't jealous any longer he's such a sweet boy. My baby also runs hot like Kylie. Love this story as well as the Quiet storm. Love your writing style. Your verbose without being boring. Chapter updates are always great.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:07 AM Title: Day-to-Day
Just when I start feeling bad for Carlise he goes and becomes the jerk again. ha ha Run Alex Run! So sad to see this story ending I'm going to miss your Edward and Bella and the kids so so much
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:47 AM Title: Love and Happiness
What a hoot! Bella taking down the bitch that hit on Edward! I love it! You're in the groove here with this chapter....it did just flow! I love this story!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:01 AM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
no chapter 38? well I guess that was then, so there probably is one now. I love the stuff at the beach. there seems to be no way to get all the way away from the business though, is there? Sonny and Katie are adorable....just a few years away from sex! Carlisle is still a mess. His daughters too. Are they really going to kill Esme? I think so..
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:57 AM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One
who would have thought that you would write an almost fluffy chapter. I love the family stuff....
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:28 AM Title: Fight Club Part Two
oh God that was gruesome what they did, and continue to do, to Brandon Swan. It never ceases to amaze me that one man, Edward, can be so brutal one minute, and such a family man the next....
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 8:24 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Loved the chapter!! I am so going to miss these characters when this is over! :-(
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:39 PM Title: Fight Club Part One
Just lovely! Really! Heartwarming Mafia shit!!! Family stuff....and I love the bit at the end where he says, "and I wanted to go back in". Just fucking knocked me out! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:13 PM Title: Requiem for a Dream
I just fucking love these 2 and this story. It makes me get all warm and fuzzy inside. This is how real parents act! They fuck up with their kids and disagree! I love the way you write this stuff.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Voices Carry Part Two
Still reading. Thanks for writing! Sonny's crush on Mari is cute...
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:52 PM Title: Day-to-Day
I absolutely love this story!!!! What is the difference with it on here and on fanfiction?
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:56 PM Title: Day-to-Day
I'll hate to see the story end, but I'm really interested in how you're going to end it, because, as we've come to learn...there's not gettin' out of the thing. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:05 AM Title: Day-to-Day
I feel so bad for Alex. Plus Derek sr is probably hugely suspicious or Edward since Bella has been avoiding him right? Great chapter Lexi.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Day-to-Day
Oh yes....Edward-works-fine alright!!
Yea..not sure what to do with Derek. Thats a tuffy.
Loves u hard <3
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:04 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
Edward will find out. Find him. This is an exciting new thread! Renee is a shit mother to let Charlie treat Bella that way for all those years....
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 11:39 PM Title: Great Adventure
bombshell indeed! this is a whole other story! the button ceremony was good. love the Sopranos too! James Gandolfini looks like my dad did when he was that age....
Date: 12 Jun 2012 11:14 PM Title: To Be Announced
Nice to have a cute, almost fluffy, family chapter!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:16 PM Title: Day-to-Day
OMG. LOVE.THEM.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:52 AM Title: Day-to-Day
the dick!!!! and of course i'm talking of carlisle!! the selfish, manipulative prick!!! he already ruined esme (and every other woman he said he loved btw!) and now he did that to alex??? he trapped her and betrayed her?? someone has to do something about it... he can't go on and on making people do whatever he wants! she should kill him while he sleeps, just to show him how much she's happy of being treated like a puppet!!! and i'm totally sure he doesn't even know what love is because when you really love someone, you only want them happy and if it means letting go, you have to do it!! and you don't trick them into marry you!! that's abuse and selfishness!!! i said it before and i'm going to say it until the end... he doesn't deserve alex, he doesn't deserve anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:10 AM Title: Day-to-Day
Soo not boring. Just tying up loose ends and bringing things to a close. Love your stories and can't believe we're close to the end here!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:27 AM Title: Day-to-Day
i like that edward and sonnys relationship has changed i feel bad for what he went through but im glad theres a change with them together? idk. is it weird i hope that carlisle does right this time? not messing around and stuff... though i dont know if itll happen... i still hope
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: Day-to-Day
all is well with the world now.
Luke I don't trust.
DJ is a retired cop. He has lots of time and he has a reason, brother and son. So that combination is bad. I think if I was Bella I would just keep him at arms length. She will have a hard time knowing what his son did and being all sweet with the family that is morning and worrying about where he is.
I agree Carlisle and marriage, want a bad mixture.
Alex is being pushed into marriage by her parents. So when is she going to go ape!
Aro is the most level headed.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:19 AM Title: Day-to-Day
Loved it and can't wait to read more!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:54 AM Title: Day-to-Day
Good Chapter....
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:53 AM Title: Day-to-Day
Thanks for updating early Lexi. Loved the chapter. Yeah, I don't know what to think of Alex and Carlise. I mean, she is being forced to have the baby and get married. Its what he wants, but I don't think she wants that.
Curious to read the outcome of all that.
:)
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:33 AM Title: Day-to-Day
*sniff* I...I can't...almost over? Wha? *sniff*
That last shit was hot by the way...love me some Takeward. I could totally see the smirk he had at the end too. Love your writing!
Please tell me you plan on writing more stories? Not this particular one of course, because it's been written. But, continue to blow us away with your mad storytelling skills. Your public demands it! :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:14 AM Title: Long Drive
What should happen to Alice's so-called father? I like Edward's idea of shoving a gun up his ass.....maybe a cock or 2 first? Cut off his balls? I amaze myself with these thoughts....I really love Edward and Bella, with all their strengths and faults....even if he is a murderous, dangerous man. They're why I keep coming back to this story.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:35 PM Title: Day-to-Day
<3 awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:09 PM Title: Day-to-Day
First let me say that I did not see what "Carlilse revealed" to Edward, coming!!!! He set Alex up to get pregnant... Holy shit Carlilse!!! Oh, and I don't trust Luke(Jersey) or the Albannian's either... I love Sonny and that wonderful bonding both Father and son had.... rock that kitty!!!!! TY SLC.....
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:58 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Awwww...Sonny brought tears to my eyes being all sweet to his dad!
You can tell this is coming to an end! It makes me sad! Bittersweet!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:46 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Great chapter, I Loved it. Sad 4 Alex tho, it's very obvious she doesn't want 2 marry Carlisle. Hope it all works out.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:18 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Happy times !!!!!! Thank you thank you !
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 9:30 PM Title: Day-to-Day
"I-I'll make you what-whatever. Just don't stop." - my thoughts to you Lexi, please don't ever stop writing WTS. We lov eit too much. Loved the chapter, Carlise new in-laws gonna be a trip, Loved the Sonny and Edward close moment, and Dames too even if was Edward just carrying him to bed. I give it a ten !!!!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 9:16 PM Title: Day-to-Day
another great chapter, i really dont want this to end *sniffling* I cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 9:10 PM Title: Day-to-Day
wow!!! carlisle is somethng else! i hope alex sticks with him and he doesnt get a broken heart outta that mess. as always loved it!!! (rpattz luvor)
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:58 PM Title: Day-to-Day
I love reading this story and all the characters. That Sonny & Dad scene was so adorable and sweet that their relationship is good again. I think Edward is a great Dad to his kids.
Not sure what to think of Carlisle, I really want him to be the guy he wants to be but with his past & everyone's attitude about him it's kinda heard to have a lot of faith that he'll stay true to his current course with Alex.
Im kinda sad that this is coming to an end. I could just keep reading & hear about the kids growing up. I've felt that way about your other stories and the non main characters.
Thanks for writing;-))
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:47 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Not boring at all. After the shit storm they went through this was perfect. And it was early!!!! Thanks for the update
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:42 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Alex still irks the shit out of me lol Carlisle and his delusional ass too...This shit it bound to blow up in their faces, I could just picture Alex getting an abortion anyways just to run from it. I'm tired of them already lol it's like the entire last half of WTS was about Alex -_-
Anyhooo unto the good stuff lol I'm kind of sad it's coming to an end, but it seems like the right time I guess, I hope you have a new fic you're working on, or ideas, I love you're stories and characters, except Alex, lol.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:26 PM Title: Day-to-Day
still love this story dont want it to be over soooo sad
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:22 PM Title: Day-to-Day
thanks for the early update...get rid of jersey!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:08 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Brilliant update....When we're done can you make me something to eat!!! LMAO...!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:03 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Another awesome chapter! Don't know what I'll do when this is over, but I understand your need to end this. Hopefully we can see into their futures.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 6:41 AM Title: Logic
I reread this. I read it on FFtion. I swear I am starting to get old. Well I am glad they are back together together. How stupid it matters so much to me. to worry about it. I know you don't want to write this forever. WHY I don't know. Edward is something else, but his love for his wife and hers for him makes me feel all is okay if they are okay.
you wrote these last 3 chapters and they were hard I am sure and great. Bella is a mother that was living the nightmare we mothers all worry about secretly. The loss of a child. She was so frightened. She had to heap on to that they wanted to kill her husband as well. I get her wanting to have at them first. I am not sure I could kill anyone but in the act of defending myself or my family you betcha I could. Later maybe not. I do understand her feelings. MAMABEAR is in the HOUSE!... Love ya Lexy.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 6:20 AM Title: NuMb
whew! the bodies are piling up....I am glad that Esme is alive althought I don't know why....I must be one crazy MF to because I can so see the attraction of Edward. He's both a murderous psychopath and a loving family man. An interesting juxtaposition....I have ALWAYS been attracted to bad boys and this just takes it a whole giant step farther!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:49 AM Title: Breaking Dawn
wow! the 2 kills were so gruesome! cutting out his tongue and gouging out his eyeball! Fuck. I winced and felt slightly nauseous but couldn't stop reading! Telling Bella about it during sex....just no words! You were right! This chapter was the most graphic ever. JFC Lexi! You outdid yourself this time. These are not nice characters but they are well written and stand out off the page real. I'm in 'til the end...
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:28 AM Title: Intricate Dance
great chapter....again...still. not much to say. its late and I hurt. later...
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:56 AM Title: Aro's Daycare
This was different....glad Aro got some....Gigi too! They needed that!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:27 AM Title: The Twilight Zone
Almost a fluffy chapter here! LOL! It's good that they talked about the real reason Edward avoided sex. I hope they're past it now. They don't see as much themselves when they're not always hot for each other. I guess couples in their 30's have those problems when they've been together so long but didn't think our E and B would. Silly me.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
I don't know what to say anymore. I don't know why readers give you such a hard time. You tell a fascinating and expertly written story. It's just entertainment. When I read this chapter, I knew Edward wasn't going for any lap dances or blowjobs because I always remember that they don't cheat on each other. You wouldn't say that if you didn't write it that way. Jesus fucking Christ! Grow the fuck up, people. I love this story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Blondie
This is a fine mess. Esme has to go? I'm glad Edward left it up to Carlisle. It was an amusing moment to think of Edward taking care of his 2 sick buddies, one brother and one right hand man.....Is this story complete yet? How can I tell on this site? I tried to add it to my Favorites but couldn't get that to work. Damn...