Date: 16 Apr 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
So WONDERFUL to see you back. I have been patiently waiting (OK, not so patient). Sorry about the writers block, its so easy to sit back and read your fantastic story and forget how much work must go into it. Will try not to take you/it for granted, so WELCOME BACK, MISSED YOU!!!
Now, Edward. Can totaly see him becoming a 'dick' because he can't be in charge or control everything. Love how real your characters feel. How you have fleshed each and everyone into just how I imagine them. Laughed alot on Edwards new ability to zip and button up his pants one handed! You and this story are great. Thank you -- Cheri
Author's Response:
Hi Cheri
Thanks for your wonderful review to chapter 17 and for sticking with me through the writers block.
More about life on the island coming up in chapter 19.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Apr 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
Well I think Alice is missing her mess for either depression or Bi-Polar disorder ... which would explain a great deal honestly. Thank Heavens for Jasper's ability to communicate with his brother and Bella's easy forgiveness... Oh can not wait for more.. writer's blocks arrgghh!!! Laters BB Kathy!
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy
Good guess on the meds for Alice. Thanks for sticking with me through the writers block.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Apr 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
First thank you for the thank you !! LOL, second loved the update, so many variab;es with candle and soap fragences, brillant, And Edward being a class a dick, well done. I can see it all the way. Love Jasper and him being the talker and sounding board for Edward. i think Alice is depressed. AM I right? Glad you are well and just had been busy and maybe over the funk!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi FlSunshine
Thanks for the review to chapter 17. You are right about Alice. Thanks for sticking with me through the writers block.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Apr 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
Thank you for your kind words. I've been out of commissioned for awhile and now I'm trying to catch up on my reading. Great chapter btw.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
Alice's highs and low, I get it, well played.
Author's Response:
Hi artri
Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 17. More on Alice coming up soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 15 Apr 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
I'm so happy that you're back! Sorry about the writer's block, but it looks like you worked through it beautifully. It even looks like you exorcised some of it in this chapter!
This was another great chapter. I didn't think Edward's problems went as deep as they did, so I'm glad that Jasper pulled his head out of his ass! Looks like good times are ahead in the lab, and I'm intrigued to learn what Alice's problem is...I have a couple of thoughts, but am not sure.
BTW - I checked out the blog last week when I was thinking about this story, and I like the newer pictures. I missed them after the last chapter somehow. Thanks for sharing!
~allidel :)
Author's Response:
Hi allidel
Thanks for your review to chapter 17 and for sticking with me through the writers block.
Edward is always going to be Edward whatever his age - prone to bouts of emotion.
More on Alice coming up soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 15 Apr 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
:)
Author's Response:
Hi NelumOnelius
Thanks for the smiley review to chapter 17.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 15 Apr 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
im thinking (and have been for awhile) that alice may be bipolar and is currently at a low point and of course has no meds.
Author's Response:
Hi mystic1709
Thanks for your review to chapter 17. You're right about Alice's meds, but not the condition - you're close though.
More on Alice coming up soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 15 Apr 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
Thanks so much for the update. I was wooried when we didn't get another quick update--glad things are ok. i am loving this Swiss Family Robinsonesque tale.
Author's Response:
Hi susanreader
Thanks for your review on chapter 17. Thanks for sticking with me through the writers block. I'm glad you are enjoying the Swiss Family Robinsonesque tale. Self-sufficiency is lost I think and being shipwrecked makes the Cullen's survive on what is immediately available or what they can make themselves.
More on island life for the Cullen's is coming up soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 15 Apr 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues
Love Jasper and his intellect ;-) they will all be so surprised with the soap!!!
Author's Response:
Hi mountain718
Thanks for your review to chapter 17. More on island life coming up in chapter 19.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 07 Mar 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
Alice annoys me.
Esme is fucking awesome! woot woot go Esme! She sure told them, poor old gal lmao.
Author's Response:
Hi Cullensbabymama7
There is a reason for Alice's behavior. Stay tuned!
Esme rocks!
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 07 Mar 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
:)
Author's Response:
Hi NelumOnelius
Thanks for the smiley review.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 07 Mar 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
Well I think Alice got what she deserved. I was thinking maybe she was pregnant too and that is why she is so moody. But who knows. I was happy that Esme gave them a tongue lashing, they needed it.
As for no pictures this chapter, well I would have loved to see some of the bat shit photo shopped on Alice. LOL That would have been amazing.
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv74ever
I think Alice deserved the spanking as well, even if in reality we'd probably seriously injure any man who did that to us!
There is a reason for Alice's behaviour, so stay tuned.
Esme is showing us how strong and non-nonsense she really is.
I love the idea of a photo-shopped shit-covered-Alice, but alas my expertise with photographic software is not that good. Now on the otherhand, if that is something you are great at, feel free to submit your artwork and I'll post it on my blog with credits assigned to you.
Kind regards, Jkazzie
Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
the last three chapters were fantastic.... Jasper spanking Alice well this Jasper reminded me of "People Like Us" character "Jasper" no not the Dom part of his personality, but the stronger and forceful, powerful in words and action Jasper....(not sure if you have read PLU or not, it's a killer story, if your offended by anything BDSM then it's definitely not your type of reading, but it's a killer story) ... I hope most people understand yhat this is a fanfic and your not trying to be overly perfect in all the details, like you say, and point our your not a surgeon or Orthopedic surgeon, but from this lay persons POV, I thought you did a killer job with all the story line, from the rescue to the bats, all the makeshift items they use and survive with... the shower scene first with Alice and Jasper was powerful you could feel the steam rolling off the words while reading...Jasper was so made at Alice for putting him and everyone in a extremely hanious position...but at the same time he was relieved she was safe...loved the spanking she got...sorry but she acted like a child with her actions and thoughts.... Esme is one powerful momma!!!!! sorry but that final ease dropping was hiliarious...you all know it was, so thanks for that bit of humor.... oh Rosie honey, yea...no...morning sickness isn't gonna be that quick....dear lord all three of those women are gonna be big time preggers if they don't figure something out soon...maybe that's whats wrong with Alice....hummmm... love the story and all your pictures... Later Kathy
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy
Thanks for your great review. Yes, I have read PLU and I loved it. I am also reading JustGinger's (aka Peoplelikeus) next story Hope Springs and I'm enjoying that thoroughly as well. Another great story is Master of the Universe. It's no longer available on fanfic websites but it has been published by TWCS in 3 volumes starting with Shades of Grey - different character names of course. If you haven't ready MOTU, then I think you would enjoy reading Shades of Grey + the next 2 volumes.
I'm so glad my words brought to life for you what I was aiming for. I wanted the reader to know just how angry Jasper is with Alice and how she tries to manipulate him. There is a reason for her behavior other than being a brat, so stay tuned in later chapters. Esme's eaves-dropping - yeah a bit funny. A few minutes later and she might have caught her son in flagrante delicto. What an eye-popping experience that would have been for Esme!
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 07 Mar 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
Great chapter i think Esma was right to lay in to them all.
Author's Response:
Hi Ladyros
Yeah, Esme has ruled and rocked in the last few chapters. She's no wall-flower!
Thanks for reviewing.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 07 Mar 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
Esme and Jasper are too alike...lol! ok kids, mamma bear has spoken and don't even think of crossing her!
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Yep, there is always one kid that is most like one of the parents in character and demeanor, and one that is sometimes equal mix - I'm a bit of an equal mix but my brother and sister take after our father. Jasper is most like Esme. Emmett is most like Carlisle and Edward is a bit of a mix.
Esme rocks and rolls. We'll see more of her in later chapters.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
eeeeek go momma Esme. Alice deserves her punishment maybe more.
Author's Response:
Hi Hermionerox89
Esme has certainly surprised everyone. She's not going to fade into the background like she does in the Twilight books.
I think Alice deserved her punishment as well, although in reality none of us would put up with a spanking from the man in our lives. There is a reason for Alice's behavior, so stay tuned for later chapters.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
Love it!
Author's Response:
Hi IGOTEAMEDWARD
Thanks for your review - I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
I read your review for Hope Springs. I'm reading that as well - it's a great story isn't it?
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
love Esme taking control...think they have all learned a lesson...this is no adventure holiday, its real and deadly life.
Author's Response:
Hi artri
You are absolutely right. Being wrecked on a deserted island is no picnic. Yes, they need to take chances, but they need to do it wisely and with proper planning.
Esme rocks and rolls. She's no wallflower. We'll see more of her in the future.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
Wow! I think I'm even cowering a bit from Esme's speech! It's funny how this is a long chapter and it seems like so much happened, but at the same time not a lot did happen. Strange!
I like seeing Alice's & Esme's POV. I would have loved to learn why Alice keeps acting the way she does, so hopefully we'll get a hint of that in the future. I also think that Esme was right to lay down some ground rules as far as exploration goes.
I'm looking forward to some more E&B, and hopefully they will get a chance to explore that fishing village. After some well thought-out planning, of course! ;)
Thanks for another amazing update! I can't seem to get enough of this story. It's always sitting in the back of my mind.
~allidel :)
Author's Response:
Hi allidel
Thanks for your great review.
Esme certainly rules the roost, doesn't she? We will hear more from Esme in the future - I love her! There is an explanation for Alice's behavior, so stay tuned in later chapters. E&B are up next and they will explore the fishing village ... at some point.
Kind regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
As a grown woman, I would have to say, that regardless of how ill-conceived, stupid, childish, and selfish I have been, I would NEVER tolerate being spanked. Anyone who tried, including (and probably especially) my husband better sleep with one eye open.
Author's Response:
Hi sevanderslice
As a grown woman, I agree with you wholeheartedly. I think I would do some serious damage with my cast-iron frying pan if that happened to me. Having said that, I feel the spanking fit with the story arc so I'm not sorry I wrote it that way. There is a reason for Alice's behavior which we will find out about in later chapters (not too far away).
I hope you keep reading because there is more to come.
Kind regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
Love me some mama Esme
Author's Response:
Hi FISunshine
Esme rocks and rolls!
There will be more of Esme in the future.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen
I love the sassy Esme.
Author's Response:
Hi Lizzyliz
I love sassy Esme as well.
I hate that Esme always fades into the background in the books, as well as a lot of fanfics.
My Esme is no wallflower!
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 28 Feb 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
Alice deserved what she got, glad to see them all safe.
Author's Response:
Hi artri
I think Alice got what she deserved as well. It's not over for Alice yet!
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 27 Feb 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
Love it! I love Esme ripping into Alice. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi Imking
Next chapter is on it's way. Esme ripping into Alice was popular. I love strong Esme.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
Well I cant wait to see if Jasper really does spank Alice. She needs it. I am so glad they are getting out of that tunnel. I dont think they will be going in there again.
I love how Esme was so pissed at Alice, I think Alice needs to grow up and realize she is not in Kansas anymore. lol
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv4ever
I love your Wizard of Oz reference.
The next chapter is on its way.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 27 Feb 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
oh boy...pissed off mama Esme! Jasper is too quiet, what's he gonna do???
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Pissed off Esme is really popular with the fans.
Next chapter will be posted soon, so stay tuned for more Esme and Jasper reactions.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 27 Feb 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
Gotta love Mama Esme...kicking ass & taking names! I'm glad that everyone is back together and heading home. I'm sure there will be some discussion coming up soon! Looking forward to it!
~allidel :)
Author's Response:
Hi allidel
I love strong Esme as well but I don't think she's finished with them.
The next chapter will be posted soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 27 Feb 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
love it
Author's Response:
Hi Hermionerox89
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon, so stay tuned.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 26 Feb 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
Love this story and this chapter, but still worried about Alice. Not sure she will be able to sit down for the next week. LOL Cheri
PS Way to go Esme!
Author's Response:
Hi Cheri
Mama Esme is certainly handing out punishment and she's not finished yet!
The next chapter will be posted soon, so stay tuned for more Alice and Esme action and Jasper as well.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
whew, well we got them out of the hole and now almost out of the cave, found the runaway Alice. Love that she is covered in bat shit. Too funny. Now to get the injuries taken care of.
Author's Response:
Hi FISunshine
Yep we're out of the cave ... for now. Alice has more trouble comin' her way. I thought being covered in bat shit was the worst punishment anybody could offer up to Alice. When I lived in North Queensland many years ago, the fruit bats would shit all over our washing at night. In Australia, we tend to hang our laundry on the clothes line rather than use a dryer. The bats had an uncanny talent of finding the one white thing on the line. I remember many a white bed sheet being splattered in orange (from the mangoes) shit.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
:)
Author's Response:
Hi NelumOnelius
Thanks for the smiley face review. The next chapter will be posted soon, so stay tuned.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
I love hearing from Carlisle and Rose's pov! It was awesome. Esme was and is pissed omg she grabbed Alice by the ear lmao. I wonder if Jasper WILL spank Alice.
I have to agree Alice shouldnt have gone, her jealousy towards bella going and her childish behavior put much more un-needed stress and worry on the others. They already had a fallen Bella and Edward, and Jasper runs four hours to get back to the sight for help on top of that worry about his wife. Alice had to had been right behind them or some yards away when they were walking to the cave thingy.
Is she gonna get a spanken lmao.
Author's Response:
Hi Cullensbabymama7
I like hearing from characters other than Edward and Bella as well - it gives us a different perspective. There will be a couple of other POVs coming up in the next chapter just to round out this particular story arc before I move onto the next one. There is more in store for Alice, so stay tuned. The next chapter should be posted soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
:)
Author's Response:
Hi NelumOnelius
Thanks for your review. Keep 'em comin' :)
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
very good chapter go get them Esme and put them all down! Ha Ha
Author's Response:
Hi Ladyros
Thanks for your review. Mama Esme was popular.
The next chapter will be posted soon, so stay tuned.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 26 Feb 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2
Great and funny chapter. I love what happened to Alice, very funny.
Author's Response:
Hi Lizzyliz
Yeah ... a serving of bat shit will teach Alice not to go off on her own.
Stay tuned for chapter 15 which I hope to post soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 21 Feb 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ladyros.
I've just posted chapter 15. Enjoy.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 20 Feb 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 "Land"
F'ing gross....and I think you know what part I'm talking about. That mental picture just gave me the shivers of disgust.
But so far, I'm lovin the story
Author's Response:
Hi Idydaydream
Yeah, sorry about that, but it was too perfect an opportunity to let it go by when she landed on top of him.
Otherwise, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 20 Feb 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
Now where did Alice go???? Carlisle is gonna have his hands full when they get back to camp......
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Carlisle certainly will have his hands full. We'll find Alice soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 19 Feb 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
Wow, love this story. Thank you for the quick update, but I'm still worried about Alice. Cheri
Author's Response:
Hi Cheri
Thanks for reading. Part 2 of chapter 14 will be posted later this week.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 19 Feb 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
Another great update! I'm glad that they are finally there to help E&B out of the cavern. It's good news that both E&B are able to help each other. I think their concern for each other is helping them deal with their own pain better...and a little kissing doesn't hurt either! I think we all know what Alice was thinking, but still not a smart move. I'm looking forward to the rest of the rescue. Thanks for this part of the chapter a little early!
~allidel :)
Author's Response:
Hi allidel
Alice was silly but I might have done the same thing. It hurts to be left out and that's why she followed.
PS. Photos for the chapter are now posted on my blog.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 19 Feb 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
hmm, well when it rains it pours, now alice is lost . Thansk for theupdate !!!
Author's Response:
Hi FISunshine
Yep, Alice is lost but will soon be found.
Thanks for reviewing.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
That was the first thing I was going to comment on was where were the photos? lol. I love your writing and this was another great chapter.
I love it, "men dont faint they pass out" LOL
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv4ever
I'm so glad you're enjoying Wrecked with Bella.
PS. Photos for the chapter are now posted on my blog and I added a few more for chapter 12 as well.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
Alice Alice where are you?
Author's Response:
Hi time for now
Thanks for reading and reviewing. We'll find out more about Alice in chapter 15.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)
Love it!
Author's Response:
Hi Igoteamedward
Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying Wrecked with Bella.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 17 Feb 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
Wow, I am begining to think you are the queen of cliffies. Edward & Bella, who knows how they are doing. Alice missing, and what was that with Jazz in the tunnel getting so confused. Anyway, will be holding my breath until the next chapter. Love this story!! - Thank you. Cheri
Author's Response:
Hi Cheri
Gotta have a cliffie or two every so often to keep you on your toes. In regards to Jazz's melt-down in the tunnel, he had a panic attack. They are frightening and can affect even the strongest person making everything confusing and frightening. In his case, the fear for his brothers welfare and his own misdirected culpability in the accident caused his panic attack.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 17 Feb 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
This chapter was much shorter than the others. :( I cant believe that Alice went after them. That was so dangerous. Well hopefully she isnt hurt too.
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv4ever
Alice went after them because she felt left out. We've all done it, I'm just not sure if we'd all do something so dangerous. Alice isn't hurt but she won't be so keen to explore the tunnels again after her first experience.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 17 Feb 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
Wow that is scarry. I LOVED the pictures on the blog. One of them with the Carbon deposits was a little confusing as I didn't read anthing about it in the chapter. I would have loved to know about that part of the cave and what the Carbon deposits were or what its from.
Now as for Bella and Edward, I cant imagine the pain he is in with that broken arm but I am so glad he kept his head together so he can help Bella.
Poor Jasper is frantic to get help. Now he will be the hero.
Author's Response:
Hi Let|RobstenLuv4ever
Glad you like the photos on my blog. The one with the carbon deposits shouldn't have been there - thank's for letting me know. It actually belongs to chapter 14 and I've reposted it there. Other photos for chapter 14 are on my blog, which I posted this morning, as well as a few extra for chapter 12.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 17 Feb 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
Alice is in big trouble! did she find Edward and Bella?
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Alice certainly is in trouble but not of the injury type! If you've read chapter 14, you already know the answer to whether she found E&B. If you haven't, then I won't spoil it for you.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 17 Feb 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
Great job!
Author's Response:
Hi igoteamedward
Thanks for the compliment. It's fun writing this story, and I love the readers thoughts and comments.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
I dont know why you dont like writing lemons because you are GREAT at it. I loved the lemon even though it wasn't a full lemon it was great. I am glad you did get on with it because Edward was dragging his feet. lol.
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv4ever
I'm glad you liked the lemon. I was happy with it in the end, but there is a certain embarrassment in writing something intimate for other people to read. Full lemons will be squeezed shortly.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Temple
Again I think Edward is dragging his feet with Bella. The temple and the pictures were just amazing.
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv4ever
I'm glad you liked the temple pictures. I added a few extra photos to chapter 12 on my blog. I can't remember if I told you that in a prior response or not and chapter 14 photos are on my blog now.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Hunt
Poor Piglets they were so cute. But hey when your hungry your hungry. lol. I love the little peck Bella gave Edward. I am surprised he hasn't tried nothing since they have been there a few weeks now. Whats wrong with him? lol
Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 8 "Pig or Pork"
I love it. They have all this wonderful fruit that we will never have the pleasure of tasting and chickens and eggs and pigs. That have everything. Its another great chapter.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Moving House
I find this highly educational. I never would have thought of driftwood to be naturally treated already. I think it was genious to use in in building houses.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
great story so far,keep going
Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Making Plans
Well at least Bella is getting better and they have a wonderful plan for the house. I love it.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
Wow, again! Another intense one, but it was nice to see Jasper's POV. I hope once everyone is rescued and healed, they will get a chance to explore the fishing village that's abandoned. And I'm also intrigued by the other directions in the lava tube...the one to 'family' and the one that was unmarked. So much great stuff to look forward to reading. But first, the rescue. I have a feeling it will be another intense chapter as well! Thanks!
~allidel :)
PS - I'm trying that rating thing below for the first time. I have no idea what's going to happen, so if something looks bad then I didn't mean it. I love this story!
Author's Response:
Hi allidel
We don't hear enough from Jasper so I thought I'd give him a voice with chapter 13 and part of chapter 14.
Btw: the ratings thing worked well. Thanks for the five coffee cups :)
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Working Together
Again the chapter was great. Loved the pictures. I love how they are working together and fast to make sure everything is saved from the boat.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Making Camp
Another wonderful chapter.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ship Wrecked
Wow that was so exciting. I am glad they made it there and the pictures are so beautiful.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 "Land"
Gross he had to taste her vomit. LOL but at least he saved her life and she spotted land.
OF course we want you to continue. I am loving it so far. I just wish you would include to pictures inside each chapter here on TWCS so we dont have to go back and fourth to see them while reading.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"
I recommended this story to my mom before I even read it and she started telling me about it today and I had to drop what I was reading to start this one. lol. Her name is PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine. I dont know if she has reviewed or not I hope she has.
Now I love the beginning so far, lets see where you take us.
Author's Response:
Hi LetRobstenLuv4ever
Thank you so much for all of your reviews. I have responded to some of them. I haven't heard from your mom's penname in a review yet, but thanks for recommending Wrecked with Bella.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
His story is fantastic I'm loving reading, congratulations.
I'll leave here a hint, if they have a diesel engine, since the boat's fuelruns out, they can EXTRACT vegetable oil (which is the biodiesel in Brazil), and power the motor (generator). The diesel engine wasoriginally invented to burn (work with) peanut oil. I hope this helps.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
:)
Author's Response:
Hi NelumOnelius
Thanks for the smiley face review.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
I love that it was in Jasper's perspective. I wish we could have had the rescue too. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Hi Lizzyliz
We don't hear enough from Jasper in fanfiction, so I thought it was important to give him a voice. Part of chapter 14 includes Js POV as well.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
Geez!!! Poor Jasper!
Author's Response:
Hi Twifan1228
Thanks for reviewing. Jasper is okay, he just had a panic attack. It happens sometimes to the best of us.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 16 Feb 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Getting Help
A nice, exciting, heartwrenching chapter.I can't wait for more. And Alice is off getting herself in trouble, isn't she?
And your use of "flashlight" made me smile. :D
Oh, and I know that most of the English speaking world uses "Torch," and I'm sure it's a more appropriate word than "Flashlight," but since we don't use "Torch" for the battery powered version, reading that word always brings up images of Indiana Jones type Expeditions, especially when traveling through a dark lava tube. I was picturing a stick with fire at the end until you mentioned the batteries were dead. And then I had to go "Oooooh!" and compeltely rearrange my images of the chapter.
So thanks for fixing it. And sorry about the nitpicking. :D
Author's Response:
Hi sevanderslice
Thanks for reviewing. I thought it was important to hear from Jasper because we don't get to listen to his POV enough in fanfic. Alice is indeed off getting herself into trouble. Yeah, the word flashlight is now embedded in my brain and my fingertips. lol.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 14 Feb 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
You did fine, just enough not too much.
Author's Response:
Hi artri
Thanks for reading and reviewing ... and the moral support :)
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 14 Feb 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Hunt
Really enjoying this , the hunt was great fun.
Author's Response:
Hi artri
The Hunt was fun to write as well. Thanks for your review.
Regards, JKazzie
Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
oh no, they both seriously hurt! how are they going to get out of that hole????
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Rest assured, they will get out the hole.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 14 Feb 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
Love this story, but hate the cliffy! I know I am asking alot, but write fast. I NEED to know what is going to happen next and how they are going to get out of there. PLEASE!! Thank you for giving all of us this wonderful story! Cheri
Author's Response:
Hi Cheri
Sorry about the cliffy. I have started writing chapter 13 and will update as soon as I can.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
Airport or ait force base??
Author's Response:
Hi Jillapet
Nah, it's not an airport or an airforce base. It's a good idea though.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
Wow - intense chapter!! I have no clue why the wind would be blowing so strong, but I might need to google or wikipedia that asap. I feel like I should be rushing somewhere to get help for them.... Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see what happens next!
~allidel :)
PS - Congrats on the flat selling!
Author's Response:
Hi allidel
I love google and wikipedia - they're both a wealth of information! Rest assured, that Jasper is rushing away to get help.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
hmm, did not like this chapter, just because idon't like them getting hurt. It will seem like it proved everyone else right, that they should not have explored the tubes. So if that is what you were gonna for you acheived it. A little drama there was ok, but so much that Edward open break of his arm, and her with a serious head injury, now needing a rescue. A little over the top for me. And i hate it when they get hurt. Like the relationship thou.
Author's Response:
Hi FISunshine
I'm disappointed you didn't enjoy the chapter because they got hurt, but they are all bound to get hurt or get sick sometime living as they do on a deserted island. Their survival depends on them taking chances.
Thanks for reading and reviewing as always.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
great story so far
Author's Response:
Hi Ladyros
Thanks for the compliment and I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
:)
Author's Response:
Hi NelumOnelius
Thanks for the smiley face.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
This is getting really exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter.
One tiny question, are the characters in this story supposed to be American, or from someplace else? If they are American, then a "Torch" is a long piece of burning wood used for light or to keep bugs away in the summer. A "Flashlight" is a battery powered source of light with a handle.
Author's Response:
Hi sevanderslice
Characters are American. When you reminded me that a torch is a flashlight in the US, I could have kicked myself. Of course I knew that. I will go back and replace torch with flashlight. In many parts of the world, including Australia a torch with a flame is called a tiki torch or an oil/gas torch, but a flashlight is also called a torch.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
Great chapter. I hear an 'I told you so.'
Author's Response:
Hi Lizzyliz
Esme probably will say or imply 'I told you so' at some point, because she's a Mom, but will it make any difference in the long run?
I don't know if fear of the unknown would stop me from taking risks to try and improve my circumstances or know more about my environment if I was in their position. I think I'd be insatiable with curiosity. It makes for an interesting story anyway ... I hope!
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 13 Feb 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube
omg drama! Naughty lava thingy......
Glad he found her, how on earth are they going to get out of this mess ;-)
glad you sold your flat :-)
Author's Response:
Hi poppyanna
Yeah, the lava thingys will be a feature over the course of the story. When you think about it, a series of unexplored lava tunnels is a little boys dream come true and we have four of them if we include Carlisle. What boy could resist the adventure? Rescue coming up soon.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Feb 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
good chapter, glad they are together
Author's Response:
Hi ladyros
You're not alone. Everyone wanted them together, including me.
Thanks for reviewing.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
Good, i'm glad they were straightforward with each other (now) but he still has to get her back for going in the tubes with them...lol
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Thanks so much for all of your reviews.
I'm glad that you're enjoying Wrecked with Bella. And, it wasmtime for E&B to be straight with each other.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Temple
I hope that tube will be safe to navigate. it's good Bella grew up knowing all about plants and living off the land, who would have thought she would need to use it 100% of the time
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
They all bring skills to the island, some of which they never thought would be so important to their comfort and survival.
Lava tube should be a real adventure.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
great update, they will have to make up a calendar so they can track out their menstrual cycles, Also for thanksgiving and christams and stuff. Please do not say but ring anymore. other than that is was really good !!! instead, just say anus. Now on to the lava tube !!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi FISunshine
Thanks for your review and the advice. You know (sigh), I'd used the word 'anus' when I first posted, but I changed some of the love scene language after another reviewer said some of the words I used were too clinical. I have changed it back to anus - I'm more comfortable with that descriptor as well!
Lava tube is next.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Hunt
Well that is ominous! I wonder who's gonna need treatment
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 "Pig or Pork"
Omg, Emmett is freaking hilarious! Be careful with that pig, they're dangerous!
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
If anyone was going to get their grizzly on about food, it was gonna be Emmett. He's always good for a laugh.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Moving House
Wow, Emmett is really good at what he does
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Emmett certainly is good at what he does. They all are.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 05 Feb 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
Yea!!! Im so glad they are together!! I hope they find something useful in that lava tube, Im not ready for them to be rescued but not having birth control, problem.... great update!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi nancy123k
I'm not ready for them to be rescued either, so don't fear.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 05 Feb 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
Yay - they're together!! I think you did a great job on the lemon. And I loved the rest of the chapter as well. I'm looking forward to what they find in the lava tube. Apparently I did not look at the pics on the blog last chapter...but I looked just now - and they are fantastic! It really helps visualize everything and make it more real. Thanks again for the update! Good luck selling the flat...it looks great! :)
~allidel
Author's Response:
Hi allidel
I'm glad you liked the lemon - they're not easy to write, well no for me anyway.
The lava tube should present them with some interesting adventures and drama in future chapters.
I enjoy the blog as well. I think most people are visual and an image cements the details in a readers mind.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 05 Feb 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
*clapping* Thank you for Edward and Bella.
Author's Response:
Hi Lizzyliz
No problem - it was time for E&B to come together. Thanks for the applause.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 05 Feb 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
i think you did great with the sex scenes, very hot. cant wait for your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi twinsplus2
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I always worry about writing sex scenes, so I'm glad it turned out okay.
Regarsds, Jkazzie
Date: 05 Feb 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
:):)
Author's Response:
Hey there NelumOnelius
Two smiley faces! Wow.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad it pleased you.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Making Plans
Everything is coming together ! :)
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Thanks for all of your reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying their adventures.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Working Together
Can't wait to see what Emmett comes up with shelter wise
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Making Camp
I hope Bella doesn't get worse. Are they going to use the sails for shelter, like a canopy?
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ship Wrecked
At least they didn't have to leave the boat and abandon it, they can keep the heavy things handy
Date: 05 Feb 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
I love how she has a Hawaiian name and I love what her name means and what her grandmothers name means. It seems like Bella has alot to offer all of them with what she knows and what she has learned from her grandmother and with school.
Awesome that Rose is pregnant, but scary because their on an island with nothing for babies, but Bella's right they could make baby clothes! Her and Alice will have a ball with that
I love how Esme reacted to the boys going to explore, and how Edward said she made Carlisle take her on that Indiana Jones ride like five times or whatever. Thats hilarious. I love your Esme!
This chapter was awesome but I think I can speak on behalf of everybody when I say FINALLY! Bella and Edward are together. lol their sexy time was indeed sexy lmao.
I wonder how long it will take Alice and Jasper to get pregnant, lmao. OR what if Esme ended up pregnant oh god, makes me think of Father of the Bride part 2!
I checked every day for an update on this story and I'm so happy that its been updated. Now I can go back and re-read the story again lmao.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Making a Move
You have blown me away with this story and I love it! Love the interaction and love the characters. Glad E & R are preggers, hope for lots more news on the rest of our couples on that front in the future...love the thought of 3 new babies on the island! Looking forward to the lava tube adventure but loved the romatic beach scene you did even more. Thank you for this story, anxious for the next chapter from you soon. Cheri
Date: 25 Jan 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 "Land"
That was a close call for Bella, lucky Edward saved her
Author's Response:
Hi mountainlion718
Edward will always save Bella!
Thanks for reading and review.
Regards, Jkazzie
Date: 24 Jan 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Temple
i really enjoy this story along with the history- love it
Author's Response:
Hi Adoribly_Disturbed
I'm really glad you're enjoying the history along with the storyline. I always have enjoyed the background history of what leads to a plot, and I've always hated reading published authors who assume the reader knows what they [the author] is talking about. But, at the end of the day, this is probably their editor/publishers fault.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards, Jkazzie