Date: 26 Apr 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14: In the Light of Day
Now wouldn't it be interesting if Edward had found what she's hiding but chose to protect her instead? Over everything else! Love the story with its brilliant ins and outs and what's going on in Bella's mind.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 14: In the Light of Day
Whew! Man I thought she was already busted. Poor Bella, she is going to give herself a heart attack.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 13: Uncovered
Oh my! What going to happen now!!! Hurry please!
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: Uncovered
Dear Lord! What's cliffhanger! This is a stunning piee of psychological drama. More, please!!!?
Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Uncovered
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Mar 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box
totallly loved the chapter looking forward to more
Date: 20 Mar 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box
love the story cant wait for your next update
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box
Wow!
Date: 08 Mar 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Glory
A brilliant piece of pscho-drama! I love the other touches as well. Alice, Edward and Bella's ack and forth reparte, and Jasper's southern gentleman paired with his irritation. Kudos!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 11: Glory
Hahaha, Alice! She sure knows how to stick her foot in her mouth. I don't think jasper is going to warm up to Edward very fast. I think he still sees Bella as his in some ways. And a double YUMMY for Edward in his FBI suit!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 10: Territory
Yummy! I love Edward! Hot, territorial, and does he have a cop uniform? Oh Bella is in sooooo much trouble!
Date: 12 Feb 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 10: Territory
looking forward to more
Date: 29 Jan 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
ZOIKS!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
Great stuff!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
Loved It! You clever little minx! What an awesome twist!
(the wonderful thing about Tiggers is Tiggers are wonderful things!)
Date: 21 Jan 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Oh no, she is going to kill them.. ... grrr.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4: Clawing
I can not form oppinions so quick. I need more information
Date: 21 Jan 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
De Pauling. Means Paul is the guy that left.. Not Edward.. sneaky snake.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
Oh...........EFF!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
Oh man! That sucks for Bella! Maybe he sucks at his job! Hahaha
Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: Easy
I love phyco Bella!
Date: 31 Dec 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 3: In with the New
Just saying, I'm head over heels for this story :)
Author's Response:
Well, thank you! But now I'm wondering if you're still here? Hope to hear from you again.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 8: Easy
Loved it! I can't help it, you always make me laugh! The engraved invite set me off! Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Well, I'm honored to be responsible for your laughter. Bella is too ;)
Date: 27 Dec 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8: Easy
Love it. Great update.
Author's Response:
Thanks, doll!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy
WOW!
Author's Response:
Good wow or bad wow? ;)
Date: 15 Dec 2011 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy
She's one cool cookie, cooking breakfast as if nothing had happened.
Author's Response:
A bit twisted, perhaps ;)
Date: 14 Dec 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy
Still got my attention. Actually, I'm wondering why you have a RL, when obviously this story is itching to come out.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Oh, how I wish I didn't have a RL sometimes...
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy
Crazy good! More please.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Sorry I'm so behind in getting to these replies. Multiple stories on multiple sites overwhelms me sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Oh my! Did not see that coming! Great job
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad I was able to catch you off guard ;) *snicker*
Date: 28 Nov 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope
I don't do turkey sandwiches. Cold turkey with warmed up cranberry sauce. MMMM. Warmed up dressing and mashed potatoes with warmed up gravy. Yummm. But, meanwhile back to Bella. I didn't catch the breadcrumbs. I was too busy making them into killer stuffing.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Well, congrats on your killer stuffing. I hope your holiday was lovely. There are Biscuits and Gravy now ready...
Maybe I shouldn't post when I'm hungry? ;)
Date: 28 Nov 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Wow. You are way past the scorned woman and full on homicidal vengence demon (BtVS alumni).
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Well, you're welcome. Homicidal vengeance will only touch those who deserve it. If that soothes you in any way... ;)
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope
Good chapter! I love all her internal chatter!
Author's Response:
She's a bit twisted, perhaps, but THANK YOU! ;)
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope
lookinmg forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Well, thank you, my dear :)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope
Hmm. Is it a fluffy tale about a kitten or something much darker?
Author's Response:
Sorry for spamming you... ummm... the fic or the bedtime story? hehe ;)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
It's not Norman Bates, It's Norma!
Author's Response:
THIS made me lol ;)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Clawing
Naughty???
Author's Response:
I suppose that depends on how you define naughty ;)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
Hip hip hooray! She should have done this months ago
Author's Response:
Some of us have difficulty with the 'moving on' stage. Men suck. They never do. ;)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
It's taken her long enough to stop crying
Author's Response:
Spamming you out of order, no less. Sorry I'm not better at this, but I try to respond to every review. They all mean something to me :)
As for the crying... it took me a year once. It was a rough one. And he sure as well wasn't worthy. If only I could get some of that time back...
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
OMG, she really went there! Lol, she's lethal! But, I think she needs to do the ex in too!
Author's Response:
Brilliant minds think alike, perhaps ;)
Date: 12 Nov 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Holy Shit! You weren't kidding about revenge! So relieved it was not Edward!
Author's Response:
Edward? Heavens no! We'll get to spend some quality time with HIM :)
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 4: Clawing
OK. Now, I can't relate. Yeah. I'm looking forward to what you are going to do with Bella who may have become the whole a woman scorned.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
I hope you're still with me :)
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
OMG! You even got the name right. I'm your official stalker. You totally nailed the whole burn his crap including all the pictures. Oh, wait a minute ... that was me. Again, I am woman. Kudos to you for nailing it.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Seeing these out of order, apparently. Sorry that I got so behind, but thank you so much for reading.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
I once had the whole "why did he leave". One night, after many tequilla shots, I found myself realized who frickin cares. Anyways, thanks for letting me get in touch with that I am woman moment. That's pretty cool for an author to inspire a memory.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
You're welcome, and I hope the memory didn't bring any pain with it.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 4: Clawing
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 3: In with the New
I'm really enjoying this tale of yours! She most certainly cleaned house! Too bad she waited a year, but, better late than never! It's amazing what one will compromise on or give into when n a relationship! A bad realtionship....!
Author's Response:
Thank you. We've all been there on some level, right?
Date: 06 Nov 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: In with the New
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 30 Oct 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
Maybe I am off in this but I am thinking she steps beyond hopeful that he will return to delusional when she still purchases milk for him for an entire year! There is something distinctly unhealthy about that. It seems like she lost herself in him so totally that she hung onto some reminders of him just to keep who she identified herslef as( a person who took all of her cues from someone else). Yes? Am I judging too quickly? Let me know!
Author's Response:
You're certainly on the right track with delusional. She's by no means in a healthy place, but my concern was that you felt perhaps that Alice was in some way partially to blame for this? If that was, indeed, your thinking, then I can only hope that a more in-depth look at their friendship might give you a more favorable opinion of her. Thank you for taking the time to read, review, and respond :)
Date: 29 Oct 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
Friends don't let friends live in delusions! At least she is taking steps in taking back her identity and life!
Author's Response:
She's definitely going to take steps. As for 'delusions'... I'm not quite understanding your intent? I'd love it if you'd clarify?
Date: 29 Oct 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
looking forward to seeing where this is going
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 23 Oct 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
A good start; I'm intrigued.
Author's Response:
What can I say? The voices are talking to me again ;)