Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 49
I am glad Charlie is going to talk to him
Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 48
He is doing what he thinks best.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 54
Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 22 Sep 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 54
Cant wait for more.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 47
What is Bella going to do when she finds out about him getting ahold of Charlie and then not telling her about the check???
Date: 20 Sep 2011 11:30 PM Title: Prologue
How can Bella not know that Renee gave Phil all of their money? Hopefully Renee gets sent to prison for all of the scams that she has pulled and then Bella can be free of her.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 46
Loving this story! You write very well.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 46
That was some nice fluff I feel all warm and fuzzy now. I wonder how Alice will react when Edward tells her that he is in love with Bella and she loves him to??
Date: 20 Sep 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 45
I like that Not with a cheesecake or a really juicy hamburger that is the way to say you are in love lol
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 44
He is the man not only is he caring he cooks to lol
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 43
I love Edward he is such a hero
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 42
She has to feel better getting it out to someone that truly cares
Date: 19 Sep 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
more? moRE? MORE!
Date: 17 Sep 2011 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 41
Love, love, love this story!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 41
glad to hear no dogs were harmed. I'd have to go all ASPCA on your ass. :)
can't wait to hear/read about what Bella tells Edward!
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 41
He is freaked out and where is Renee??
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 40
Alice is telling the truth but she doesnt know the story will Edward understand
Date: 17 Sep 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 39
She should go to dinner just to bug alice
Date: 17 Sep 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 38
I think Edward many have a problem with that
Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
yey! A step towards the right direction. I am glad Bella is not alone in this mess.
Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 37
Really engaging storyline-keep up the good work
Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 37
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Do not listen to that voice in your head!
Listen to me and update today!!!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 37
Updating every other day is highly over rated. Personally I believe with ALL my heart everyday... heck 2-3x's a day is much much bettter. :-)
Date: 15 Sep 2011 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 37
I just read this in one sitting. I liked it very much. I wish they were longer to get the story going at a faster pace. But you are keeping a steady pace without skipping through anything. Character building is sometimes ignored in FF.
Thank you.
Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 37
Im so happy you didnt abide by what you said :)
Date: 15 Sep 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 37
Or you could just change the summary to say "Will update twice a day minimum."
:)
Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
She is not use to having someone care for her???
Date: 15 Sep 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
poor Bella!
Damn Charlie too! Not just Renee... He didn't just leave his wife but his child too...
Date: 15 Sep 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 36
Im glad Bella finally talked to Edward some I hope they talk more. cant wait for next chapter
Date: 14 Sep 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 35
wow she put herself first good for her
Date: 14 Sep 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 35
Cant wait to read more.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 35
What is up with Renee I think she is up to no good.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
Finally! Renee is just too much. How can someone be so selfish?
Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:12 PM Title: Prologue
Won't lie, I have a huge smile on my face right now!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 35
You may not like me, but I lubs you! Well I love your story!!! Remove the last line from here too!!!
See you love me because I review twice!
ps It's your fault I fell in love with your story!
Author's Response:
<3 LOL go look at the a/n NOW!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 34
Your author's note cracked me up.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
I cant beleive she tracked her down what does she want and will this convince Bella to tell him what is going on???
Date: 14 Sep 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 33
Edward is going to start asking ? ????
Date: 14 Sep 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
ohhhhh it's killing me!! need longer chapters~
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 33
awee..the end made me sad..
ok, so poop buckets, storage units, vet clinics.. gross, I feel for kitct681..
anyways, aweee poor Bella, they obviously need to talk, and I think she should just confess already, it'd make things soo much better...
Date: 13 Sep 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 33
anxiously waiting for Edward to ask the question. I think he is waiting for her to tell him...No doubt he would prefer that.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 33
Allow me, "...a bitch."
I love Emmett.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 33
drabble fic at it's best! Luv it!
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for reading!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Emmett is to funny. She is going to have to come clean and tell Edward everything.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Emmett is a bit of a crazy asshole. Slowly but surely she will tell him...she's already starting to question why she hasn't yet! Thanks for reading.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
Alice is such a bitch :(
Author's Response:
Well...yeah. I have nothing to really say to that. I agree! I'm one of those creepy people who think about something like that all night until I end up crying later when I get home.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 32
god I love Emmett, I think everybody has had a friend like him in their life.. Love this story it gets better every chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, I pity those who don't have an Emmett in their life! ;)
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 32
OMG! Emmett!!! lol He's a riot.
I wish he would ask and she would tell. It seems like they could trust each other, Bella needs to stop enabling Renee. I know it is easier said than done but I wanted to say it regardless.
Love these fast updates. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Emmett is definitely SOMEthing. Riot works. I'd go with crazy asshole though ;) Yeah, you were stating the obvious but sometimes you have to say it, out loud and give it a shove in the right direction. IDK what I'm saying, I just wanted to use the "say it, out loud" quote...
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 32
I would very much like to be invited to Emmett's b-day party next year. I'll even bring special brownies.
Author's Response:
LOL! special brownies for everyone. let's see how well that turns out ;)
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
I have the same feelings towards chocolate mixed with carbs...It is not weird! (I think?)
Alice is being super rude. I hope she regrets her actions soon. No matter how down you are or what shit storm you're facing in your life there is no excuse for taking it out on others.
Author's Response:
Seriously. Chocolate & carbs. Kill me EVERYTIME. Bitchy Alice is bitchy. I agree with you- don't take shit out on others. It'll come back to bite her, I'm sure
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
Isis sent me over and I must thank her! Favorited! I can't wait for an update.
Author's Response:
Well, thank you Isis for reccing this & thank YOU for reading :)
Date: 12 Sep 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
:)
Author's Response:
:) thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Sep 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
I think Renee needs to be commited.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think that's the consensus.
Date: 12 Sep 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 29
Bella has a lot of weight on her sholders she cant relaze
Author's Response:
Was the mirror part creepy to you at all? A quiet house & a face in the mirror would scare me. But I'm a pansy. Yeah, she can't relax. Sucks.
Date: 12 Sep 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 30
Of course it won't be easy, Renee is bat shit crazy. Great update. maybe I'll wander over to ffn and leave a review there too!
Author's Response:
Why do I love when people call her bat shit crazy. It makes me ugly laugh, not a good look for me!
Date: 11 Sep 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
Im so glad she stated
Date: 11 Sep 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
She needs to talk about Renee
Date: 11 Sep 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 28
Aww, sweet dreams!! I know mine will be!!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 11 Sep 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
awe, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for readng & reviewing sweet, sweet Rachelle!
Date: 11 Sep 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
hell with the small room lol
Date: 11 Sep 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love it when you lie!!
Date: 10 Sep 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
every chapter makes me hate Rene more!! She needs to get out of this mess with her mother..
Date: 10 Sep 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good for Bella but I think it went on deaf ears.
Date: 10 Sep 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
At some point she just has to cut hte apron strings and live her own life.
Date: 10 Sep 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
can't wait for the next update tonight!
Date: 09 Sep 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
ummm....so an update?
Date: 09 Sep 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
I would bring you soup when you are sick :). what is Edward thinking now about Renee beside finding her and knocking the shit out of her.???
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
awe.. I'll bring you soup when you're sick! granted, it'll be canned progresso.. but it tastes pretty damn good if I say so myself.
haha, loving the end of this chapter, Edward's so sweet to her!
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bella needs to return the favor and slap the shit out of Renee but we know she wont because she is to good of a person.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
Renee is a piece of work wow she needs a head doctor
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
Now what is she going to do with this info??
Date: 09 Sep 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
hammocks are good ;)
Date: 09 Sep 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
They have it bad for each other. Bella needs to open up about Renee.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Sorry for Alice but still doesnt give her the right to be such a bitch.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Emmett to funny and what is Alices problem???
Date: 09 Sep 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love him he is so sweet
Date: 09 Sep 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
I wonder what Edward has said to his parents???
Date: 09 Sep 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think Edward has said alot about her to his family