[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
Time for the reveal.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Wow, what a chapter. So, who is working with Royce? Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Update soon please I cannot wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
wow so royce is behind this facade. well edward i hope you can pull a rabbit out of a hat
you and your men will need a miracle to be able to save them both
you have no leads
omg
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
I just started reading this story this morning over on fanfiction.net. I wanted to let you know that I love it so far! And you know what? This chapter was just a little bit better over here on TWCS. I think I'll read the rest of it over here. LOL
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
I thought Brady was Seth's father? I guess King is because he would not want a child if he was not his. He strikes me as not paternal.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
WOW! What about Rose? Is she in on it?
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two
I love it! Edward and Seth are so cute together. I am glad Esme got some time with Seth. Carlisle better change his thinking. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes
I love the idea to have everyone together for dinner. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Geez my guessing skills are hopeless guess i was in the minority and i had absolutely no idea royce was Seth's father can't wait to see what Edward does.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
I hope he didnt touch Rose.... I hope they get to her and Royce pays slowly and pinfully. What the hell does he want his kid for, i bet he doesnt even know about Seth allergies. Update soon :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
I was right! What do I win? Just kidding. How is Edward going to fix this?
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
I hate Royce sooooo bad!!! I hope that Edward finds a way to save Bella and Rose and to keep Seth safe...I really hope he does!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
She shoulda told him not to listen. Sure she would've got her ass beat but at least she could piss him off.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Oh but there's a reason he wants Seth now. Rose wants Seth.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
wow so didn't see that coming update soon
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Hmmm who is the woman that Royce was talking too I wonder? She should have said his name. At least then eddie would know who to look for. Why does Royce want the kid now???
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Why does Royce want Seth? Guess I just gotta wait!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
good
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
Its getting sooo good!!:) Loving this story! I love this Edward:) Wish I had me one of him:D lol. Love it. & that royalty is in the biulding is great, too.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
looking forward to more
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
You just love leaving us at a Damn and Da Ham spot.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
:) Can't wait for the nexy chapter.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
OMG, I just went over CRAZY HILL. You are seriously making me NUTS!!!!!! hahaha.
The only thing keeping me going is my warped sense of curiosity and your promise of an HEA. Although I'll probably be certifiable by the time we get there, LOL. You are so good at TORTURE...................................................................
Now I'm gonna sit here, twiddle my thumbs and pray that the days pass quickly so we can get to the next chapter.
Thanks again for sharing, you are AWESOME...
hugz xxxxx
Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
I really hope you do get a chance to update early!! This is killing me, having to wait! I'm still thinking it's James - but not positive.
I'm going to check out the American President now - thanks for the rec! And, also, CaraNo recc'd this story on her facebook today! That will probably bring in a few hits too!
Thanks for sharing! :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
i am stumped
i can't wait to try and put more pieces together
love it
Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
ooooo i thought i was so sure but now i am all confused again dammit i guess i should be glad that this is almost aover and we will find out soon.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
Oh, I'm not the one standing in the back bitching, I'm the one standing up front excited about the early update *fist pump* I was dying after the last chap's cliffie! So the sleazy reporter was an accomplice to the kidnapping, but who was he working for? The sperm donor? What will the kidnapper's demands be? I know it's sick to think this right now, but Pissedward is pretty freakin' hot!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
I am sitting here bitting my nails!! I can't wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
OMG, who is it?! The suspense is killing me. Please, please, update soon!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
gahhhh cliffie but you got me hanging onto every word
Date: 30 Jun 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
Great chapter! Please keep them safe... yeah rose too.. can't wait for the next few chapters to see who the mystery man is...
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
I am still baffled by the Mystery POV but it is good to know that a pissed Edward will handle it all. I assume the unwanted/unknown voice is the voice of Bella's baby daddy but only your next post or two will be able to tell.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
Go Jazz killing one of the fuckers. Oh wow Pres is gonna go ballistic.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
omg this shit just got real..lol update soon
Date: 30 Jun 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
Wow! Great update!!! BTW your myster POV inspired me too! If you want to see it go to fanfiction.net look under my creen name here and my link is on my profile page. It will be for the story of The Principals daughter, the latest chapter.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
What!!! I wonder who it is!! Please update again soon....I love this story...I hope the agents will find her in time!!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
If the rooms were all checked apart from the occupied ones then how the hell dirtbag person get in, and u had to finish it there so not fair :) can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
i don't know how they will get her out with the guys all around
i am dying to know who it is. i still can't decide between female or male
love it
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
Wow, I'm dying to know who it is!!! It's going to drive me crazy waiting for the next chapter!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
NOOOOO~!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
F..... No you F didn't. The baby daddy.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
nooooooooooooooo Oh Edward is not going to be happy!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
Oh, you are good....I'm so confused as to who the massouse is, a male based on hands and voice. Previously I thought it may be a woman. It's someone from her past. Wait.....this guy wants Bella maybe the mystery POV is using him to get her out of the way so the actual Mystery Female can make a play for the President. Hm.
How will Bella be removed from the spa with 5 secret service around?
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
Thanks good chapter
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
OMG!!!!!!!BBBBEEEELLLLLLLAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
oh no.. you are so bad she won't be able to go to the Ball. sigh.. Now she is going to be kidnapped? Of course her family including Seth, The President and her friends will be affected.. duh.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
Holy Hell! Great job!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
I think it's Seth's sperm donor, cuz she never says much about him, but says he's not in the picture.
Either him, or it's Carlisle. Both kind of fit to me.
Love the story, btw
Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
OMG god that is a sucky cliff hanger i'm beginng to think that it is James and Tanya working together it is going to be interesting to see how this all plays out.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
Are there 2 mystery people/POVs? The first few seemed distinctly male, but the last one seemed more female so that threw me. I guess I will have to wait until Sat to see! I don't mind the loss of 2 chaps cuz now we get to see the mystery solved sooner! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
Newton! Or....Seth's bio dad!
Great cliffie & chapter! Let's hope the SS does their job!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
ohohohohoh You are so evil. Well we know its male now....or one hell of a deep voiced female.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
Enjoying the story and the Mystery POV truly has me stumped. I am looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
thanks good chapter a always
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
I'm more convinced now than ever before that the MPOV is a female that has deluded herself into believing she will be Mrs. Edward Cullen in the near future.
Will the reveal of the MPOV take place at the State dinner?
It's about time Esme layer down the ultimatum for Carlisle. Happy he made good on the threat.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
The mystery POV had a female flavor to it this time. Am I right?
Etiquette lessons for Bella, how entertaining can this get?
Where did Seth hear the word daddy to be able to assign it to Prezward? It is cute though.
Worried about Seth and Bella's safety once again.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
I have to ask even though I don't think you're going to tell me. Is the Mystery POV James? Is James Seth's father?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
Yes, I am totally confused now!!! :-( Even so, I really loved the chapter. The interaction between Edward and Seth is so sweet and I'm so happy that Carlisle finally has his head out of his ass!! Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
I am thinking this mystery pov is a woman, but I could be wrong. I can't wait to find out who it is. Also, I am glad Esme got through to Senetor Cullen. :D
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
:)
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
looking forward to more
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
ok Carlisle has a lot of ground to cover but i am sure he will get there finally!
hmmm.... Mystery pov.. Tanya/Lauren thinking Edward is hers or maybe
Bella's "sperm donor" come to take Seth away possibly James since i dont think that name
has popped up yet... things are coming to a head anyway. Excited to see which way the story
will go.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
So glad that Edward and his dad are moving forward and he's now realized his mistake and trying to make up for it. Good for Esme putting her foot down.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
Wow daddy c appologizes? Go esme for ultimatum. Mysterypov......more and more think its a female now
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
Who is the mystery person, this waiting is getting to me........
Loved the fort building, Ty & my hubby,his dad made one last week!
Seth will warm up to Carlisle, and then he will have him wRapped around his finger quicker than Esme!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
:)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
:)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
oooh i think my guess from last chapter may be right but hey i have been wrong before so it wouldn't be the first time can't wait to see who it is
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
My only guess regarding MPOV is it's a female.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
so now i know it is not carlise
i am thinking it is a female who wants edward and bella is in the way
i am glad carlise came over and he and edward talked and things seem to be going better
i look forward to their family becoming a family
love it
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
Glad to see that Carlisle came around. I love Seth and Edward together. It's so sweet.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
Jeez, Mpov could be anyone with acces to inside the White House. Like say VP Cheney.
You're the only one who knows. I'll be here reading when the reveal comes.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
Really wonderful story. I think Mystery POV is a women trying to get to Prezward. I can't wait to see who it is and what happens (I just started the story yesterday and am already caught up!)
Lisa
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
So glad Edward put Carlise in his place!! Good Job!! Take no prisoners! First orders of biz for the Prez!! Love how close Edward and Bella are all becoming . :-)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
love it
i am almost thinking the mystery pov is carlisle
how sad would that be
love it
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
Thanks good chapter
Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
The mystery person is a woman and wants Edward for herself. I'm not sure who she is though.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
love the daddy thing. That chapter almost has me thinking that the Mystery POV is a female. But I dunno.
Author's Response:
I know who the mystery pov is....... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
I hope Bella gets through the State Dinner. That would be daunting to say the least. I had been thinking that the mystery POV was male but now I'm thinking maybe it's a female. Hmmmmm.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
Hmmmm i had been assuming that the mystery POV was a man but after this one i am thnking it is Tanya.
Love daddyprezward :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
Mystery pov is Jane right. That's my guess can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
Again, with the whats and wills. Too much to ponder. Just letting you take me on the ride. But very curious about the "Myster POV". I think it's a woman.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
ugh on so many different problems.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
Jessica/Lauren it has to be, she was the one who back talk Edward right? But then.......oh I dunno. Who is it!!!
Too cute when a child calls Dada for the first time!!! Better when they say mumma, (cause Tyler's speech therapist says that dada is on of the first "sounds". )
But at Seth's age here he would be calling Edward dada!!!
Poor Carlisle you're making me feel sorry for him!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
no his name is officaly henry but has always been called harry so you are technecally right
Author's Response:
Oh! I didn't know that. I only knew him as Harry not Henry, but I guess my fingers wanted to name him Henry lol. I've fixed it now so thanks so much for pointing it out!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
just a small criticism prince henry is better known as prince harry always has been especially in the uk
Author's Response:
Shit! Thanks for that! I must have mistyped it! Going to fix now!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
Another amazingly awesome chapter. You never fail to deliver.
You are driving me completely insane with the mystery POV, hahahahaha. I can't tell if it is male or female. This is really difficult for me, loving this story so much and being completely frustrated at the same time, LOL.
Thank You again for sharing. Now I'm gonna go crawl back up on my pins and needles till this weekend.
By the way, I think you are an amazing woman. To have such a full plate, with 2 kids ( 1 that needs special care ), school, work, home life, etc. Yet you still find the time to give all of us so much fun and pleasure with your imagination and talent. You are indeed amazing.
hugz