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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

hammocks?

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

I will check out window once I get caught up in this

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

what's up with Alice

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

great

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

he is dazzeling

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

umm Rob porn would be better than anything

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

AWWW

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have always been a klutz

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

it is amusing and it sounds like you post often which is good because I will get caught up quickly and I hate to wait. You should have more reviews which is why I am trying to comment and review each chapter

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

me either

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

i am enjoying it so far

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

I would waste time with him too

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

yay no girlfriend

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

or let him out

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am a lesbian and he could turn me around instantly, the only man I have ever been attracted to, hoefully not TMI to share :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

we love the landlord and he is fine without the pie

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

ok

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 64

edward is getting tough with her but he has to make her see.  Charlie better do what he needs to do.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 64

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 63

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Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 64

Wow. Charlie what a disappointment. I hope she takes Edwards advice.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 62

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 63

Can i have Edward he is my hero lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 62

Edward is a good boy he is doing the right thing being strong for Bella when she cant be.

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64

While I do understand Edwards protectiveness of B. I feel he is being a bit harsh. I mean What would he do if it was his mother. Renee is ill she can't help that fact any more than we can help the sky being blue. Did B enable her. Yes did Charlie Yes but come on Edward should not expect B to turn her back on her ILL mother completly. B should take guardianship and then do just what she told Charlie Have the State pay to take care over her and place her in a home where she can be cared for.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 48

Easier said than done Edward.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 47

Is there going to be a shit storm when Bella finds out that Edward is and or tracks Charlie down? I think she will be mad at first, but she will calm down and realize that Edward is only trying to help. At least I hope that's what happens. Also, wasn't it just inevitable that the rent checks were going to bounce eventually? What a mess, huh?  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 46

I love the fluff, thank-you for the fluff.  =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 45

Oh lord, I dread that saying, 'the calm before the storm'. I knew it was coming though.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 36

It sounds like Renee has Bi-Polar disorder; I have an intimate knowledge of that oh so fun disorder.  xoxo 

Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 64

Love the chapter. I cant wait to hear what Bella has to say to Phil. It seems like she would be able to do something about the money since Renee is sick. I know I would own half his besiness if it was me some of that money was Bella's. Phil took advantage of Renee he needs his ass kicked and wait for next chapter

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 34

Damn Renee, I want to slap her. Is that wrong?  xoxo

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 64

well, charlie is an ass!!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh Bella, just spill it to Edward before someone else finds out about Renee and tells him. That probably would not go over well, at all.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yeah, I have several theories about Renee. I have to say that the most likely one would be that she is content for now, but that her flakyness will rear it's ugly head soon enough. Or maybe not? Guess I'll have to wait and see.  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 29

I think it will be cathartic for Bella when she tells Edward all about what she has/does endured with Renee. Although I have a feeling he's probably figured some of it out already. I just can't get over how awesome he is; I want one.  xoxo 

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

My heart just aches for Bella; she really deserves a 'normal' life. Preferably with Edward, of course. xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 27

I just love your Edward and Bella.  =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh I'd bring you soup, even if you weren't sick. It would be a thank-you for writing. Maybe you'd rather have chocolate? How about some Robporn? :D xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

I knew Renee was going to be a pain in the ass, but cripes; she really treats Bella like shit. I think she needs some kind of help. I really love your story, and it's good to throw in some drama into a story. I think it makes it more realistic. Just my opinion. xoxo

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 64

Yay! I hope Charlie steps up to the plate-- maybe Edward's family can help too!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

What I wouldn't do for an Edward like this one in your story, he's too sweet. I love him.  =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

*laughing my ass off!* Yeah, worrying about the hammock falling apart was my main focus. :P I love your sense of humor! You're awesome.  =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

Aww, poor Alice. Edward is right though, that doesn't give her the right to be such a butt.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 17

I can't wait to find out why Alice doesn't like Bella. It can't be the age difference, E is only five yrs older than B. She also can't possibly still be pissed about Kate, that was a yr ago, plus Kate is engaged now. Hmmm.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

So, how old is Edward? Not that it really matters; I'm just really curious now. Hopefully you mention it later in your story. Oh, and I love Esme and vest wearing Carlisle.  =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

I just adore your story!  =) xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

You are killing me! I absolutely love the banter between E/B! Love your story. =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well I for one will definately be sticking around; I really love this story. I'm looking forward to seeing just what Edward and Bella's relationship will be, just friends or maybe more?  =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Your a/n's are so cute! =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ah, the mysteries of Edward Cullen. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Renee will really have to pull up stakes and leave in six months. =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

*giggles* Edward is a trip! He's to friggin nice, what's that all about? I love your story so far, it's so fun. I wanted to pout when Edward said he had a girlfriend. Oh well, maybe not for long? I just love your characters so far, I'm sure I'll love all of them if they are as different and fun as E/B. =)  xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:00 AM Title: Prologue

I am soooo looking forward to reading your story!  =)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 61

As long as she can remember how much he loves her she should be ok she has the support she has never had. 

Reviewer: PrincessCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 61

Great lot of chapters! Hope Bella is brave enough with Edwards help to stay away from Renee!

Awesome storie!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 61

Hmmm I'd have shower sex with him even without crazy people!! That sounded totally wrong!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 60

edward is the best

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 59

I am so proud of her she did the right thing now maybe they can all get help.  Edward has to be freaking out 

Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 61

Hello iambeagle,

I really love your story. Please go on!!!

Lol - Tiina

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 61

:)

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Date: 24 Sep 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 60

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 59

:)

Reviewer: Isis Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 61

I couldn't get past the lack of protection! (You made a point of them using protection before - and now they didn't.)

I know it doesn't necessarily mean anything...

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 61

I thought we weren't getting another one till tomorrow, Not that I'm complaining :D

Author's Response:

Nah, my problem is that I upload to FFn first so sometimes these updates are a day or so behind... so the A/N's don't usually apply to anything over here on TWCS lol! That's why sometimes there are like 5 or 6 updates a day because I forget to upload over here! My bad.

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 60

Awesome like always. Thank u so much for both updates. Can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 31

What's up with Alice? Poor Bella.

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 58

Thanx, I knew u were as a great as I thought. Thanx for that extra chapter ;). Have a great day and even better wknd ;)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Umm.. I think that I am with Bella on that whole hammock thing.. They belong outside not inside a house unless you live in a hut on an island.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:53 AM Title: Prologue

Oh man!!! Why do I think that things are going to be interesting?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 58

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Date: 23 Sep 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 57

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Date: 23 Sep 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 56

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 58

Im so proud of her she should go to the hospital

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 57

I love it calling the po-po

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 56

Please tell me it is Emmett and not Phil

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 57

Jesus, I love you and I love the fact that u update way more than everyone else, but can u gives us one or two more? Please, pretty please :(

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 55

Heeeeelp! Edwaaard!

OMG@&%$!

 

Reviewer: newmommyak Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 55

This one she can't let go. hospital, police, charges all have to happen.

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 55

yikes!

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 55

ohhhhhhhhhhh, not a cliff!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: poppyanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 55

wow, fantastically written.  I'm scared for Bella......



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, really you are so sweet. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 55

:)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 55

Edward's gonna be pissed!!



Author's Response:

Oh, most definitetly.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 55

I think Phil found an idoit to give him all of her money.  Renee needs to go to the hospital for the crazy and Bella just needs to go to the hospital because the crazy tryed to kill her SHIT get home Edward

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 54

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 53

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 52

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 51

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 50

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 49

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 48

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Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 47

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Reviewer: Isis Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 54

Your A/Ns are creeping me the F#@k out! I'll probably have nightmares tonight. I wish Edward and Emmet were here to keep me company.

Reviewer: Isis Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 52

I love Emmet so much! He is the perfect comedy relief.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 54

Wow Bella is pissed will she do what Edward said

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 53

Now shit is going to hit the fan.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 52

Im afraid a hole lot of shit will go wrong in four days.  What is up with Renee???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 51

Your to funny.  I love he gave her the key I hope she uses it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 50

I hope Charlie comes around

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 54

friggin frig@%$#@ Renee!

 

I want to give Bella a big hug...poor girl.

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