[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:28 AM Title: Too Many Movies
So Esme hired someone to kill Candace? Wow that shit is so fucking sad. Edward will have to take her out, won't he, if that's true. That remark you made a few chapters back in your A/N about Edward loving Bella but she is still just a possession.....I have been thinking about that now for a while.....that kind of throws me....
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:47 PM Title: A Tight Fit
Are you kidding me?? What Bella did was so in character for her! It was also quite hilarious and hot! She has always needed Edwards cock, so why would now be any different! Relax, Lexi, we who truly love your work KNOW that you are a creatively gifted writer. At lease I do. These stories are a very effective form of escapism for me. I love it when I am transported away from RL and can live vicariously through these characters. My favorites are always the baddest, most vile, disgusting ones. LOL! That's just me and I can find redeeming qualities about each and every one....Thank you for sticking with US!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:57 PM Title: Eclipse
I love this fucking great epic story. Real flawed people who love each other! Please don't stop writing! You have a gift. Fuck those who don't get it!
Please finish Have Mercy Baby and Made In The Shades!! I love them too, in their own way. But these 2, Quiet Storm and Weather The Storm, are 2 of the greatest tales ever! You had me on this Bella and Edward from chapter 1 of QS! I have recommended them to everyone I know who reads fan fic!!!
I'm so glad Aro got his memory back. The exchange between Edward and Aro in this chapter was intimate and touching. I do hope it stays in the past for both of them!!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:22 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
The most intense chapter yet! I'm so glad he didn't kill Aro. For the part of this chapter that I thought he did, until you set that right, I was devistated. Edward is so scary the few times I have seen him get like that. Bella knows him so well that she let him rape her, then let it go. What a love they have! Twisted and sick and strong as hell! I wish I could love, and be loved by, someone like that. I would certainly give up all for it!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:57 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One
Jesus H. Christ. This shit is getting deep. You have no mercy, my dear! You keep me interested, engrossed, and entertained!! I fucking love this story!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:39 AM Title: Bucked Up
you said things would get rough. you weren't kidding! I feel bad for little Anthony. I'm along for this ride until the end. I love the way you write!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chasing Regret
This is some serious shit. Edward is fucking scary when he it working but a different, completely different, man with his family. I hope Aro makes it. I like him a lot. Would he really take out Edward if need be? I will be reading this all weekend as I am not going on FFN again until Monday to honor the boycott.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:57 AM Title: Rolling in the Deep
Is Aro going to die? Fuck, I hope not! That was intense! From Adele to assasination attempts in one chapter. Great stuff. I know you won't kill off Edward. I have faith in you.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:24 AM Title: Thou Mayest
Yeah, I'm definitely still here. All this interaction between couples feels like real life. Things like this happen all the time. Real interests me. This is all good shit and I love it! Thanks for writing real characters with real problems...
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:26 PM Title: Misery Loves Company
What a fucking great chapter what with the cussing out, the baby cussing, the women calling out each other, Edward smiling through it all and then hot as hell fuck in the bathroom! Whew! I loved it all and laughed out loud to myself all the way through! Fuck!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Logic
Oh how I really needed Bebella from Edward. Yes, I had no doubt they would be OK!! But just to hear him call her that makes all the bad go away!
Yea, he let Lou off light...but whatever. He'll screw up somewhere else and just disappear.
Loves you hard <3
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:39 AM Title: Logic
Loved it! So glad that they are coming out of this nightmare. They are so much better together than apart. And god love Kylie!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:27 AM Title: This Time Around
I love all your fics. I read Made in the Shades up to chapter 18 and you haven't updated in a while. I know you said it's almost done so I wait for the rest of it. Meanwhile I read you and CaraNo, like 3 or 4 stories each every chance I get.
What will happen to Anthony if Carlisle and/or Candace get fucked up? Sometimes I forget just how much violence is a part of all their lives because I get caught up in the kids or the sex. There are just so many facets to your tales. I love it all. I live for a good story!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:47 AM Title: Indemnity
great fucking lemons. I didn't think this chapter was boring, they needed to address her guilt. and the shopping trip was a cute distraction. Sandy can be annoying....
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:21 AM Title: Wag the Dog
wow that was some chapter. Bella and Edward both get crazy jealous. I don't blame her a bit! If that was me, I know I would react the same. Hell I chased my ex around our back yard with a knife when I came home from work one day thinking I was miscarrying and found him fucking his drummer in our garage. I get it! I love these 2. There's nothing each wouldn't do for, or even to, the other in the name of love.....
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: In Like Flynn
Lexi:
Just wanted to congratulate you for winning The Eclipse award for both "Quiet Storm" and "Weather the Storm". I absolutely adore Quiet Storm--I have read so many times I think I can do dialogue. I have not read Weather the Storm all the way through--I tend to read backwards--LOL. I have read probably the first two chapters of Weather the Storm and the last four chapters posted. Anyways, when the weather is crap, I sit down and read "Weather the Storm" from beginning to end.
Again, I have read all of your Fictions and am absolutely amazed by your writing. I am looking forward to reading the new fiction that you mentioned a few chapters back in "Weather the Storm" in the A/N.
Congratulations.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you've enjoyed Quiet Storm, although I sincerely hope you read Weather the Storm entirely. You're missing out on A LOT. LOL.
Thanks again,
SLC
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:34 AM Title: And Once More for Luck
oh so good! he came right up to the school and revealed himself....throughout both of these stories, Edward remains one of the most romantic, among other things, beautlful men ever. their love is epic!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Knee-Jerk Reaction
you always keep it real here. he would never cheat, you told us so, but he's human and he thinks about doing stuff that ultimately he never does. is she really insecure about his fidelity after all these years? i can see where she might have her moments...i love this wicked and crooked tale.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:28 PM Title: Logic
Carlisle's gonna hit the roof that she wants an abortion...man, he likes to spread his seed, doesn't he! Great chapter...
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:05 PM Title: Days Like This
Oh, this Lou shit isn't over, I fear. Can you remind us how old Alex is? I know she's a lot younger than Carlisle, but I can't remember how much. Great chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:05 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I'm a bit behind, but I wanted to let you know...well done. She got what she wanted, and now she needs to get things on track with her husband. Great chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:44 PM Title: Logic
Great chapter Lexi. I'm glad they worked it out...Very well played out chapter; nice closure and new start for them. :)
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Logic
Bella knows that everything that goes on is Edward's business. Alex is pretty stupid not to know that fact and should not have come to his house if she didn't want to follow the rules. Edward should tell Carlisle. It is the right thing to do. Murdering an innocent child is never the right thing to do. Alex is an adult who knows what causes a baby. She is a nurse and can support a child. She wanted sex, so she gets a baby. She needs to grow up and face the facts. She is part of the family and she better start following the rules. She needs to stop acting like an idiot. Edward has to many idiots to deal with on a daily basis. Edward needs to tell Bella that it is time for her to clue Alex in on the reality of the family. She needs to marry Carlisle have the child and stop playing around. It is time for Bella to show Edward how much she supports him by her actions. She needs to help him fix this mess with Alex and Carlisle. Bella needs to put the family first before her friendship with Alex.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:05 PM Title: Logic
Hey! I can get this site after all and I don't see what needed to be toned down?? You know what my favorite part of this whole chapter is? "Whiskey dick!" LMAO!! xoxo
Date: 06 Jun 2012 10:03 AM Title: Eclipse
Hey, another incredible chapter! I'm from a huge Italian family. Your story hits the mark in so many ways. Family ties, friendships, power struggles and the amazing love story though it all. I think Bella & Edward are closer than ever, given all of the trials and tribulations they've suffered and pulled each other through. So very good.
I've followed from Capt 1 of Quiet Storm, hanging on every word then, and since. I was so thrilled you planned this sequel as your characters had so much more to experience, and its more than lived up to the fantastic start in Quiet Storm. Remember, you have far more people out here who love your story and appreciate the incredible amount of work and creative skill it takes to write such a strong and successful result!
Onward!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 9:21 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
Amazing chapter. They are so intense and loves her so much. Wow.
Also,mdont let the idiots get you down. There are a lot of us out here reading and appreciating every word. Such a fabulous story. Thank you!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:26 AM Title: Logic
I love this story! Thanks for another good chapter. The way you write Kylie, you make her so adorable I wish I had her for real!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:06 AM Title: Logic
Kylie, you adorable, ficticious child. Yay. They're back! Sonny breaks my heart too. GAH!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:59 AM Title: Logic
Haha...oh man I love Kylie! I almost feel bad for Carlisle, and then I remember what he put all his women thru. Karma's a biatch. :P
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Logic
Boooo....it can't be close to over! I love this fucking story! I will seriously cry when it's done. Seriously.
We're gonna get a peak into the "freaky shit" later, right? Haha! (I'm such a pervert.)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:42 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
I'm not a PC mom, never was. My youngest son's dad gave him alcohol when he was about 5 and I lost it. I always wanted my kids to smoke pot with me when they were teens but they never did. They waited until they were with friends to do anything like that. Was I a good parent? Generally speaking I think so. What Edward did was poor judgement but in the context of what was happening, and who he is, understandable. Love the story.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:37 AM Title: Days Like This
Why you make me cry?!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:20 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water Part One
So is Edward going to tell Sonny the truth, or some part of the truth, about who he really is? This is heavy stuff. Kids finding out stuff at such an early age. I hope Edward doesn't hurt Roger. That he is related must mean something...I love all of your work that I have read so far, Lexi.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:42 AM Title: Conformity
I love this family. From the first chapter of Quiet Fire, I was hooked. I wanted to wait to read this until it was finished but had to start. Love Edward, Bella, and the kids! Sonny and Kate kissing at age 11! Yikes!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:52 AM Title: Logic
I'm so loving ur writing. I have read many hours instead of working :). It's killing me to wait for this to be finished. I usually don't read wip but this one has me hooked. I can't wait until next week! Keep up the good work! Off to start INI.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:28 PM Title: Logic
Loved it. Took a couple of days with RL but just finished
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:51 PM Title: Logic
Great chapter. I really don't have such a bias about abortion but for someone to get one when one of the parents does have ethical or religious conflict with it to go forward with that just seems so wrong. I can't wait to read what you write.
I loved Edward's comment, "if she's going to act like a kid she gets treated like one."
Thanks for writing, can't wait to read more;-))
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:14 PM Title: Logic
Lexi, I love you and your ff but WHAT THE HELL? No, no, no, that was horrible! Baby, what are you doing? Where are your balls? Come on... With all respect to your talent this chapter was the worst of all that you have been written until today... Please, DO NOT pull this on forever if you have no idea what to do with them... Don't screw up almost 3000 pages of fantastic story with terrible end. I hope you understand what I mean. Hugs :)) Love ya :))
Author's Response:
Wow . . . Thanks for reading? I actually loved that chapter. Things WILL be slowing down since the end of the story is VERY near. All I can say is, thank you for reading, reviewing, but if you do not like where the story is going maybe you should stop reading? Don't waste your time, or feel obligated to continue reading.
Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Logic
Awww...they finally made up! Now we need "makeup sex"!! LOL
I don't want this story to ever, ever, EVER END!!!!! Just sayin...
But like all good things...blah, blah, blah
I just love these two and the journey has been awesome!! Thanks for all the hard work and time that you have put into Quiet Storm and this one! I really appreciate it and have enjoyed it immensely!!
So, I am back to reading & reviewing over here because of the bullshit that FF is pulling...in case you didn't notice!
I first started reading & reviewing your stories here, and then because FF had seemed to stop with it's fucking nonsense I had gone back over there to read & review, but alas the bullshit never ends! I am just extremely happy that you post here too!
Great update as always!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:27 PM Title: Logic
If this is nearing the end I am so sad! I spent the weekend re-reading quiet storm. These two stories are really wonderful. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:02 PM Title: Logic
Great chapter. I'm glad things are getting back to normal. I love seeing them together. I hope we get to see them exchange 'gifts' lol. Can't wait for more. See you soon.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:29 PM Title: Logic
Complete and total awesomeness, as per usual. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:24 PM Title: Logic
I am proud that Alex had the courage to break up with c. But I think she really does log him and bat she is just scared. I am glad e and b are getting better. Now, what's uP with Derek? Great chapter Lexi.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Logic
Can't wait to see some alone time for those 2. I think they really need it.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:39 PM Title: Logic
I will be so sad when this ends. I love, love, love this story. The characters are great, and I love a good mafia story. I am reading some other "crime family" stories that were inspired by you. You are a fantastic author who has inspired fantastic authors...it's good to be you! Thank you for the wonderful story.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:24 PM Title: Logic
i so love your story look forward to your update each and every time well done ...
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:19 PM Title: Logic
Little Kylie cracks me up!!!! I'm glad Bella and Edward are trying to get on track again.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:15 PM Title: Logic
Great stuff! Cannot wait to see how things will pan out with Alex and Carlisle. Also looking forward to Edward and Bella time!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:42 AM Title: Logic
Thank you so much for the early update. Loved this chapter and breathed a sigh of relief that Bella & Edward are working it all out - ahhh. Love this story and I wish it could go on forever, but I know that's not possible. I need to come to terms with the fact that you have a life outside of these characters :)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:50 AM Title: Logic
Best Part:
"Go watch TV with Sonny." I pointed down the hall.
"Edward!" Bella stomped her foot.
I didn't say a word until Alex left the kitchen. Then I advanced toward my wife. "If she wants to act like a kid, I'll treat her like one."
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:26 AM Title: Logic
My daughter repeated my bad words when she was little but I before she went to school which was at age 3 she knew that some words I said where bad and not to be said outside our house. She understood and I never got a call from a teacher. I'm very lucky. Enough about me. Edward is so going to tell Carlisle about Alex being pregnant cuz he is such a gossip.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:11 AM Title: Logic
Love love LOVE THIS! My must read fic and now I am reading this while drying my hair before work so I can finish it!!
Read on here so I don't miss anything and I love how Edward is trying SO hard to be all things to all men, husband, father, skip, brother.
You always manage to put something amazing outta your hat.
LOVE IT| & YOU!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:07 AM Title: Logic
family time is always good.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:37 AM Title: Logic
Just in case I found in here like you wrote
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Logic
Phew finally a chapter I feel like I can breath after. ha ha I'm so happy to see that things may be getting back on track with Edward and Bella. They truly are better as a team. I'm actually feeling bad for Carlisle.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:10 AM Title: Logic
Toddlers saying cuss words are always funny!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Logic
Loved it!! I really hope she doesn't kill the baby.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:39 AM Title: Logic
i seriously love them! thru it all they get thru!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:16 AM Title: Logic
Hey!
My thought is that I love it!
Hugs
Astrid
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:58 AM Title: Logic
Good Chapter.....
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:57 AM Title: Logic
I'm so happy the skip and bebella are back on track. Loved the chapter as always.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:56 AM Title: Logic
Loved the story, great update !!!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:26 AM Title: Logic
Oh, I so love your stories......I'm really sad it is coming to an end. This is a story I look forward to every week and always smile when you give us a bonus. I envy you for your talent and sure hope you grace us with another story once this one is done.....Thank you again for sharing your talent with us.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:25 AM Title: Logic
Hi!! I have you on alert at ff and your udpate came in. Buttttt, I also have you here a TWCS and your update didn't show up...Lots of others did though.. Do you have any suggestions or ideas why it didn't? Anywho...after last chapter it was a bit rough riding...Hopefully all will calm down now..
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:22 AM Title: Logic
Great Chapter, Edward is so sweet sometimes & I am glad he & Bella are back on track.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:22 AM Title: Logic
Jesus Christ!!!! Alex really is acting like a damn child, I get she has problems and all but damn it, one day Bella needs to tell her to fuck off, it's annoying as hell. Anyhoooo I'm reading on TWCS now, ffn sucks balls. and Nooooooo I don't want it to end just yet!!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:58 AM Title: Logic
Bullship is what's going on the ff site . Anyhow thank you I love all things Lexi your amazing. I would love more INI how bout dem kids I sware I would watch them you should write for TV .
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:52 AM Title: Logic
Ahahahahaha! Aro's the nut job whisperer! That's priceless.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:49 AM Title: Logic
yay! back to normal. and i hope alex talka to carlisle befor doing anything....lol kylie the little copy catt is too cute! (rpattz luvor)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:48 AM Title: Logic
Yay!! Loved the chapter as always!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:46 AM Title: Logic
Thank you sweet baby jesus that your going to finish your stories...I follow you on FFN and was really scared you were going pull everything and be done with it. Thankfully you rock!!!! I love this story(all your stories) and every chapter is just better than the last. LOVE Kylie lol!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:25 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
My grandfather, Poppy, used to sneak me "sips" of beer when I was 13, just to antagonize my grandma. It was hilarious, and the beer was gross. But, we laughed like hell, and I will always remember it. I did not suffer from the lack of discretion or become an alcoholic. In retrospect, it seems better to do those firsts with family and take the allure ore mystery out of them. So, your Bella and Edward seem like normal parents to me, apart from the nine in the hiding place, of course. :)
great chapter!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:53 AM Title: Conformity
I'm catching up with this sequel and loving every word!! The interaction with the kids is so funny and amazing. I know you said Bella and Edward are not perfect parents, but I think they've been grat, especially given the circumstances. You've developed each kid so individually, with very real personalities. I love Edwards interaction with them. You've managed to make him a great dad without losing his edge-- not an easy feat!
Bravo!!
Amy
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2012 5:34 AM Title: Days Like This
Glad the storm is settling. Great chap and looki g forward to next week.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2012 2:55 AM Title: Days Like This
Wow...now that was a lot of shit for them. I know with all my heart that they will be OK, but that was a HUGE test of their relationship.
The whole Aro thing makes me nervous. Guess we just have to watch it play out. But you know that someone is going missing.
Loves you hard <3
Date: 01 Jun 2012 3:05 AM Title: Days Like This
53 chapters in 3 days...Love this story. Now I can get back to my life. BUT - I sure hope you're updating this because I want to know what happens next!!! It struck me yesterday that after reading your first story and now this one - I'm reading it because you are that good of a story teller - your plots are good, believable even and your characters are too. Most impressive, I actually care about your orginial characters Aro and now Alex. Your childern characters are so amazing too. While I want to continue to read your awesome fanfiction - I also hope you're considering writing for a living and getting published because truly, it's been a very long time that a story has gripped me this hard and made me want to keep reading through 100+ chapters! Thank you for sharing - and please update soon! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Days Like This
Lex - where do IU start. First, brilliant as always. The emotions in this chapter are so complex and I am in awe of you and your ability to write them. They aren't quite ok yet - I hope they are soon. I think Alex should try to take a break from Carlisle but I doubt that it will last long. Lou is going to stick his gun, I mean foot in his mouth. Aro, I think Aro and Edward need to have another conversation and either distance themselves from each other or accept his place as a borhter like Carlisle, because this trust you don't trust you stuff is hard on everyone involved. See you next time.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2012 10:24 PM Title: Days Like This
This chapter was good but…
I just feel unsatisfied. I expected some huge storm with thunderbolts, with hail and hurricane… and maybe with a little rainbow in the end…not a self-crucifixion… I know they both feel guilty, see their mistakes, but… it was like rake over to meat… to bone. It was too much for me.
I hope they’ll make it up. Otherwise, this all story will not make sense to me anymore.
Lexi, like always I have faith in you… Please, don’t let me down.
Hugs :))
Date: 31 May 2012 7:44 PM Title: Days Like This
What a chapter....glad they are reunited (kind of). I think Bella finally got how much she hurt her husband. Edward seems to be feeling bad as well, I just hope they really talk it out this time. Both of them acted wrong- I just feel that Bella was a bit unfair. Everytime she has to face something difficult she acts like she is on her own and she never considers what her actions are doing to Edward. Even though he does mess up quite often, he at least feels remorseful after the fact. Hopefully they manage to clear the air.
As for Lou- of course he is wrong but it was also I wake up call for Aro and Bella. They crossed a line a long time ago in my opinion. Its understandable that Edward is peeved about it. Even if he trusts them, it does look back in front of Edwards men and can lead exactly to situations like this one.
The Alex and Carlisle storyline....just not my cup of tee. The pregnancy is just too much for me. As for Carlisle suddenly being all nice- guys like that don't change. It would not be believable if he now he converts into faithful good husband. Alex could to much better, I just don't know.
Date: 31 May 2012 4:31 PM Title: Days Like This
Yikes when it rains it pours. I don't know how Bella didn't have a heart attack or anxiety attack or something like that. Not only did she have to worry about if Edward would forgive her she had to worry about what Alex is going to do about he baby and Carlisle and to top it off she had to deal with the worry about what would happen if Edward heard the lie Lou was going to tell. If Edward had heard that before he sent her away he would have killed Aro, maybe Bella too he doesn't seem to think clearly when he goes crazy like that. I sure hope they can forgive each other and work this out. They are giving me an ulcer. ha ha
Date: 31 May 2012 3:53 PM Title: Days Like This
Those two are just a mess. There is so much passion between them. It doesn't matter if it is sexual, love, anger, angst, or frustration. It is over the top combustion. Everything is at extremes with them because of their passion for one another. They could never live without each other. They will be stronger than ever as soon as they have the time to reconnect mentally, spiritually as well as physiacally. I hope it is quite for awhile, so the Edward Cullen family can stay home and just be. Sonny needs his dad right now as well. The younger two are fine. They just go with the flow. Sonny feels guilty for causing problems between his parents which is crap, but Sonny takes on the world. He is growing up way too fast. He allow himself to just be a kid.
Now the Ales situation is so maddening. I would love to kill her. She better not kill that baby because she is inconvenience by its excistence. She is a healthcare worker. She knows how it works and she is an adult. She played and now it is time to pay the cost for having the fun. She wanted Carlisle. Now she has him. He loves kids. Being a dad is the best thing about him. Carlisle is actually trying to do things right this time. She better say yes to his proposal and tell him about the baby. If the baby has to die, Alex better be dying right along with it.
Date: 31 May 2012 3:10 PM Title: Days Like This
oh i dont like when edward and bella struggle even though we all do at some point. i love him as the skip hard and slightly evil but i also love daddy edward need them back to normal asap. loved it great chapter fantastic story over all
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2012 2:15 PM Title: Days Like This
loved how long this was!!! so much went on but im glad they are back together. lou .....someone alays starting something. cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2012 12:36 PM Title: Days Like This
Loving this story good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2012 12:10 PM Title: Days Like This
Curious to see if Edward will do anything about Aro and Bella hugging! Great chapter!
Date: 31 May 2012 10:20 AM Title: Days Like This
I'm needing more;-D). Can't wait for the next update!
But thank you so much for the update.
Damn Lou, they've had enough turmoil;-))
Im glad their back together though.
Date: 31 May 2012 8:14 AM Title: Days Like This
Well shyt... I wanna be excited that they're back in the same state but there's loads of shyt to deal with. These two have the most godawful luck... But seriously can't wait for next update. I'm pulling for em to fix it sooner rather than later!!!
Date: 31 May 2012 7:15 AM Title: Days Like This
Good chapter......
Date: 31 May 2012 3:25 AM Title: Days Like This
Awesome.as.always.!!
Date: 31 May 2012 12:10 AM Title: Days Like This
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Date: 31 May 2012 12:01 AM Title: Days Like This
OMG this story it crazy good!!!!!! Lou that fucker, I hope Skip knocks his ass. They'll work it out, they have too.
Date: 30 May 2012 11:11 PM Title: Days Like This
Briliant, I liked this chapter very much.It`s an amazing world you are imagining with your writing.Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2012 3:18 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Well....I dont really know what to day right now. I dont know if Im glad she didnt kill him or upset about it. Yes, Aro deserved his vengence and Im glad he got it. But it woulda been interesting to see how that ended with her pulling the trigger.
E needs a little more time to cool off and come out of 'Kill' mode.
I wanna go to Disney too!
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2012 6:15 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
i love it
Date: 25 May 2012 1:04 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I'm glad Aro was able to get thru to Bella about her actions or lack of in regards to how she was coming off to Edward. Because I hate having them upset with each other.
Glad she got some of her revenge even if it is gruesome.
Great read as always;-))
Date: 25 May 2012 2:08 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I hope E & B work it out, even if Bella's been a bit selfish and Edward's been an ass.
I'm proud of Bella for getting revenge on DJ (maybe that's wrong of me lol) but i'm glad she left Aro to finish him off. He deserved to get his own justice and i think it would have been OOC for Bella to have killed him. Then again he shot her son, she's a mother, that's enough to change a person.
Date: 24 May 2012 5:19 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Dj got what he deserved. He wanted to kill his biological sister's husband and thought she would be ok with it. He is only a paycheck. That probably was the worse thing he could have said. Bella loves Edward so much. In a way, I think she wishes he was a struggling blue collared worker with none of the pressures that they have. I am glad that Bella realized that she has treated Edward poorly. She has some serious loving to do on that man. She let him down.