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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

You don't want to know.

Reviewer: dannysmitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 22

haha Twister gone wrong.

She should do the walk of shame at least once hehe.

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 22

LMAO at how she ended up at the ER.  Only Bella *shakes head*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 22

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Sweetie, this is amazing! Can't wait to see where you take this.

Reviewer: dannysmitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

WTF soo Alice fucks Carlisle and is now trying to help mend their relationship? And why haven't Bella decked her in the mouth yet? That blows my mind!

 

Love it all!!! 

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 21

I liked that chapter. I'm not 100% sure I can articulate why, but I liked it. I really "get" where Bella is coming from.

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 21

Haha way to go Bella for standing up to the double team...her little rant reminded me of that last little bit in Green eggs and ham when he tells them that he will not eat green eggs and ham. LOL Damn, I must be tired. 

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

She should just f*** him to get back at Carlise

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 19

Finally him?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wait did Carlisle and Alice join them too?

Reviewer: Silence_Of_The_Night Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

I don't know about velvet...but if someone is musically inclined and has a passion for it they do tend to notice the tember of peoples voices!! And believe me when I say some sound far better than others!! The bad ones usually make you wish the person would just shut the hell up and the good ones you could listen to for hours!!   Once again an amazing chapter!! Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hellloooo Edward!  Emmett is too funny!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Sounds like Bella had a crazy good night!

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

Good story Thanks :)

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

ROTFLMAO...wait, so did she or didn't she with Emmett?  LOL

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

I feel cheated, I've never had a bad morning after drunkeness to answer your question. LOL No matter how hard I've tried I can't get drunk. I can get giggly but not drunk. And my hubs has always been with me so, I've always woke up with him ;)

Dang...I wanna hear more about the gymnastics ;) And wth? Rose tried to join in? haha Yep, I need to know more about that night she had ;) Please?

Btw...my hubs would agree w/your hubs, mine thinks I'm having an affair with Vaio...Sony, Vaio.  LOL

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

Forgive her yes, Buddy up...NO

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love it!  How interesting!  Now, is Rosalie pregnant?  She is always eating!!!!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

Way to go Bella!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

Carlisle? WTH?  I thought for sure it would be Jasper!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

Is Alice that girl in the bathroom? With you-know-who?

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awesome!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yay!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am disliking Carlisle again --- I know a broken heart is tough, but what a puss!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love the last few lines!  Bella is a dirty girl ... she just needs more!!!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

so funny!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

Noooooo!  Oh well, at least he proved that he is capable of pleasure!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 7

No Bella....stay away from that zipper & keep walking out the door!  Poor carlisle!  I guess he asked for it!

Reviewer: Silence_Of_The_Night Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter...reminds me of drunkin nights I've experienced myself. Although I've never taken anyone up on their offer....I got everything I need right here at home!!!    And I'm glad you called bullshit on your husbands comment....another thing about men.....they lie!!!!LOL Keep up the excellent work! And it's funny that you say they think your a bitch....I get called that often...only because I take shit from no one!! I can be a great friend...but only to those who deserve my friendship. I just surround myself with awesome people and screw those who don't like me...I just don't care!! LOL

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 11

"Isabella Cullen, you better return my call and tell me why my little boy is at my doorstep crying."  Priceless!!

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

hahaha Love that response she gave them at the end. haha

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

looking forward to the enxt chapter

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh My God !!!!!

Reviewer: Silence_Of_The_Night Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

You can tell your husband that you found one girl that doesn't hold grudges!! That's right....I don't hold grudges. Usually because very few people get close enough to me to fool me. I am very picky about the people I let in....and if they are not in then they can't hurt me. Not that I'm a bitch or anything...I am a very friendly person. I will give anyone a chance but if they are not a "good person" then I just cut my losses and move on....no hard feelings just a nice goodbye. I look at it like this...God send people into your life for a reason...sometimes they are meant to be around for good...and others were sent to teach you a lesson of sorts. How can I hold a grudge against someone for that? So now you can go tell your husband that he was WRONG!! LOL as men so often are!!



Author's Response:

I had to respond to this. I know where you are coming from. I hold on to grudges though, I can't help it. When I meet people, they always think I'm a "bitch" or "cold", "unfriendly" but the reality is that I don't know them. Do they expect for me to be dancing around to please them. Specially at work, with new hires.... come on! Thanks, I needed to unload. Thanks for reviewing by the way. And my husband says men are never wrong..... yeah, I called bullshit on that one. 

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

I  hold grudges bad !!  Am I to emotional I don't think so

I don't cry about it... I get F**king pissed and get even !!

Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

i would be pissed mainly cause he is giving alice what she wanted to begin with, to have it hard and dirty not just slow and soft. not to mention its against the girlfriend code to hook up with an ex that fast after a breakup and chances are its not the first time. that friend would have alot of work to do to get back on my good side if it was me.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMFG...... That was a shocker, and espcially since u dont have anybody with the common pairing..... cant wait to see more

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

 Oh my god was not even thinking that

 great job hun keep it up !!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well there is a loop! I like it!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

Mudslides, YUMMMM

And Alice, Where might she be? Hmmmm

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, thanks for the shout out. Amazing!

Really? Carlisle? No, she has no right to be mad unless it started before they were divorced or if this was the reason he was the way he was with her (not able to give her the hard f*ck that she wanted b/c he was doing it w/someone else the whole time).

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

Now try life again.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

Ah yes, the guilt and the Mothers. They go hand in hand sometimes!

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well holy shit that was unexpected.  Great update.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

i would slap both of them 

Reviewer: Silence_Of_The_Night Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well she should be mad at Alice for sure. And if Carlisle knew about Alice being her friend then yes she should be furious. But if he didn't know of Alice being her friend then she should just kick Alices ass!! Anyway....wonderful job....I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

loved it

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

haha probably Alice. LOL

 

You've got mail hon.  :D

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 13

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

I think myself I would get my friends together  and go out and get totaly shitfaced and celebrate being free to do whatever the hell I want !

Love your Drabble cant wait for the next update !!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

loved it ! 

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

this is great good job please continue

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

I almost feel bad for Carlisle

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

Maybe he found that girl that wanted all hearts and roses and no sex!

I'm sure they are out there as well??

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

great job and yea I have felt the same before as well

keep up the good work

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Yes, It is only fair to try after telling him the problem.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

Deal

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

awesome Bella needs to stay strong

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

You got me, I was still with the tried and true Jacob guess, but I should have known better after seeing the mixed pairing of the girls!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

Carlisle?  I am shocked!  But I love all the non-cannon pairings!  Vey interesting!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella is now in the black hole of facebook!  Surely she will find her Edward? Please?

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

OMG - who is this loser husband?  Please tell me it is Jacob!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love the line..."  I already came ..... to my senses"!  Poor thing!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hi! I just found your story, and I love it already. I like that it's different, not so canon. I'm so picky; I always have to have Edward and Bella together, at least by the end of a story if not sooner. So I was glad to see that your story was E/B.  =) 

I was floored it was Carlisle! I wasn't neccessarily thinking it was Jacob, it could have been a number of other people that she was married to.

I can't wait to see what happens next. By the way, I absolutely adore drabble fics. I'm glad more authors are doing some of their stories that way. Thanks for writing.  Kelly  =)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

Funny you switched thier last names! Did you switch thier husbands too?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well he can't be Edward??

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

I hope it's not Edward screwing her that badly.  He may need to buy the Karma Sutra if thats the case.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yes who is he?????

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I know that feeling!  She needs more!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sounds like Jake to me?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Who's he? More please

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