Date: 08 Sep 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
Melting on the spot love a man that is good with kids
Date: 08 Sep 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Kiss Kiss Kiss again
Date: 08 Sep 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
I would follow him anywhere also and I would not leave him alone
Date: 08 Sep 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
So sad Bella is an enabler. Renee will never change she doesnt have to
Date: 08 Sep 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
nice time together
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is he freaking her out??
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank goodness no girlfreind
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor thing she is not use to people being so nice.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
He needs to get rid of the girlfreind now.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
she is very protective of her mother
Date: 08 Sep 2011 7:04 PM Title: Prologue
Love it cant wait for more
Date: 08 Sep 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Renee just gets worse and worse!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2011 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
Someone drop a house on her. She is an evil witch.
Author's Response:
LOL for some reason I think Renee could survive a house falling on her. IDK why. That's creepy.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
Cant wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
ohh. did NOT see that happening!
can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
totally agree... not a fan of renee
at all..
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:53 AM Title: Prologue
Rene is a nut job, good chapter poor Bella
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
Darn you Renee!
I think he should have taken the money just so she would feel better.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awkward.
More please!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
awee, well I hope she doesn't use his fear to destroy him, she should let him in to her crazy and rather sad existence!! then she can be as a happy as a bunny!
lol... i have nooo clue where that came from... I blame it on spending an entire summer down south, I came back with all these strange sayings! haha, I can't wait to go back... sigh..
love this story, can't wait to read more and more! hehee
Date: 07 Sep 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
I have really been enjoying this story, however I did not like this chapter at all. I thought it was tacky. Really, is that how people behave? They don't even know each other!
Author's Response:
Well...I suppose they don't know each other that well, no. They just know that they like each other and yeah, they acted upon it. I am sorry you didn't like this chapter. Hopefully you'll stick around around for the rest of the story, but if not- I understand. Thanks for reading.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
They should be proud of their hammock setting up skills :)
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
I came here hoping there was an update - imagine my delight at finding two more excellent chapters! Thank you for this fun piece. I love it.
Author's Response:
:) Well thank YOU for reading this & for taking the time to review! See ya at tomorrows update!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
haha, yes good thing the hammock stayed intact. :)
Author's Response:
LOL well...I'm just sayin' it would've been a shame for that thing to collapse mid...hip buck. and if I were a true cockblocker, that's what I would've done! ;)
Date: 06 Sep 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Really enjoying this story, cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
puffy hearts for you! :)
Date: 06 Sep 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
love this story, Bella is going to have to let her mother go. She cant keep taking care of her. So glad to see a different Alice instead of lovie dovie Alice...
Author's Response:
It's actually fun writing a bitchy Alice lol
Date: 06 Sep 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
I like Emmett's "Is she your person?"
Author's Response:
Emmett can be wise sometimes. When he isn't loaded with sugar lol
Date: 05 Sep 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is his lobster. Great update.
Author's Response:
hey, you little dork. you review over here AND on FFn. look at you. thanks for reading this, appreciate all of the reiews. And yes...she's his lobster. Of course she is :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
awe, why doesn't Alice like Bella?
oh, and idk if I've reviewed before or not, sorry if i haven't! I'm more of a sporatic reviewer.. lol
love this story, especially since you update so often :) I love getting those e-mails saying I have a new update to read!
:D
Author's Response:
Because Alice is a little B-word lol so..she has her own issues, I suppose.
I love all of your sporadic reviews, bb! Thanks for reading.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Voted!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the vote :)!!!
Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love his pov. Great update.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
Renee has turned out to be so much darker than I originally thought. This really pulls at the heart strings.
Author's Response:
Heart strings being pulled- maybe a good thing? I hope! Thanks bb.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love the visual of the janitor finding him. The Cliff bar banter is cute too.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
This story is adorable. I don't know why, but that's the word that comes to mind. Adorable.
Author's Response:
Adorable works. E is pretty cute ;)
Date: 04 Sep 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aw, this is sweet. I really like it so far.
"I love hot....tubbin'" Hahaha
Date: 04 Sep 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the mother-daughter relationship. We immediately know what Bella's childhood must have been like.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love this story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review & thanks for reading!
Date: 04 Sep 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
loving this!!! totally agree he'd change her mind if she did swing for the ladies!!
but he has a girlfriend? uh oh...
Author's Response:
Lol I love that everyone agrees with me on the fact that he would totally influence her to switch teams. Thanks for the review! :)