Date: 14 Mar 2012 7:14 PM Title: Friends Will Be Friends
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Date: 14 Mar 2012 6:41 PM Title: In & Out Of Conciousness
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Date: 05 Mar 2012 9:14 PM Title: Friends Will Be Friends
what do I think. Charlie needs to make Bella stay at home after school. He needs to be a father first for a while. If she needs to go to a school that will help her deal with what she has done then so be it. She needs to leave the Cullen family alone.
Tanya and James need to be exposed for what they did. Edward needs to understand that sex with people change them. Tanya got attached. She is jealous and dangerous. Next Jessica needs to do community service for what she has done to spread lies and hurt people.
Edward needs his mother and father to help him. His dad to help him about the sexual part. Rose needs to hear her little friend Tanya played a huge part in all this.
Date: 28 Feb 2012 6:10 PM Title: In & Out Of Conciousness
I see why Rose and now JAke are upset with Bella, but come the fuck on, edward did that because of Tanya and James too, not just Bella or is that something that they choose not to see? I hope all this gets cleared up and soon.
Author's Response:
*GIGGLES* Ah you made me laught with that one! Bear in mind at this point they do not know about James & Tanya's involvement in the events leading to him being in hospital at this stage so please do bear with them, they will find out the truth though ;-)
Date: 28 Feb 2012 2:50 AM Title: In & Out Of Conciousness
Poor Edward in the hospital. It was a great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and staying with me, he is in the hospital and in safe hands now. x
Date: 20 Feb 2012 3:10 PM Title: Regrets & Decisions
omgg! ... i seriously can not wait for thre next chapter! if you can update soon i might owe you my life :)
Author's Response:
OOH will have to see what I can do then! I am beta dependant the coming weeks chapter has not been done yet. Hope you survive the week!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:24 PM Title: Regrets & Decisions
Powerful chapter...this gives good insight as to why teens don't think they have any other choice than to kill themselves. Your heart really breaks for both of these characters..an anxious to see what you have planned for these two in the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That is what I was looking to do, make it powerful and judging from the reviews I did that.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:37 PM Title: Regrets & Decisions
Well even Edward can only take so much. He is young and all this hurts. He needs a place to heal. Parents take over. Get him in a new school and help him so he does not do destructive behaviour again.
No Tanya and Definetly no Bella.
Author's Response:
He can and he really has reached the end of his tether as we would say in the UK. He will need time and space to heal from this, and I intend to give him what he needs.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 1:00 PM Title: Regrets & Decisions
Fucking Crazy!
Author's Response:
Hopefully in a good way if I shocked you?
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chasing Cars
I wonder if this will make him go talk to Bella.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chasing Cars
oh my god!!!!!......i almost cried.....im finding it so hard to route for Bella with this one....everyone turned on Edward and she just left him to the sharks....sigh i feel this one......cant wait for the next update
Author's Response:
EEK! I really didn't set out to make anyone cry, but it seems that I have had the effect on several people. So glad that you are liking this.
Preview
Everything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together. Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.
Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.
Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.
“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”
Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chasing Cars
I want to cry. I don't know who I feel more sorry for. Of course Bella was so wrong to deny Edward, but it sucks that they are in such a bad place. Hopefully, they can forgive each other and tell everyone else to go take a flying leap off the cliffs at First Beach.
Author's Response:
OOH Please don't cry *hands out tissues* Yes she was wrong, and they are in a bad place, will they get out? Who knows! Oh I do! :-) but I cannot say...
Preview of next chapterEverything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together. Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.
Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.
Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.
“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”
Date: 13 Feb 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chasing Cars
Wow that was a powerful update...Poor Edward, hopefully things will be better soon for both he and Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, it was a hard one to write, but seems to have hit to spot with readers!
Preview
Everything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together. Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.
Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.
Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.
“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chasing Cars
WOW, who would have thought he could be so mean to Bella, i know hes hrt but damn. And please please let jassica and all those other bitches get whats coming to them. As for Tanya and James they were made for each other, I think its time for them to get their dues as well. Please let him go to Bella and let her in on what he found out and see where things go. Cant wait to read more, keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Bella deserved it, she has hurt him so badly. Thanks for the compliment, I am hoping to do this justice and hope that you will all continue to love it.
Preview:Everything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together. Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.
Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.
Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.
“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chasing Cars
Poor Edward.
Author's Response:
I know! My heard bleeds for him totally and I am writing this! Go figure!
Preview
Everything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together. Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.
Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.
Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.
“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”
Date: 04 Feb 2012 4:36 PM Title: Friends and Enemies
Poor Edward.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 2:15 AM Title: Friends and Enemies
I do not care what her excuse is. That was mean and low. I say he should have made her stay outside. Make her stand in public and beg..................
Date: 24 Jan 2012 11:08 PM Title: Welcome To Hell
Poor Edward. I hope he can get back at everyone that has been a jerk to him.
Date: 23 Jan 2012 10:31 PM Title: A Formal Outing
That was really wrong on Bella,s part. Poor Edward .
Date: 23 Jan 2012 8:25 PM Title: A Formal Outing
Poor Edward and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yeah I feel sorry for both of them here, but then again I am biased ;-).
Date: 16 Jan 2012 4:46 PM Title: Anniversaries & Adverseries
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Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to read and review!
I did promise a sneak peek of the next chapter and here it is, please remember this is not finalised yet so could changed before I publish it:
As I pulled into the parking lot, I could see her getting out of Mike Newton's car. He was being the perfect gentleman, although I could see his hand dipping a little too low on her back for my liking, and obviously Bella's as I saw her push it away. She glared at him, and he held up his hands in mock surrender. I could see that she was mad. My girl looked hot when she was angry. Mike had asked to pick her up from home. She mainly accepted to stop others from asking. I just wished that it was me that had her on my arm, that people were looking at us as a couple, talking about how good we looked together. But no, I was alone and would fade into the background.
It was bad enough that I was going, but I wanted to see Bella and this is the only way. We were hoping that we might be able to manage some time alone, sneak out unseen into one of the changing rooms and have some real fun. Then again, she looked stunning. She wore a midnight blue that accentuated her every curve. The dress was short and showed off her long legs and I felt that familiar stirring within me. My Bella had an amazing body and curves that I spent hours appreciating. Just the thought of another man looking at her, let alone putting his hands on her filled me with jealousy.
Then Jake tapped on the window of my car, and I jumped in fright. I got out of the car and we made our way into the school gym where the dance was being held.
"Wow looks like the Snow Queens Palace in here. Bella should be quite at home." Snickered Jake.
I just laughed at him. She had gained quite the reputation as none of the boys at school could win that stupid bet that they had going, and none of them could work out why. If only they knew the truth. I wasn't sure if I would be the school hero or not. Would they believe me?
Date: 16 Jan 2012 2:36 PM Title: Anniversaries & Adverseries
Oh shit, something tells me Tanya is the storm and shes coming through wanting to leave distuction in her wake..... update soon please?
Author's Response:
Hey,
Thanks for reading and reviewing, hmmm Tanya may or may not be involved ;-) I will be updating at the weekend, Saturday is my normal update day - this weeks was late bad me. Hope you will continue to enjoy this.
I did promise a sneak peek of the next chapter and here it is, please remember this is not finalised yet so could changed before I publish it:
As I pulled into the parking lot, I could see her getting out of Mike Newton's car. He was being the perfect gentleman, although I could see his hand dipping a little too low on her back for my liking, and obviously Bella's as I saw her push it away. She glared at him, and he held up his hands in mock surrender. I could see that she was mad. My girl looked hot when she was angry. Mike had asked to pick her up from home. She mainly accepted to stop others from asking. I just wished that it was me that had her on my arm, that people were looking at us as a couple, talking about how good we looked together. But no, I was alone and would fade into the background.
It was bad enough that I was going, but I wanted to see Bella and this is the only way. We were hoping that we might be able to manage some time alone, sneak out unseen into one of the changing rooms and have some real fun. Then again, she looked stunning. She wore a midnight blue that accentuated her every curve. The dress was short and showed off her long legs and I felt that familiar stirring within me. My Bella had an amazing body and curves that I spent hours appreciating. Just the thought of another man looking at her, let alone putting his hands on her filled me with jealousy.
Then Jake tapped on the window of my car, and I jumped in fright. I got out of the car and we made our way into the school gym where the dance was being held.
"Wow looks like the Snow Queens Palace in here. Bella should be quite at home." Snickered Jake.
I just laughed at him. She had gained quite the reputation as none of the boys at school could win that stupid bet that they had going, and none of them could work out why. If only they knew the truth. I wasn't sure if I would be the school hero or not. Would they believe me?
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2012 3:05 AM Title: Anniversaries & Adverseries
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Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to read and review:
I did promise a sneak peek of the next chapter and here it is, please remember this is not finalised yet so could changed before I publish it:
As I pulled into the parking lot, I could see her getting out of Mike Newton's car. He was being the perfect gentleman, although I could see his hand dipping a little too low on her back for my liking, and obviously Bella's as I saw her push it away. She glared at him, and he held up his hands in mock surrender. I could see that she was mad. My girl looked hot when she was angry. Mike had asked to pick her up from home. She mainly accepted to stop others from asking. I just wished that it was me that had her on my arm, that people were looking at us as a couple, talking about how good we looked together. But no, I was alone and would fade into the background.
It was bad enough that I was going, but I wanted to see Bella and this is the only way. We were hoping that we might be able to manage some time alone, sneak out unseen into one of the changing rooms and have some real fun. Then again, she looked stunning. She wore a midnight blue that accentuated her every curve. The dress was short and showed off her long legs and I felt that familiar stirring within me. My Bella had an amazing body and curves that I spent hours appreciating. Just the thought of another man looking at her, let alone putting his hands on her filled me with jealousy.
Then Jake tapped on the window of my car, and I jumped in fright. I got out of the car and we made our way into the school gym where the dance was being held.
"Wow looks like the Snow Queens Palace in here. Bella should be quite at home." Snickered Jake.
I just laughed at him. She had gained quite the reputation as none of the boys at school could win that stupid bet that they had going, and none of them could work out why. If only they knew the truth. I wasn't sure if I would be the school hero or not. Would they believe me?
Date: 15 Jan 2012 11:50 PM Title: Anniversaries & Adverseries
bad girl. calm before the storm.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, it wasn't me that said that it was Edward! :-)
I did promise a sneak peek of the next chapter and here it is, please remember this is not finalised yet so could changed before I publish it:
As I pulled into the parking lot, I could see her getting out of Mike Newton's car. He was being the perfect gentleman, although I could see his hand dipping a little too low on her back for my liking, and obviously Bella's as I saw her push it away. She glared at him, and he held up his hands in mock surrender. I could see that she was mad. My girl looked hot when she was angry. Mike had asked to pick her up from home. She mainly accepted to stop others from asking. I just wished that it was me that had her on my arm, that people were looking at us as a couple, talking about how good we looked together. But no, I was alone and would fade into the background.
It was bad enough that I was going, but I wanted to see Bella and this is the only way. We were hoping that we might be able to manage some time alone, sneak out unseen into one of the changing rooms and have some real fun. Then again, she looked stunning. She wore a midnight blue that accentuated her every curve. The dress was short and showed off her long legs and I felt that familiar stirring within me. My Bella had an amazing body and curves that I spent hours appreciating. Just the thought of another man looking at her, let alone putting his hands on her filled me with jealousy.
Then Jake tapped on the window of my car, and I jumped in fright. I got out of the car and we made our way into the school gym where the dance was being held.
"Wow looks like the Snow Queens Palace in here. Bella should be quite at home." Snickered Jake.
I just laughed at him. She had gained quite the reputation as none of the boys at school could win that stupid bet that they had going, and none of them could work out why. If only they knew the truth. I wasn't sure if I would be the school hero or not. Would they believe me?
Date: 31 Dec 2011 11:25 PM Title: Fun & Games
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Author's Response:
Happy New Year! Thanks for contiuing to read and review!
Date: 31 Dec 2011 8:16 PM Title: Fun & Games
she is going to break his heart and he will only have himself to blame, b/c although he may love her he is not being honest with her about his past with tanya update soon
Author's Response:
Happy New Year! Thanks for continuing to read and review. She may well break his heart, but does he not deserve that for lying to her? He does love her and she loves him but neither of them haven been in love before so it's all new. He also doesn't know how to tell her about Tanya, they were never a 'couple' in the traditional sense. Hopefull updates will be weekly from now on. x x x
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2011 6:02 PM Title: Fun & Games
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Author's Response:
Happy New Year to you too! Thanks for reading! See you next year
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 10:40 PM Title: Morning After The Night Before
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Date: 27 Dec 2011 7:17 PM Title: Dinner Dates & Discussions
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Date: 27 Dec 2011 6:21 PM Title: The Morning After The Night Before
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Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to read and review x
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 5:15 PM Title: Welcome To Hell
Wasn't expecting Edward. Kudos to you.
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2011 10:43 PM Title: Morning After The Night Before
I am so loving this story! Love the interaction between Bella and Edward. I can just see the looks that occur between them and how they feel a pull towards one another. Love your writing style and can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response:
Hey there,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, it means so much to know that people are still with me and loving this fic. If you have me on alert then you will get notified of the BPOV posting unless you have read it in the fandom compilation already.
Awww you are making me blush here, but I am so pleased that you can feel them as if they are real people, thats what I love when I read fics so tried to capture it in mine.
Anyway enough of my rambling on, here is the peek of the next chapter which is unbeta'd so any mistakes are all my own work (grins proudly)
Hope you had a fab Christmas and see you next year!
Lou x x x
Today we were down on First Beach at La Push; it was deserted just how we liked it. We had to hide our relationship from everyone, no-one can find out until we were ready, it made it all the more thrilling and exciting. Yes I did the whole secret thing with Tanya, but that was different, that was just sex, **, whatever you wanted to call it, there were no feelings involved. And yes I would admit that I loved Bella, and wanted to tell her, but I was scared that she would think it's too soon, so I held onto my thoughts.
We walked down the beach as the surf washed against our feet, I had my arm slung around her shoulder and it felt right, comfortable. She was teasing me about Mike Newton asking her out on a date as he knew that she and James are no longer an item,
"Listen Bella, if you seriously think that Mike Newton is the man for you, then you have my blessing. But somehow I think that you will be back here sooner rather than later. You know that you just cannot get enough of me."
She laughed, sending chills through me to all my body parts and stirring the lust within me.
"Ooh someone thinks that they are a stud, don't they Mr. Cullen?" She teased pulling away from me, "Well maybe I should test the merchandise and let you know the results of my findings. What do you think to that then?"
She laughed hard as she ran down the beach away from me, looking back over her shoulder to see if I was following, of course she knows that I would, I just needed to give her a head start. I set off to chase her down, growling at her,
"Why you little… Come here Ms. Swan, I will show you that there is no need to go out for a boring old hamburger when you have prime steak right here."
I caught her quickly tackling her to the sands pinning her down by her wrists, my legs straddled her waist, she was still laughing at me as I kissed her lips, silencing her until she squealed as a wave washed over her soaking her completely. I laughed too as I was soaking wet also.
"Edward! I'm soaking!" she complained.
"Oh baby, you always are for me, and you know it" I growled into her ear in a low voice that I knew she couldn't resist.
Date: 25 Dec 2011 5:20 AM Title: Morning After The Night Before
sooner or later the shit about him in tanya will come out and destroy bella update soon
Author's Response:
Hey there,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, it means so much to know that people are still with me and loving this fic. If you have me on alert then you will get notified of the BPOV posting unless you have read it in the fandom compilation already.
The shit will hit the fan soon, but for the time being just enjoy them being together and some lemons coming up. Hmmm but what will come out and when? MWAH AH AH! It might not be Bella that gets destroyed. (waggles eyebrows)
Anyway enough of my rambling on, here is the peek of the next chapter which is unbeta'd so any mistakes are all my own work (grins proudly)
Hope you had a fab Christmas and see you next year!
Lou x x x
Today we were down on First Beach at La Push; it was deserted just how we liked it. We had to hide our relationship from everyone, no-one can find out until we were ready, it made it all the more thrilling and exciting. Yes I did the whole secret thing with Tanya, but that was different, that was just sex, **, whatever you wanted to call it, there were no feelings involved. And yes I would admit that I loved Bella, and wanted to tell her, but I was scared that she would think it's too soon, so I held onto my thoughts.
We walked down the beach as the surf washed against our feet, I had my arm slung around her shoulder and it felt right, comfortable. She was teasing me about Mike Newton asking her out on a date as he knew that she and James are no longer an item,
"Listen Bella, if you seriously think that Mike Newton is the man for you, then you have my blessing. But somehow I think that you will be back here sooner rather than later. You know that you just cannot get enough of me."
She laughed, sending chills through me to all my body parts and stirring the lust within me.
"Ooh someone thinks that they are a stud, don't they Mr. Cullen?" She teased pulling away from me, "Well maybe I should test the merchandise and let you know the results of my findings. What do you think to that then?"
She laughed hard as she ran down the beach away from me, looking back over her shoulder to see if I was following, of course she knows that I would, I just needed to give her a head start. I set off to chase her down, growling at her,
"Why you little… Come here Ms. Swan, I will show you that there is no need to go out for a boring old hamburger when you have prime steak right here."
I caught her quickly tackling her to the sands pinning her down by her wrists, my legs straddled her waist, she was still laughing at me as I kissed her lips, silencing her until she squealed as a wave washed over her soaking her completely. I laughed too as I was soaking wet also.
"Edward! I'm soaking!" she complained.
"Oh baby, you always are for me, and you know it" I growled into her ear in a low voice that I knew she couldn't resist.
Date: 24 Dec 2011 8:53 PM Title: Morning After The Night Before
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Author's Response:
Hey there,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, it means so much to know that people are still with me and loving this fic. If you have me on alert then you will get notified of the BPOV posting unless you have read it in the fandom compilation already.
Hope you enjoy our couple finding their way together.
Anyway enough of my rambling on, here is the peek of the next chapter which is unbeta'd so any mistakes are all my own work (grins proudly)
Hope you had a fab Christmas and see you next year!
Lou x x x
Today we were down on First Beach at La Push; it was deserted just how we liked it. We had to hide our relationship from everyone, no-one can find out until we were ready, it made it all the more thrilling and exciting. Yes I did the whole secret thing with Tanya, but that was different, that was just sex, **, whatever you wanted to call it, there were no feelings involved. And yes I would admit that I loved Bella, and wanted to tell her, but I was scared that she would think it's too soon, so I held onto my thoughts.
We walked down the beach as the surf washed against our feet, I had my arm slung around her shoulder and it felt right, comfortable. She was teasing me about Mike Newton asking her out on a date as he knew that she and James are no longer an item,
"Listen Bella, if you seriously think that Mike Newton is the man for you, then you have my blessing. But somehow I think that you will be back here sooner rather than later. You know that you just cannot get enough of me."
She laughed, sending chills through me to all my body parts and stirring the lust within me.
"Ooh someone thinks that they are a stud, don't they Mr. Cullen?" She teased pulling away from me, "Well maybe I should test the merchandise and let you know the results of my findings. What do you think to that then?"
She laughed hard as she ran down the beach away from me, looking back over her shoulder to see if I was following, of course she knows that I would, I just needed to give her a head start. I set off to chase her down, growling at her,
"Why you little… Come here Ms. Swan, I will show you that there is no need to go out for a boring old hamburger when you have prime steak right here."
I caught her quickly tackling her to the sands pinning her down by her wrists, my legs straddled her waist, she was still laughing at me as I kissed her lips, silencing her until she squealed as a wave washed over her soaking her completely. I laughed too as I was soaking wet also.
"Edward! I'm soaking!" she complained.
"Oh baby, you always are for me, and you know it" I growled into her ear in a low voice that I knew she couldn't resist.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:13 PM Title: We Need To Talk
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Author's Response:
Thanks so much for sticking with me on this one!
I am hoping to update over Christmas but that is dependant on my beta. There is good news though, Bella's POV which I did for Texas Fires Fandom appeal is going to post I think on January 1st, need to check the date so if I can't update there is always that to look forward to!
Happy Christmas if I don't update before!
Lou x x x
Anyway here is the sneek for you - remember this is unbeta'd - Jen has not managed to work her magic on this so it might change slightly when posted!
Hope you like it!
We sat watching a DVD, she found a comfortable position lying with her head on my lap and occasionally she would look up at me with those big brown eyes, and I could feel the urge to ** her senseless rise within me every time she moved on my lap. I am sure that she knew what she was doing as she began to giggle.
"Bella, if you don't stop doing that, then I'm afraid you're going to have to help me get rid of the problem."
"Hmm, I have no issue with helping… Would be a pleasure."
Oh this girl was going to be the death of me, especially if Charlie came home.
"When's your dad due home? We were pretty close to being caught last time, I can't do that again."
Before I knew it she was reaching for her phone, once it was to her ear I realized she was calling him to find out. She used the pretense of cooking dinner for him to find out how much time we had. Once she hung up she sat on my lap, her face inches from mine as she breathed.
"He won't be home until 6pm at the earliest. Seeing as its only just gone 1pm, think that gives us more than enough time to take care of your 'problem' wouldn't you say."
She had such a teasing look on her face and was grinding her hips slowly across my now hard erection. I knew that she could feel it through the layers separating us as she gasped and moaned. Oh I needed to show her exactly what she did to me, and what I could do for her in return. We kissed and all the passion, fire, and electricity that I had felt before. My hands roamed under her shirt and before I knew it, the shirt was on the floor and I was reaching around unhooking her bra. Her breasts fell free and I broke off the kiss to gaze at them. They were truly perfect, I put my mouth to her left breast kissing and then taking the nipple in my mouth until I felt it grow hard, then I lavished the same attention to the other and she groaned in pleasure, grinding harder onto my **. I released the nipple from my mouth causing her to gasp at the lack of contact before making my way back to her mouth.
She was now removing my shirt, although she was nowhere near as adept as I am, and kept stopping to do it.
"Here, let me." I breathed as I pulled it over my head.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:00 PM Title: We Need To Talk
oh shit....he has some explaining to do lol :) update soon
Author's Response:
Hey there!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Yes he certainly does have some explaining to do, remember though that Bella is not entirely blameless in this little scenario!
I am hoping to update over Christmas but that is dependant on my beta. There is good news though, Bella's POV which I did for Texas Fires Fandom appeal is going to post I think on January 1st, need to check the date so if I can't update there is always that to look forward to!
Happy Christmas if I don't update before!
Lou x x x
Anyway here is the sneek for you - remember this is unbeta'd - Jen has not managed to work her magic on this so it might change slightly when posted!
Hope you like it!
We sat watching a DVD, she found a comfortable position lying with her head on my lap and occasionally she would look up at me with those big brown eyes, and I could feel the urge to ** her senseless rise within me every time she moved on my lap. I am sure that she knew what she was doing as she began to giggle.
"Bella, if you don't stop doing that, then I'm afraid you're going to have to help me get rid of the problem."
"Hmm, I have no issue with helping… Would be a pleasure."
Oh this girl was going to be the death of me, especially if Charlie came home.
"When's your dad due home? We were pretty close to being caught last time, I can't do that again."
Before I knew it she was reaching for her phone, once it was to her ear I realized she was calling him to find out. She used the pretense of cooking dinner for him to find out how much time we had. Once she hung up she sat on my lap, her face inches from mine as she breathed.
"He won't be home until 6pm at the earliest. Seeing as its only just gone 1pm, think that gives us more than enough time to take care of your 'problem' wouldn't you say."
She had such a teasing look on her face and was grinding her hips slowly across my now hard erection. I knew that she could feel it through the layers separating us as she gasped and moaned. Oh I needed to show her exactly what she did to me, and what I could do for her in return. We kissed and all the passion, fire, and electricity that I had felt before. My hands roamed under her shirt and before I knew it, the shirt was on the floor and I was reaching around unhooking her bra. Her breasts fell free and I broke off the kiss to gaze at them. They were truly perfect, I put my mouth to her left breast kissing and then taking the nipple in my mouth until I felt it grow hard, then I lavished the same attention to the other and she groaned in pleasure, grinding harder onto my **. I released the nipple from my mouth causing her to gasp at the lack of contact before making my way back to her mouth.
She was now removing my shirt, although she was nowhere near as adept as I am, and kept stopping to do it.
"Here, let me." I breathed as I pulled it over my head.
Date: 10 Dec 2011 10:34 PM Title: Beach Party
ahh shit tanyas a fucking hoe! he better get his shit checked to make sure he didn't get anything from that skank lol update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Tanya is lashing out at being rejected, James is a knee jerk reaction to being told no. Update will be Saturday again ;-)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2011 7:13 PM Title: Beach Party
I look forward to your updates on this story. Love the interaction between Bella and Edward. So typical of high school and of the different cliques that they belong to. Kinda like their own version of star crossed lovers. :) I am throughly enjoying this story and cannot wait til next week! :)
Author's Response:
Aww thanks! I love this story so much and am having a ball writing it. There is so much more to come with these two, and yes they are kinda star crossed lovers and we all know that the course of true love never did run smoothly. Thanks for the review x
Date: 04 Dec 2011 4:31 AM Title: escapes and goodbyes
Thank you for updating : ) on another note.... baddddd edward for doing that, I hope it bites him in the butt!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yes Edawrd is bad, he is so bad for doing that, and hmmm it biting him on the butt... It might do... there is alot to come in this that is for sure and I hope that you will be with me.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:52 AM Title: escapes and goodbyes
I don't care if he is a hormonal teenager. What he did is disgusting. And it ruined this Edward for me. Sorry. He's pathetic.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am so sorry to hear that this Edward has been ruined for you! I hope that you will give him another chance to redeem himself in the next chapter.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:04 AM Title: escapes and goodbyes
geez of course he has to end things with tanya she's turned into a scank....do not trust what she said about james.....update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. He did try, although maybe not hard enough, Hmmm not trusting her about James. (looks inncoently around) maybe you are right ;-) Update will be end of the week. I am back on track for weekly updates now.
Date: 03 Dec 2011 10:48 PM Title: escapes and goodbyes
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review and sticking with me on this one. Lou x
Date: 03 Dec 2011 7:19 PM Title: escapes and goodbyes
and the plot thickens....dun dun dun.
From Geekward to Cumward in only a few chaps.
Author's Response:
Sniggers. OMG I think this is the funniest review I have read! You have made me laugh so much with that comment! And YES the plot does thicken. Update will be later in the week. thanks for reading and reviewing! Lou x
Date: 27 Nov 2011 11:13 AM Title: Decisions, Decisions
:)
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:37 PM Title: First Time
Im glad he went to Bella and not Tanya, and after hearing what B had to say maybe he will throw Tanya to the curb? It's shocking that he was her first, but something tells me that this is going to be their turnng point. Cant wait to read the next chapter, keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response:
Yay! So glad that you enjoyed this. And YEP that was meant to be a shock ;-) she is not all that she appears to be at first glance. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 16 Nov 2011 2:28 PM Title: Decisions, Decisions
Please dont let him go to Tanya, if he does it's going to hurt him and Bella, and we know thats what hes wanting. But just doesnt know how to go about getting it.
Author's Response:
Hey there!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. I love how passionate this seems to have got you. Remember he is a hormone ridden teenager who has too many emotions running through him and doesn't know what he wants, well he does (he told me) but doesn't know how to go about getting it. If I find a way to PM you here I will send you a sneak peek of the next chapter for reviewing.
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:03 AM Title: Dinner Dates & Discussions
:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:04 AM Title: Dinner Dates & Discussions
lol it was very hard
Author's Response:
Hey there! (waves)
Thanks for the review. Sniggers. When I sent that to my beta I put author sniggers and her comment back was beta snorts and chuckles - I know exactly the line you are referring to. I almost left my comment on!
Hope you are enjoying this, it will be a bit of a rollercoaster ride for these two and I have LOTS more written already (with the beta) so please do stick with me, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Lou x x
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:06 AM Title: Dinner Dates & Discussions
I just read the chapters thus far and its a really good story. I like where is it is going and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hey Lizzyliz
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! There is soooo much more to come from these too. Thanks for the compliment (blushes).
Hopefully won't be too long for an update, all depends on my lovely beta who is mega busy at the moment, so please do bear with me I have no plans to abandon this story.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 8:28 PM Title: Dinner Dates & Discussions
I don't know .He is ff..ing Tanya. Bella is a B.. what is good here? Esme doen't seems to understand her son has been abused. I can see a guy not wanting to cry to mama, hey it still is depressing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I can tell that you are not really enjoying this, and I am sorry that you are not enjoying my story. Bella is a complicated character and is like an onion in some ways, the more you peel back the layers the more you find inside. Everything that happens if for a reason I can assure you. I have alot more chapters written and I sometimes forget that I haven't posted where I am upto with the writing so you guys are seeing things a certain way. The story is an angsty one, and I cannot promise sunshine an rainbows here.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 8:17 PM Title: Drunk & Disorderly
I have read and read and I still dislike Bella. I am ashamed of her actually. She is shallow and manipulative and so many more things I have not listed that are still not good.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, and I appreciate your honesty. You are obviosuly having a strong reaction to Bella here, I have written her this way for a reason. Everything will be revealed. She is certainly not the doe eyed innocent girl that you normally expect.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 12:57 PM Title: Welcome To Hell
well I hate that anyone is treated this way. I also hate right now that Bella is a coward to not own her own relationship with Edward. Now that I have read one chapter and I hate her, your main character. Should I read on?
Date: 29 Aug 2011 9:13 PM Title: The Morning After The Night Before
:)
Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:35 PM Title: Bourbon On The Beach
:)
Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:51 PM Title: An Evening With Mr Jack
:)
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:58 PM Title: Welcome To Hell
I really like this story so far. I don't think Edward should help Bella, she doesn't deserve it. If she's going to be mean to him then she could figure it out herself. I'm not liking Bella so far. I feel so bad for Edward, he needs to try and stand up for himself and not let these jerks get to him.