Love it, but I would like a little bit more back story, how they started this kinky ritual.  Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more ^-^

I love this! please keep continuing. Good job with writing this. 

love it

Holy Crow!!! I really shouldn't be reading this stuff while at work, but WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
More please.

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

I actually think they have a stronger bond than others because they are honest with each other. Whose business is it anyway what they do behind closed doors? No one is getting hurt, unless it's consentually.

Wow!

>>>I'm giving you a good review :D<<<  I just thought i'd point that out lol.

Even when it's not my thing, i can't seem to find many kink/fetishes that i don't find hot. I don't think i'd feel the same if i wasn't reading about Edward and Bella though.

I'm very intrigued as to where you'll take this story if you continue it, which i hope you do.

Well, he can be my baby anytime.

It's unique, and follows the prompt very well. It was intense, sexy and yes hot. 

I do hope you get the response you want and keep it going, especially for how the chapter ended. Bella took care of Edward and it seems now Edward will take care of her in another unique way. You left enough to make us think there's more, and I do want to find out what else there is and how much things aren't what they seem...

I've read a story with some of the same content in it but for the life of me can't think of what it was called, Edward was a doctor and Bella was younger than him and had met him when she was in high school and lived with her aunts.  I thought I had favorited it but can't find it.  If people give you nasty reviews they should go take a leap in my opinion no one forces them to read the story and you did put a warning up.  Some people are just into different kind of kink nothing wrong with that as long as it's all consensual, I for one hope you continue the story. 

Wow. did not see that coming. will there be other kink, or is this their thing.

Keep going!

looking forward to whats next