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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG!!!! they arrested carlisle!!! i know it was just but ?? thanks for sharing this on here with us i really did enjoy it ;D

Reviewer: Kikkina Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it. However, I am now very afraid to go to hospital=)



Author's Response:

LOL. Thanks so much and sorry about that!

Reviewer: Remi_Capulet Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

i kinda wish there was one more chapter but i like this. i usually dont read shorter stories but i think u write well and have fantastic ideas!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

so did Carlisle get convicted? What was the evidence or their downfall? What gave them away? How does Edward react to this? and How does this change Edward and Bella's lives?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. The end is up to you. But how he got caught, there would be a trail of paperwork that Carlisle would be easily attached to. Either by name or by penmanship.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good she got the ring back!!!!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

So, did she remember to get the ring?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well, I sure hope that she remembers to take the ring out of her pocket before burning the clothes!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, such a emotional story. Great one, too!!! I think each and every one of us could relate to Bella and Carlisle's position, if our loved one was so desperately ill and on death's door we would do just about anything to help them.  I hope Edward realizes that and doesn't hold Carlisle accountable, Bella either!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: queenbee311 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

I absolutly love it. Carlisle helping her is awsome. Thank you 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, glad you are enjoying

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

So how in the hell is she going to get a kidney from someone if she doesn't know their blood type?   I get the feeling that Bella is going to take matters into her own hands and this won't end well, right?

Wow, interesting concept that I haven't read in fanfiction before!



Author's Response:

Well she's not there quite yet. She won't just randomly pick someone. Or will she? LOL

 

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Laia_222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

 I like it!

 

New reader!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. Glad you are enjoying.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

So sad to see perfect, beautiful Edward sick! My heart breaks for them!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

confused and trying to see how chpt 1 and 2 go. but hey i am up for a good story

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:56 AM Title: Prologue

well dying to know what he gave

interesting



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews. The prologue is taken from the future. : )

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh no......Edward cant be sick can he?  Such a perfect life for them (so far) and great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Hope you enjoy the rest of the ride.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2011 3:49 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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