[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
So James and Royes are the same person. Right?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Another great twist of characters!
Brothers through blood and crime. Never would have guessed.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
I feel so sorry for Emmett.
Jasper went off half-cocked, that was some tirade.
Stupid move president.......Jasper and Emmett better be fast.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Great twist!
Is Victoria Rosalie Hale done scheming? Could she really be that into Royce? Or is he also collateral damage?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
pins and needles
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Oh My --- you never fall short of my expectations!!!! What a great chapter although it does make me sad that we have only 6 more chapters with these two. Maybe there can be some steamy outtakes or a glimpse or two further into the 2nd term????? Loved it!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Oh my, I totally did not see that coming. Wow, you took a turn and wham, what a revelation. Nice job on the surprises. And I thought the last chapter revealed a lot. Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Please!! I don't even know what I'm asking for?!?!?!?
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Omg!!!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
lord help me i had no idea brady was a slime .edward must save bella. someone take that deranged royce out! god poor bella . man i hope i can be patient enough to wait until wednesday for the next update. i have gone back and read from the beginning of the story to see if i had missed clues . lets just say i am not that good at finding any if there were clues that brady was a slime.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Nope didn't have a clue about the Bros. Wednesday is a long way off.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
wow didn't see them being brothers
how scary she had been with two monsters and didn't know it
that would freak me out.
wow so much to think about i am blown away
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
i just know that edward is going to save bella
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Geez what a web! These guys were some shitty people. You never know sometimes.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
I assumed he was talking about Brady. I was surprised it took her so long to figure that out. I guess she was just in shock. Can't wait for Wednesday!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Didn't see that comming! Nicr twist!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
OMG i can't believe all that about Brady i think he was in love with Bella no amount of telling me will convince me otherwise.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Wow, that's a revelation! I'm on edge now wondering if Edward got into Royce & save Bella.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Well I was thinking that Royce was lying to fuck with her until your AN at the end. LOL
Date: 15 Jul 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
yikes and now Bella is beaten. Well Seth is fine and I bet so is Edward. Rose is shot, don't miss guys shoot Royce.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
Holy crap! I was not prepared for that twist at all, especially following the Vic/Rosalie bomb. Awesome! Great foreshadowing of those twists when I think of it now. Thanks for the hard work you've obviously put into this for us.
Annie.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
Rose --- check
Baby monitor -- of sorts check
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
I feel bad for Emmett, but Rosalie got what she deserved.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
G R E A T!!!!! Loved the update!! Cannot wait for the next update this weekend!!!!! Edward seems a bit irrational and will take whatever means necessary to get Bella back!!!!! Waiting for updates suck!!! I really need to work on my patience!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
wow i am glad seth wasn't really in th ecar seat
poor rose-witch
poor em, i feel so bad for him. he killed the one he loved and she was badddd
wow.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
i hope to god bella is safe
Date: 12 Jul 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
That was a very clever idea you came up with instead of sending Seth. I really enjoy reading your story!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
Another excellent chapter! Can't wait for the update. I'm keeping you and your family in my thoughts and prayers. I know you have a difficult time with your son in a totally different way than I do with my son and oldest daughter, so from one mom to another, keep strong! God would never give us things that he didn't think we could handle.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
Poor Cayden. It has to be frustrating thinking you found something he's able to digest without having a reaction and then to be told the opposite. I hope he's doing well.
Poor Emmett. That would be a shock to find out the girl you were in love with was involved in kidnapping Bella, the threats etc... Now Edward takes off to find Bella. Without a gun. BTW... Nice cliffie :)
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
I had faith! I remembered when r/l seth kept getting hurt too:( I hope he is doing ok.
I knew it was going to be Emmett who would take the hoor down!
Until this weekend!!!!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
I had faith in you even if i was at the edge of my seat... wow you gots super talent with writing.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
I must admit the baby babbling sounds in the car when E was on phone kinda had me wondering.
Poor Emmett, I swear I hate it when he hurts.
Anxiously awaiting the weekend update!
Excellent chapter!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
looking forward to more
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
oh god i am now afraid they could get injured or die.(emmett, jasper,edward,,bella,etc...)
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
I hate cliffhangers!! Poor Emmett. Rosalie/Victoria got what was coming to her, but Emmett's going to feel horrible for a while. To think she just used him, is just awful. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
No way, I didn't think it was Rose, Jessica or Victoria..... But not Rose.
WTF-ery
Update soon!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
Please keep her safe and let Edward get to her in time!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
GOD I DO HOPE BELLA ISN'T HURT TO BAD WILL IT BE MUCH LONGER BEFORE THEY FIND HER AND SAVE HER WILL EDWARD GET SHOT SAVING HER?
Date: 12 Jul 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
No I knew that Seth would not be in that car. No one would do that to a child. Now I think Charlie would be there with Edward and his band of CIA people. Main thing in they protect the president at all costs. No one can put him in danger even himself. Laws and all that.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
Oh, poor Emmett. What a horrible way to find out about the betrayal of the woman you loved. He will definately need some therapy after this is all over. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm dying to know what is going on with Bella.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
ooooh sneaky with the teddy. Smart as hell. Beh Bye bitchy rose.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Okay, I'm caught up and I'm mad as hell! To think a man and women could be like this is very distrubing. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
I feel so bad for Emmett. He is such a softee in his heart. Edward will be so mad that he was duped. I hope they just shoot Royce and Victoria before they find out the truth, so they won't have second thoughts.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
eeeekkk You evil, coniving little writer.
But love it anyway!!! Poor Em
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
I knew Rose was involved!! I kept thinking she was fishy, so glad my gut was right about her.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Wow, that was a lot of info. Rose really could have fooled me the last few chapters…
But I don't really understand, what Edward has to do with getting to Seth. Why would he have to love Seth, just to hand him over now? I hope you can enlighten me on that…
Date: 10 Jul 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Ok - when Royce showed up, the suspicions I had previously had about Rosalie came flooding back. She is bad!!! I sincerely hope that we dont find out Emmett had any knowledge of the overall plan. That could be why he was so insistent that Prezward take Seth telling them there was no more time for making alternate arrangements!!! We need an update. Don't leave us hanging here.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
Ok - so I ended up leaving the gym and had to go with hubby over to some friends house to help unload a piece of furniture ...... I might have had my phone glued to my hand the whole time we were there trying to read another chapter ---- geesh!!! Don't they know we are getting to the good parts????? I could have enjoyed myself much more if they would have quit trying to talk to me!!! I mean really ---- I have a president and his new girlfriend I have to find out more about!!!! Still loving this story!!!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
update soon please
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 14 Demands
SM ---- I am suppose to be working and this story has absolutely captured me!!!! That is BAD ..... Or is it GOOD????? Arrghhh!!!! One more chapter and then I HAVE to go back to work!!!!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
So I have been seeing all of the update notices on FB so I decided to check it out ---- so glad I did!!!!! Loving this so far ---- and I am quie honesty intrigued with President Asshat actually ----- he kinda does it for me!!!!! BR
Date: 09 Jul 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
holy crow, that twist just seemingly came from nowhere. poor emmett
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Wow, I was actually hoping Rose wasn't a part of this. OMG, she had everything to do with this. What on earth is next. Can't wait for the next update
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
I honestly didn't even think this was Rose's doing. I guess looking back, I can see it but wow. Poor Emmett. I hate it for both of them when Prezdadward gets ahold of them. Man oh man.
Excellent chapter!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
but was i suprised allthe way around
Date: 09 Jul 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
good suprise never seen that coming.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Thanks good chapter
Date: 08 Jul 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
OMG I NEVER EXPECTED THAT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Wow....just.....wow.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
wow you defentiely made us doubt ourselves on rose
wow that was a shock. omg when and if the rest find out they will be blown away
i feel so bad for em. he wanted her and saw a future the lug will be hurt
i am hoping edward and bella are both able to get themselves out of a sticky situation
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
I know that you wont kill Bella, Seth and the President the rest of these people are up for grabs. Oh Alice you need to get your mind game on!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
Wow, didn't see that one coming, excellent chapter with tons of info that pulls so much together, excellent!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
It feels good to know I was write!! I hope Emmett shoots her!!
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
wow is all i have to say ... looking forward to mroe
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
AHH!! I was NOT one of your readers who though Rose had something to do with it...so holy crap! I can't believe this cliffy...I'm dying here! No pun intended...
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
I knew Rose didn't like her but NEVER would I have thought it went this far! I love being surprised like this :)
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
sitting on pins and needles
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
Can't wait to see who's behind all of this. Glad that Jasper got one of them.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Ok I'm back too....I've had some comput issues and now I'm Baaaack.
Sucks that your Seth was mowed down and great that he was able to still play.
This whole Royce thing......ok but I thought you would use Mike!! Anyway....go and get your family Prezward.
Cant wait for more
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
I can't belive that Edward would take Seth with him… or would he?
Maybe they have some kind of recording device with him in the car, so that it only sounds like Seth is in the car, while he's really safely at home? I really hope so!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Creative is right. The secret service can not by law let the president do this. They have directives.To protect him at all costs. They are always shoot to kill when he is in concern.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
:)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
What do you mean "what is going on with Seth in this chapter?" Please have Bella & Rose rescued next update without sacrificing Seth. Please...
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
oh my god i can't wait to read more . i am so nervous thinking that vile man getting his hands on that child. i feel awful about that jerk having bella and rose , please tell me he will not get his hands on that baby.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Excellent chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
I really love this story, but am so not happy with Seth being used. So not right.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Baby monitor?
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Hope ur son is ok.
Poor e and Charlie. Rock and a hard place that's for sure.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
What a tough decision Edward had to make. Bella or Seth. He decided neither one, but I guess Emmett decided to take over. I hope Em knows what he is doing and hopefully he keeps Seth safe. When Edward took off and locked himself in the conference room and starting crying, it broke my heart. And when he came out and heard Emmett's plan and Edward starting screaming at him " you are not going to do this to my SON, I will not endanger my son", that brought on the tears. Another good cliffie!
I'm glad you son is ok and wasn't hurt. :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
I know Em's got a good plan and it will work out. I have to tell you that I do know several police officers who teach at the academy and they aren't taught 'shoot to slow' them down, they are taught 'shoot to kill'. It's not something the publicize and also the hollywood police stories always show them doing something to just slow them down and that's not the case. Funny thing was my friend didn't believe me when I told her that and she asked a friend of hers who is a cop and he confirmed it.
So glad your little Seth was okay after being plowed down by that inconsiderate girl. It's because they aren't taught any manners, it's all 'good job' for this and 'good job' for that, they do no wrong, everyone gets a trophy. I hate to say it, but putting something in the trash is a responsibility not a good job! Okay, I'm off my soap box.
Have a great trip! I'll be posting my next donation story Catastrophe tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
boy oh boy
i am dying here. i can't believe he took him. i know he didn't want to. the fight wow very protective daddy. i sure hope his family sees how important bella and seth are to edward
seems alot of relationships are up in the air on this decision that was made
oh on pins and needles
enjoy your eye candy
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Poor you and Cayden. I'll slap my preteen (11 yr old) daughter for what that self centered brat did to your baby if that will help. Lol. Edward is falling apart.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
glad your son is ok and yeah i would have yelled at the girl too. awesome chappy can't wait to see what happens .
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Please update soon, the suspense is killing me.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
Well, I sure as hell hope Emmett knows what he's doing. 'Cause, involving Seth... really don't like that :(
Thanks!!
Sally
Date: 05 Jul 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Thought it was cute that he brought out his car, just to drive her in a big circle. But it did show that he made an effort & did what he could for a first date within the parameters that he has placed upon him. Can't wait for the rest of the date!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Been reading over at FF.net, but came over here to read the lemon. Hot storage room action!
Wonder who the mystery person is? Hope he gets flushed out soon.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Edward better use all of his resources to get Royce. He better not listen to him. Edward better use his power and not give into Royce. There is a way to go in with back up and Royce not know. Royce never said anything about not bringing in the Navy Seals or Special Ops, or the Marines. He just said no agents or wires. Edward can get all of the special forces to sneak in an get Bella and Rose. That is what they are trained to do.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two
i totally squee'd when Seth called Edward Da-da. i'm loving this story mucho!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Poor Rose is being abused by Royce.
Maybe Charlie can recognizehis voice and help Edward protect his grand son.