Thank you for reading and reviewing our story.  Nikky and I are very proud of this story and it takes a lot to write things sometimes that even upset us.  We really needed to show just how darkly tainted Edward is, and unfortunately right now many of you hate him.  I know it will take a lot for you to relinquish those hatred feelings, but we hope that we are great enough writers and story tellers to achieve making you like him again.  We know it is always easier to burn a bridge than it is to rebuild it, but we promise to put forth the effort in doing so.  We want to thank you in advance for your votes, support, rec’s, and for just being on this twisted journey with us.  This story will be somewhere around 30 chapters when all is done and said.  We hope that you continue to read and review and share with us your thoughts.  From the bottom of our hearts, and to the moon and beyond... Thank you.

Kasi (& Nikky)

Chapter 6 Teaser… All Subject to change during the beta process…
The shitting feeling is still there, and I have no idea what the fuck I can do to get rid of it.  I head over to Jasper’s office hoping to see him.

“Jasper says that you can go in now.” I look at the woman speaking, and I give her a curt nod as I head into his office. “Edward,” I look at him and he stops talking, and tilts his head to the side.  “Okay, what is going on, what happened?” He asks as he waves at me to sit.  I sit down on the seat across from him and rub my face.  I sigh unsure where to start, so I jump up and start to pace the floor.

“I screwed up, and I mean I really screwed up this time.  Jazz, I fucking hurt her, and I mean really fucking hurt her.  I don’t know how to fix it.  How I can get her to forgive me for what I have done?  I mean, fuck I’ll be lucky if she even speaks to me again.  Well really I know she will because she, fuck, I don’t want to say she is weak, but if I talk to her she will reply. How do I make right Jazz, without putting myself out there?  I don’t want to get hurt again, I could with her and I can’t go through that again.  Fuck, but I don’t think she do that, to anyone really.  She’s not made that way, but I have really gone and hurt her bad.  I never gave her a chance, I was still. . . no, I am to fucking scared.  In this case I think I made a new friend, but the dream. . . and I thought she stabbed me in the back like all the others.  I see her face in my dreams, the last two nights have been worse than all the rest.  I can see how much I hurt her, and the bad thing is she did nothing to warrant my anger.  All she did was fucking help me, time after time.  So many times, and she has been so hurt before and I know it’s been bad.  I can see it clearly in her eyes, the pain and the fear.  What if I push it what if she can never let anyone in ever again because what I did.”  I am still pacing and pulling my hair, I am so upset.  “Fuck Jazz I was a real fucking prick, and complete asshole to her.  Tell me what I can do?  Please I need to fix this, tell me how I can fix it please?”  I beg him as I feel my breathing speed up.  Jasper who was still sitting in his chair looks at me and suddenly comes out of his trance, as I feel the cold sweats start.  “Please Jazz you need to tell me how to fix this.”

Thank you for the wonderful story love Cheri.  we hope that you continue to love this story...Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  There have been a few questions regarding Bella’s age.  Bella was 13 when she was left to care for her half sibling twins.  She was left to care for them by her step mom after her father’s death.  She obtained employment with the help of Aro who owns the building she lives in with her half siblings.  Her employment record is based on her fake ID that Sue her step-mom left her with.  More about Isabella’s back story will come out in the future chapters.  Edward is quite the monster in the next chapter, but he will see the error of his way.  Thanks for all the story love we are getting, and being a part of that.  Also sometime next week this story is being featured on  THE LEMONADE STAND, we hope that you will go and vote for us.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 5 teaser, subject to change during beta process.

I feel myself wake with a jolt, and I sit straight up.  No longer gasping, but still struggling to calm down.  My breathing is hard and have cold sweat covering my whole body, fuck that was some dream.  I get up and walk into my bathroom; I turn on the water in the shower.  I let it warm a little before stepping into take a shower.  I close my eyes as look up letting the hot water hit my face.  I take some calming breaths trying to shake off this fucking dream.

Leaning my left arm against the wall to support myself, I tip my head down.  With my eyes closed I feel the hot soothing water cascade down my back.  Fuck this not working!  I still feel the effects the dream has had in the pit of my stomach.  I feel my heart starting to race; I open my eye look at seeing my hand shaking.  Knowing that the shower is not helping, I step out and look for the pills Dr. Hall gave me.  I take two of them and wash them down with some orange juice.  After sitting in a towel in my living room for an hour, with the medicine in my system I am now calm.  I go to my bedroom and get dressed, and head off to the college.

I head to Marcus’s office first to get the low down on what happened during my week absence.  After finding that I did not miss much, I set my class room up for my first class.

The day passes by in a blur, I look at my watch knowing that Bel. . . shit, no, Isabella will be coming in soon.  With that thought I pack up my things and leave my room.  As I walk out the main entrance, I see her coming toward the door.  From the corner of my eye I see her smile, as she steps aside to let me out.  I don’t return her smile, or look at her.  I walk out letting the door close behind me, and continue to walk away from her.

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  There have been a few questions regarding Bella’s age.  Bella was 13 when she was left to care for her half sibling twins.  She was left to care for them by her step mom after her father’s death.  She obtained employment with the help of Aro who owns the building she lives in with her half siblings.  Her employment record is based on her fake ID that Sue her step-mom left her with.  More about Isabella’s back story will come out in the future chapters.  Edward is quite the monster in the next chapter, but he will see the error of his way.  Thanks for all the story love we are getting, and being a part of that.  Also sometime next week this story is being featured on  THE LEMONADE STAND, we hope that you will go and vote for us.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 5 teaser, subject to change during beta process.

I feel myself wake with a jolt, and I sit straight up.  No longer gasping, but still struggling to calm down.  My breathing is hard and have cold sweat covering my whole body, fuck that was some dream.  I get up and walk into my bathroom; I turn on the water in the shower.  I let it warm a little before stepping into take a shower.  I close my eyes as look up letting the hot water hit my face.  I take some calming breaths trying to shake off this fucking dream.

Leaning my left arm against the wall to support myself, I tip my head down.  With my eyes closed I feel the hot soothing water cascade down my back.  Fuck this not working!  I still feel the effects the dream has had in the pit of my stomach.  I feel my heart starting to race; I open my eye look at seeing my hand shaking.  Knowing that the shower is not helping, I step out and look for the pills Dr. Hall gave me.  I take two of them and wash them down with some orange juice.  After sitting in a towel in my living room for an hour, with the medicine in my system I am now calm.  I go to my bedroom and get dressed, and head off to the college.

I head to Marcus’s office first to get the low down on what happened during my week absence.  After finding that I did not miss much, I set my class room up for my first class.

The day passes by in a blur, I look at my watch knowing that Bel. . . shit, no, Isabella will be coming in soon.  With that thought I pack up my things and leave my room.  As I walk out the main entrance, I see her coming toward the door.  From the corner of my eye I see her smile, as she steps aside to let me out.  I don’t return her smile, or look at her.  I walk out letting the door close behind me, and continue to walk away from her.

I feel myself wake with a jolt, and I sit straight up.  No longer gasping, but still struggling to calm down.  My breathing is hard and have cold sweat covering my whole body, fuck that was some dream.  I get up and walk into my bathroom; I turn on the water in the shower.  I let it warm a little before stepping into take a shower.  I close my eyes as look up letting the hot water hit my face.  I take some calming breaths trying to shake off this fucking dream.

Leaning my left arm against the wall to support myself, I tip my head down.  With my eyes closed I feel the hot soothing water cascade down my back.  Fuck this not working!  I still feel the effects the dream has had in the pit of my stomach.  I feel my heart starting to race; I open my eye look at seeing my hand shaking.  Knowing that the shower is not helping, I step out and look for the pills Dr. Hall gave me.  I take two of them and wash them down with some orange juice.  After sitting in a towel in my living room for an hour, with the medicine in my system I am now calm.  I go to my bedroom and get dressed, and head off to the college.

I head to Marcus’s office first to get the low down on what happened during my week absence.  After finding that I did not miss much, I set my class room up for my first class.

The day passes by in a blur, I look at my watch knowing that Bel. . . shit, no, Isabella will be coming in soon.  With that thought I pack up my things and leave my room.  As I walk out the main entrance, I see her coming toward the door.  From the corner of my eye I see her smile, as she steps aside to let me out.  I don’t return her smile, or look at her.  I walk out letting the door close behind me, and continue to walk away from her.

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  There have been a few questions regarding Bella’s age.  Bella was 13 when she was left to care for her half sibling twins.  She was left to care for them by her step mom after her father’s death.  She obtained employment with the help of Aro who owns the building she lives in with her half siblings.  Her employment record is based on her fake ID that Sue her step-mom left her with.  More about Isabella’s back story will come out in the future chapters.  Edward is quite the monster in the next chapter, but he will see the error of his way.  Thanks for all the story love we are getting, and being a part of that.  Also sometime next week this story is being featured on  THE LEMONADE STAND, we hope that you will go and vote for us.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 5 teaser, subject to change during beta process.

I feel myself wake with a jolt, and I sit straight up.  No longer gasping, but still struggling to calm down.  My breathing is hard and have cold sweat covering my whole body, fuck that was some dream.  I get up and walk into my bathroom; I turn on the water in the shower.  I let it warm a little before stepping into take a shower.  I close my eyes as look up letting the hot water hit my face.  I take some calming breaths trying to shake off this fucking dream.

Leaning my left arm against the wall to support myself, I tip my head down.  With my eyes closed I feel the hot soothing water cascade down my back.  Fuck this not working!  I still feel the effects the dream has had in the pit of my stomach.  I feel my heart starting to race; I open my eye look at seeing my hand shaking.  Knowing that the shower is not helping, I step out and look for the pills Dr. Hall gave me.  I take two of them and wash them down with some orange juice.  After sitting in a towel in my living room for an hour, with the medicine in my system I am now calm.  I go to my bedroom and get dressed, and head off to the college.

I head to Marcus’s office first to get the low down on what happened during my week absence.  After finding that I did not miss much, I set my class room up for my first class.

The day passes by in a blur, I look at my watch knowing that Bel. . . shit, no, Isabella will be coming in soon.  With that thought I pack up my things and leave my room.  As I walk out the main entrance, I see her coming toward the door.  From the corner of my eye I see her smile, as she steps aside to let me out.  I don’t return her smile, or look at her.  I walk out letting the door close behind me, and continue to walk away from her.

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  There have been a few questions regarding Bella’s age.  Bella was 13 when she was left to care for her half sibling twins.  She was left to care for them by her step mom after her father’s death.  She obtained employment with the help of Aro who owns the building she lives in with her half siblings.  Her employment record is based on her fake ID that Sue her step-mom left her with.  More about Isabella’s back story will come out in the future chapters.  Edward is quite the monster in the next chapter, but he will see the error of his way.  Thanks for all the story love we are getting, and being a part of that.  Also sometime next week this story is being featured on  THE LEMONADE STAND, we hope that you will go and vote for us.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 5 teaser, subject to change during beta process.

I feel myself wake with a jolt, and I sit straight up.  No longer gasping, but still struggling to calm down.  My breathing is hard and have cold sweat covering my whole body, fuck that was some dream.  I get up and walk into my bathroom; I turn on the water in the shower.  I let it warm a little before stepping into take a shower.  I close my eyes as look up letting the hot water hit my face.  I take some calming breaths trying to shake off this fucking dream.

Leaning my left arm against the wall to support myself, I tip my head down.  With my eyes closed I feel the hot soothing water cascade down my back.  Fuck this not working!  I still feel the effects the dream has had in the pit of my stomach.  I feel my heart starting to race; I open my eye look at seeing my hand shaking.  Knowing that the shower is not helping, I step out and look for the pills Dr. Hall gave me.  I take two of them and wash them down with some orange juice.  After sitting in a towel in my living room for an hour, with the medicine in my system I am now calm.  I go to my bedroom and get dressed, and head off to the college.

I head to Marcus’s office first to get the low down on what happened during my week absence.  After finding that I did not miss much, I set my class room up for my first class.

The day passes by in a blur, I look at my watch knowing that Bel. . . shit, no, Isabella will be coming in soon.  With that thought I pack up my things and leave my room.  As I walk out the main entrance, I see her coming toward the door.  From the corner of my eye I see her smile, as she steps aside to let me out.  I don’t return her smile, or look at her.  I walk out letting the door close behind me, and continue to walk away from her.

Edward is a very complex and darkly tainted man.  There are many things about him that I hate at this point myself, hoever he will be the good man he was always meant to be.  It may take him time to get there.  Bella is much more stronger than anyone gives her credit for, her story in this is still untold.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I hope that you continue to read and review and let us into your thoughts of him as you get to know him more.  I will warn that during chapter 4 I started to liek him more nad mroe and at the end of chapter 5 I wanted to rip off parts of his own body and feed them to him.  Let me know what you think, we update weekly on Thursdays.  We were set to only update bi-weekly, but the story is flowing well right now.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Bella is almost 19 and Edward is 28. Kasi (&Nikky)

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

Cheri~

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.   If our Beta's get the chapters back to us faster, we can post faster.  For now we are claiming to post every other week on thursday, howe3ver so far it has been every Thursday.  Nikky jsut finished up on her part of chapter 10 and I am currently working on chapter 7 myself.  The Betas are working on chapter 4.  Thanks you again and again for the story love.

Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

Kasi (&Nikky) 
PS...We are glad you found the humor in the story about the ghosts...Such fun to write, glad it got you to chuckle.

Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.

Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

Edward’s health issues will be explained more in the next chapter, and I don’t want to give away too much, but suffice to say that Edward’s stress levels are not helping his issue.  Next chapter there will be a little ‘friendly’ interaction between Isabella and the good professor Masen.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Kasi (&Nikky)
PS..I love the saying clueberry it cracks me up...

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Edward is a bit of a jerk isn’t he?  He also means well and does not want bad things to happen to people, hence why he would run after a purse snatching group of buttheads.  Next chapter there will be a little ‘friendly’ interaction between Isabella and the good professor Masen.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

I am so happy to see that you are interested it he story that Nikky and I will be spinning here together.  The storyline has a lot yet to reveal, and if you already like it so much, than there will be a lot of fun and exciting things for you to come.  We plan to post every other Thursday, however it has been flowing well and if our Beta's can keep up we will post weekly for the time being.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We are so happy to see you on board for another of our stories.  We hope that you liek this one as much as you have enjoyed the others.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Edward is a bit of a jerk isn’t he?  He also means well and does not want bad things to happen to people, hence why he would run after a purse snatching group of buttheads.  Edward’s health issues will be explained more in the next chapter, and I don’t want to give away too much, but suffice to say that Edward’s stress levels are not helping his issue.  Next chapter there will be a little ‘friendly’ interaction between Isabella and the good professor Masen.   You will learn about Bella's life as Edward learns of Bella's life.  The majority of this story will be told in Edward's POV so you learn as he does.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Edward is a bit of a jerk isn’t he?  He also means well and does not want bad things to happen to people, hence why he would run after a purse snatching group of buttheads.  Edward’s health issues will be explained more in the next chapter, and I don’t want to give away too much, but suffice to say that Edward’s stress levels are not helping his issue.  Next chapter there will be a little ‘friendly’ interaction between Isabella and the good professor Masen.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Edward is a hard case, and I guess that Cinderella song from the 80's comes roaring back into my ears when i think of a way to answer your question...."You don't know what you got, till its gone." 
Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser: 

Teaser for chapter 2:  Subject to change during BETA process.

After taking a shower and having some breakfast with the guys, I head off to the college.  I arrive around nine just before my first class arrives. I get in set up and as the bell rings, I start my class.  Riley stayed behind after class, and said that he would read in class.  I figured that he could read the next whole page, from where we left off.  I give him the page that I will have him read, I went though it once with him.  He recorded it to listen to it when he was at home, so he could practice it.

I am in my office grading papers when the cleaning girl comes into my office, she does not notice me as she continues to clean.  She comes near me still not noticing me, as she goes to move my chair she yelps and realizes that I am sitting in it.  She stares at me, in surprise.  “Professor Masen, I am. . .” she stops placing her hand on her head.  I watch as she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath.  “Professor I am sorry.  I did not know that you were here.  I can just go, I am sorry,” she says picking up her thing and leaving quickly. I shake my head and continue to mark my last page.

I leave my office notice the cleaning girl is now doing the class room she looks up at me goes red.  She mouths the word sorry again before going back to her work.  As I put on my jacket I hear a bang and the cleaning girl yelp again, but this time in pain.  I look over to her to see that she has tried to use the socket that has been broken and needs to be fixed.

I shake my head, is this girl really that unobservant?  “Did you not read the warning sign?  Right here,” I say pointing to the sign.  “It says, ‘caution, do not use this socket’.  Please be more observant, before you get really hurt,” I say in frustration.  She looks at me, and shakes her head telling me she didn’t see the sign. 

Thank you for the story love.  We will be updating on Thursdays.  The plan is every other Thursday, however we may be posting each and every Thursday.  There will be an update this Thursday for sure.  Excited to read your reviews after it posts.  Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser: 

Teaser for chapter 2:  Subject to change during BETA process.

After taking a shower and having some breakfast with the guys, I head off to the college.  I arrive around nine just before my first class arrives. I get in set up and as the bell rings, I start my class.  Riley stayed behind after class, and said that he would read in class.  I figured that he could read the next whole page, from where we left off.  I give him the page that I will have him read, I went though it once with him.  He recorded it to listen to it when he was at home, so he could practice it.

I am in my office grading papers when the cleaning girl comes into my office, she does not notice me as she continues to clean.  She comes near me still not noticing me, as she goes to move my chair she yelps and realizes that I am sitting in it.  She stares at me, in surprise.  “Professor Masen, I am. . .” she stops placing her hand on her head.  I watch as she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath.  “Professor I am sorry.  I did not know that you were here.  I can just go, I am sorry,” she says picking up her thing and leaving quickly. I shake my head and continue to mark my last page.

I leave my office notice the cleaning girl is now doing the class room she looks up at me goes red.  She mouths the word sorry again before going back to her work.  As I put on my jacket I hear a bang and the cleaning girl yelp again, but this time in pain.  I look over to her to see that she has tried to use the socket that has been broken and needs to be fixed.

I shake my head, is this girl really that unobservant?  “Did you not read the warning sign?  Right here,” I say pointing to the sign.  “It says, ‘caution, do not use this socket’.  Please be more observant, before you get really hurt,” I say in frustration.  She looks at me, and shakes her head telling me she didn’t see the sign. 

Hello, there is much yet to learn about our key characters.  Edward is very dark and untrustworthy of all women, you will learn more on why as we go.  Bella is completely uneducated, she is the janitor, but not the student.  Nikky is now working on chapter 9 and I am working on chapter 4.  Our Beta Mel, has chapter 2 and 3, then they go to the pre-readers and then to Jess turn around time is averaged at 3 days.  If things keep working this fast we may update each Thursday instead of every other Thursday, but no promisses yet.  No worries thought even if one of us can't do it the other will, this story will be completed and both of us are HEA kind of girls, but we love the twisted routes we write to get there.  There will be much much more tampering and crap from the females in his life, so there is a lot yet to take in.  Edward is very tainted and for very good reasons.  You will read this story mainly through his view only.  I hope you continue to enjoy it and continue to review.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser: 

Teaser for chapter 2:  Subject to change during BETA process.

After taking a shower and having some breakfast with the guys, I head off to the college.  I arrive around nine just before my first class arrives. I get in set up and as the bell rings, I start my class.  Riley stayed behind after class, and said that he would read in class.  I figured that he could read the next whole page, from where we left off.  I give him the page that I will have him read, I went though it once with him.  He recorded it to listen to it when he was at home, so he could practice it.

I am in my office grading papers when the cleaning girl comes into my office, she does not notice me as she continues to clean.  She comes near me still not noticing me, as she goes to move my chair she yelps and realizes that I am sitting in it.  She stares at me, in surprise.  “Professor Masen, I am. . .” she stops placing her hand on her head.  I watch as she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath.  “Professor I am sorry.  I did not know that you were here.  I can just go, I am sorry,” she says picking up her thing and leaving quickly. I shake my head and continue to mark my last page.

I leave my office notice the cleaning girl is now doing the class room she looks up at me goes red.  She mouths the word sorry again before going back to her work.  As I put on my jacket I hear a bang and the cleaning girl yelp again, but this time in pain.  I look over to her to see that she has tried to use the socket that has been broken and needs to be fixed.

I shake my head, is this girl really that unobservant?  “Did you not read the warning sign?  Right here,” I say pointing to the sign.  “It says, ‘caution, do not use this socket’.  Please be more observant, before you get really hurt,” I say in frustration.  She looks at me, and shakes her head telling me she didn’t see the sign. 

Edward is very harsh, but if you notice it is mainly when it comes to dealing with females.  He is a strict teacher, but a lot of that comes from the upbringing he had.  There is much more to learn about our Darkward witht he shaded view of all women.  Bella is EXTEEMLY uneducated, and you are right on the money with her reading abilities.  More of that will come to surface as well, there is much to learn about our key players and the first few chapters are mainly about Edward since this story will mainly be told under his pov because it is HIS CIMMERIAN VIEW that we are reading this story through.  No worries our Darkward will have the ability to read Isabella, even if he would rather stay away.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser: 

Teaser for chapter 2:  Subject to change during BETA process.

After taking a shower and having some breakfast with the guys, I head off to the college.  I arrive around nine just before my first class arrives. I get in set up and as the bell rings, I start my class.  Riley stayed behind after class, and said that he would read in class.  I figured that he could read the next whole page, from where we left off.  I give him the page that I will have him read, I went though it once with him.  He recorded it to listen to it when he was at home, so he could practice it.

I am in my office grading papers when the cleaning girl comes into my office, she does not notice me as she continues to clean.  She comes near me still not noticing me, as she goes to move my chair she yelps and realizes that I am sitting in it.  She stares at me, in surprise.  “Professor Masen, I am. . .” she stops placing her hand on her head.  I watch as she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath.  “Professor I am sorry.  I did not know that you were here.  I can just go, I am sorry,” she says picking up her thing and leaving quickly. I shake my head and continue to mark my last page.

I leave my office notice the cleaning girl is now doing the class room she looks up at me goes red.  She mouths the word sorry again before going back to her work.  As I put on my jacket I hear a bang and the cleaning girl yelp again, but this time in pain.  I look over to her to see that she has tried to use the socket that has been broken and needs to be fixed.

I shake my head, is this girl really that unobservant?  “Did you not read the warning sign?  Right here,” I say pointing to the sign.  “It says, ‘caution, do not use this socket’.  Please be more observant, before you get really hurt,” I say in frustration.  She looks at me, and shakes her head telling me she didn’t see the sign. 

Good, I am glad we have you on board with us for this journey.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  :)  Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser: 

Teaser for chapter 2:  Subject to change during BETA process.

After taking a shower and having some breakfast with the guys, I head off to the college.  I arrive around nine just before my first class arrives. I get in set up and as the bell rings, I start my class.  Riley stayed behind after class, and said that he would read in class.  I figured that he could read the next whole page, from where we left off.  I give him the page that I will have him read, I went though it once with him.  He recorded it to listen to it when he was at home, so he could practice it.

I am in my office grading papers when the cleaning girl comes into my office, she does not notice me as she continues to clean.  She comes near me still not noticing me, as she goes to move my chair she yelps and realizes that I am sitting in it.  She stares at me, in surprise.  “Professor Masen, I am. . .” she stops placing her hand on her head.  I watch as she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath.  “Professor I am sorry.  I did not know that you were here.  I can just go, I am sorry,” she says picking up her thing and leaving quickly. I shake my head and continue to mark my last page.

I leave my office notice the cleaning girl is now doing the class room she looks up at me goes red.  She mouths the word sorry again before going back to her work.  As I put on my jacket I hear a bang and the cleaning girl yelp again, but this time in pain.  I look over to her to see that she has tried to use the socket that has been broken and needs to be fixed.

I shake my head, is this girl really that unobservant?  “Did you not read the warning sign?  Right here,” I say pointing to the sign.  “It says, ‘caution, do not use this socket’.  Please be more observant, before you get really hurt,” I say in frustration.  She looks at me, and shakes her head telling me she didn’t see the sign. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser:

Teaser for chapter 2:  Subject to change during BETA process.

After taking a shower and having some breakfast with the guys, I head off to the college.  I arrive around nine just before my first class arrives. I get in set up and as the bell rings, I start my class.  Riley stayed behind after class, and said that he would read in class.  I figured that he could read the next whole page, from where we left off.  I give him the page that I will have him read, I went though it once with him.  He recorded it to listen to it when he was at home, so he could practice it.

I am in my office grading papers when the cleaning girl comes into my office, she does not notice me as she continues to clean.  She comes near me still not noticing me, as she goes to move my chair she yelps and realizes that I am sitting in it.  She stares at me, in surprise.  “Professor Masen, I am. . .” she stops placing her hand on her head.  I watch as she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath.  “Professor I am sorry.  I did not know that you were here.  I can just go, I am sorry,” she says picking up her thing and leaving quickly. I shake my head and continue to mark my last page.

I leave my office notice the cleaning girl is now doing the class room she looks up at me goes red.  She mouths the word sorry again before going back to her work.  As I put on my jacket I hear a bang and the cleaning girl yelp again, but this time in pain.  I look over to her to see that she has tried to use the socket that has been broken and needs to be fixed.

I shake my head, is this girl really that unobservant?  “Did you not read the warning sign?  Right here,” I say pointing to the sign.  “It says, ‘caution, do not use this socket’.  Please be more observant, before you get really hurt,” I say in frustration.  She looks at me, and shakes her head telling me she didn’t see the sign.